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Grimm Tales: Snow White

Grimm Tales: Snow White

Alexander walks down Lindale Ave. A look of displeasure masks his face as he makes his way to house 723 and stops in front of it. It seems one of his students was sick today. He never seen Stephen late for a single class until two weeks ago when he came down with a mysterious illness and had to miss school since then. It seems a bit odd and he decided to look into it himself.
 
----------earlyer that day-----

"Today class we shall discuss a timless and worldly classic we all know and love....Snow White..." the glass giggles at the title, every one knows it all too well. "Yes we all know it, thanks to children's books and disney it is more known than any other story known to man. However...few know the true side of it." The class still giggles n quiets down for the professor's lecture on the tale.
 
Alex cracks open his large leather bound book and skims to the chapter on snow white. "As we all know, there was a princess and a jealous step mother. A hunstman, dwarfs, a witch, an apple, blah blah blah. However....lets get to the point shall we ladies n gentlemen?" The students nod. "Snow White is a german tale....of course...pronounced as
Schneewittchen. Sounds like i just blew my nose while talking....any ways. The dwarfs however didnt get names till 1912 on broadway and then in 1937 thanks to disney...*sigh*(oh how he remember seeing it on broadway....)"

"The grimm brothers added the fabled magic mirror...."he walks over to his own mirror hanging up in the class and plays with his bangs. "Mirror mirror on the wall...who is the fairest one of all?" he grins and turns around, "or as it was said in german...Spieglein, Spieglein, an der Wand / Wer ist die Sch?nste im ganzen Land?..And the mirror of course said it was her till the pipsqueak became a woman and so as we all know...narcissism took hold and made the queen a murderous wench."

"Now the apple was used, however so was a courset to suffocate her, a poisoned comb, and then the apple. The queen of course didnt just dress as an old hag from disney. No first was a peddler woman, then a wandering gypsy, then a farmer's wife. Course ding bat ate the apple seeing as the queen ate the non poisoned section of it first. Then comes the glass coffin, a prince, a kiss and wala." he shakes his head. "No the coffin was shook and the apple dislodged so the princess could breathe. Now some like a boulder landing on the queen, no she danced in red hot slippers till her feet where crispy stubbs then left to crawl in the winter wilderness alone and broken..."the glass looks a little mortified.

"Personaly I like the movie Snow White: A Tale of Terror best for this story. However, did any one know there was a truth based in this with a woman named Margarete von Waldeck who was to marry Phillip 2 of spain. she was found poisoned by an apple and the vain step mother was to blame. However class, thats not the asignment. The asignment is more on psychology. Was the mirror really magic or was the queen playing off her psycosis n beleived the mirror did talk?"
 
-----present---

Alexander knocks on the door. He is met by a man in his 40s. Tall, muscular, blonde hair and a matching mustache. He wore a grey wife beater with red sweat pants and nice tennis shoes. This must have been Stephen's Father. "Hello I am professor Grimm and I am here about Stephen's absence from my class...."

"Yes I figured one of those cook teachers would show up with questions. My name is Victor and I hate to say but Stephen is very sick, hard of breathing and always throwing up. Docs thought it was the flu but he keeps going into a downhill decline. Shame really, boy had potential...."

Alex-"Potential?"

Victor-"Ya he wanted to be a body builder...maybe he used a dirty needle n got sick. I hope not, boy could die any day now...."

Alex-"I am sure he will recover...by the way..."He hands the big book to Victor."Do make sure he reads that. We are on the tale of Snow White. It may help him feel less discomfort in the end should it turn eigther way."

Victor takes the book and slams the door in Alexs face without so much as a good day. Such a rude man. This needs looking into. Now Alex not being a normal theif whieprs to the bushes beside the house and has them lift him up to Stephen's room. The nosey neighbor peeking through her window of course calls for her husband Abner but no luck on her end for snooping.

In the room, Alex sees a horrible site. Stephen is laying there, sprawled out on a broken queen size bed that is obviously too small for him now. His body gargantuan with muscles that only monsters or giants possessed. The boy is only 17 and weighs a good 500lbs or more. The boy was practicall nude save for the bedsheet covering his abs. The behemoth's dick stood out a good 4ft and was 3ft around. It looked like it was in a constant state of erection with no signs of trouble, as if the body created too much blood and simply filled the dick to full mast to compensate. Alex continued to spy, noticing the boy had a sickly face and a pastey pale complexion.

He notices the ballsack churning as if becoming very full. The dick swells n reddens, soon after spewing several ropes of cum on the walls near him. He looks back, noticing Stephen pop on a few more pounds, widening and then his dick expanding a few inches. It was horrible, especially with the sounds he made gasping for air and struggling to breathe. He hears footsteps and ducks under the window pane just as Victor walks into the room. Stephen wakes up....barely...and asks his father if he will get any better. Victor replies no, the doctors see no change and don't know why hes growing, only that it getting worse. Stephen cries, and Victor forces him to eat his tomatoe soup. Stephen slurps it down and falls right back to sleep.

Victor measures Stephen. 82inch chest across, 35inch neck, 42inch bicep unflexed, 58inch weist, nice 12 pack, 55inch thighs, diamond calves, size 15 shoe, penis is now 4ft 5 inches, and 3.5ft around. He puts the tape measurer away, just in time as Stephen's cock begins to swell again. Victor stuffs as much of the head in his mouth and braces himself, sucking down gallons of cum as most of it spews out and drenches him. He looks down as his step son is now a few moure lbs heavyer and struggling even more to breathe. He walks out of the room, his clothes tighter than before. Alex having witnessed this figured out whats going on for the most part.

Victor smiles and goes to the kitchen, prepping Stephen's final meal. He begins making tomatoe bisque again and starts pouring in a vial from under the sink followed by draino. The chemical came from a speciallab designed to increase bodily growth through the release of sexual endorphins. The draino is merely the poison doing the job. Alex watched it all from the window. Tsk Tsk looks like some one needs to be taught a lesson. All the while Victor looks over at his old bodybuilding pictures. He used to be prime cut until the judges had him banned for life due to illigal perofmnace enhancers. His stepson was growing up to be the next big dog and he just couldn't stand to be shown up by a kid.

He opened the book and read the chapter. Little did he notice Alex casting a spell from the window to make the characters come to life...or in this case, a certain cast of characters. A crash from the basement alerts Victor to an intruder. As he walks downstairs Alex walks into the kitchen from the backdoor and reads a few pages to himself. What he didnt tell the class is that the 7 dwarfs were cannibal midgets who lived in the mountains. They only ate the wicked and the cruel so they spared snow white. When they found the princess dead, they did forge a coffin and then took their vengence on the queen, smashing her mirror and cutting her to peices with it. Alex grins wickedly.

He walks up to Stephen's room and looks him over. He pulls out a hairpin needle from his pony tail and pokes a vein on Stephen's arm. With blood flowing slightly he begins by placing his hand on the wound. While he chants the room shakes, shaking the giant's body with pure energy. Many more holes open up on the body, secreting a black liquid that stripes Stephen's body and makes a large black puddle on the floor. Alex simply used a posotive energy flow to counteract the negative flow inside the body forcing it to expel the toxins causing unwanted growth and poison. It turns out the muscles where growing faster than what the body was used to, therefor causing the muscles to crush the rib cage like a courset and eventually collapse the lungs from preassure. The draino was to ensure death at any cost. He walks out of the room, reaching for his cell phone just as he begins to hear the screams from the basement.

----in the basement----

Victor walks down into the basement, turning the light on he sees nothing down there but his old dusty workout mirror he loved posing in front of. He stands before it, showign off his good looks and making a few of his old poses that used to win him trophies. He is then stopped by the scrapping of metal on stone but sees nothing. he is then greeted by a question from what sounded like an old man. "So victor....think your the fairest in the land?"

He is too late as the mirror shatters, sending shards every where as one cuts his face.
He gets off the floor, acking up as seven little men stand before him, holding crow bars, picks, axes, hammers, knives, and hooks. he tries to make it to the stairs, only to be held by a woman's arm. Looking down he sees a sliced up woman in a queen's costume. He begins to freak out, again too late for the dwarfs and the zombie queen are upon him, tearing the shit out of him. Upstairs Alex arrives, shooing them off Victor as he dials 911 on his cell phone. He walks away, passing through the kitchen and grabbing his book as he heads out the door.

-----2 weeks later---
A pair of orderlies walk down the halls of the sanitarium. They stop by room 332. They look in through the door and begin reading the clip board. "Subject 332, Victor Smith. Age 45, condition, Munchausen syndrome. Has fits of delusions beleiving he was attacked by the 7 dwarfs and the evil queen from snow white. Also seems to suffer further symptoms when authorities found him clawed up in the basement while he was poisoning his son slowly in the bedroom. Subject is not to have any human contact outside of treatment."

The orderlies look inside, seeing an insade man with his head shaved, a big scar going across his face, small clawmarks, and his upper body tied down in a streight jacket, chains, and pad locks.

Victor rocks back in forth in his padded cell, staying in the fading light as much as possible. His eyes wide with panic and fear only saying over and over again ,"The fairest of them all....the fairest of them alll.....the fairest of them all...." The sun sets, and darkness creeps in every more. From the shadows he sees a tall man clad in darkness with red eyes shimmering from behind a pair of glasses. Then 7 more pairs of red eyes appear at knee height. He hears Alex's voice. "So Victor....still think your the fairest of them all?"

The orderlies hear Victor screaming about how the dwarfs are gonna kill him, how the devil is
upon him. But they take it as the mere rantings of an insane mad man on a downhill ride from a power trip. The screams of fear and pain are soon drowned out as the other patients begin their nightly chorus of dementia and psychosis.

Stephen however was quickly saved by paramedics an dtreated for his condition. Alex of course took him in as a ward at his Fraternity house and had him looked after by the other house guests that lived there. Sadly for Stephen, the combination of chemicals, magic, and poison turned him into somthing of a toxic incubus. Gaining mass to seduce men and women and shrinking at will to walk around without notice, and worst of all...a poisoned kiss that leaves his victims suffering from mild cases of typhoid symdrome that damages the brain.

the next story.....jack and the beanstalk.
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Only one thing here that I see every once in a while.

The word is 'voila' not 'wala' -- it's French, for "behold!" or "look at that!"

One of several (hundred) words of foreign origin imported into English.
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A very clever story. I would suggest you find yourself an editor, however. Properly edited, and expanded, this story could be incredible!
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well i hoped you guys would like that. took my a while to brainstorm it. the next one should be a challange.
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