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Old February 14th, 2013, 07:34 AM
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A new coffee

This is my first story !
Please be kind.
I made this story from some pictures that you can find here
The story is available in french just here.



Jake was the first to rise today. His friend Mike was off, he was still in bed.
Every morning, Jake was having coffee before going to work.
But today he decided to try a new coffee he got yesterday helping an elderly person to move.
This person told him that it was an excellent coffee he sold his old shop and provides incredible sensations...
Because Jake loved the coffee, he did not refuse this little gift.

After his shower, he began to prepare his coffee.
Smelled the coffee was very strong and a very dark color.
He let the coffee cool a bit and went to get dressed in the meantime.

When he went to taste the coffee, there was a knock at the door.
It was his colleague who came to fetch him to go to work.

- What are you doing ?? It's been 10 minutes I'm waiting outside !
- You're early ! I still have a good 20 minutes !
- I remind you that yesterday the boss asked us to come 30 minutes early because there is a meeting with the big boss !
- Oh shit! I forgot ! I take my jacket and I can !

By getting his jacket, he went to see his friend in the bedroom.

- Honey, I gotta go I forgot a meeting ! I'm late !
- Hummm... ok...
- If you want, I prepared coffee but I have not had time to drink!
- Hummm... ok...
- It will soon be cold ! And if it is good, let me know ! I might maybe see again the person who gave me the coffee and tell me where to get them ! Ok ?
- Ok baby...

Jake gave a kiss and left in a hurry.

Mike still wanted to sleep, but saw that he was awake now ... He decided to go to breakfast.

---

Just out of the bedroom, Mike smelled a strong odor.

He went into the kitchen and found the coffee still hot on the table.
He took what to eat, bread, butter, eggs, cheese, meat and orange juice!
It deprives itself of anything, it's a good sportsman!

He went into the living room and sat down at the table.

Coffee intrigued ... So black and smell as strong!
"I will not sleep for several days with this!" he said to himself.

First, he took orange juice and ate his two eggs.

He decides to taste the coffee.
It was still hot. It took just a sip.

In addition to having a very strong smell, it was also very strong in taste.
But he did not find disgusting, far from it!
He felt the liquid down into him and made him shiver...

---

Just finished his gulp, Mike felt a wave of heat rising in him...

He took directly another glass of orange juice and didn't feel anymore the heat

He was intrigued by this strange feeling he had after sip.
"A lack of sleep ? No. A lack of sugar ? No ! A lack of sex ? Why not..." he thought while smiling...

In any case, he wanted to drink again this coffee!
"It's just coffee, why I ask so many questions about this coffee ?"

To end once and for all, he took the mug and began to drink it all...

---

While Mike was drinking his coffee, he did not see, but his body changed ...

His muscles grew and shrank. Like a heartbeat but slower.

His biceps, already big, took on enormous proportions. His chest swelled up like balloons !

The only thing that felt Mike was the heat rising in him !

When he finishes his mug, his body was back to normal...

---

He put his mug on the table.

A strange feeling invaded him. And not just a feeling...

He felt shivers in all the body. He tried to get up but felt dizzinesses.

His eyes fell suddenly to his biceps... He found them swollen... As if he had done a session 4h of sport... View more ! He doesn't remember having seen them a day like this...

Then he began trembling. All his muscles were numb. He couldn't do anything... The fear invades him...

Then nothing...

---

Mike didn't dare to move anymore.

"But what's happening to me ?" he thought.

He looked at his body and saw nothing changed.

"I still dream there ? This coffee is really due to all this ? It was really a coffee ? Is it going again if I try to get up again ?"

Mike was lost.

Then it took a sudden urge to yawn. And he stretched...

---

- Huuuuuuummmm...

Mike felt at once well... Very well even ! He felt a lot of energy.

- It must have been a bad way !

Then he looked at his hands. They looked bigger...

"What..."

Then he felt a huge wave of energy like an electric shock...

He had the impression that his slippers had shrunk because his feet felt cramped.

*Criii...*

His big toes had torn the front of his slippers !

- Holy shit ! What's going on ??

Then he saw that his legs stretched and swelled. He felt another electric shock. His bust stretched out in his turn and new abdominal muscles appeared. His pecs swelled up like balloons.

He stretched his arms and they began to swell and grow like the rest of his body. His biceps were twice before.

He felt his neck grow. He touched it.

"I have a neck of bull !"

Then his body stiffened. He felt an atrocious pain on all his body.

His muscles won massively. His veins stood out. He became a pure bodybuilder. He lost in fat and won mass. He had never seen so beautiful developed muscles on him.

His biceps, pecs, abs, legs, ... Everything was as hard as concrete.

Then his c*ck began to grow. It was so big that it came out of the boxer shorts !
Mike was in a state of trance...

- Oh fuck that's good !...

---

Mike could not stop touching his body, he couldn't believe it yet.

- Damn this is not possible ! This is too good to be true !

Mike stood up. First thing he noted, it is that he was taller than before ! He almost touched the ceiling.

- Holy sh*t ! Goodbye my 5'58 ft (1m70) ! I am measuring near to 6'60 ft (2m) now !

He loved the feeling of being very tall. Dominate people and look at them down was always a fantasy for him.

His body was beautiful, muscular everywhere. His tour of arm has passed of 12 inch to a good 20 inch ! He felt a great strength in him.

"What could I lift ?..."

He saw the fridge. He placed his hands below the fridge and lifted as a mere nothing ! Seen the facility, he removed a hand.

- Yeah ! This is good ! I'm stronger than ever !

He put down the fridge and gone in front of a mirror. He saw itself only from pecs but that excited him even more.

" F*ck ! What a body ! Look I at these legs ! The tour has to be 28 inch (70cm) ! And my pecs ! Jake will love my "new pillow" !"

Mike continued has to look in the mirror during a long moment while doing various poses.

---

Having admired during a long moment. Mike wanted to try to get dressed.
He knew that not many clothes would suit him but it was just for the pleasure.

" Huuum... What I could put ?... Hey ! This T-shirt ! Size M/L..."

He entered his arms inton the sleeves with difficulty. The head, her, has never wanted to pass !

" Huumm... Hey ! This shirt !! Size XL ! Yeah !"

He entered his arms gently. The sewings were pulled at most... He manages to close 3 buttons on 7.

- The party can begin !

He began raising the arms and sharply, He lowered the arms and made a pose while contracting his arms. The 3 buttons has broke, the sewings of arms tore. His muscles exploded the tissue.

- Oh f*ck ! I love that !!!

He looked at the clock and saw that Jake was going to go home in not a lot of time. He tried to find a boxer shorts which would hold his movements.

He took his cup of coffee, which seemed to him smaller with his new enormous hands, and settled on the sofa that faced the front door.

"He asked me to say to him of what I had thought of his coffee... I believe that I would not much have to say ! I would just have to get up and I believe that he will understand ! I look forward to seeing his head ! Oh yeah this moment is going to be really good !"

THE END
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Great story and the pictures fit it very well! Thanks for posting!
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It is a very nice story & great pics. Well done. ^^

Though one point of criticism, in case you would like to write another story in the future. You might want to have at least the English version proof read, as there are a lot of frantically errors and sometimes you are using the wrong words as if you are using an Online free translator program.
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Old February 14th, 2013, 05:26 PM
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It is a very nice story & great pics. Well done. ^^

Though one point of criticism, in case you would like to write another story in the future. You might want to have at least the English version proof read, as there are a lot of frantically errors and sometimes you are using the wrong words as if you are using an Online free translator program.
I know I made a lot of errors... :\
However, I used two translators and I reread just after ! But I'll make sure to be more careful next time!
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I know I made a lot of errors... :
However, I used two translators and I reread just after ! But I'll make sure to be more careful next time!

That is good to hear. ^^ I can see that there is a lot of potential in you, all you need to draw it out is a good proofreader to correct the errors made by the translators. ^^
Anyway, it really was a great story though. I do hope that you will write another story someday soon. ^^
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Trop bien!

J'ai lu ton histoire en fran?ais. Pour une fois qu'il en existe une, aussi bien en profiter! J'ai bien aim?. J'esp?re que tu continueras d'?crire!
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That is a really good attempt
This is not a nasty criticism
but a suggestion from a teacher of English
First
-- Go through the story
and look at the verbs-- those doing words
which in English can trip you up
Have you got the number correct? In places you use a plural when you should use a singular
and
have you got the tense correct? Sometimes it is easy to use a present tense when the story needs the use of a past tense.
Please do not be discouraged. Have another attempt
Either this story
or another
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Fun story.
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Thank you all and thank you for the advice kettlecharlie !
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I still like this, and would be glad to proofread it for you. I'd love to see you weave the uncensored photos directly in here.
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I still like this, and would be glad to proofread it for you. I'd love to see you weave the uncensored photos directly in here.
Thank you very much for your help !
I'm translating the sequel of this story and someone is helping me. Other assistance may be welcome !
Here is the uncensored photos :

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-ViDt7fDNsn...0/2013-025.jpg
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-zrsPrYQr1z...s1600/anc7.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-MVIrqaeodr...s1600/anc6.jpg
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-G-g0C7OLo8...s1600/anc9.jpg
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