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Old February 3rd, 2007, 11:25 PM
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Destiny - Part 1

[COLOR=#000000]Hey guys! Well, this is the very first story I've ever written and I've finally gotten the courage to post it here! This is the first part of an ongoing saga that I hope you will all enjoy! There will be many more chapters to come and I definitly intend on posting them regularly. There's no growth at first, but please be patient because there is definitly going to be alot of growing going on! This story comes from a sick and demented mind as most growth stories do...lol. Just kidding. I have to add that this story is inspired by giantworshipper/giantw's stories. He inspired me to write. I consider Justin(The Bigger, The Better) the holy grail of growth stories. I hope my stories can bring as much pleasure to people as his do. I was also inspired by my partner, Stephen, to try my hand at writing. If I can be half as talented as him, then I'll be happy! I hope you guys enjoy it and I'd love to hear your feedback or suggestions! Enjoy! [/COLOR]
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[COLOR=#000000]Destiny - Part 1[/COLOR]
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[COLOR=#000000]?Hi! I?m calling about the ad in the Pennysaver.? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]With those nine words, my life, as I knew it, would be forever changed! Of course, I didn?t realize this at the time, nor was I aware of how this man on the other end of the line would completely take over every aspect of my life. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Hi there! How are you? I asked. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m doing good, thanx? he replied. ?So, you?re looking for a roommate??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah and the sooner, the better? I exclaimed. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Cool, I wanted to see if I can come by and take a look at the apartment.? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]His voice was deep and masculine, yet I could definitely detect a friendliness about him. It was one of those voices that I just knew belonged to a hot guy and my instincts are usually right! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Sure,? I quickly replied. ?When is a good time for you?? I so hoped he would tell me he could come today! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?If it works for you, I can come over right now.? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Yes!!! ?Yeah, that sounds great? I replied excitedly.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Awesome! What?s the address?? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?It?s 265 Palmer Street. Do you know that area at all??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah bro! I think I know where that street is. I?m only a few blocks away! I?m just leaving the gym on Main Street and getting into my car. I should be there in about 5 minutes!? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Oh man! He?s coming from the gym. He?s definitely going to be hot, I thought to myself. ?Great! So, I?ll see you in a few minutes! You can park right in the driveway.? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Sounds good! See you in a few!? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Ok, bye.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Thank God I cleaned the house this morning, I thought to myself as I hung up the phone. I really hoped he would wind up liking the house. Even though we had only spoken over the phone for a few minutes and had never met before, I found myself being inexplicably drawn to my potential roommate. I had no idea what he looked like. Heck, I didn?t even know his name, so why was I feeling this way? It couldn?t just be that he had a sexy voice or that he was coming from the gym. Well, I would get my answer in a few short minutes once he arrived! I decided to go outside and wait for my potential housemate to get here.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I went outside and was greeted by the warm sunlight on my skin and a slight breeze blowing through my hair. It was a beautiful mid June afternoon?one of those days that just seems to put everyone in a good mood. Knowing that he?d be here any minute, I became more and more anxious. I started to pace back and forth in front of my house. My palms became sweaty and little beads of sweat began to form on my forehead. Oh gosh, I?m going to be a big, sweaty mess by the time he gets here, I thought to myself. Suddenly, my worried thoughts were interrupted by the sound of hard rock music growing louder and louder. I looked to my right and saw a beaten up white Honda slowly heading towards my house. I couldn?t make out what the person behind the wheel looked like, but he was driving way too slow to just be passing through the street on the way to his destination. It must be him, I thought to myself. He?s probably trying to get a look at the addresses on the houses. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]The car continued to inch towards my house as I walked down the driveway to see if it was him! The closer I got to the sidewalk, the more that the sun seemed to blind my vision. I could make out that the car had stopped in front of my driveway, but still couldn?t make out who was driving the car. It just had to be him! I waved in the direction of the car and decided to call out to him. ?Hey!? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Hey! What?s up, bro?? I would have recognized that voice anywhere! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Just pull into the driveway,? I replied as I stepped to the right, out of his way. Damn this sun! I was beginning to wish it wasn?t such a beautiful day after all. As the car moved forward up my driveway, I followed excitedly behind it, anxious to see what he looked like. I walked towards his car door and stopped. Damn it! He must have rolled up the windows and, of course, they were tinted. I smiled as I heard him turn off the car. This was it! I was finally going to see what my possible housemate looked like! Nothing could have ever prepared me for what stepped out of that car! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Hey! How?s it going? he asked me in that deep voice of his as he stuck out his hand. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I was practically unable to speak! My mouth was dry, my legs felt like jello and I became lightheaded. Somehow I managed to shake his hand and utter one single word. ?Hey!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]My God, was he gorgeous! He looked like he stepped right out of one of my late night fantasies. He looked to be about 6ft tall and around 165 pounds. He had short brown hair and the most beautiful blue eyes I had ever seen. And his face! I don?t think I had ever seen anyone with a face as gorgeous as his. His skin was slightly tanned and he had a flawless complexion. He had to in his late teens. What really attracted my attention were his arms! He was wearing a baggy dark blue sleeveless t-shirt. I?ve always been obsessed with biceps, particularly defined and peaked biceps. His had the most defined arms I?d ever seen! While they were not huge, you could tell that he must work out alot. They looked to be as solid as steel! When he shook my hand, his right arm tensed up and his bicep bulged slightly. I could see several veins pop out as he firmly gripped my hand. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m Kyle! Nice to meet you, man.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m Ben! It?s a pleasure meeting you.? I sound like such a dork, I thought to myself. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Being in Kyle?s presence, I felt completely inferior to him. I would not say that I?m unattractive, but I?m nothing like Kyle. As he smiled at me, I remember losing complete feeling in my legs. He had a smile that could make you melt, but I found myself unable to stop staring at his arms. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Come on Ben! Just calm down. You gotta make a good impression on him! He can?t catch me staring at his arms! Right then, I knew that I had to do everything possible to get him to move in with me! He was perfect![/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Do you want to come in and see the house?? Of course he wants to see the house! That?s why he?s here. Stupid![/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Sure Ben! Let?s go![/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I held the door open for him as we entered the house. When we walked into the living room, his eyes lit up. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Wow! This is a great place you have.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Yes! He liked it! ?Thanx Kyle!? I offered him a long list of drinks, but he said he preferred water. I brought him a large glass of water and invited him to sit down on the couch. I wanted to find out as much as I possibly could about Kyle! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?So Kyle, tell me a little about yourself.?[/COLOR]
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[COLOR=#000000]?Well, I?m 18 years old, I just graduated from my high school in Philly a few weeks ago. I wanted to move to NY and I saw an ad on Craigslist from a guy looking for a roommate. I had money saved from a huge graduation party my parents threw me. I replied to the ad and I moved into the apartment a few days ago. It?s over on Coddington Street. The place is a dump! There?s roaches crawling around everywhere, there?s no hot water, no heat, the guy who lives next door got arrested for killing his girlfriend, my roommate is a junkie. I gotta get out of there as soon as possible! Umm, what else do you want to know.? He chuckled.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Wow! Kyle, I?m so sorry.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah man, it?s not at all what my roommate described in the ad. When I saw your ad in the Pennypincher and it said that you were looking for a housemate and that the rent was really cheap, I had to call you. So, how much is the rent anyway??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Kyle, you seem like a really good guy! Can I be honest with you?? Why was I about to spill my guts to a complete stranger?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Sure Ben! No doubt!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?The truth is I?m not looking for a housemate because I need the money. I just really hate living in this big house by myself. My parents died a few months ago in a car crash and left me this house. Actually, they left me all of their houses, but I sold the rest of them. I was living in an apartment in Denver at the time. I had a really hard time dealing with their deaths. I quit my job, pushed away all my friends and moved here to NY to live in this house. I just wanted to get away from everybody I know and all the condolences and memories and just be by myself and not stay in Denver anymore, which is where my parents lived most of the time. I really don?t know why I picked this house out of all of them to move into. I think it may be because I have no memories of them in this place, so it hurts less. I had never been in this house before until I moved here last month. Also, it?s the smallest of all the homes. I was never into the whole lifestyles of the rich and famous thing. God, I don?t know why I?m telling you all this!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m glad that you feel you can talk to me? Kyle said sympathetically. ?And I?m so sorry for your loss and everything you?ve had to go through.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Kyle, I don?t mean to freak you out or anything, but I feel drawn to you. Ever since I heard your voice on the phone. That?s why I feel like I can confide in you.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Dude, I feel it too! I feel connected to you. I feel like I was meant to meet you.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I struggled to find the right words and then, it hit me. ?It?s almost like it?s destiny! So Kyle, if you want, you can move in here rent free and you can move in today! I?d be really happy to have the company.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Really? Dude, you?re awesome!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Suddenly, Kyle jumped up from the couch and ran over to me. He extended his hand to me and I placed my hand in his. He pulled me up off the couch, threw his arms around me and gave me the biggest bearhug I had ever been given in my life. I struggled to breathe as he squeezed harder and slapped my back with one hand. That would definitely leave a handprint, I thought to myself. I was in heaven! He smelled incredible! It was a combination of sweat and cologne. By far, the most intoxicating scent I had smelled thus far! He finally released me from his tight grip.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Damn, you?re strong? I exclaimed.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah, I am! Check out these guns!? With that, he performed the most incredible double bicep display I had ever witnessed! They looked to be about 16 inches. Not the biggest biceps in the world, but definitely the hottest! My eyes widened, my jaw dropped, the room started to spin and my legs seemed to buckle. My God, those biceps were more incredible than I could have ever imagined. The peaks were amazing. How did he get his biceps so defined and so peaked at such a young age? They looked as hard as boulders! I wanted to grab them, carress them, lick them, suck on them. And his pits?damn, they were hot! I wanted to bury my face in his hairy pits and lick every drop of sweat I could find in them. I felt movement in my crotch and quickly threw myself back down on the couch. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Wow!? was all I could say. ?Wow!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?You like that, Ben? GGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!? Another double bicep, only this time, he was flexing even harder and more intensely. They seemed to peak even more! A vein popped out on top of his right bicep. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?You?re incredible? I blurted out. I hoped that hadn?t scared him.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Quite the opposite, he seemed to enjoy it. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Thanx? he replied as he concentrated on flexing his right bicep. He stared at it intensely and continued to flex hard. ?Yeah? he muttered under his breathe. He extended his arm and slowly curled it towards him a few times, trying to get a good pump. ?Come on,? he growled. The vein continued to bulge out even more. He eyes remained focused on his bicep. He gritted his teeth, lowered his eyebrows and growled. He had an angry expression on his face, but this was not anger?it was intensity! He flexed harder and harder before switching over to his left arm. I felt faint. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]It was at that moment that my attention was drawn down to his crotch. My God! How had I not noticed this earlier? He was huge! Even though he was wearing baggy grey sweatpants, there was no concealing the fact that Kyle was very well endowed. Then, to my amazement, the bulge began to grow! I looked up at Kyle?s face and saw an expression so animalistic, so intense, that it almost frightened me. He seemed to be almost possessed by the sight of his flexed biceps as he continued to flex harder and harder. His face was red, there was sweat pouring off of his forehead, veins were appearing everywhere?on his neck, his forehead. There were all kinds of animalistic growls coming from him. His eyes were so passionately focused on his biceps that nothing could have teared them away. I watched as the crotch in his pants grew larger and larger and seemed to tent out more and more. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Fuck yeah!? he growled as he began boucing his left bicep over and over again before holding it in a tight, hard flex. ?GGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Was this really happening? Was my new house guest getting this incredibly turned on by his own biceps right in front of me? The answer was, of course, yes! [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]To say that I was rock hard would be an understatement! The pain was unbearable! This was the most turned on I had ever been in my life! All I wanted to do was whip out my cock and jerk off right then and there, but somehow, I managed to restrain myself from doing so. All I could do was sit there, transfixed by Kyle. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]It was the sound of the grandfather clock ringing that finally brought us both out of our respective trances. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?ll be right back? I blurted out as I bounced off the couch and ran to the bathroom. I couldn?t help it! I had to relieve myself of the agony I was feeling in my crotch! I quickly unzipped my jeans and began to jerk off with incredible speed and force. It was the fastest it ever took me to cum, but also the largest blasts that I had ever unleashed. I felt as if the copious shoots of cum would never stop, but eventually, they did. I cleaned myself up and went back to the living room to face Kyle.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m sorry,? we both said in unison, which caused us to chuckle. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?You first? I offered. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Dude, I?m so sorry about that. I get so intense when I flex. I get carried away. All of the girls I?ve dated or messed around with got really freaked out by that?by me. They all think I?m weird or psycho, they get so fuckin? freaked out that they run out of my place scared shitless. I can?t change though. I get so fuckin? turned on by my own body?especially my biceps and arms. In fact, my body is the only thing that turns me on. When I flex, it?s like I become another person or an animal It?s like I?m possessed. I?m sorry if I freaked you out. I understand if you don?t want me moving in. No one that?s ever been in my life ever puts up with me for long. They all get scared away?girls, friends, family. I?m gonna go now.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Dude, are you kidding me? I fuckin? loved it! You?ve been up front with me, so I?ll be up front with you. I just ran away from you to go jerk off in the bathroom. It was the most intense orgasm I?ve ever experienced! You are incredible!? I hoped I hadn?t said too much. Shit, why did I confess all that to him?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Dude, are you serious? Really,? Kyle asked.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah?really!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?So, you?re gay??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah. I hope you?re ok with that. I mean, it?s not like I?m going to jump your bones in the middle of the night or anything.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]We both laughed.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Nah bro, that?s cool. You?re the first person that I?ve met that hasn?t been scared off by me.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Scared off? Are you kidding me? Kyle, I have to be honest with you. One of my big fetishes is biceps and flexing?and muscle worship?all that good stuff!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Haha! I guess we know now why we were so drawn to eachother? Kyle laughed. ?But what?s muscle worship??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Ummm?we?ll get into that later. Right now, we gotta get you out of that horrible apartment and into your new house! Oh wait, you haven?t even seen the rest of the house yet.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Dude, I don?t have to! I can?t tell you how much I appreciate this! You really don?t want me to pay you anything,? Kyle asked.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?You can repay me by putting on a little show like the one I just witnessed,? I laughed.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Haha, right on! But Ben, you haven?t seen anything yet! I was trying my hardest to tone it down. I?m warning you?I can get a lot more intense sometimes. A lot more intense! And you haven?t seen me pump iron yet. That?s pretty crazy too!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Kyle, I look forward to it. You have no idea just how much!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Haha. Ok, just don?t say I didn?t warn you!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?So, you must work out all the time, huh??[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah?every day actually. I want to be huge, dude! Right now, I feel small. I mean, I know I?m really hot and I turn myself on by flexing, but I want to be massive! I?ll do anything to make that happen!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Wow Kyle, that?s awesome! I can?t believe I?m going to get to watch you grow!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Ben, you?re going to have ring side seats. I?m gonna get so fuckin big, dude! Massive! You just wait and see!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I can?t wait to see that!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Oh, you will Ben! You will! I?m gonna get extra big for you! It?ll be a way of thanking you for all that you?re doing for me. I?ll get real massive for you!?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?Wow? was all I could say.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]?I?m gonna get fuckin? huge,? Kyle repeated.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I was soon going to find out exactly how huge Kyle could and would become![/COLOR]
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[COLOR=#000000]To Be Continued?[/COLOR]
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Old February 4th, 2007, 02:54 AM
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Anyone want to see a Part 2 or have any suggestions or opinions? Did anyone like it?...lol. I'm on pins and needles here! It's my first story.
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Its good I like it, I like how you added some depth to the characters and let them just be honest with one another, I would love to see part 2.
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Old February 4th, 2007, 04:43 AM
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I had to say that's the quickest connection i've ever seen. I can't wait to see him growing
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Old February 4th, 2007, 07:27 AM
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Personally... Any writer that, through the main character admits that he has a major passion for biceps, has already 95% of writing something that I'll love to read. And in that case, hehe we can't ignore the statistics - I LOVED the settling of this story. The connection might have been too fast for some, but I frankly liked, every one has to write the way he feels more comfortable.

I'm sure I'm dying to see what comes next - of course the intense growth is exciting, but I would love to see Kyle growing almighty muscular and gigantic without treating Ben like shit. The "Justin" series is hot, but sometimes i just felt sorry for all the times the narrator was treated like dirt.

Anyway, it's just my own feelings, I hope you are happy writing this tale and I'm sure lots of people will be thrilled to read it.

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Old February 4th, 2007, 11:54 AM
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Hi Karateboy! Thanx so much for you feedback! I'm so glad you like it! I'll definitly be posting Part 2 soon!

Hey Chookomus! Thanx for the feedback! I'm so glad you're looking forward to seeing Kyle grow!
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Old February 4th, 2007, 12:02 PM
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Hey Muscl4life! Thanx so much for your positive feedback and suggestions! I really appreciate hearing what you think! I plan on posting Part 2 sometime this week! I hope you'll like it! Take care...Joey

Hey everybody! I love getting feedback, so please let you know what you thought of Part 1. Like I said, this is the very first story that I've ever written, but I have to say, I love writing stories! I plan to write alot more stories and of course, continue with the Destiny saga. I know how much pleasure I've gotten out of giantworshipper's stories and many other stories that are floating around on this site or other sites. If some of you enjoy my stories and get some pleasure out of them, I'll be a happy guy! Take care...Joey
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great story so far, I look forward to seeing the relationship develop as he gets more and more massive. look forward to continuation!
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Hi growinmuscl! Thanx so much for your support! I hope you'll like Part 2 just as much! It's almost done and will be up very soon! I really appreciate your feedback! Take care...Joey
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congrats on your first post, it was killer.

i'm interested to see where you take the story of ben and kyle. how far apart are they in age? anyways, i have to agree mostly with muscl4life . . . Justin the story is definitely hot, but Justin the character is a pr***. Of course, it probably has to do with the old "power corrupts" philosophy, and I'm a big believer in karmic retribution. Graham in Graham's military appeals to me more. However, giantworshipper does do a good job holding my interest. Right now it looks like you could take the two either way (i.e. make a Graham and Jayson, or Justin and Brendon) or another totally different dynamic . . . so much potential. I'm hoping for more soon.

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Hey Bulknola! Wow! Thanx so much for such great feedback! I'm so glad that you like it! I'm glad that anyone likes it...lol. Your compliments mean alot to me! I hope you continue to like each new part of the saga! Take care...Joey
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*sniffle* That was so............HOT!

*faints*


*several hours later*



Might I make one tiny suggestion? Add a line between paragraphs.
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Hi TheMM! Thanx for your feedback! I'm so glad you like the story so far! I hope you'll continue to enjoy each new installment just as much! I appreciate your comments! Take care...Joey
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Old February 6th, 2007, 12:39 PM
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oh...I see how it is....

Oh...so Justin is a pr*** now, huh? HOW DARE YOU!!!

Just kidding...lol. Each to their own...

I like what you're doing with the story so far. It has its similarities to "Justin" but right away there are some notable differences: like his fetish with growling and flexing. Loved Parts 1 & 2. Keep up the nice work!
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Hi Sexiscriptor! LMAO! What a great reply! Thanx for the ultimate praise! I guess I can stop writing now, since I've gotten the ultimate compliment of someone wanting me to have sex with them due to my story...lol....just kidding...there are many, many more parts to come! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanx for your feedback! It made my day! Take care...Joe
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Giantw, Now, I can really stop writing and never write another growth story ever again! I've gotten the ULTIMATE praise! The great Giantw actually likes my story! Dude, that made my entire year...lol....seriously! I posted it in my intro to Destiny - Part 1, I recommend it to anyone who's into growth, I have it written on my profile, I talk about it to anyone who will listen! What am I referring to? The fact that, in my opinion, you, Giantw, are the greatest author of growth stories ever...hands down...and Justin(The Bigger, The Better is the most amazing growth story ever created! I think I referred to it as The Holy Grail of growth stories...lol. Your opinion means a great deal to me and you are the reason I was inspired to start writing growth stories in the first place! I hope that my writing will improve over time and that my stories will be half as good as yours are! I keep going on and on about Justin, but Graham is very hot too...lol. Justin's my man though. Giantw, I humbly thank you for the compliments! It means so much to me! I hope that you will continue to enjoy my stories. It's because of you that I'm writing them! I hope that, through my stories, I can bring as much pleasure to people as Justin and Graham have! God only knows how many times I've whacked off to Justin! It's become almost a daily thing! Haha! Thanx again, buddy! Take care...Joey
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Really digging this story, Joey. But now I'm curious about giantw and his stories. I couldn't find The Bigger, the Better (or any stories by giantw) by searching the forum or browsing in the archive. I'm sure they're there and I'm just too zoned out to find them (fighting a cold this weekend). So if someone would kindly post some links, that'd be great. Thanks!
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Hey Digger! Thanx for diggin' my story...lol! Giant worshipper's stories are not posted here! If you'd like to read Justin, as well as giantw's other hot story, Graham, join this group:
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They are both posted under the files section...all 32 parts(so far) of Justin and and all 10 parts(so far) of Graham. I would recommend everyone to read these 2 stories if you haven't already! You don't know what hot is until you do! I haven't been the same since I've read them! They turn me on like no other stories have! Giantw is the reason that I started writing! I can't recommend or promote his stories enough! Happy reading and thanx again...Joey
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Hi Joey,

Guess I'm getting to this, your Part 1, a little late in the game, but I've been away for quite a while. Wanted to tell you I really enjoyed it, though it did move rather quickly, from total strangers to perfect housemates. Sort of a "perfect world" scenario. lol But...quick is good. I'm leaving now to continue with Part 2, so what's that tell you? lol

Your ID seems familiar...did you once frequent "THE STORY STATION", before its untimely demise? I was the administrator (Steven SWM). Just curious.

Thanks for your story.

Steven
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Hey Steven! Thanx so much for your feedback! Hey it is called Destiny...they were meant to be housemates...lol. In my fantasy, it ain't too quick! It's funny...several people have mentioned that it went too quick....I didn't even think about it at the time! It's that whole inexplicably drawn to eachother thing...lol. Thanx again for commenting! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story! As for The Story Station, I never heard of it before...lol. Take care...Joey
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