Grimm Tales: Cinderella

[chimera0010]

Case 2: Cinderella
A few days passed since the day Alexander von Grimm turned his student Ann into a werewolf using the mysterious book of his. He did compensate the school for the loss of their lead quarterback. He talked to the coaches of the track team and the swim team and put Ann on both of them for a round the year competition. Swimming in the indoor pool for winter and running track in the spring and summer. Now that it was out of the way, he could move onto another student. He looks through his book and finds the perfect story, now to find out who to be the target.

Here she comes too. He looks up from the bench in the courtyard of the school and sees one of his former students. Fortunetly for him the school was also joined to the college university known as Elmwood University. He grins and picks his next target, Sarah McMorrisan. He sized her up, about 5'7...120...125 lbs, blone hair, brown eyes, and dressed like a nerd in last years fall fashion. However, he knew her history all to much. She was the perfect cinderella story and to boot from what he hears...the sorority she joined was no different than her family. This was almost too perfect for him to work his magic.

He follows her to the house. Then heaves a heavy sigh....it had to be THIS house. Kappa Lamda Delta Nu. The girls where very very very.....preppy. Its like they took barbie and dressed her in abercrombie n fitch then took out her brain n filled her head with laidback tunes of the 1980's n shopping catalogs. The worse part was their house mother. She was evil and vile beyond any demon in hell. Her name...Catherine Maria Stewart. She was around 45, natural redhead, obviously orders everything from Givana, Monoloe, Chanelle, Gucci, and Glommick. Whats worse is she was a 10 time winter pagent winner, a debutant, and a seat holder on the city council. Her problem with Alexander? The fact he dressed like count dracula on a good day and taught a non christian class and was a non conformist. She tried to get him fired from his job for years, but so far luck has been on his side.

----in class--


"Today class...we will discuss a well known classic. Cinderella. YOu know the routine, orphan girl, stepmother, step sisters. Abused and over worked. Fairy godmother, dancing, a prince, romance. The end...."

He walks around the class room, making sure they are paying attention. He flips his book over to the chapter of Cinderella. "The story is french of course. Now for those that have seen EVER AFTER, the story was nto too far off. Yes there was a fairy godmother." He smiles and flips to the page showing a witch shaking hands with cinderella. "The fairy godmother was no fairy. She was a Djinn....a demon...who exchanged the girls soul for true love." He smiles and closes the book. "Your asignment class...prove or disprove the the facts I gave on the fairy godmother...Ill expect the pappers at the end of the week."

---after school--

Alexander sneaks around the Kappa Lamda house and sees Sarah hand scrubbing the floor while the other girls are getting ready for the winter dance tonight. They wont let her go, and whats worse...Catherine got angry because Sarah read the mail hoping for a letter from her family. He watches as the house mother locks Sarah in the basement and orders her to clean the basement just so she will miss the winter dance. What a biatch. Not that it mattered, poor Sarah looked so nerdy that no one asked her to the dance. Well this will change quickly.

He remembers the jock the girls where fawning over this time. His name was Billy Marshal. He was the captain of the wrestling team, and boy did he earn that reputation. If he wasnt flipping men around on the floor mat, he was pumping iron. Lets see.....6'2, 220 lbs of rock hard ripped muscle, benching 450. He also had a tan, blonde hair, blue eyes, and the smile of an angel. No wonder every one wants him, now how to make Sarah the object of affection and outdo the other ding bats.

--at the sorority house--

The other girls and their house mother have already gotten dressed and left for the dance. How rude of them to lock Sarah in the basement and spray paint her old ford focus orange with green tires. He walks inside and makes his way around the house. Being the fact most of the buildings have the same setup it was not difficult to find the basement door. He stops at the door and points at it. The door unlocks and he walks inside, seeing sarah sobbing with her knees in her face.

"Professor?" She looks up.

"Yes Sarah I am your fairy godfather and your going to the ball..."He takes her by the hand and takess off her glasses. Then he undoes her hair and looks over over. "Not too bad, a little makeup and some new clothes and a little makeover and they won't even notice you too much to get in the way...."He begins to size her up and pulls out his magic wand. Yes a magic wand, made of oak and topped with a crystal. At length the wand is 3ft long and looks like a cane.

He begins chanting, causing her body to slim down a few pants sizes, her breasts to go up to cups, her hair longer, skin cleaner. He looks around her waving his wand more to cause her ragged clothes to become a nice white ball gown, makeup appearing on her face, jewelry out of no where, and shoes made of ice cold crystal. Now she stands at 5'7 in a size 3 dress with C cup breasts with hair down to her hips. Alexander aprooves of his artwork even though he copied disney a little. He helps her out of the house and sends her on her way. Fortunetly he didnt need to change her car, since the dance hall was not too far away. He follows behind her, acting as her escort and making sure Mrs.Stewart didnt make things get any worse for him.

Everything went as normal according to the story. She danced, he kept the "wicked stepmother" out of the way, midnight came n Sarah ran home, the muscle stud decided to go looking for her the next day. However what Sarah didnt know is the moment she took his hand, she signed away her soul to him in exchange for what her heart desired most. No words needed, it was written all over her what she wanted. With that she will be changed to suit Alexander's needs. Afterall, he didnt call her Cinderella for nothing.

--the next day--

Sarah went about her chores as usual, and doing every one's homework too. So glad it was the weekend, only ones home was Mrs. Stewart and her two daughters who ran the house. While they were talking down to her, Alexander watched from the window and waited. Sarah did finally snap when they kept loading dirty clothes on her while she was trying to study. her eyes began to glow red, and soon the clothes caught fire. The two girls ran out of the house in a panic while Mrs. Stewart went for a phone that soon caught fire and melted.

Alexander watched as one girl locked herself inside the sports car while the other tried to hide around the house. Sarah looks at the car, causing sparks to ignite inside the gas tank and forcing the car to errupt. She looks around and sees the other girl hiding behind a tree. She gets angry and the tree combusts in flames, crashing down on the girl and setting her a blaze. That left the house mother, all the while Alexander walks away, already seeing where this is going. Mrs. Stewart is bull horned into the basement, n falls down the stairs only to break both her legs.

"Sarah you will stop this n help me up or you will suffer!" She screams shaking a fist at sarah. Sarah eyes the propane tank in the back with some other hazerdous chemicals and eyes them lcausing sparks to pop things open and spill out. She slams the door shut and locks it, and begins walking out the front door and down the porch steps. All the while Mrs.Stewart looks around, gaging on fumes only to see the gas leaking and the chemicals mixing. She doesnt even have time to scream as the house blows up, taking everything with it.

Alexander hands Sarah a pair of glasses and tells her to keep them on so she wont set anymore things on fire. The story told to the cops was that Sarah was off to go see Alexander for some extra tutoring when the house blew up. From how the bodies where placed, it seems the house set it all off and killed all 3 victims in a chain reaction. The other sorority girls who survived where moved to other houses, while Sarah was moved over to Alexander's school house with Ann. On the bright side for Sarah, she did get a chance to go out with Billy a few times before they found they had nothing in common.

-for those wondering where the muscle growth is....the brain is a muscle and she went from a nerd to pyrokenesis so there was a small ammount of growth lol-

[Mad Dog]

The brain isn't a muscle.

[ttownlittlebear]

It's another girl story. And no muscle growth

[chimewolf]

Makes me wonder if/how Beauty and the beast done in this vers will/would turn out. The beast is after all a hulking big creature.

[muscl4life]

Revisiting Cinderella scenario has lots of potential - and I am considering the straight possibilities here.

So instead of making the literal girl Cinderella, why not turning a scrawny guy into a muscular stud that will charm the "Princess" with his manly muscles and overwhelming strength in a local bodybuilding or strength competition. However at a certain time he reverts back to his little size and has to run away, leaving behind something, a humongous posing trunks that his enormous endowment filled like no other competitor. The girl in question would look for her powerful stud over and over and would eventually find the little guy, but once he put the trunks (that given his donkey sized cock) fit so perfectly that he grows back into the man who won her heart over.

They would probably not live happily ever after, but their night would be amazingly hot

I don't actually know why I even suggested this, not sure if it would suit the kind of stories you are wanting to tell, but at least that's a straight male muscle growth focused storyline version of Cinderella that most of guys would be expecting to read.

[chimera0010]

i was actually i am trying to set up the villains first before introducing the hero. just havent read enough of the stories to find a decent guy to make into a muscle hunk. So for now i am setting up a cadre of villains warped from classic fairy tales. Honestly most i keep finding is damsels in distress and the only men i found so far is beast, pinochio, the frog prince, hansel, and prince charming.

be patient besides you forgot a character whos going to be coming back in later stories just like Sarah and Ann. Billy.

oh and as for beauty and the beast, i am still working on it but there is muscle growth. just dont know why you guys keep wanting sex envovled. Its hard trying tot urn a fairy tale into this mess when i mostly write thriller horror stories.

btw nxt installment is hansel n gretle. hehehehe.

[wolfram456]

how about jack and the beanstalk...what if jack became the giant....a big musclebound giant...