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A Walk in the Park III I'm considering publishing this series, so I'm afraid I have to remove it. Sorry!
Last edited by SouthernSuitor; July 28th, 2012 at 03:32 PM. |
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Hot as always, thanks for all the fantasies! ![]() |
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! However, I do get the sense that people like "Power Tie" better than this, but I'll keep working on it--especially now that I have only one more character to introduce. The plot thickens. |
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Please don't assume my friend that people don't enjoy it, merely because they don't comment as much. I'm sure there are many people who are eagerly awaiting future chapters. I know I am.
__________________ Lifting is meditation for alpha males. It may not be possible to reach perfection, but vigorously pursuing it will lead to excellence. You mustn't be afraid to dream a little bigger darling. True strength doesn't come from might of arms, but from force of will. |
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Sometimes it's nice to look at the number of people who've viewed a story rather than the number of replies. Seems this is usually a reticent bunch... ;3
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My two cents- In a way, Power Tie is easier to "like" because each episode is self-contained: the action builds to a climax in all senses of the word and the characters at the end of each episode are hot, horny and happy (and so is the reader). The chapters of Walk In The Park are not self-contained, so I know that I as a reader tend to withhold judgment waiting to see how things unfold.
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That is a very plausible explanation, Brahms. I'm not sure whether I should adopt this formula for future series I write, or fall back on the "Power Tie" formula of the self-contained episode instead. Regardless, I appreciate everybody's support, and I'm glad some readers here have the patience to manage my tangled prose. While this series does go for hot and horny, I'm not too sure about the "happy" part, at least at the moment. I have the remainder of the plot arc written out, but still need to expand it into a full story. This series will probably conclude in two more installments, before I start working on another series . . . . . . which may or may not involve w e r e w o l v e s . . . |
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Man, whatever you write is dynamite. I do like Power Tie better than this story, but Walk in the Park still is pretty damn hot. I look forward to whatever you write next! =)
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Man, Southern Suitor, This series is really intriguing and really weird! I can't understand the motivation of the head -- I keep wondering if he knows Sackman and the others from their previous lives. What is the point of all this? What are the slaves in the fields doing? Are they growing fruit? The reason or justification for this whole grown up "Lord of the Flies" is escaping me. Then again, maybe it's not supposed to make sense. It is an interesting scenario. What are Lillian and the other "left behind" spouses or significant others doing? Are the papers reporting a rash of disappearances of prominent leaders? Is someone on the outside benefitting from all this? There are many intriguing possibilities! Keep writing - I want to see where this goes! Thanks, Mdlftr |
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Mdlftr, All I can offer is a sphinx-like grin. Stay tuned! Yours, --SS. |
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