Gypsies and Jockstraps

[Ryne]

Well, this was originally a dream i had.
Guy, about 20 years old, college, always does nice things for other people and either gets nothing in return (EVER!) or has it backfire and blow-up in his face. Always dreams of being a big bodybuilder type of guy he fantisizes about, and has a huge crush on this other student/ lacross player/ bodybuilding guy. this guy tells him he wants to meet him alone later that night. he meets him and his crush pulls some lame incriminating prank on him by using one of the guy's XXL used jockstraps, breaking his heart. After having the prank pulled on him by the guy he likes, he walks home with the jock still him (somewhere) and finds an old woman being mugged in the alley. he chases the mugger away and escorts the lady home. she questions him about his composure and his torn clothes. he explains his story and he says something like "i always wondered what it would be like to be huge; being small sucks. i wish i was as big as <crush's name>, ....no, even bigger!!! and he was my bitch! that'd show him! " the lady then says she can help.

Long story short, she takes the jockstrap and uses magic on it to make it a muscle/ genital size/ cumshot size/ height increasing strap. The strap also will make the previous wearer (his crush) the new wearer's slave for as long as the new wearer comands while wearing the strap. the draw back is that the jockstraps magic is "constantly" working. so the wearer of it is always getting bigger, and if the jockstrap breaks while someones wearing it, that person wont stop growing...and the previous wearer is forever a slave ^_^

Anyway, let me know what you all think, i've already got some of it started. im also up for suggestions and constructive criticism. Plus, if anyone wants to be included or has another way for this story to go that i like, also, let me know, im open to ideas.

Ryne

[rextorres]

Very cool dream! I can just imagine, the 20 year-old young man chasing the mugger away, not expecting anything in return. The woman places her spell on the jockstrap, and he puts it on.

I can see where this is going: The jockstrap breaks (while he's wearing it), causing his muscles to grow continually, while the guy who bullied him becomes his slave for the rest of his life. What a great "payback"!

Hopefully, the 20 year-old guy grows and becomes MASSIVE! I can definately relate to him. I know the feeling of doing stuff for people who are ungrateful. These are often your closest friends, or direct family members, who take you for granted!

This idea is definately worth looking in to. It just takes time to write the story. The muscle growth story ideas on this forum are awesome. Sigh... So much to write, so little time...

Rex

[darkluster4]

I like the whole idea with the jockstrap and plot, but is the crush dude straight?
And, does he know he's being forced into being a sex slave?

[Ryne]

Well, whether he's straight right now, i have'nt really put a label on. its kinda up in the air but the story should work out either way. Im leaning towards a straight guy who's curious maybe, but has "homo/fag" issues, like with his father or something.

As for him having knowledge that he's being a slave, YES, he is self-aware when he's doing the things he's ordered to. It will sort-of be like an Alpha wolf syndrome, where your body will sort of force you to do it, like unconsious thought. If you refuse, you get this extremely impending doom/dread feeling, as if you dont do it, life as you know it will come to an end. An example of this would be your classic Big bully vs. Small Nerdy kid scene. Where the buddy threatens the nerdy kid to do his homework "or Else." the feeling the nerdy kid has is what im trying to go for.

Any other questions/comments? or even Requests? i still have'nt given them official names, mostly cuz the ones i have now, are not to my liking... All characters!!! im never good with names...

On the plus side, its looking really good about half done....

Thanks!
Ryne

[MuscleMage]

Hm, I know it makes for a very hot story, but it seems weird that the magic would be "constantly" on, and would be permanent if it was broken. Maybe something more realistic would be like, "Whenever you do another good deed, you will grow as a reward." But then maybe he breaks it when he saves someone's life or something the like and grows enough to break it. And the magic goes awry and he keeps growing?

And just for kicks, but this time the old bully has fallen in love with him. And when the strap breaks, they become less of Master and Slave and become more bonded as lovers. So they both grow (with the main character bigger of course)

[Ubermuscle]

Hmm, well it depends on small dude's attitude really. Obviously he's not the type to hold a grudge or he'd have stop helping others long ago. Still, this could be the 'last straw' for him. Rather than incriminating, perhaps the 'prank' should be something VERY humiliating that would explain the torn clothing?

I like the slave idea, but maybe jock dude is more like the backseat driver? That is he's aware of what he's doing but literally can't stop himself? And perhaps with each act the resistance starts to go down until it's no longer master/slave but mutal love? Or maybe it is master/slave but it's not forced anymore...

I think the reward of muscles for good deeds probably would be a good idea. I'm less sure about it being bound to a particular peice of clothing - though the jock dude's slavery certainly should be!

Anyway, that's my two cents. Good luck with the story!