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Andrew Stories Version 3 I have not worked on the Andrew story for over a year, but in that time, a few problems with it have been noticed. First: The story should start with Andrew's first football practice of his senior year, instead of the end of Grade 11. That way, it won't overlap with the the Andrew Prequels. 2nd: It doesn't make sense for Andrew to be genetically enhanced if his Reserves time will end once his senior year does. If Andrew is going to Miami on a football scholarship instead of deploying with his fellow reservists, only they should be genetically enhanced. The Genetic Enhancement Serum was originally designed for the military anyway. 3rd: IF Andrew wants to avoid the Clark Kent syndrome: keeping secrets from those closest to him and giving up his chance to play college ball: he can't have superhuman strength. 4th: If Matt Stevenson grew to 6 foot 7 and 350 pounds of muscle naturally, it makes sense that his brother Mike could do the same: joining Andrew on the football team by Grade 10(Sophomore Year). 5th: IF Andrew knew about Steve and Darrel's bullying ways back in Grade 9, it makes no sense for him to remain friends with them for a further three years. This a brief summary of the changes I want to make on the Andrew story: which would focus more on the tug of war between being in the Reserves and having a full ride to Miami. The Enhancement Serum would best be restricted to a couple of chapters where Andrew's military buddies would get it in preparation for their deployment to Afghanistan. Of course, Andrew's rivalry with David Harrington would still exist to maintain more drama and give Andrew a nemesis that he has to defeat. Opinions on the proposed changes to the Andrew story would be welcomed and appreciated. |
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