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Old November 2nd, 2005, 05:48 AM
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Hi guys, I thought it would be a nice time to get your thoughts on the story. I'm feeling that the parts might be too short, but I want the reader's opinion. Are the parts too long, too short, or just right? Anything you want to see more of or anything like that.

Most of the story is done, but I'm willing to go and add more detail to anything.

Or if you just love the way it is right now, let me know. All comments/suggestions are welcomed.
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Old November 2nd, 2005, 11:18 AM
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this has to be one of my favortie stories! however, I wish some parts would be longer and I was wondering what went on when sam and armstrong went to the mall in the prequel? Is there some kind secret that we don't know about? Either way it is a great story, keep em comming!
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Old November 2nd, 2005, 11:30 AM
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this has to be one of my favortie stories! however, I wish some parts would be longer and I was wondering what went on when sam and armstrong went to the mall in the prequel? Is there some kind secret that we don't know about? Either way it is a great story, keep em comming!
In this story is where you find out most of that info.

But to be short, the mall is where Sam finally realized how much he had changed. Remember chicks were all over him and he walked different and everything. All the work finally clicked in his mind, which led to that evening.
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