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Grimm Tales: Rumplestiltskin

Alexander von Grimm sat in the class room. His recent addition was good. However, he flips the pages to the tale of rumplestiltskin. He remembers this one, he almost succeeded n he got away. The little goblin almost got away that is, it seems the curse has reached it 18 year mark and now he has to find a new subject to pass the curse onto or remain in his form
forever. Alexander grins, and waits for the right candidate to be the bait for such a hunt. He watched this town for centuries, sometimes under different guises but this proved useful. He watches a kid walk into his classroom. 18 year old Mathhew Brinks. Now if he recalls the boy is now 18 and had a similiar connection to this rumplestiltskin.

"Today class we reeiw another german tale called Rumplestiltskin..." the class makes low chuckles.

"Yes we all know the tale, how the stupid father made the claim how his daughter can spin gold from straw. How the prince being greedy threatened to kill her and her father if she didnt prove true. How a goblin came n helped her in exchange for a gold bracelet." He walks around the class, seeming a little annoyed at how well known this story is.
"Then the prince wanted more so in exchange for helping the little goblin wanted her baby. she agreed and poof more gold. the prince married, she had a kid, then came the name game. We all know it." The class looking a bit bored.

"However. on the prince's 18th birthday, a stranger arrived all in black. He told the tale of rumplestiltskin and a curse that befel him. It could only be broken when its passed to a child given up by its mother n the name rumplestiltskin is uttered. The prince became a horrible little goblin and the goblin becomes a dashing young man. Thus the curse is passed
on." The class seems a bit confused yet interested.

"The name rumplestiltskin comes from germany meaning literally "little rattle stilt". (A stilt is a post or pole which provides support for a structure.) A rumpelstilt or rumpelstilz was the name of a type of goblin, also called a pophart or poppart that makes noises by rattling posts and rapping on planks. The meaning is similar to rumpelgeist ("rattle ghost") or
poltergeist, a mischievous spirit that clatters and moves household objects. (Other related concepts are mummarts or boggarts
and hobs that are mischievous household spirits that disguise themselves.) However, it seems this one is more of the baby
snatching kind just to end its curse and pass it on like a form of lycanthropy."

"The asignment class..."Find connections to this rumplestiltskin throughout history and see if they reflect on current
times."

As the class leaves, Alexander sits in his chair and remensices about his encounter with this Rumplestiltskin. How that
little beast caused him some trouble.

-----------1933-------
Prohibition just kicked out not to long ago, fortunetly for Alex, he worked part time as a bartender to a wealthy aristocrat out in louisiana. Other times he was the family butler, the driver, the painte,r the gardener. It seems he filled in when the other staff was out on other errands. His boss however, was a rich youth who lived like a prince amongst the other big
spenders during the dust bowl. However as scarce as money was this guy managed to keep it coming. He looked like the typical money bags. Tall, thin, blonde hair down to his shoulders, tan farmer skin in a fine suit, even had a gold earing.

Despite the fact that slavery was outlawe dhe still kept on hired african americans as house servants. The staff however, often seen alexander as some sort of "devil" since hes always in black, reading a big book with spells, and seems to have no fear of god or voodoo.

The boss as he often liked to be called, liked to listen to the piano music from Alexander, or listen to the radio for the latest sports updates, or even at times go to the movie theaters to see gone with the wind or the wizard of oz. Alexander particularly liked the wizard of oz, then again he also liked seeing disney's adapatation of snow white when it first aired.
He didnt like this hitler fellow who became chancelor or germany, seems like a lot of trouble brewing.

However it seems this all tied into how he met the little goblin. The boss ran into a nice girl whom happened to be the daughter of a farmer. Now she had nice golden hair and had a good way of painting things to look like real gold. So real that the colored folk thought ti was magic. The boss however wanted to see if this was real magic. He locked her in the
cellar with straw, iron cookware, lead tools. He planned to shoot her if she didnt pull through and take her daddy's land n shoot him dead as well. Well like most girls she did cry, not having any means of makign this miracle happen. Before Alex could interviene here was that little goblin who escaped germany during the rise of nazism. She had nothing to offer, but he did ask for a child. She did agree after some thought and so a fortune was made overnight.

Alex tried to warn her not to continue but she didnt listen. She played the name game, right off the bat his name wasnt rumplestiltskin, thats what he was not who he is. The staff folk had names for him but it turns out his name was Hans. Go figure right? Anywhos he did vanish within that day, how did she find out? The fact he looked like a midget german
nutcracker so she tried a series of german names. Obviously too easy. She gave up the child, said the name rumplesiltskin, and simply fell into a cheap ploy. Well all alex had to do was wait it out, sadly since he didnt age he had to leave so he wouldnt draw attention to himself.

------1951-------
18 years later, time has marched on. People were talking of disney land, flying spaceships, a futureistic world of mervelous technology. A time of drive in movies, moodle skirts, flat top hair cuts, basically he ended up living in the movie GREASE for a fat minute n had a hard time adjusting to the times.

However he did keep track of that girl and her boy. It seems he
got himself in a gang, using daddy's money to buy a corvette and the biggest colored tv he can afford just to get their approoval. Little did they know on his 18th birthday that would all change.

Alex slipped in as part of the catering staff and watched everything unfold. A man dressed all in black shows up and starts retelling a tale of the boy's conception. The mother is too drunk to care. As the story ends the block comes off to show an evil old goblin attacking the boy. Energy crackles n fills the air, and the change begins to happen. The boy's strong frame begins to shrink, deflate, and become boney n small. His youthful features replaced by a crooked nose, sharp teeth, spikey
white hair, clawed boney hands, tiny feet, and a hunched back. The reverse seemed to happen for the goblin Hans.

His old frame became young and strong. His muscles bulged and filled out, making an impressive youth of 18 weighing a good 220lbs of lean muscle, long golden hair, strong facial features, and a killer smile. It seems Hans was a farmer in germany before the curse hit him, now its passed on to a spoiled brat, almost fitting.

Alex sadly, wasnt fast enough. The new goblin ran off before he could trap him inside the spell book. He did however managed to keep tabs on the goblin and simply had to wait for another similiar setup. This took place in 1992 when a poor girl in the slums of new york city made that same fatal mistake just to strike it rich and lead a happy life for her and her kid. Shame they moved here where Alexander was currently working.

----present day----
He waited it out n followed Matthew around town, it was his birthday n all. However he lived alone, living on his family's fortune but wanting to be by himself. This left him wide open for an attack in any shape or form. However Matthew wanted to get stronger like evry one else and simply tried to workout, not fast enough for a rich boy. He wanted size so bad he could taste it. Then came along the goblin. This time dressed like an old leprachaun. Alex stood back, he cant do anything till
the little bastard begins to make the switch. How he hated to wait.

Rumple on the other hand was equally impatient but decided a better way instead of just dumping it on him. It was a new age why not try a new trick. He granted the boy 1 birthday wish and it was obvious since Matthew was wanting muscles so bad. The deal was simple, Matthew gets his muscles, what matthew didnt know is he would have a large lebido to saticfy n a small backfire.

Well he became a red headed bombshell. 62inch chest, 42 biceps, 58 inch legs, a rock hard 8 pack, diamond cut calves, thick neck, and a nice 11 inch cock. With his money he hit up every whore house in town n started banging women left n right. Each fuck adding pounds n size to his body, sadly he never came. It would feel like an orgasm but no jizz was envovled it just remained in his ball sack as his body inflated, damanding he fuck again until he finally releases. By midnight he became a wholloping 350lb monster with a swollen 14inch dick that kept pulsing bigger by the centimeters as his hornyness raged on. No woman would have him, so he took to raping men n women in alley ways, not realising he was packing on more and more size until he couldnt fit into any one anymore.

He layed in the middle of a warehouse, still horny as hell n now pushing 420lb with an 18inch cock that was very bloated, fat, and arching itself backwards towards his face as if trying to climb over his gargantuan pecs that formed a nice shelf. he begged the goblin to take it back, to undo it. Now this is where rumple could of undid the change n made the curse but he decided to be evil about it.

"size you want, size u will get, asking me you will soon regret!"

Matthew moans as his cock continues to lengthen towards his mouth, the head swelling so fat that it opens the piss slit like a mouth itself. he is told he can end it if he can have an orgasm. So Matthew began to suck and suck only to add on more size n pounds till he cried from the pain. His body couldnt take much more of it. He pleaded for his life to end this
horror and go back to normal.

Rumple was all to happy. "Whats mine is yours and whats yours is mine...deal?"

Now here Alexander shows up with his book wide open. "No deal...I waited many....many decades to capture that curse and you along with it. Any goblin would do, its just the goblin holding the curse..."

Rumple tried to shake hands but a red vapor held him in place. He began to panic and offered Alexander his hearts desire in echange for freedom. Wrong move, Alex is a collector and having a rare prize like rumplestiltskin is a rare prize indeed.

He holds up his hand, and aims his palm towards the goblin. The goblin even tells him that his "cinderella" is working for some other guy, but Alex does not seem to care in the slightest.

"Schlechter Puck, der Leben zerst?rt, einen Fluch so das ?bel zu passieren, gedeiht. Ich binde Sie jetzt zu diesem alten Buch, nicht mich keinem Schatten oder Ecke wo zu verbergen."(1)He flips open to a blank spot in the book where rumplestiltskin should be illustrated.

"Rumplestiltskin, H?REN SIE MEINE WORTE! In die Seiten, in die Leere, Sie sittred mein Zorn, machten Sie mich ge?rgert."(2)

"Durch die M?chte von Solomon, Plutus, Fortuna, und Pfanne. Ich binde thee zu meinen Seiten, und nicht mehr Plage-Mann!"(3)The goblin writhes n screams, red fog envelopes him and sucks him into a swirling vortex and inks him right into the pages of the fairy tale book. The book shuts itself in Alex's hand and the screams of the goblin muffled. Alex then looks at the collosal body of Matthew.

The poor boy is so musclebound he cant even lift hismelf to stand up, he would use the boy, but he has no plans or any further need for him. He raises his palm to the boy and begins to speak.

"Was getan wurde, jetzt aufmachen, gebe ich Sie in die Form dass wahr zur?ck...."(4)Matthew's body begins to shrink down. His hulking body returning to that of a scrawny rich kid n no longer the behemoth he had become. The muscles he did put on from body building also went away. he gets up, nacked and confused. His body is covered in black smoke as his clothes return to him, n left with a mere statement from Alexander.

"Return home rich boy, this town is no place for little wretches
like you..."

----
Matthew did return to new york to live with his mother. Though when he tried to tell her what happened, she imeddietly checked him into the clinic for mental therapy. "people dont just gain muscles from magical old men" she often says.

As for Alexander, he went back to teaching class, he had his werewolf and his troll to manage. Cinderella would have to wait until later. He sences she is no longer a pychomancer, she is more of a physical being now, but still just as dangerous. Who could be stepping into his territory? He opens the next chapter of his book and smiles.

"....sleeping beauty..."

(1)Wicked goblin, who ruins lives, to pass a curse so the evil thrives. I bind you now to this ancient book, no where to
hide, no shadow or nook.
(2)Rumplestiltskin, HEAR MY WORDS! Into the pages, into the void, you sittred up my ire, you made me annoyed.
(3)By the powers of Solomon, Plutus, Fortuna, and Pan. I bind thee to my pages, and no longer plague man!
(4)What was done, now undo, I return you to the form that true....
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Old December 1st, 2010, 08:33 PM
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See I told you you have a real knack for reinterpreting the old tales. Keep it up.
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I feel a bit bad for Rumplestiltskin. He was just the latest cursed guy. I had hoped Alexander would end the curse AND free the innocent victim. Good story telling though! Peace!
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well if ya think about it the curse passes from one victim to the next and cant be undone only passed. so why not just caputre the current rumplestiltskin instead of tyring to remove the possession. besides, it always targets the spoiled rotten brat so its perfect.
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Very True Chimera! I'm just a sucker for a happy ending. Peace!
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