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Double Wish

Disclaimer: You must be at least 18 years old to read this story. It contains graphic sex between 2 men and should not be read by those who find such things objectionable.

This story belongs to me and should not be used commercially without my permission.

I write for my own enjoyment and am sharing this with other members of the writing (and reading) community after spending the last few years being entertained by numerous authors, too many to mention here.

Any feedback is much appreciated. It can be emailed to me at [email protected].

This story is heavily inspired by the story "I Wish You Well" by Mr. Grey: http://mcstories.com/IWishYouWell/IWishYouWell.html (2002).
Check it out if you're looking for a hot female/female wish story.

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Double Wish

"Dude, can you please put some clothes on?"

I looked over at the one that had spoken first. He was tall and lanky, with raven black hair. His greasy, messy hair was just long enough that his bangs fell into his eyes. His face was hairless, and would have been smooth if it wasn't covered with a few pimples on his chin and nose. His teeth looked yellow, as if he smoked. He had a rat like nose that did not complement the rest of his face.

And he was sickly thin, with an almost yellowish skin tone. He looked like a large bean pole, and it was clear that he never considered what he was wearing. His white t-shirt was too wide for his rail-thin body, and had obvious stains that appeared rust-like emanating from his arm pits. His too short pleated pants were held up by a checkered belt, and barely reached past his calves. And of course, his white socks had holes on both feet.

"Yeah. I have no idea what you are or how you got in here, but that thing is really scaring me!"

I looked over and regarded the other person in the room with us. Unlike his friend, he was extremely short, and slightly overweight. He had straight red hair that also hung slightly over the top of his eyes. He didn't have any acne, but also had no stubble. His face was quite young looking, like he could pass for a young teenager, just entering puberty. He was slightly overweight, but not terribly so, and also suffered from a lack of fashion sense. Ignoring his clothes, he was quite cute, with striking blue eyes, as long as you liked men that looked like young boys. His face betrayed a shy lack of confidence as he looked at me, avoiding looking down from my face. He appeared to have mustered the courage to speak to me only because his friend had already done so.

Besides the height differences, they looked like perfect friends. Of course, once I was done, they would be even more perfect for each other.

They were both obviously uncomfortable with the size and visibility of my male endowment. As one of the djinn, I could take any shape that I wished. I realized many years ago how much I enjoy intimidating mortals with an exaggerated masculine form. Most women and men found it difficult to concentrate with my huge manhood swinging in front of them. At this particular moment, my flesh was over 16 inches long and still soft. The muscles of my entire body stood out, huge and strong, giving me a rather fearful countenance.

"Is that a wish? I will grant very few wishes, my new young masters. Are you sure you'd like to waste one clothing me?"

"Wishes? We get wishes? Are you a genie?" The red haired one asked this, his face registering his surprise. His friend turned to him and spoke.

"Of course he's a genie, dumbass. We rubbed a lamp, and out comes smoke that eventually turns into this huge naked guy, and you're wondering if it's a genie? Let me take care of this, Alex. I don't want you fucking it up."

Turning to me, the uglier one spoke to me again.

"What are the rules? I don't want you screwing me over."

Typical. There are two of them there, but he's only worried about himself.
The rules were actually very simple. I granted them 3 wishes. That was really about it. I could create almost any reality for them, as long as it was something that could have happened within the rules of this plane of existence. Oh, and I had to tell them that. Of course, I could tell them more than that, and they wouldn't know the difference...

"Well, since you were both touching the lamp when I was summoned, you both get 3 wishes."

The friends looked at each and then slapped their hands together, excited.

"But! Because you were both touching the lamp at the same time, I will only grant a wish from one of you if it's for the other."

"Really? I've never heard of that rule before." This from the ugly one again.

"Oh, and my new young master encounters genies every day, does he? And I'll bet he's heard many stories about how genies work. And specifically what happens when two people rub the lamp at once. Well, have you heard how that works? No? I didn't think so."

The ugly one pouted a bit when I was done. I turned to look at the one called Alex.

"You may begin. Simply tell me what you want with an 'I wish' and I will make it come true."

Alex looked uncertainly at his friend, obviously trying to decide what to wish for him.

"Steve, what do you want?" he asked.

"What do you think I want? Have you looked at me lately? I want girls to like me. I want to look good so that I can get laid."

"Alright then. Genie, I wish that Steve was the most attractive guy on campus here. Actually, make him the hottest guy in the state. No, make it the country!"

"Your wish is my command, young master." I snapped my fingers, and reality changed around us.

Steve transformed from thin and lanky, to athletic and muscular. His face went from acne'd and pock marked to clear and lightly stubbled. His complexion was now completely clear and almost had a glow to it. His eyes were now dark and piercing, and matched his new handsome face. His hair had become vibrant and clean, and looked stylishly cut. His clothes changed to go with his new body, fitting him in all of the right places to show off the new tone of his muscles.

Everything else also changed to match the new Steve. His family and friends, and everyone else he had come into contact with, now remembered the new Steve. Even Steve and Alex now remembered the new Steve. I hadn't mentioned this part to either of them, of course. I found it more amusing if they couldn't remember why they had wished for something after the fact.

"Why'd you wish for that, brainiac? I'm already the hottest guy on campus. I get more pussy than I know what to do with. Why would I need to be hotter?"

I watched Alex scratch his head, obviously confused about his wish. He also glared at Steve when Steve wasn't looking.

"All right Genie. I wish that Alex here was much bigger, stronger and more muscular. Then he won't get picked on by the jocks all the time."

"Your wish is my command." I snapped my fingers again, and again reality changed around us.

Alex transformed in the blink of an eye from short and overweight to tall, built and incredibly muscular. He had huge beefy thighs, a large but tight bubble butt, and a still small waste that was covered with a super defined 8 pack. His lats flared out, leading into his huge broad cannonball shoulders. And he now had beautiful, large pectoral muscles sticking out at us. He was now a few inches taller than Steve, but looked much tougher.

"Steve, you know I get asked all the time if I'm on 'roids? I mean, I've got 22 inch arms. Why would you wish for me to be more muscular?" Alex was obviously frustrated with his friend.

"All right, I know what to wish for you next Steve. This will be a good one. Genie, I wish that Steve was ultra-rich and never has to work again for money."

"Your wish is my command" I replied yet again. And I snapped my fingers another time.

The changes to reality were much less noticeable this time. Of course, I was the only one noticing them, so this didn't really matter. Steve's clothes got a bit nicer, and the furniture in the apartment became much more expensive. Steve's bank account was now filled with thousands of dollars, and his parent's were now extremely rich and powerful. Steve now lived entirely off of their wealth.

"What an idiot you are Alex! You know how loaded my parents are. Why would you wish for that, knowing how much money I can get whenever I want? You're so gay. Actually, let's make that my next wish. Genie, I wish that Alex really was gay."

"Your wish is my command" I replied once more, and snapped my fingers once more. Man, this was getting repetitive for me.

Alex didn't change at all, but now both Alex and Steve remembered Alex being gay. Alex glared at Steve; it was obvious that he was starting to hate Steve.

"That's two wishes for both of you so far. One left for each of you."

Steve spoke to me again.

"Fat lot of good your stupid wishes have done us so far." He turned to Alex.

"All right, fag bait. Make your stupid wish already. I want to get out of here."

"You know Steve, I'm getting mighty tired of you ordering me around, and talking down to me. Just because you're rich and hot doesn't mean you can get away with being such a huge prick. I'm twice your weight, and it's all muscle. Fuck having you think I'm your bitch anymore. Genie, I wish that Steve kissed my ass all the time, and loved to do what I told him to."

"Your wish is my command." Of course, I snapped my fingers, again.

My changes didn't alter the way either of them looked. They were still wearing the same clothes, and their apartment stayed the same. The big difference was that Steve slumped a bit now, looking slightly defeated. He kept casting furtive glances at Alex, obviously not wanting to displease Alex.

"But you know I already worship the ground you walk on!" he blurted out, then covered his mouth with his hands, as if he realized that what he said might offend Alex. Alex grunted out a reply.

"When I want you to open your mouth, I'll unzip my pants. Now make your last wish, pansy. I haven't got all day."

Steve looked down at the floor, looking awfully ashamed. His jeans tented out, his arousal at Alex's comment obvious to both Alex and the Genie. Alex's pants also started to tent when he saw Steve's pants move. Steve looked back at Alex quickly, then at the floor, then at me.

"Genie, I wish that Alex was hyper-masculine, super dominant, and that he loved to order me around."

"Your wish is my command."

In the snapping of my fingers, Alex transformed. He got a few inches taller, but much wider. His shoulders were broader, and it looked like his pectoral muscles had inflated. He had a huge chest shelf now, while his waist was just as small and tight as it had been before. His legs were more swollen, and his big muscle bubble butt was just a little bit fuller. His arm muscles were huge, like he was one of the biggest body builders in the world now. His biceps seemed to peak obscenely even while unflexed and hanging at his sides. His clothes were no incredibly tight on him, making him appear even larger and imposing. But the largest changes were to his head, and his crotch.

His face was completely all male. He had huge thick eye brows, and a thick inch length goatee and mustache combo. His hair was now black. It (and the goatee) made his face look especially scary, like he could destroy someone with a glance. His face looked especially thin, like his body was so muscular that it couldn't hold any fat.

His crotch was obviously so large that it pushed out his pants. It looked like a huge tube running down his left pant leg. It left nothing to the imagination. Steve looked over at Alex, who's cock was straining against his own pants as hard as it could now.

"What a waste of a wish, slave boy. With a body like this, of course I'm the alpha dog in every situation. Why would you waste your wish on something like that? You know how much I get off already on telling you what to do. Get over here and get on your knees."

Steve did as he was told. They had both forgotten me, for the moment at least. This was of course my favorite part.

Steve kneeled in front of Alex, his eyes wide with fear and excitement. Alex looked down on Steve and sneered.

"Take it out, bitch. It's not going to suck itself."

Steve carefully reached up and unbuckled Alex's belt and unzipped his pants. He was slow and careful, and Alex's humongous (for a human) dick slowly came into view. It was now just a little smaller than my own, in both girth and length.

Alex didn't wear underwear anymore. He would have been much too uncomfortable. Steve reached into Alex's pants, and pulled the giant tube of meat out. He let it go and it flopped down against the outside of Alex's pants. Steve then reached in and pulled out both of Alex's grape fruit sized balls. They hung low over his pants, and created a cushiony pillow that pushed his dick even further away from his legs. The whole package had a mustache of curly black public hair above it.

Steve sucked on Alex's nuts for a bit, tonguing them and getting them nice and wet. Alex's cock hardened to it's full length and stuck straight out beside Steve's left ear. Steve then slowly licked down the length of Alex's shaft, tracing a giant vein until he reached the rather large piss hole at the tip of his head. Steve teased the hole with his tongue and was rewarded with a large pulse of pre-cum, which he lapped up enthusiastically.

I, of course, was loving every minute of this. In case I haven't spelled it out for you, I love watching one mortal man worship and serve another. Almost all of my male masters end up in similar situations, with me watching them afterwards as they abuse another, or are abused themselves. And pleasuring myself. Or having one of them pleasure me. As I watched, I was stroking my own inhuman endowment, enjoying my form while I still could.

Alex suddenly realized I was still there. He put his hands on his hips and flicked them from right to left so that his large meaty dick smacked Steve on the side of the cheek.

"Steve! You're being rude. We have a guest, and you know guests go first. Crawl over there and suck the Genie off. He may not have given us anything we didn't have, but I'd still like to see you take that giant cock of his."

Alex crawled over to me and repeated his performance, this time on my erect appendage. Once I came, I would disappear back to my lamp, leaving the transformed men before me with only a vague recollection of my presence. I on the other hand would always remember how I had twisted them from their old selves.

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The memory twist to the wishes and the role reversal (and of course the MUSCLE) made this a fun read. Djinns and Genies...gotta LOVE their twisted sense of humors.
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I love the idea behind this story it's quite genius!
I'd love to read more if you've got some more scenarios to toy with.
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That was great! Reality twisters are always the best kind of story. I agree with lost prophet, you definitely have to do more scenarios
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Good Story! More adventures with the Genie later perhaps? Peace!
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Anything involving a guy growing a thick dense goatee is hot to me. Would love to see a continuation
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I always love stories like this where the whole world changes but no one realizes it. :3
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I really liked this story, but don't you think you should credit this one? http://mcstories.com/IWishYouWell/IWishYouWell.html (2002)
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I just added a credit.
I basically took the formula from there, and was heavily inspired.
I kind of figured it was different enough (different character gender, different wish mechanism, different pov character, different wishes) that it wasn't exactly a straight rip-off. But the formula was pretty much the same (two friends can grant wishes for each other, but don't remember things the way they were before, and get mad about the stupidity of the wisher).

I also need to clean up the ending (where I switch characters accidentally).
Sometime tomorrow morning for that one.

Thanks for all of the comments!
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I just added a credit.
I basically took the formula from there, and was heavily inspired.
I kind of figured it was different enough (different character gender, different wish mechanism, different pov character, different wishes) that it wasn't exactly a straight rip-off. But the formula was pretty much the same (two friends can grant wishes for each other, but don't remember things the way they were before, and get mad about the stupidity of the wisher).

I also need to clean up the ending (where I switch characters accidentally).
Sometime tomorrow morning for that one.

Thanks for all of the comments!
I just figured as long as you were saying that your story belonged to you, etc etc, that you'd probably want to acknowledge the other. And later if someone models a story after yours, I think they should acknowledge you too. It definitely wasn't a straight rip-off; also, I liked your version much better :-) Thanks for posting it!
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