Big New World Chapter 5

[umlerian49]

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[JP71]

Another great chapter. I really hate it when the media twist things for the sake of sensationalising a story. Keep up the great story. I really cannot wait for the next chapter. Alex has become such a powerful image in my mind, especially when I wake up in the morning with a boner, ha ha.

[Ender]

Cool story... I like Alex he's a great character...

When Ryan told Alex that he was taking an extract from the stuff that made Alex huge to get more buff I figured that Courtney would be getting a taste of it too... Since Court's growth plates are still open we can expect some big changes from the little guy.

Ender

[Reeza]

I'm finally catching up with this story. It's as good as ever.

[philat99]

I'm looking forward to more!
Mike

[Silas]

This had to be the hardest chapter to read. Gram is right. People like Jason are just plain evil and when they manipulate things into what seems a no win situation, even in fiction, I want to scream.

The carrot that kept me going was wanting to see what would happen with Courtney. Thanks for keeping the story going. Alex is the kind of character you want to follow.

[Ender]

After a bit of thought over the weekend it occurred to me why I like the Alex character as much as I do... You've got the thought process of a high functioning Autism Spectrum individual and their problems with bullies right. As an Aspie myself it's rings clear. And he has muscles exactly what most AS boys would love to have.

And he gets caught in the standard Catch-22, if you restrain the real bully so he can't hurt you until "help" comes you're seen as the aggressor even if you are and have not hurt the real bully because you're holding the other guy down. School officals are so stupid...

Ender

[umlerian49]

Originally Posted by JP71

Another great chapter. I really hate it when the media twist things for the sake of sensationalising a story. Keep up the great story. I really cannot wait for the next chapter. Alex has become such a powerful image in my mind, especially when I wake up in the morning with a boner, ha ha.

TV news has become so vacuous, so I had to put in my two cents.

I feel like Alex has become my constant companion.

Originally Posted by Ender

Cool story... I like Alex he's a great character...

When Ryan told Alex that he was taking an extract from the stuff that made Alex huge to get more buff I figured that Courtney would be getting a taste of it too... Since Court's growth plates are still open we can expect some big changes from the little guy.

Ender

There could be many interesting developments...

Originally Posted by Reeza

I'm finally catching up with this story. It's as good as ever.

Thanks! Delightful comments like yours make it a pleasure.

Originally Posted by philat99

I'm looking forward to more!
Mike

I'm polishing Chapter 10 right now, so you shouldn't be disappointed.

Originally Posted by Silas

This had to be the hardest chapter to read. Gram is right. People like Jason are just plain evil and when they manipulate things into what seems a no win situation, even in fiction, I want to scream.

The carrot that kept me going was wanting to see what would happen with Courtney. Thanks for keeping the story going. Alex is the kind of character you want to follow.

That's the effect I was hoping for. Thanks for picking up on that.

Originally Posted by Ender

After a bit of thought over the weekend it occurred to me why I like the Alex character as much as I do... You've got the thought process of a high functioning Autism Spectrum individual and their problems with bullies right. As an Aspie myself it's rings clear. And he has muscles exactly what most AS boys would love to have.

And he gets caught in the standard Catch-22, if you restrain the real bully so he can't hurt you until "help" comes you're seen as the aggressor even if you are and have not hurt the real bully because you're holding the other guy down. School officals are so stupid...

Ender

From an "Aspie," that's high praise. Your words mean a lot.