Big New World Chapter 12

[umlerian49]

Story withdrawn.

[sonic260]

Brilliant as always!
The more I read, the more I get the feeling that Sammy is the true antagonist behind all of this...

[silvershadow]

AHHAHA!!


?I guess that?s all for now. Except for your friend getting in a fight, I can?t see that any law has been broken. The school?s suspending him for three days. I guess that?ll be the end of it.?

?Wait a minute!? I blurted. ?Three days? I got a week!?

Love the last words good laugh. I am sorry what happened with him and frank. It's ironic that everything would be great if not for Sammy's idiocy. But hey he put up with it for a long time gotta give Alex that. Nice plot twist chapter can't wait to see what's next.

[JP71]

Oooh the drama, I can't take it....arrrrrgh!!!! Actually I can. MORE MORE, and SOON SOON. I hate Sammy.

[Demandred]

Mmm, with both Ryan and Alex happy to keep Frank naked, and Frank happy to be seen in that way, I was half expecting some sort of manly threesome of manliness now he's a stud!

I was glad Alex put them in their place though. Bullying is bad.

[Ender]

Frank slamming Jason up a wall by the throat is not something I saw coming. Although in retrospect with Jason and company beating up Sammy and Frank now being Sammy's personal Muscle Boy, it was inevitable. One thing it made rather clear in light of earlier events, it's Sammy and not Frank that wears the pants in their relationship... Frank really needs to sign up for some assertiveness classes. He is such a wimp. The only reason Frank was able to get ihis hands on Jason and up the wall was that Jason couldn't concive that Frank or Sammy were any sort of threat. Near Jason knows better and he'll never let them have the chance to do it a second time. I was going to suggest that Frank needed to "grow some balls," but then it occurred to me that he did just grow an enviable set. So maybe he just needs some time for the Testosterone to kick in.

Franks sudden transformation will be noted by the jocks and despite his new size I doubt Frank would be able to avoid divulging how he grew and since Frank and Sammy are a couple Sammy will a target too. Once Jason and the jock are aware of the existence of the grow juice they will find a way to get access to it and once they have access any jock will be able to become ?Alex? like. And that will end the Anti-Bullying Accord

Frank beating up on Jason could be construed to be a violation of the Jason-Alex Accord that is currently protecting uncool kids from being bullied be the jocks. It is entirely based on Jason influence on the other jocks to keep them in line and Alex's threat to end Jason's high school athletic career and hopes for an athletic scholarship by replacing him as the star athlete in every sport Jason competes in. Being throttled by Frank would lower Jason?s status among the jocks making it less likely Jason?s wishes will obeyed

It's great that Detective Hendricks is being so understanding, and maybe in a small town that would be enough. But not all law enforcement people are reasonable or 100% rational. Since the Grow Juice isn't licensed and is experimental it will be assumed to be a drug and banned for human use until the FDA does okay?s it.

Ender

And I still want a copy of grow juice formula... maybe as a birthday present... It's coming up to the end of Feb soon in the story timeline.

[philat99]

Excellent plot. Again, such honesty and morals are to be commended. Never thought I say "poor Jason"!

[sketlover]

What else to say ! Just fantastic !
I'm hoocked like i've never been to story !
I check every day again the forum for a new chapter.
Wonderfull plot, wonderfull characters, wonderfull writting.
Thanks again for sharing this great story with us !

[umlerian49]

Originally Posted by sonic260

Brilliant as always!
The more I read, the more I get the feeling that Sammy is the true antagonist behind all of this...

It's starting to look that way. Remember, the school year's only half over.

Originally Posted by silvershadow

AHHAHA!!


?I guess that?s all for now. Except for your friend getting in a fight, I can?t see that any law has been broken. The school?s suspending him for three days. I guess that?ll be the end of it.?

?Wait a minute!? I blurted. ?Three days? I got a week!?

Love the last words good laugh. I am sorry what happened with him and frank. It's ironic that everything would be great if not for Sammy's idiocy. But hey he put up with it for a long time gotta give Alex that. Nice plot twist chapter can't wait to see what's next.

Righteous indignation is a wonderful new experience for Alex.

Originally Posted by JP71

Oooh the drama, I can't take it....arrrrrgh!!!! Actually I can. MORE MORE, and SOON SOON. I hate Sammy.

I'm getting kind of fond of the little twerp.

Originally Posted by Demandred

Mmm, with both Ryan and Alex happy to keep Frank naked, and Frank happy to be seen in that way, I was half expecting some sort of manly threesome of manliness now he's a stud!

I was glad Alex put them in their place though. Bullying is bad.

I'll have to see what I can do to spice up the manliness. I can't refuse one of my favorite authors.

Originally Posted by Ender

Frank slamming Jason up a wall by the throat is not something I saw coming. Although in retrospect with Jason and company beating up Sammy and Frank now being Sammy's personal Muscle Boy, it was inevitable. One thing it made rather clear in light of earlier events, it's Sammy and not Frank that wears the pants in their relationship... Frank really needs to sign up for some assertiveness classes. He is such a wimp. The only reason Frank was able to get ihis hands on Jason and up the wall was that Jason couldn't concive that Frank or Sammy were any sort of threat. Near Jason knows better and he'll never let them have the chance to do it a second time. I was going to suggest that Frank needed to "grow some balls," but then it occurred to me that he did just grow an enviable set. So maybe he just needs some time for the Testosterone to kick in.

Franks sudden transformation will be noted by the jocks and despite his new size I doubt Frank would be able to avoid divulging how he grew and since Frank and Sammy are a couple Sammy will a target too. Once Jason and the jock are aware of the existence of the grow juice they will find a way to get access to it and once they have access any jock will be able to become ?Alex? like. And that will end the Anti-Bullying Accord

Frank beating up on Jason could be construed to be a violation of the Jason-Alex Accord that is currently protecting uncool kids from being bullied be the jocks. It is entirely based on Jason influence on the other jocks to keep them in line and Alex's threat to end Jason's high school athletic career and hopes for an athletic scholarship by replacing him as the star athlete in every sport Jason competes in. Being throttled by Frank would lower Jason?s status among the jocks making it less likely Jason?s wishes will obeyed

It's great that Detective Hendricks is being so understanding, and maybe in a small town that would be enough. But not all law enforcement people are reasonable or 100% rational. Since the Grow Juice isn't licensed and is experimental it will be assumed to be a drug and banned for human use until the FDA does okay?s it.

Ender

And I still want a copy of grow juice formula... maybe as a birthday present... It's coming up to the end of Feb soon in the story timeline.

These are all excellent observations. I'd say the chances of most of these things happening is 50/50. Part of the fun is surprising people.

Originally Posted by philat99

Excellent plot. Again, such honesty and morals are to be commended. Never thought I say "poor Jason"!

Great! That's what I wanted. I think you'll find that no one is as straightforward as they might seem.

Originally Posted by sketlover

What else to say ! Just fantastic !
I'm hoocked like i've never been to story !
I check every day again the forum for a new chapter.
Wonderfull plot, wonderfull characters, wonderfull writting.
Thanks again for sharing this great story with us !

Just so everyone knows, I did not pay sketlover to say these things!