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Old May 14th, 2010, 06:25 PM
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After the Bodybuilding Contest

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Excellent story!
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Super HOT story!
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Great story, hope it continues
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O.k., so I'm the weird guy who actually reads muscle growth stories for a plot....

The descriptions were great, as usual. I also like the first person narration style.

Question: What is the significance of the tube of "linament" and Ed coming over as soon as the narrator opens it? Is the tube full of "magic muscle growth" ointment which will make our narrator Hyooge? How is this connected with Ed's and narrator's desire for "longer-term" relationship / over the weekend, as opposed to overnight?

I'm assuming that our narrator will now grow to be hyooge - yeah! And I assume that he and Ed will start/continue a longer term relationship. What I'm not quite clear on is what opening/using the tube MEANS (sorry, blame all those English lit classes looking for MEANING).

Is accepting the tube a proxy for accepting Ed and his love/desire for a relationship?
I sort of figure that it is, but I'm just curious. I may also be reading waay more into a muscle growth story than is here--- but I really like Chris' writing, otherwise I wouldn't bother!

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Great story! Hopefully, all of Mdlftr's questions will be answered in the next chapters.
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Md lftr I still think it is a great story
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O.k., so I'm the weird guy who actually reads muscle growth stories for a plot....

The descriptions were great, as usual. I also like the first person narration style.

Question: What is the significance of the tube of "linament" and Ed coming over as soon as the narrator opens it? Is the tube full of "magic muscle growth" ointment which will make our narrator Hyooge? How is this connected with Ed's and narrator's desire for "longer-term" relationship / over the weekend, as opposed to overnight?

I'm assuming that our narrator will now grow to be hyooge - yeah! And I assume that he and Ed will start/continue a longer term relationship. What I'm not quite clear on is what opening/using the tube MEANS (sorry, blame all those English lit classes looking for MEANING).

Is accepting the tube a proxy for accepting Ed and his love/desire for a relationship?
I sort of figure that it is, but I'm just curious. I may also be reading waay more into a muscle growth story than is here--- but I really like Chris' writing, otherwise I wouldn't bother!

Mdlftr
(with too much time on his hands, obviously)

You are reading much too much into the significance of the tube of liniment! The cap-when opened- sent out a signal to Ed's cell phone. This was merely a vehicle to show that the narrator had worked out significantly and had a need for liniment to soothe his sore muscles. Meaning the narrator was motivated to grow his body through independent hard work. Ed wanted that kind of commitment without him being present to push and or motivate his new fuck buddy. Likes attract. The reward for all that hard work is the continued relationship.

I hope that answered your questions and thank you for the compliments.

Sometimes ending the story is the hardest part of writing the story. If it is too final there is no room for part II. If it is too open ended it leaves the reader hanging or disappointed -- or worse, wondering if the last few sentences were somehow chopped off. Left on the cutting room floor so to speak.

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@ R Chris Cooper,

I am totally amazed about your talent to write stories!

I love your combination of muscles, sex and background. Yes - the background (the characterisation of the different persons, the description of the locations, the storyline, the circumstances etc. etc.) is very important, too.

Since english isn't my first language I hope I got across what I meant.

Please go on with that story! It is really really hot!
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