The Teacher or Someone like him... but BETTER

[Darmani]

Ahem after an embarassing mix up I found this incomplete anonomously written little unpolished gem The Teacher on Metabods by "Anonymous"

To sum up, a small population muscle transformation sex story with a semi-aware kid protagonist. A little dated (Hercules? Xena? Well at least mentioned the Reeves movies). Mainly one teacher shows up to substitute at this kid's class, replacing his favorite bio teach. Being a nerd he's one of the few that object to it becoming a bird class. New guy transforms others by feeding them sweets and can disarm them mentally but toward the end his methods expand and there's a very fantastic quality. The non-erotic parts are pretty decent and the erotic IDEAS are fun and interesting. It needs better writing as it flips perspective poorly and doesn't do the mind shift that well but for a "slow" and "fast" mix of transformations with a variety of subjects and the reactions its fun. It is also incomplete.

My challlenge hope? Take this idea and remake it with the similar themes or just right a REALLY swank final chapter though is *does* close in a way you could just tape on an omnious THE END.

Really elements of stepford, a trick from Dorian grey, a nice play off the pizza boy fantasy and again the subjects/victims run a nice gamut.

Please read and consider.

[philat99]

Have you read the Teacher's Pet series by Redkage? I recommend it highly!
Mike

[Darmani]

No. I don't generally go for Red Kage's style. I'm not saying it is good or bad just doesn't seem what I'm after. I have tried it since your suggestion. Its ... okay just not what I think I'm into though I am on chapter six and it isn't THAT much of a commitment to finish the thing.