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| I Hate Bodybuilders II This story has been removed by the author. Last edited by R Chris Cooper; September 18th, 2012 at 07:53 AM.     |
| April 14th, 2012, 12:05 AM | |||
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| Sure, a hand lingers on a pec and next thing you know, erect nipple! Not everyone notices the sensation. Hell plenty of people don't notice the "Do Not Park Here" sign outside the gym either. Maybe it was the way the back of his hand brushed against his chest, you never know? |
| April 14th, 2012, 12:15 AM | |||
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| I hope the story will continue. It has a good premiss and I like the way you switch between characters. |
| April 14th, 2012, 06:11 AM | |||
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| I like where this second installment is going. A lot more interior monologue with some dialogue, but there is still a lot that is hinted at, rather than stated directly: Is Tim lonely for companionship? Is Roger attracted, yet afraid of rejection if he acts on his attraction? Are these two people blundering around in the dark, looking for friendship, support and....?? Great approach to "showing" not telling, and letting the reader try to figure things out! Terrific writing! This is really enjoyable! Thanks, Coop, for an intriguing story! Mdlftr |
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| April 15th, 2012, 01:56 PM | |||
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| Thanks guys. I will try to wrap this up in the next chapter. Coop Oops! The last chapter got very long so I split in two and I am revising the ending of part 4. Coop Last edited by R Chris Cooper; April 19th, 2012 at 06:15 AM. |
| April 15th, 2012, 08:27 PM | |||
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| I am intriqued to see where this goes with Tim and Roger. Clearly Roger has some back issue he needs to address, and clearly Tim is attracted to Roger. I can't wait to find out what the attraction is for Tim, and what the back story is for Roger. Thanks for a great installment Coop! |
| April 15th, 2012, 09:18 PM | |||
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| Hi Coop Great story, as usual You may try to "wrap" this up in rthe next chapter but [;ease, only if the story allows. |
| April 16th, 2012, 02:28 AM | |||
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| You sure know how to build suspense. Great story. And I'm sure you will... Keep Writing MD |
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