Ron the Man 2.0

[TheMM]

We all know the hot hot Kim Possible Episode where Ron gets the muscle ring. I've always thought it to be hotter for him to get the ring again! Only a better ring, a ring that lets him choose his size.

What do you all think?

EDIT: I answered my own question Do add-on.

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1180623

[chocomus]

I like the idea a lot, but it's just that... i don't relly like the muscles in that cartoon. He seemed full of air and not meat. Also what hapens with the legs?
I prefer to imagine it in another type of drawing. So a story helps a lot , Thanks!

[TheMM]

Yeah it did seem to be air, luckily I have an inflation fetish as well.

[darkluster4]

Tottally awsome! I hope you, or some body else, continues it.

[TheMM]

Oh I am for sure, a chapter every day or 2.

[darkluster4]

Like now?! *Is hopeful.*

[TheMM]

Ah Thanksgiving (tomorrow) it's so nice to get with friends and family to eat, drink (pass out after), and be thankful.

BLEH!

Forget that! I'm writing me some more chapters!

[darkluster4]

Make him go thriugh all the settings, it'll be more fun! Then when he gets to massive he can power his way outta there.

Please send me a PM when you get more chapters done! I really want to read this.

[TheMM]

It is Writing.com you know, so you can add your own damn chapters.

[darkluster4]

But you're just so good at them, and I'm so lazy. Eather way, I can't wait for more.

[TheMM]

*kicks DarkL in the shin*

Does anyone actually want to talk about the idea itself?

[darkluster4]

*Is kicked.* OW!! *Hops up and down in pain.* Sure I do. But, what will we talk about? ....... I know! How about Mr. Henchs' nefarious plot! I'm thinking that the ring Ron has is a prototype, and Hench is going to put it in mass production to sell publicly across the world. Then, when every one is big and beefy, he reveals that he can control people with them! World Domination BABY!

[TheMM]

Hench doesn't seem like the "Take over the world" type, I think he's just in it for the money. Although the ring being a prototype that Hench wants to sell sounds like an excellent lil idea.

[darkluster4]

Yep, intire highschools full of beefy guys with "special" class rings.

[TheMM]

"His prices are outrageous!"-Drakken.

I don't think high schoolers (other then Ron) will be having a muscle ring.

[rextorres]

I haven't seen the episode of Kimpossible, so I don't quite understand the story.

I looked at the story on writing.com and I was just wondering, does Ron just get the ring for free? Is there a price? What is the price for it?

Why does Jack Hench give him the ring? What does he stand to gain from it?

Other than that: It seems like a really fun story and I'd love to add to it, if I just understood it better.

If you just want to focus on Ron using his muscle ring, and if I don't need to worry about the "back story", then I might come up with a few new chapters!

[darkluster4]

Rex> That'll be more than fine in my book. And, Have you tried youtube?

Them> He could mass produce them, and put them on sale.

[TheMM]

Well I'm back, my lappy's thingymabobber smashed into the doohicky which messed up the somethingorrather.

Translation: I dropped it.

Expect more chapters soon!

[darkluster4]

YAY! *Dancing in the street, parties,and fanfairs are heard world wide!* He's back! We were starting to get worried.

[rextorres]

I'll add a chapter or two myself now.

Now that Nanowrimo is over, I have a little more time.

[TheMM]

Ok but for now, do it on a different branch everyone, I want to continue with my ideas, and if you still do, I'll just edit the chapter to my ideas (unless I like it more). Not to fear though, I won't care once I finish my ideas out.

[darkluster4]

You still need to finish them then.

[TheMM]

Shush boy, I know what I need to do and what not to do. I'm re-reading Flow right now for some inspiration, I don't go back to school till next tuesday.

Now, if you'll excuse me.