YOUR ideas for the next "Car Lot" story

[Aardvark2]

Hey guys,

I'm looking for some ideas for the next "Car Lot" story. Don't care how crazy or un-crazy they seem to be, let me have 'em! If you haven't read the first story, it's here, so you can have a general idea what I'm looking for. I'm really curious as to what everyone likes around here, and I'd like to have a little fun with this series (I envision it being sort of like "The Barber" series by the great Texzilla). I'm assuming, if you're in this thread, that you're familiar with my - ahem - areas of expertise and know what I usually write about.

Let 'er rip, don't be shy!

[rextorres]

Hi Aardvark! The car lot idea sounds cool. I spent six years working at a car dealership (my father owns the business) so I know exactly what it's like!

You dazzled us over the summer with these wonderful episodes of "Hunter".

Are you going to write any more?

My request: I would love to see a teen transformed into a muscle man...

Cheers!

-Rex

[Aardvark2]

Originally Posted by rextorres

My request: I would love to see a teen transformed into a muscle man...

Well, that's sure as hell possible. Any more details you like?

And thank you for consistently reading and commenting on the Hunter stories. Yes, there are certainly more to come. I have several plans and ideas floating around in my head and we'll see which ones come to fruition, but I do know how I want to end the whole saga. But who knows how many chapters will be between now and the end?

I'll be depending on you to keep my facts right about car sales, Rex! Not exactly my strongest field...

[indiemuscle]

your first story was super hot!

um my idea is for two homophobic young skaters are messing around in the Car Lot and causing damage when they get cought. To teach them a lesson and a new way of life he transforms one of them into a big handsome yet very hairy man hung like a horse and very macho, meanwhile the more homophobic one finds himself becoming the total effeminate bottom boy with a toned hairless muscular little body, camp persona and a craving to suck cocks and get fucked all day long.

Think you can do that?

[Yachirobi]

1. I wonder what might happen were one of the Car Lot customers aware of the transformation within himself or within someone else. It would be interesting to see someone realize the magic that was going on. Would he try to stop it? Could he stop it? Could he possibly use the magic to make changes for himself?

While you clearly get off on seeing total transformations--and I came before the story was finished thanks to your descriptions, Aardvark--I'd like to see one of the characters remember who they were before the transformation. Would they like their new life? Maybe they would hate it at first but would then grow to love it.

Perhaps even someone who had been transformed would become aware of their prior life. Maybe it's someone who had lost their muscles and awesome lifestyle. A trip to the Car Lot brings flashes of this life back and the purchase restores (or even improves upon) that lost life. This might be good for an age regression tale too, restoring the old ex-jock to his glory days.

2. In the first story the drivers park their cars before the transformations happen. I think it would be cool if the transformations started while the drivers were still driving. Imagine the cars suddenly developing minds of their own: they change the channel on the radio and when the driver tries to change the channel back the cars change it again. Then they start accelerating on their own, running past stop signs and street lights, going to the destination they choose while the driver is helpless to do anything. And then the transformation happens in front of EVERYONE.

You could take an introverted character and turn him into a super extroverted muscle man, allowing him both the nightmare and the fantasy of having a very public sexual experience. Perhaps followed by another nightmare fantasy of getting arrested by the cops who punish the transformee for public lewdness with some more public embarassment, followed by mutual gratification.

3. We know nothing about the Car Lot owner. Who is he? Why does he do what he does? And what would happen if his magic were to backfire on him or one of his clients? So often in these types of stories we get to know all about the transformed people but the man doing the transformations is just some magic genie who only exists to do their one magic trick and nothing else. Why cars? Why muscles? Why magic? Why him?

[rextorres]

One idea for a car dealership (I know from 6 years experience from working for one): The lowliest job at a car dealership is the car washer-boy. He has a covered area at the back of the building, with a garden hose, buckets, sponges, a towel and soap, and does nothing more than wash the cars before they are to be delivered to the customers. This kid is usually tall and muscular and wears a baseball cap, and he's often shirtless. He wears shorts and sandals and has a golden tan.

A great story idea: Some kid gets hired and somehow transforms into a muscle hunk while washing his first car?

[rextorres]

A car dealership usually consists of:

The Sales Dept: A skinny salesman can become a handsome muscular guy with a shirt and tie.

The Parts Dept: A parts warehouse guy becomes big by carrying heavy boxes with car batteries and by hauling those 300-pound hoods and car doors from the warehouse to the parts sales counter.

The Service Dept: The mechanic hulks out from lifting everything from cables to tires to spare parts, which are required to fix any problem with any vehicle that enters his stall inside of the workshop.

Just some fun ideas!

Now, you had BETTER write that Hunter story I requested!

[Aardvark2]

Some really interesting suggestions so far! Thanks, you three. I always like creating these threads because it pushes my mind into other areas that it doesn't usually wander. We all have boxes we unconsciously stick to, I suppose. Anything to get the creative juices flowing!

I suppose I do really like total TFs, Yachirobi, but several (actually most) of the Hunter chapters are purely physical. And I do like the idea of cars moving on their own. Hmmmmm...

Anybody else? Pretty please?

[Aardvark2]

This particular section of the forums doesn't have a TON of activity, so I just want to bump this to make sure everyone sees it.

[Yachirobi]

Now we're just waiting for you to write the next one...

[cutlerfan]

I was thinking perhaps of a nerdy type of guy coming home for a family reunion or high school reunion. His car breaks down near th car lot so he buys a new one being that he is a super successful tech company owner( i.e. computer, electronics -your choice). He changes into a totally gorgeous muscle man on the way to his event and everyone is shocked when they see him because he moved to California or Seattle years earlier and hasn't been back. The twist is that they don't know he wasn't always like this. He calls his office to ask how things are and his secretary says they are fine and is puzzled when he asks if he looks different. It turns out that his west coast life changed with his appearance so no one thinks anything is different at his company. Thus he enjoys people noticing his incredible change but no questions when he goes home. Please have him stay a kind and considerate nice guy after his change. Just an idea, Peace!

[Yachirobi]

cutlerfan, I think you've hit on something...

[Aardvark2]

I promise I haven't forgotten this series. Hunter is just taking up all of my ideas. Expect to see some more Car Lot stories in 2010!

[Yachirobi]

Thanks for remembering this. I'm looking forward to more of your brilliant transformation sequences.

[mom bab]

Any new Car Lot stories coming down the pipe any time soon? (Particuarly enjoyed your most recent addition to the series!... I especially enjoy stories where the person transformed becomes or remains between their late teens and early 30's... not to mention the whole construction worker thing was awesome.)

[Aardvark2]

Thanks very much, mom bab. I've kicked around a few CL ideas, and even written a few paragraphs, but nothing's "sticking" at the moment. So, yes, there will be new stories, eventually. Just waiting for that little shot of inspiration

[V.R.Goh]

Here's one for you.

The Convertible: a young man fresh out of high school has saved enough money to buy a used car. He decides to buy a bright red convertible (I suggest a '68 Camaro SS). He gets into the car a skinny, but handsome young man. As he drives home, he changes into a thickly-muscled and ripped hunk with the good looks of a male model.

[Spudforth]

This may violate the...ethos of the series, but what if some bad guy saw what was happening at the lot: he could live near by, and found a way for a rival at work to pick up/use a worn, rusty truck of some type- slowly changing the innocent rival into a big, scary, blue collar guy; to get rid of him. However fate/lot owner tricks the bad guy into riding in the truck to become the rival's BF?
I don't know if this fits the series since this idea is based on vengeful,...wrath stuff. The characters in Aardvark's series' are held in respect and balance, I think. :-)

[Yachirobi]

Spud, Aardvark has used similar themes already in the series so I don't think your concept is far-fetched at all. Maybe the bad guy wouldn't notice the changes in the world--magic in the Aardvarkverse is rarely apparent to any but the magicians--but it would be very likely that he would end up a beneficiary of the car lot too.

[wolfram456]

how about a guy that grows/ changes as he restores and rebuilds a classic muscle car?

[michaelv2]

Well, I have a pretty good car fetish from when I was a teenager, so here's a few:

1. A car crazed teenager sneaks into the used car lot at night because he sees the sports car of his dreams and he knows he can't afford it, but he wants it so bad he breaks into the office, takes the keys, and sits in the car at night, imagining that it is his... little does he know that his wildest dreams are not nearly wild enough...

2. Wealthy asshole BMW owner takes his car in to be serviced and treats the shop employees in his typical manner. The car needs to stay overnight for repairs so he insists upon a "loaner" car. The shop has no "loaner" but they manage to get a used car from the mysterious car lot next door. The car is so way below the status of the BMW owner that he throws a fit, but in the end, he takes it because he has to get to some meeting. Little does he know what kind of meeting he's destined to make...

3. Old geezer has a thing for old derelict cars, enjoys restoring them, bringing them "back to life". He chooses his next "project" from the used car lot, and little does he know that his next restoration is of a far more personal nature... (same idea as wolfram456).