Ideas for the Masses

vga518 · #1 October 11th, 2005, 06:39 AM

I?m not to good at writing stories but I can think of ideas. So I'll post them all here. Your all free to use them.

One idea of mine is: In a woods like rural area lives a ?kid?. He has a giant back yard and it?s connected to the woods. In the woods, he goes exploring and discovers a cave. As he goes into the cave he sees drawings on the walls. He goes deeper into the cave until he sees a light. We he goes to the light he can?t believe what he sees. He sees a big muscular caveman/ Neanderthal. The caveman/ Neanderthal is actually very smart, and the kid thinks this is so cool. They eventually become friends, than later on the caveman/ Neanderthal makes the ?kid? like him. And so on.

(Yeah I know that this is kinda stupid but someone can make this work.)

CelticMuscle · #2 October 11th, 2005, 09:54 AM

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Originally Posted by vga518

I?m not to good at writing stories but I can think of ideas. So I'll post them all here. Your all free to use them.

One idea of mine is: In a woods like rural area lives a ?kid?. He has a giant back yard and it?s connected to the woods. In the woods, he goes exploring and discovers a cave. As he goes into the cave he sees drawings on the walls. He goes deeper into the cave until he sees a light. We he goes to the light he can?t believe what he sees. He sees a big muscular caveman/ Neanderthal. The caveman/ Neanderthal is actually very smart, and the kid thinks this is so cool. They eventually become friends, than later on the caveman/ Neanderthal makes the ?kid? like him. And so on.

(Yeah I know that this is kinda stupid but someone can make this work.)

Rubbish, that's a marvellous base. You can have all sorts of off shoots there. For instance, how did the caveman become both muscled and smart? Was he the result of an alien experiment to bridge the gap between Neanderthals and Homo Sapiens?

vga518 · #3 October 11th, 2005, 11:51 AM

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Rubbish, that's a marvellous base. You can have all sorts of off shoots there. For instance, how did the caveman become both muscled and smart? Was he the result of an alien experiment to bridge the gap between Neanderthals and Homo Sapiens?

I was thinking that the reason he is muscular and smart would be cause he ate a combination of food and stuff in the cave. It would also explain how a Neanderthal is alive in this time period. And that he is in the cave cause he is afraid of the outside world cause he is all alone at least until he meets the kid.

CelticMuscle · #4 October 11th, 2005, 01:12 PM

would be to read "The Mysterious Island" by Jules Verne and then perhaps working along those lines

ljobenza · #5 October 13th, 2005, 10:12 AM

You could have encourage him and say some useful comments rather than directly saying "rubbish".

CelticMuscle · #6 October 13th, 2005, 10:46 AM

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Originally Posted by ljobenza

You could have encourage him and say some useful comments rather than directly saying "rubbish".

My full post was:

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Rubbish, that's a marvellous base. You can have all sorts of off shoots there. For instance, how did the caveman become both muscled and smart? Was he the result of an alien experiment to bridge the gap between Neanderthals and Homo Sapiens?

vga518 · #7 October 13th, 2005, 12:05 PM

I just want someone to take my idea and make a story. That's all I want, I would do it myself but as I said all I can do is think up ideas. Someone please honor my request, thanx.

More2048 · #8 November 4th, 2005, 09:13 PM

i think this is a wonderful idea. the concept is intriuging. there is more to be devlouped from this but its sometimes good to leave it open ended. and is there any growth involved in this?

vga518 · #9 November 6th, 2005, 04:59 PM

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i think this is a wonderful idea. the concept is intriuging. there is more to be devlouped from this but its sometimes good to leave it open ended. and is there any growth involved in this?

Yes, there would be growth the "neanderthal" would make the kid kinda like him. Would u like to take a crack at it?

More2048 · #10 November 6th, 2005, 09:09 PM

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Yes, there would be growth the "neanderthal" would make the kid kinda like him. Would u like to take a crack at it?

i SUCK at writing but i will think about it

vga518 · #11 January 19th, 2006, 11:59 AM

Some more Ideas that I would love to see written.

Idea #2: "Living Art": A teen that doesn't have any/many friends remembers younger times, and draws a picture of his "imaginary friend". And Someway somehow the picture comes to life.

Idea #3: "2nd Puberty?": Some 12 yr old boys are tricked into taking a massx like substance by some guy. Since they haven't started going through puberty the formula works over time on them. The guy that gave them this did it so that he could make a stronger formula for older people so that they can gain more muscle and stuff as if going through a second puberty.

agreatguy6 · #12 February 13th, 2006, 05:24 PM

Yes, this is all wonderful and great stuff, but has anyone done anything about it? no. so everybody who has started to say "oh that is super cool

" Get to writing.

It's great, but I just don't have the time. Hmwk and everything.

rextorres · #13 February 14th, 2006, 06:37 PM

I love both ideas! Unfortunately, I'm not much of a writer and my stories haven't been well received on this site, so I guess I'll have to pass these stories to someone who is better qualified than me, and someone whose stories are more popular on this forum.

Rex