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Old March 2nd, 2011, 06:53 PM
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Big New World, Chapter 2

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Wow, what a great chapter! Such a hot sex scene with Ryan, and I'm glad he's bulking up a little too!

It would be hot to see Alex play football but he would hurt someone...strongman competitions anyone?
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When the rabid mob shows up: "Sure I'll play football. As long as my first game is against all of you. And you sign waivers to the effect that your resulting year-long hospital stay is your own damn fault."
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Phew & Woof! That was AMAZING. The sex scene wasn't overdone and just hot enough to get my juices flowing in several directions. I also love the playfulness of the character interaction, especially between Alex and Ryan at the dinner table. It's so innocent and wicked and mischievous all at once. A shorter chapter than before, but forgive me for being greedy. I just want more and more of this and for it never to end.
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When the rabid mob shows up: "Sure I'll play football. As long as my first game is against all of you. And you sign waivers to the effect that your resulting year-long hospital stay is your own damn fault."
Generitrans, you win. Absolutely brilliant. Thogh, I'm sure whatever will come next will be suitably awesome, I just can see the looks of everybody's faces as they suddenly change their minds.

Yet again, so very awesome. LOVE IT! And it's so wonderful seeing that through all this, Ryan is still creating a stable centre to Alex's world, with the help of Bob, Lauren and the others on the farm.

You have created a character that I would love to be friends with, and in story writing, that can be very difficult indeed.
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Really awesome and the dialogue is very matter-of-fact realistic!!!
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Wow, what a great chapter! Such a hot sex scene with Ryan, and I'm glad he's bulking up a little too!

It would be hot to see Alex play football but he would hurt someone...strongman competitions anyone?
Who knows? We might see a little more of the competitive spirit.

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When the rabid mob shows up: "Sure I'll play football. As long as my first game is against all of you. And you sign waivers to the effect that your resulting year-long hospital stay is your own damn fault."
Oh, Alex is far too nice to do that. Or is he?

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Phew & Woof! That was AMAZING. The sex scene wasn't overdone and just hot enough to get my juices flowing in several directions. I also love the playfulness of the character interaction, especially between Alex and Ryan at the dinner table. It's so innocent and wicked and mischievous all at once. A shorter chapter than before, but forgive me for being greedy. I just want more and more of this and for it never to end.
Excellent! I'll try to write longer chapters.

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Generitrans, you win. Absolutely brilliant. Thogh, I'm sure whatever will come next will be suitably awesome, I just can see the looks of everybody's faces as they suddenly change their minds.

Yet again, so very awesome. LOVE IT! And it's so wonderful seeing that through all this, Ryan is still creating a stable centre to Alex's world, with the help of Bob, Lauren and the others on the farm.

You have created a character that I would love to be friends with, and in story writing, that can be very difficult indeed.
It's always been my intent that this be a coming of age story, and I've tried to incorporate universal themes of emotional and spiritual growth along with the literal growth.

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Really awesome and the dialogue is very matter-of-fact realistic!!!
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