Electrician’s Helper

[R Chris Cooper]

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[Mass Driver]

What could be more real than a broken condom? Huge honking muscles and a big dick to go with them, that's what!
OK, Man, you've been on a very high road. I'm shaking my head and I've got a smile on my face, recalling all your stories so far.
WOW. Not a clunker amongst them. You get the odd motivating idea across and right into the drama and Muscle growth, in just a few paragraphs. And for the most part, you have the story to where you want it to end, all in one chapter. And a very satisfying chapter too.

Here's the challenge. This one has some legs for quite a few chapters. I know you deliberately used a title that wouldn't suggest a sequel, but it's time.
Give it some thought and maybe call the related stories "Deserving".
And I may be wrong, but I seem to recall you mentioning a desire to stay away from multiple chapter stories. No problem. Just keep your options open.
With your imagination, after a few totally different stories written up, you may want to have a fitness trainer pass on a fantastic gift to another man who is...
Deserving.

Keep Writing. They are all just so good!

MD

[philat99]

Your ending brings back a memory of something similar, but then my forgetterer is getting better than my rememberer.
Mike

[cutlerfan]

Great Story! I like guys and muscles but I don't like the term muscle worship. Like you said only God is worshipped so I thank you for your wonderful story. I liked the inner struggle dialogue as well. Peace!

[R Chris Cooper]

Originally Posted by Mass Driver

What could be more real than a broken condom? Huge honking muscles and a big dick to go with them, that's what!
OK, Man, you've been on a very high road. I'm shaking my head and I've got a smile on my face, recalling all your stories so far.
WOW. Not a clunker amongst them. You get the odd motivating idea across and right into the drama and Muscle growth, in just a few paragraphs. And for the most part, you have the story to where you want it to end, all in one chapter. And a very satisfying chapter too.

Here's the challenge. This one has some legs for quite a few chapters. I know you deliberately used a title that wouldn't suggest a sequel, but it's time.
Give it some thought and maybe call the related stories "Deserving".
And I may be wrong, but I seem to recall you mentioning a desire to stay away from multiple chapter stories. No problem. Just keep your options open.
With your imagination, after a few totally different stories written up, you may want to have a fitness trainer pass on a fantastic gift to another man who is...
Deserving.

Keep Writing. They are all just so good!

MD

I have tracked stories-long stories- that I broke into several "chapters" and the readership falls significantly with each installment. There is one exception and that is called UNWANTED MUSCLE GROWTH. Maybe my storytelling is best done in one installment?

I have done a series called ADAM BESTOWS MUSCLE where Adam finds guys that he transforms into muscle hunks / sex machines-- but alas the transformation is temporary except for some residual and/or more easily developed muscles. I like your idea though. Maybe something like a Johnny Appleseed of muscles, where the characters are loosely connected in that they have the ability to pass on muscle to a deserving guy.

RCC

[robOgraff]

I enjoyed this story too. keep writing.

Rob

[ERICtheRED]

Hot Story--Hot series!

[Muslbud708]

I went back and read this story again. I feel compelled to read the whole series again. This is some great writing. If you have the time I wouldn't mind seeing ten more stories added to the series.