Footnotes From The Unauthorized Version - Part 3

[tekuno]

Content warnings and description for this story accompany part 1.

Part 1
Part 2

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Okay, I'm going to try posting somewhat longer segments from now on. (I was trying to make my break from writing last a little longer, but I don't really need it any more, I think, so we can move a bit quicker.)

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Footnotes From The Unauthorized Version
Part 3

{ That night, they repeated the sexual escapades of the previous night, with gusto. The two felt as thought they had boundless energy, and savored every minute. }

{ The next day was even more of a pleasure than the previous one had been. Adrian felt so energetic that he took much more interest in soccer in gym class than was usually his habit, and even managed to play a key role in his team's defense, although he did not actually score any goals himself. Miguel -- to his own surprise, and certainly the teacher's -- suggested a totally original theory on the causes of Saxon migration, and backed it up with evidence he knew he had read but was amazed he could remember. The two wolfed down cereal and eggs and milk, sandwiches and juice and salad, hamburgers and mashed potatoes and water, in quantities surprising even in an adolescent. And, of course, once again the two repeated their escapades in bed. }

{ Time passed in tranquility and delight. Every day brought new and unexpected academic achievements, more and better athletic skill, and even more wonderful sex in the evening. The maple syrup ran out on the fourth night, but Adrian, with quiet foresight, had managed to sneak off and purchase three bottles of flavored lube. }

{ It was two weeks later that Miguel and Adrian began work on their first groundbreaking invention. Typically, the idea ultimately arose from Miguel's desire for novelty. During those two weeks, both Adrian and Miguel had become more and more energetic, and having plenty of spare time, now that their daily homework had become so trivial, they passed the time in the orphanage's small, overused gym. Decades of adolescent males had passed hours straining beneath the weights of the gym, scrambling to produce a physical advantage which might help offset, in life, the handicap which would be represented by the lack of a family. Or maybe just in the hopes of becoming buff enough to get laid. }

{ Miguel and Adrian were enthusiastic, if inexperienced. The tremendous flood of energy which both of them felt welling up inside since their birthday led them through exercise after exercise, and at the end of two weeks they were visibly, if slightly, more muscular than they had been when they had eaten their waffles. The shirts they had been wearing for the last year were no longer draped over thin shoulders and hanging like sacks; their arms filled their sleeves a bit more, if not to the point of snugness, and the contours of their torsos were visible, faintly, through the fabric. They were no longer willowy youths, but solid-looking teenagers. }

{ To Miguel, this suggested a new erotic venture. }

"You know, Adrian, we are starting to look very good. With your permission, I think we could try something new tonight. How about a mutual strip-tease to get us going?"

"Don't be silly. I love you dearly, and I don't deny that we are becoming remarkably hot, but I don't think we have the build, yet, to justify that. It just seems egotistical."

"I'll prove that this would be hot. Let me just dig up some pron online--"

"Miguel, stop that. You know the orphanage logs our Internet usage."

"Ha ha! Those slugs? They have no idea how to pull off a trick like that. The logging software is just a background program running locally and reporting back to a server. All we need to do is boot the computer into a system other than Doorways, and the logging system will be unaware of what we do."

"That may be true, but Brian down the hall got in trouble last month for doing that. Apparently they have a network device which sniffs out Loonix and reports to the office."

"Hmph. I admit, that is more technological savvy than these mindless cattle usually display. Well, then there is no choice but to devise something which they will not recognize. I was already playing with a couple of ideas during Calculus. Now look here..."

{ That was, although it is not documented anywhere in the official release notes, the birth of the programming language More++ and the first major projects undertaken in that language, MoreOS and the MoreWeb browser. Today, it is hard to imagine a world without the facilities of the "More" family of software, given that even the initial version of MoreOS was fifteen percent faster, on the same hardware, than competing operating systems, but until that time, the world was used to a less efficient frame of reference. Even computer geniuses require time to work, however, and it was two months before the first prototype of MoreOS came into use. }

{ During that time, Adrian and Miguel continued their workouts. After a further month had passed, they were unquestionably the kings of the orphanage gym. This is not the most difficult of achievements, since children were only raised by the orphanage until they completed high school, but the Morenos were pretty exceptional, nevertheless. They now filled out their shirts very satisfactorily, their arms stretching the sleeves when flexed, their necks beginning to show the thickness of the frequent athlete, their pectorals traceable through the fabric. Beneath the fabric, their abdominal muscles were tough and thick. The two had gone from reluctant participants in gym glass to the most reliable team members in every sport, and were even routinely among the first to finish the mile-long jog at the beginning of each week's classes. }

{ With their increasingly muscular physiques, Adrian had relented and the two were engaging in stripteases in addition to their nightly activities. These had extended in length thanks to the increased athleticism of the participants, and now regularly took up an hour and a half each night, while all around them the other boys struggled to complete the same homework the Morenos had finished long before. }

{ Nevertheless, as any software engineer will tell you, in the absence of specific orders to halt, a development project will continue until it is done. And both Miguel and Adrian were very interested indeed in the idea of unchecked access to porn. With their increased activity and larger muscles had come increased libidos. And so, one day in mid-summer: }

"Ah, welcome to my office, gentlemen. Do you know why you are here, by any chance?"

"No, Mr. Janderson. As the Chinese would say, << You are a pig, you filthy government stooge. >>"

"<< Mr. Moreno, even were I not able to speak two dialects of Chinese myself, it is extremely rude to change languages in conversation unless you are sure the person to whom you are speaking is also fluent. You will refrain, in future, from attempting to insult people by this method, am I clear, Miguel? >>"

"Um, sorry."

"You are in enough trouble as it is. Now, allow me to explain your situation. Last night, a computer which our monitoring software claimed was shut down suddenly issued a request through our firewall for the web page at, and I quote, 'young jock striptease dot com'. On investigation, we discovered that you had converted the computer in your room to run a homebrew operating system, which our IT staff had never seen before and which might very well have compromised our network security. Do I have the story substantially correct, Adrian?"

"Yes, sir."

"Now, I don't have to tell you that this is a disappointment coming from two of our institution's best students, who clearly have such a bright future ahead of them. Because of your excellent records, I am willing to let you off with a warning. In return, from now until you graduate next year, you will refrain from these attempts to search for pornography through the orphanage Internet connection. Do you agree with me, gentlemen?"

"Yes, sir! Thank you, sir!"

"Furthermore, allow me to give you two pieces of advice. First and foremost, several of your neighbors have complained about noise from late-night wrestling matches, and I would hate to have to investigate and perhaps make discoveries of which, by law, I would have to take notice. I do not want to break your sole remaining family tie, but all the sympathy in the world will not be able to help you if the state inspectors raise an official query. Do I make myself clear?"

"Yes sir."

"So I strongly suggest you learn some restraint, or possibly refrain entirely from practicing your wrestling holds, until the end of the year at the very least. Your neighbors may be almost preternaturally dense, but sooner or later they will jump to the obvious conclusion."

"Yes, sir. Thank you, sir."

"On a more pleasant note, our IT staff has told me that your homebrew system is both novel and remarkably efficient. As a legal representative of the state's guardianship over you, I strongly suggest that you clean up your materials, produce documentation, and permit me to submit them for the necessary forms of intellectual property protection. At the end of the coming school year, the two of you will cease to be wards of the state and will be left with a very small amount of funds. If your work is indeed as useful as indicated, it would be a tremendous benefit for your employment opportunities and possibly a source of income all by itself. You don't have to give me an answer now, but should you choose to pursue this goal, just drop a note in my mailbox and I will arrange a meeting."

"Thank you, sir."

"Now get out of my office, and please do nothing which will force me to call you in against your will again."

[rododoro3]

I really like the way you're developing the story, Tek.
Usually I find incest a turn off, but your writing style actually makes it hot.
Looking forward to the next installment

[tekuno]

Originally Posted by rododoro3

Usually I find incest a turn off, but your writing style actually makes it hot.

I wonder if maybe that's because the incest isn't the point of the story. I very definitely did not sit down and say "boy, wouldn't brother-on-brother sex be really hot because it would break taboos". (Not that I haven't read some incest stories which were pretty hot, but it generally doesn't occur to me to think that way.)