Politically incorrect

[Toro]

I recently had an idea for a new story.
It would involve the problem of the border between US and Mexico.

Even if a true hot story, in the traditional Muscle Growth way, there woul be a lot of violence in it and it would pose many questions concerning the subject (who is to blame? is everything always that clear?)

I was wondering if such kind of story is accepted or banned from this muscle community.
Let me know.

Bye
Toro

[redwolf64]

I wouldn't mind a story like that at all - I like a good story that's more than just the muscle fetish and can work in some other ideas.

The violence might bother some people, so I just might put a disclaimer at the top for those not interested in that kind of material.

[CallMeCrazy]

I think, so long as it contains muscle growth and the characters are of legal age, just about anything goes. Disclaimers are of course welcome if its something a lot people might not like (scat, extreme violence, etc).

[2wayFlex]

I wrote a story long time ago about American (white) muscle heads used as plow pulling animals on Mexican work farms in exchange for muscle worship. Seems you could do a story like that too. Anything goes really, even if the "minority" does the work.

[FuzzyKB]

Originally Posted by Toro

I recently had an idea for a new story.
It would involve the problem of the border between US and Mexico.

Even if a true hot story, in the traditional Muscle Growth way, there woul be a lot of violence in it and it would pose many questions concerning the subject (who is to blame? is everything always that clear?)

I was wondering if such kind of story is accepted or banned from this muscle community.
Let me know.

Bye
Toro

The sad fact of life is that there are situations where politically incorrect is real life. The defining point to me would be if the story is well written and does it retain it's erotic moments. Currently Wordshop is working on a very violent story. The story deals with a couple of legal aged hustlers and thugs who make the error of ripping off the wrong guy. The man gets his revenge breaking them physically and mentally in every way as he transforms them against their will into sex machines for a brothel in South America. It is not in character for Wordshop, but it is a writing exercise to go into a realm which he has not written about previously to see if it can be done with quality. You cannot develop skill without doing the writing. My personal viewpoint is that as long as it does not contain snuff or anything underaged that the quality would be the issue. When you do a genre or a concept with which you may not be familiar the best advice would be to write at least half of the story before posting anything and proof the story numerous times. Be honest with yourself with regards to the quality of the story line. The violent aspects have to be there for a purpose. Write the story anyway and see where it takes you. Worry about the posting location later after you are comfortable with the quality of the story and writing. If you are not comfortable about posting here or have doubts, post it elsewhere and save the more bland things for here. Remember you are the author and it is your decision to give the gift of your words to others or not. Good luck, if it is well written and has good character development and a plot that needs the violence to make it work, I for one would be interested in reading your efforts.

[Yachirobi]

FuzzyKB is right. Don't worry about the violence. Don't worry about the MG or the political incorrectness either. What I would have you do is remember that you're dealing with a real situation and, in some ways, real people. Let your characters be real people. If they suddenly want to do something you didn't plan then let them do it. If you see that a character is turning one-dimensional or sterotypical, find that part of them that defies stereotypes or that is unique. And don't be afraid of those moments that don't seem to fit. Focus on the story, not the message or the muscle, and you should be just fine.

[suma]

Originally Posted by 2wayFlex

I wrote a story long time ago about American (white) muscle heads used as plow pulling animals on Mexican work farms in exchange for muscle worship. Seems you could do a story like that too. Anything goes really, even if the "minority" does the work.

that's an interesting theme, i'd like to read that.

also, how about American muscle jocks used for muscle worship in exchange for cheap easily available Mexican steroids?

[EQQUS]

Personally I would like to see more mexican characters in stories

[FuzzyKB]

Originally Posted by EQQUS

Personally I would like to see more mexican characters in stories

One of my personal issues for years has been that with regards to race or physical description we all as authors tend to start from a single place. There are very few characters in stories of different racial backgrounds and there are very few that originate clearly in other cultures. I would like to see more men and greater racial diversity in the stories we read simply because the different customs of different people could change and vastly improve the writing. Think of the possibilities based on the customs of different places. A young African-American is transformed in the South and he has the deep religious culture of that area to contend with. A transformation of an Asian male in San Francisco California using that City and it's landmarks would make for a very real and great story. A Hispanic male set in Mexico or the desert Southwestern United States playing it very real and using some of the locations as backdrops. A story of a young French-Canadian in Nova Scotia or Toronto would be another great backdrop. Get out there and start prowling "Google Earth" and find new places and settings. What about a transformation in Austrailia?

Each difference in location and culture gives great writing experience and makes things more real.

As far as race again quality is the issue not race. . . . .

[EQQUS]

I whole heartedly agree