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Footnotes From The Unauthorized Version - Part 4

Content warnings and description for this story accompany part 1.

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3

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I need to get to work on this soon. I'm running out of the part which was already complete!

...and this story really doesn't have any convenient breaks in the action, does it? I can't find a place to cut off this part which isn't totally arbitrary. Oh, well. I suppose the lesson is: serializing stuff which was not written in parts is harder than you might suppose.

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Footnotes From The Unauthorized Version
Part 4

{ Chastened, the brothers returned to their room. After a whispered discussion -- although the walls were certainly thick enough to keep their words secret, they were now overly conscious of the existence of their neighbors -- they decided to take both pieces of advice. As it turned out, this worked out very well. Even with the extra computer Mr. Janderson managed to find for them, it took six months of very hard work to document the More++ compiler, build an acceptable user interface for MoreOS and MoreWeb, and write sufficient documentation for a public release. }

{ Mr. Janderson considered that perhaps the hectic schedule the two were keeping explained why, despite their continued and relentless workouts, their amazingly fast growth tapered off. During the six months during which MoreOS approached its release, Miguel and Adian gained no more additional size than is normal for 17-year-old boys, although after their initial growth spurt that left them the largest boys in the orphanage by a noticeable margin. }

{ To Mr. Janderson's relief, aside from a celebratory night marked by complaints about noise from no less than 7 other boys, the two remained discreet for their remaining 3 months at the orphanage. This, however, was matched by an equally pressing problem: More++ and MoreOS caused such a stir in the computing world that, had he not carefully entreated the law firm which had handled the patent application to preserve a fa?ade of anonymity, the boys would have had their education and daily lives irretrievably disrupted by outside forces. As it was, they merely spent half an hour at the end of each school day in his office, being briefed on the day's offers and setbacks and giving direction. After a few attempts to advise them, Mr. Janderson found that they were more than capable of understanding the repercussions of their situation, and merely transmitted their directions intact to the lawyers. }

{ This was entirely to the taste of the Morenos. The invention of MoreOS had merely been a means to an end: a way to look at pornography. The end had changed -- a way of providing an income stream -- but nevertheless, MoreOS was never intended to be more than a sideline. The two brothers were not interested in interacting with society; working with each other when not in class only served to emphasize that neither of them suffered fools gladly -- and that, compared to the two of them, most people were fools. It took them nearly two months of steady argument, but they managed to convince Mr. Janderson that they did not wish to go to college for more exposure to society; the fact that their patent agreements and software sales revenues already ran into the millions made for a powerful argument against the necessity for further education. }

{ With the end of the school year, slightly short of their 18th birthday, Miguel and Adrian were finally set free of the orphanage. The brief period before they reached their majority was covered by a legal fiction -- Mr. Janderson "adopted" them. In reality, the two spent the remaining weeks before their legal adulthood furnishing the house they had designed and on which construction had begun as soon as the snow had melted. It sprawled through the center of a two acre lot in a suburb of a city to the south. }

{ They also spent quite a lot of time signing documents; on the day they reached their majority, their intellectual property would become the property of a privately-held holding company, More and More Technologies Limited, in which they would be majority stakeholders. Mr. Janderson was surprised when the two insisted on giving him a one percent share of the ownership; although one percent seems small, the various agreements already in place guaranteed that in the upcoming year that share would be worth more, after taxes and deductions for operating expenses and legal services, than the previous two years of his salary for running the orphanage. }

"Ah, at last. Adrian, tell me again why we submitted to all that legal nonsense."

"Partially because Janderson insisted we deal with our holdings properly, and he was our legal guardian until today, and partially because it means we will no longer have to deal with lawyers more than once every week."

"I know. But it seems like such a waste of time."

"Yes, I have a number of ideas I would like to explore; I think that I can have a prototype semi-autonomous robot prepared within a month."

"That's not what I meant. Adrian, do you realize that we are now legal adults, and we no longer have neighbors?"

"Yes, that's fairly obvious. What about it?"

"How can you be so dense? Perhaps this will remind you why we went to all that trouble."

"Eh? Oh! Ha ha ha! Maple syrup? But why? We have plenty of lube now."

"I hate it. Even the flavored versions taste of chemistry. Besides, it's our anniversary, so why not return to our roots?"

"Ha! I'll race you to the bedroom."

{ Miguel and Adrian made up for lost time and then some -- with over a third of a year since their last unrestrained round of sex, during which time they had not only been finishing puberty but also undergoing high-intensity workouts at every opportunity, not only were the two more than ready for a prolonged session, but their larger, stronger bodies and extended stamina permitted them to extend the session for the better part of an hour and a half. }

{ The next day, the first day of their adult lives, they were both full of energy -- and extraordinarily hungry. After a large and sloppy breakfast -- both of them were too anxious to finish to cook properly -- they practically ran to the enormous gym which had been built into the basement of the house. }

"God, Miguel, I feel like I could bench a car today! This is the third time I've increased the weight, and it's still too light!"

"Me also -- three days ago I was curling only two thirds of this!"

"Obviously the weights at that gym were incorrectly calibrated."

"Don't you believe we have suddenly become vastly stronger overnight? We are simply incredible studs, that's all."

"Enough with your nonsense. Come over and spot me."

{ The two went through a workout lasting more than two hours, and ended by flexing in the mirror. }

"Think of it, Adrian -- we're young, we're rich, and we look like this--" Miguel flexed his arms for emphasis "--we're just too damn lucky!"

"Yes. I'm concerned about the miscalibrations on the weights, though. Either the weights in our expensive new gym are, on average, labelled about a third too low, or we've been underestimating our strength for a year."

"True -- that gym we were using matched the orphanage equipment reasonably well."

"Let's go and measure; we have a scale in the lab."

{ The scale failed to reassure the twins. The weights were labelled within a reasonable tolerance of the scale's measurements, but without a reference weight, there was no way to be sure the scale was not also wrong. And although the scale told the two that they weighed more than they had supposed -- Miguel 176 pounds, Adrian 174 -- they were large young men. }

"We won't get anywhere staring at the readout like idiots. I'll order two more scales, and we can compare the results. They can't all be wrong."

"Fair enough. So, what shall we do now?"

"Take a shower, have some lunch, and work on that robot I mentioned."

"Why bother with a robot, Adrian? We have all the money we'll ever need already."

"Ah, Miguel, you forget what a nuisance it is to cook -- and do the dishes. And we agreed not to hire cleaners so that we can be private any time we like. A kitchen robot would give us more time to ourselves."

"Hmph. True enough."

{ The shower took longer than expected; they chose to share the walk-in shower in the master bathroom, and both Miguel and Adrian found it nearly impossible to keep their hands off each other. Caressing each other's muscles in the steaming water was intoxicating. After his second orgasm, Adrian interrupted Miguel, who was sucking his left nipple. }

"Miguel, this is wonderful, and I promise we'll do it again later, but I am having terrible hunger pangs. Let's get cleaned up for real and go eat."

"Now that you mention it, I'm famished myself."

Part 5

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I really am liking this story, at the same time I get the impression that Adrian and Miguel behave kinda like Mac and Tosh, the Goofy Gophers from Looney Tunes. They're highly polite and still are capable of doing very naughty things, although I understand that Adrian and Miguel are doing most of their naughtiness in private

Well, the story is going great and the characters are amazing so kudos to you!
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