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Super Powers Universe Part Six: Wild Boys

OK, the long awaited Part six is here. It's 23 pages.

Thanks everyone for the feedback and the chat sessions.

If you're new to the series, start here

http://mgs.digital-empire.net/mgs/au...p?AuthorID=300

Part Seven will be Rex and Frank.

Thanks again everyone!

-legionxp
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>An industrial area in New York, three weeks after the destruction of South Fork at 8:30 PM, three blocks away from the bar known as The Cedar House.<

Officer Davens is two blocks away from the Cedar House on his way to deliver a ticket to the owner for serving minors during a police sting last weekend. Davens has been on this beat for five years. The Cedar House is slow now, but it?s business will pick up in an hour or so. The Cedar House was the oldest bar in the state was converted from an old farm house and had been standing on that same spot for 101 years.

Settled in the industrial area of the city, it served union workers during the day and pulled in a crowd at night by featuring local bands and attracting folks who enjoyed its friendly atmosphere. The fact that it had been owned by the same family for the past 60 years also helped give it its charm.

Suddenly, in his rearview mirror Davens sees a giant red spotlight shining down on the street behind him about 75 feet behind his car. It?s slowly moving up the street.

?Must be some stupid promotional thing,? he thinks, ?this being New York and all. Of course, you?d think they?d be pulling that shit in Times Square, not in the mostly deserted warehouse district.?

He stops, hangs his head out the window, but can?t pinpoint the source of the light that is moving towards him in the darkness and decides to call it in, he can?t be too careful. Whatever these folks are doing, he?s sure you need a permit from the city for it.

As he grabs for the radio, the red light moves ever closer. FSSSSS! He hears terrifying sound of the ?light? burning into the street. He takes another look and sees smoke rising from the street in front of what appears to be two huge shafts of red light which encompass both lanes of the two lane road. He fumbles for the gear shift in a panic, but can?t get the vehicle moving before SHOOOM! The light from the sky swallows the vehicle and stops. FRESSS! The paint on the car?s hood begins to bubble due to the extreme heat. VOOSH! The plastic paneling inside the vehicle and the windows begin to warp. VSSSSH! Davens cries out in pain, ?ARGGGGH!? as the exposed skin on his hands and face begins to blister. He reaches to open the car door, but the rapid increase in temperature mercifully causes him to pass out almost immediately before FSSSSSH! The heat burns through his clothing and devours his flesh. Seconds later, BAFHOOMP! The squad car is reduced to a cloud of smoke, leaving a smoldering burn mark on the pavement. SWOOOSH! Two large male figures, one whose eyes still glow red with his power, fly through the resulting smoke cloud, continuing on their way to The Cedar House.

Snake was Mr. Bloom?s most trusted associate, but the money was just too good. The life was wearing on him, he needed to move on. These guy were going to do right by him, $50 million for the codes and the location of his soon to be former employer.

They decided to meet at The Cedar House, which looked like a giant barn, but was made of stronger wood. It had two floors. He was to meet them on the second floor in the back corner booth at 8:45 PM. He wasn?t supposed to bring anyone or anything, just tell them what they wanted to know and where he had hidden the code disk. Of course, in a separate car his trusted, armed friend Sammy waited with two other guys they both trusted. The three of them were to enter the bar separately after Snake did and keep an eye on things. Snake saw Sammy?s and the other dudes in their car on the side of the building as he drove up to The Cedar House, everything was in place.

He checked for his gun, which is tucked into the back of his jeans, and walked into the place. The first floor has a few pool tables toward the front, a huge bar to the left, and a big area with tables which are positioned in front of the stage toward the back of the place. The stage is tucked under the floor of the second level. The second level has a bar, some small tables, and booths along the back wall. The second level served as a VIP area on the Cedar House?s dance night and a restaurant with short order fare. Snake was early, so he grabbed a beer at the main bar before heading up the stairs.

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Meanwhile, Sammy and his two goons are chilling in the car. Sammy is in the driver?s seat with his cigarette dangling out the open window. URRPHH! Suddenly, the car is hoisted into the air and SWOOOOSH! Moving at super speed until WUMMP! It drops to the pavement in the deserted alley behind The Cedar House.

The men inside the vehicle are a little roughed up by the quick trip. As they begin to regain their bearings, THWUMM! Something heavy lands on the roof of the car near the rear, KRRNCH! Causing the vehicle?s roof to buckle.

?What the fuck,? mutters Sammy.

SHRRIIP! Two powerful hands tear through the roof and clamp onto the head of the dude in the back seat like a vice. ?URRHMMPH!? the goon groans as he struggles for a brief moment before the hands twist and KERRACKK! The goon?s head rotates 270 degrees and his body goes limp as his neck snaps like a dry twig. The hands vanish and THUMMP! The lifeless corpse crumples onto the rear seat.

SWOOOSH! A huge male figure appears next to the driver?s door accompanied by a rush of air, Sammy turns to face the huge man and KRASKOOOSH! Catches a punch to the face that powers into his skull and through the back of his head. Skull fragments, blood mist, and brain bits splatter all over the vehicle?s interior.

The dude in the front passenger seat pulls his gun, VZZZZZ! As a burst of heat vision, with the precision of a laser, decapitates him and cauterizes the wounds instantly. His head rolls into his lap WHUP! Smoke rises from the stump of his neck as his head lies lifeless with a terrified expression frozen on the face.

Chaz, not wanting to attract unwanted attention by blowing up the vehicle, hoists it off the ground again with his powerful muscles and OOOOSH! Sends it flying up into the air and KERRASSSH! Through the roof of a currently unoccupied warehouse four blocks over.

Chaz then CRENNKK! Breaks the lock on the rear door of The Cedar House as he rips open the door and SWOOOSH! Races up through the kitchen, to the second floor at super speed to join his partner. Moving so fast that he?s undetectable by normal human senses. Of course, 21 year old bartender Marc wishes he didn?t just see that guy run past him.

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Snake, finishes his beer and heads to the second floor. As he approaches the booth, he sees two men sitting in it, facing away from him. WOOOSH! There?s a sudden rush of air as he approached.

Snake notices that he is dealing with some big ass dudes. The booth seats are about six feet in length, the chests of the two dudes sitting before him are so broad that one of them has one of his muscular glutes hanging off the bench. Snake nonchalantly reaches for his gun for assurance before he sits down. It isn?t there!

?You looking for this,? one of the huge dudes asks, holding up his gun.

The muscle stud flexes his bicep, forming a mountain of muscle and commands Snake to ?Sit down!?

Snake obeys.

As he scoots into the booth, the dude with his gun stretches his leg under the table and lays it across Snake?s seat, trapping him between the wall and the muscular leg wrapped in black, skin-tight leather looking pants.

The dudes give him broad smiles, they make him nervous. They look like boys in a man?s body, they can?t be older than 21, but they are huge. Their upper bodies are almost bursting out of their t-shirts. Their voices are authoritative and booming. Everything about these two says power.

The one seated nearest the wall speaks, ?Mr. Snake, I?m Cody and this is Chaz. I?m glad you decided to meet with us.?

Snake takes another look toward Chaz who slowly pulses his pecs, stretching his t-shirt a bit thinner as it strains to contain his huge, thick pecs. Snake can see his muscle nipples and the shirt has become sheer enough that he can tell Cody has a hairless, smooth upper torso. Then Snake notices ?Chaz was here? has been somehow burned into the wood table in front of Chaz. Faint wisps of smoke trail from the letters, Chaz just smiles broader and chuckles.

Snake pulls out his cigarettes to calm his nerves. He pulls one out and sets the pack on the table. As he and Cody talk, FSOSSH! Suddenly his whole pack of cigarettes ignites. SPOOLSH! He douses the fire with one of the beers the two studs ordered. The waitress brings more beer and gets Snake more cigarettes. Snake overhears Cody telling Chaz to stop doing something.

Snake rats out his boss. Cody listens to and memorizes everything Snake is saying, as he munches on some bar nuts, while Chaz uses his super senses to read the traitor and make sure all of his biological signals indicate that he is telling the truth. Chaz also WZZZZ! Scans Snake with his x-ray vision and gives Cody a little poke, indicating that he has found what they are both after.

Snake talks to Cody and diverts his eyes from Chaz as much as possible as he chain smokes his way through the meeting to calm his nerves. Until one point where Chaz opens his mouth and PSSOUF! PSSOUF! Blows a few nice sized smoke rings around Snake?s head. Snake turns to see where all the cigarette smoke is coming from and POOOF! Chaz lets a huge cloud of cigarette smoke blow out of his mouth which surrounds Snake?s head like a thick, impenetrable fog. Chaz admires the huge cloud of smoke he generated from sucking the smoke that floated by him in the bar into his powerful lungs.

?AUGGH! OOAGH!? Snake goes into a coughing fit. He reaches for his bottle of beer and ?EEOOWW!? The glass bottle is so hot it burns his hand. Chaz chuckles as his pupils return to their normal state.

?You asshole!,? Snake shouts at Chaz, who isn?t going to take a puny human calling him names. VREEET! Two beams of heat vision race from his eyes SWOOOSH! Cody?s hand leaps across the table and VVIZZZK! Blocks the beams, saving Snake from being instantly incinerated. Then THWACKK! Cody flicks the side of Chaz?s head with his finger to get his attention and get him to behave. Snake is freaking out, he decides to press on with the meeting and get the fuck out of there.

??and that?s everything you guys will need to know,? Snake finishes. ?Can I have my cash now and I?ll reveal the location of the disk?? The mole gestures toward the duffel bag that is supposed to be loaded with cash that sits near Cody.

?He telling the truth?,? Cody mumbles to Chaz, his mouth juggling about eight peanuts.

?Yeah, no biological indication of lying, he?s clean,? Chaz responds.

Cody shoves the bag toward Snake, who eagerly pounces on it. He rips it open, only to find it?s filled with about 35 copies of today?s newspaper and no cash. VREEEET! The bag POOOFSH! Is vaporized under the power of Chaz?s heat vision.

With that Cody turns toward Snake, smiles, and puffs out his cheeks. PHHTOOM! PHHTOOM! Cody uses his super breath to launch peanuts like bullets through the Snake?s chest. PHHTOOM! PHHTOOOM! The peanuts rip through the stunned man?s flesh and embed themselves in the wooden booth behind him as they shoot out his back. Blood pours from the multiple holes in his flesh. Snake attempts to cry out for help PHHTOOM! Cody lets another peanut fly. KRIKOOSH! The peanut rips right through the man?s Adam?s apple and his cry becomes a blood choked gurgle.

Chaz SHRRMMMM! Gives the table a super strength shove and KRRRRACKK! The four inch thick, square wood table catches their informant at chest level and crushes him between it and the back of the booth. THUMMP! The portion of the man?s upper torso above the table, which has been severed from the rest of his body, flops over onto the table itself.

Chaz KERRACKT! Rips off the man?s right foot and removes a disk hidden in the heel of his boot. It?s hard to hide things from X-Ray vision.

Cody?s snatches the severed upper torso by the hair and throws it under the table. In their secluded booth in the back corner, no one saw anything. Plus, the band warming up downstairs kept them from being overheard.

The two huge young men get up from their seats. Cody is 5?11? and Chaz is 5?10? and they are both pumped up with fine, hot muscle. They wear jeans and tight white t-shirts, their clothing can barely contain their impressive physiques.

Chaz has blond hair, bright green eyes and a big, white smile. He is built like an ox, his muscles are proportional to his height and are big and huge.

Cody has black hair, brown eyes and a wears a smirk on his face. As the brains of their little operation, he?s always plotting and planning their next move, while Chaz parties with his powers.

About a hundred other people are in the bar, Cody and Chaz don?t really want any witnesses. Some folks stare as the two huge studs make their way out of the establishment.

The band is warmed up to play and people have filled the tables in front of the stage. It?s a pretty good crowd for a week night.

As, the band plays their first set, a series of low roars, like rumbling thunder, from outside are drowned out by the loud music. Moments later the singer stops singing and stares forward in disbelief. Everyone turns, as two smoking, black circles each about a foot in diameter rapidly expand as they burn into the wall of the bar. The band stops playing and BAAOOMM! BAAAWHOOOM! Explosions and bursts of bright orange light can be seen through the windows. Suddenly, BAWHOOM! KERASSSH! The front end of a flaming car smashes through the wall and hangs there, stuck.

Suddenly, the door opens and an obviously terrified man races in, but before the door closes behind him VREEE! A beam of red light races through the doorway and catches the man and ?AAEEEEEIIII!? A chilling scream fills the air from the now flaming man. He swirls around like the Tasmanian Devil howling in pain, before collapsing and burning to death as the bar patrons stare in horror.

FSSSSSSSH! The black circles have now grown to ten feet in diameter when SHOOOOOM! The wall burns away and FSSSSSSH! Powerful beams of heat race through the wall and FSSSSHOMMP! Burn through the crowd on their way to consume the band.

?AAAIIIIIEEEE? Screams fill the air, other patrons and staff watch stunned as 50 people and the band are swallowed by the two broad heat beams and are burned to ashes. Clothing, flesh, and bone turns to smoke and ashes in moments. Charred skeletal remains litter the area.

The beams stop and smoke rises from the fire that is now eating through the establishment itself.

The living snap to their senses and scramble for the exits, just as CHOOOM! A muscular figure walks through the hole he burned in the front wall about 25 feet from the main door. Through that hole acrid smoke pours from the 65 burning vehicles outside. One half of The Cedar House?s first floor is being consumed by fire and that fire is spreading. Chaz walks through the flames, they tickle as they lick his invulnerable, muscular body.

A brave, but foolish, young man leads his group of four friends through the debris and thickening smoke to the front door. He makes eye contact with Chaz as he nears his goal, unaware that Chaz is one of the causes of this disaster. The fact that Chaz is standing among the flames and is not at all harmed by them, makes the young man pause for a moment. Chaz smirks at him and turns his head 15 degrees as his eyes glow pink and VRZZZZZZ! The young man watches in horror as heat rays stream from Chaz?s glowing red pupils and FSSSSSHH! Blacken the flesh of his friends, turning their bones to ashes before they have time to cry out.

Chaz faces the door and FAWOOOOSH! Blows a huge cloud of his freeze breath along the front wall, blocking the holes he made and the front door behind a 2 foot think wall of ice.

The young man turns to run away from Chaz and back into the building, searching for another exit when WHHUMP! Snatches the whimpering young would-be hero from behind, wrapping his hand around the young man?s neck and hoisting him a foot off the floor, Chaz then KERRKSSST! Pinches one of the lower vertebrae of his victim?s spine between his thumb and forefinger, crushing it to powder; and THUMPP! Tosses the now paraplegic young man to the floor. Then THWMP! Chaz places his foot on the sobbing young man?s shoulder and gives him a ?little push? RRRBBBBMMM! The kid slides across the floor under Chaz?s muscle power into a thick plume of flames, VOOOSH! Which engulf him, setting him aflame, granting him a painful death.

Cody, done with all the cars outside, CHOOOM! Crashes through the ceiling and hovers inside the bar, FAWOOOSH! He puffs out his cheeks and a cloud of his freeze breath seals off one of the emergency exits as it solidifies creating a giant chuck of ice.

Chaz then races into the kitchen SWOOOSH! At super speed. Beating the people who are heading to the back door. FAWOOOOSH! A blast of his icy super breath seals the door up nice and tight. Their super ice like substance will hold up well against normal fire.

Chaz then turns toward the crowd of panicked folks rushing his way, puffs out his cheeks and FWOOOSH! Begins to herd them into the corner of the kitchen like cows with his super breath. The people struggle against the powerful winds Chaz super lungs generate, but escape is impossible. Once Chaz has the group of 20 or so people trapped in the corner he VREEEE! Unleashes two broad beams of heat vision that rip through the kitchen into the crowd of people. FISSSSSH! He watches as the people twist about and scream as his heat rays bake them a few at a time, carefully working their way through the group row by row, turning each helpless victim to ash.

SWOOOSH! There is a rush of air and THWAAMM! Chaz catches a surprise punch to the face, which knocks him across the kitchen and CERACCK! Into the far wall. Chaz THWUD! Slides down the wall and hits the floor. VREEEEE! Heat beams slam into Chaz?s pecs VRACKZZZ! Threatening to smoke him.

Meanwhile, Cody races about the bar exterminating people with his various powers as he sees fit. Now that they are all trapped without any hope of escape, he doesn?t need to rush things. The fire engulfs only half of the first floor, the entire area near the bar is untouched, except for smoke damage. Cody WOOOOOO! Inhales the thick smoke, clearing the air, so the smoke doesn?t kill the people before he gets a chance to do so.

Cody KERASSK! KRAASHH! SMASSH! Uses his powerful muscles to tear apart the wooden stairs leading to the second floor of the bar. He grasps and tears and crushes, the wooden tree trunk size supports for the staircase snap like toothpicks under Cody?s mighty muscle power. His action traps 30 people on the second floor and causes the 15 people who were on the stairs to fall to the floor in a pile of people and debris.

As the people attempt to claw their way out of the pile of debris, Cody positions himself 30 feet from the pile within the flames on the other side of the bar and FWOOSH! FWOOSH! FWOSH! Three quick gusts of his super breath blow three large balls of fire into the pile of debris. The people scream as the fire consumes them, but they cannot escape the heavy wood chunks under which they are trapped. The other survivors watch in horror.

Two well built men run to help, but Cody cocks his muscular arm and KABLOOSH! Drives his fist through the chest of one of the would be rescuers. ?ACK?? The man gurgles as Cody?s fist blasts out of the middle of his back, shattering his rib cage and snapping his spine. Blood streams from the man?s mouth and his wounds. Cody stares into the man?s eyes as life begins to fade from them and VREEE! Carefully blasts his victim?s eyes with beams of his heat vision. The man screams as Cody?s heat vision causes his eyeballs to bubble and PALOOSH! Explode, like giant blisters filled with fluid. Then VREE! Cody?s heat vision reaches the man?s brain heating it up like a loaf of bread in the oven. The man spasms and shrieks as his brain comes under attack as Cody?s carefully applies his heat vision to it. FSSSSSSH! Steam shoots out of the man?s ears as the water in his brain evaporates, increasing the pressure within his skull. Finally, KERACKOOSH! The man?s skull bursts apart under the pressure, unleashing a hail of brain matter. Cody withdrawals his fist and THUDD! Let?s the body fall to the floor.

The second man abandons his rescue attempt and runs away. SWOOOSH! Cody catches him in an instant with his super speed and KKRRKT! Hoists the man off the ground by gripping his throat with one of his powerful hands. The man struggles and strikes Cody?s massive, muscular frame with his fists and feet, but his struggling is useless against Cody?s invulnerable, huge body. Cody carries the man over to a giant, eight foot high plume of flame which is consuming several wooden tables and a few bodies. Cody smirks at the man and thrusts him into the flames. VOOOSH! Cody holds him there and feels the flames tickle his hand and forearm as the man screams and struggles while the fire chars his flesh. Finally, Cody just lets go and UMPH! Drops the body into the fire.

Next up is the second level where 30 people are trapped. Cody flies up into the air and VREEEET! Beams of heat race from his eyes and sweep swiftly from one side of the second floor to the other. VOOOOSH! The people burn to ashes and flames swallow the whole area. Whatever Cody?s heat vision doesn?t incinerated, it sets aflame.

Cody?s ready to finish this, VREEET! Broad heat rays stream from his eyes as he seeks to engulf the entire place in flames. He aims at the walls, the floor, and the roof. Setting everything within his sight on fire or burning it to ashes.

Back in the kitchen, Chaz FWOOOSH! Hits his attacker with a gust of super breath that OOOOSH! Launches him KERRASSH! Through the kitchen wall and into the main bar area.

Chaz chest is smoking from the heat rays. His shirt is ruined, his natural invulnerability will protect anything within two inches of his skin, but not from a super powered attack. Chaz?s opponent is 6?1?, two inches taller than Chaz, but his biceps only measure about 15 inches, whereas Chaz?s are 21 inches. Chaz is much more developed as far as muscle size, although the other dude is very toned and cut. The fact is, if the kid hadn?t caught him by surprise, Chaz wouldn?t have been moved by the blow at all.

Marc lies smashed into the side of the bar. He wanted to save his friends. He hated these stupid powers and the first time he wants to use them, they fail him. All his co-workers are dead. KERTHUD! Large chunks of the burning roof are falling into the bar. Marc gets up and SWOOOSH! ?Oh no!? Marc thinks as KERWHAAAMMM! Chaz fist, powered by his huge guns connects with Marc chest and RRRRRERRRAACKK! Powers Marc through the entire length of the bar, splitting it in half down the middle.

Marc ?ARGGGH!? hollers in pain and coughs up some blood. He?s no match for this dude. He leaps into the air to escape, and VREEETT! Catches two heat beams in the chest as Chaz pours it on. Marc keeps flying though he?s almost to the roof.

?Oh no you don?t,? Comes a voice from behind him. Another power dude!

He feels the dudes hands clamp on his shoulders and FREZZACKK! Yellow energy surrounds his body as the power races through him like an electric shock and he drops to the ground like a stone.

?All yours, Chaz. I scrambled his flight power for you man,? Cody calls out.

Chaz is ready to make this dude pay. Cody?s ability to scramble the power that a power dude is currently using for a limited time actually works this time. Sometimes the dudes he tries it on are too powerful and can resist it.

Chaz warms up to squash Marc, as Cody calls out, ?Sky drone, we have to move, now!?

?Fuck me!? Chaz exclaims, he wanted to absorb this punk.

Quickly Chaz flexes both biceps and the huge mounds of muscle swell and pulse with green energy and SHOOOM! SHOOOM! Each bicep fires a ball of green energy that VERZACKK! VERZACCK! Powers into Marc?s chest and fucks him up big time. He collapses and spasms as the green energy rips through him.

KERASSSHHH! BOOOM! The building collapses around Marc as Cody and Chaz fly off at super speed to avoid any forces the drone may have alerted to their presence.

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>>The Cedar House 5 minutes after Cody and Chaz departed the scene

Agent Cole flew over the scene, scanning the burning remains of The Cedar House. A sky drone detected power use in this area by three power dudes, but apparently it had detected it too late, as whatever was here was now consumed by flames that created a great cloud of smoke over the area. Fortunately, the sky drone network would soon be enhanced with the addition of 2000 sky drones to complement the current 150 floating over the United States. In the month since the sky drone network was launched, rogue power dude detections were up.

Although the sky drones initially had the ability to detect the power magnitudes of any power dudes they scanned, that feature had been disabled since the tragic accident. Cole remembered it like it happened only minutes ago, when it had been a few days at least. Cole was about to go into a strategy meeting with Gideon, when the sky drone alert came in, a magnitude 1.8 power dude. Cole commanded three of his excited rookies to bring in the target, except it turned out this dude was no 1.8 and the three of them were exterminated. Cole had yet to track down the bastard who did it, but when he does find him, that animal is going to suffer before Cole grants him a slow, painful death. Since the accident, all retrieval team members had to be a magnitude four or higher and a back-up unit is always kept waiting in the wings and ready to go, in case things got out of control.

With his enhanced vision powers WZZZZ! Cole detects a living being covered by debris within the fire, a power dude, apparently he lost the fight. Cole can see why, this one doesn?t have much muscle mass, although he is quite toned. Cole doesn?t see a lot of residual energy radiating from him that a more powerful power dude would have after a fight.

However, Cole?s mission is to retrieve the power dudes that are detected by the sky drones and this one will be no different. Cole is one of the best retrievers, few power dudes can resist his powers, he is almost as powerful as his master, Gideon. That was because Gideon shared his limitless energies with Cole, giving him a boost now and then. These ?boosts? ensure that Cole is a match for any power dudes he comes across. Cole is powerful enough that he doesn?t need to work as a member of one of the three member retrieval units. In fact, as a top commander and Gideon?s right hand man, Cole commanded the retrieval teams and carried out other important missions. He loves field work, often taking most of the calls himself, because he so enjoys overpowering lesser beings.

Cole SHOOMP! Plows down through the flaming remains of the building and the ash that covers his target and lifts him out of the wreckage BOOOFSH! The two of them blast out of the pile of debris, Cole cradling the unconscious subject in his massive arms.

Cole UMPHH! Plops Marc on a large section of the collapsed roof of the building and tapped one of his silver wrist bands, activating his communicator, and calls it in, ?Possible magnitude one, commencing final scan.?

?Go ahead, Cube,? comes a familiar voice from the com link.

Cole smiles, ?Thad, you jackass. Why don?t you let the computer handle this shit and go do something useful??

?What? You going to come and retrieve me, big man,? Thad cracks. ?I?ll see you when you get back, but Gideon confirmed target #8712F4 is to be dealt with and that is two miles from your current position, so I thought you might want a crack at it. I know you love the civilian targets.?

Sometimes Cole just loves the wise cracking Thad.

?Sure, send the data, thanks,? Cole responds.

?OK, transmitting data to your system now,? Thad replies. ?Anything for Gideon?s favorite, Thad out.?

Thad?s other wrist band emits a beep, indicating the data has been received. Cube is Cole?s nickname. He was given it because he had the muscles and power of Superman cubed, the joke went. It was true though, Cole was a powerful man in every way, and he could pass for Superman?s much bigger and stronger identical twin brother. Gideon could not have chosen a more worthy man, Cole took his duties seriously and was loyal to Gideon and the cause. He sets a great example for the other power dudes who have joined Gideon. His displays of supreme power convinced many power dudes to join Gideon?s forces, as opposing any being with this much power would be futile.

In his black, skin tight battle suit, which covers him from the neck down, he looks particularly menacing. The suit was thin enough that every ripple of his muscle body was visible through it. On each wrist are gray metallic wrist bands, that are actually highly advanced pieces of power dude created technology. He also has a band of the same stuff around his waist, which serves as a utility belt. The body suit, the wrist bands, and the belt function as one unit and respond to his mental commands and his touch in various ways. On the left side of his collar are four small metal circles indicating his high rank.

Cole removes two silver discs from his steel utility belt and places them on the young man?s nipples. HUMMM! HUMMMM! As they hum they transmit the readings to HQ and gave the dude a little jolt, waking him up.

?Hey,? Marc takes one look at Cole and SWO?THUMMMP! Before he can get up and race away at super speed, Cole plants his foot firmly on the young man?s chest. The young man struggles and VRIIIE! Fires his heat vision at Cole. Cole POOOF! Puffs out a thick cloud of ice breath that negates the young man?s weak heat vision, freezing his head in a chuck of ice. Cole was ready for that trick, it has been tried before with similar results.

Marc continues to struggle and WHAM! WHAMM! Slams his head into the section of roof below him, attempting shatter the ice.

?Hey, try this,? Cole sneers as he raises his palm over the young power dude and SHRINNG! Blasts rings of blue light into his target?s face. WHAM! The boy continues to bang his head against the roof. VASSHRACK! The energy rings race around his head and lifting his head at all becomes impossible. His head feels like it weighs two tons, he can?t lift it at all, although he struggles to do so mightily. Cole smirks at him, ?I have just increased the pull of gravity on your head by 5000 times, fool. Go ahead, try and fly away, your head will stay right here.?

Cole takes his foot off the young man?s chest, as he gets the final reading, his subject is a magnitude one, the lowest classification of homo supreme. Basic powers in this kid, nothing more. What a waste of talent! Given these great powers and he sought not to develop them, to grow them, and to turn his body into a temple of size and strength. The fool!

?Agent, complete retrieval? comes the command from HQ, this time it was the automated computer?s voice.

?Negative,? Cole answers. ?Commander Cole override code A-4-Beta-7.?

?Acknowledged, finish and continue your patrols, Agent,? The computer responds.

Cole closes his com link and removes the disks from the young man?s nipples, placing them back in his utility belt. Cole then sits on the dude?s stomach and straddles him, ?ARGH!? the young power dude cries out as his midsection bears the full weight of Cole?s super dense two ton physique. Next, VOOSH! A quick blast of Cole?s heat vision swallows the young man?s head, burning away the ice chunk and FSSSSSHH! All of the young man?s hair in a brilliant flash, apparently his powers of invulnerability are too weak to fully protect him from such an intense blast of heat ray. Smoke rises from the dude?s super heated, bald head as he moans in pain.

Cole places both of his hands on the dude?s pecs and HUMMM! HUMMMM! Pulses of pale blue energy flow from Cole?s hands and wash over his victim?s toned, muscular body. Marc spasms as the energy rips through him, then Cole feels himself sink through the young man and soon stops the energy pulses. It is done. Cole has reduced his victim?s density to the point that he is now a living ghost. OOOSH! Cole?s hands and powerful glutes phase right through the dude?s now intangible body. The dude is glowing with a faint blue hue and he?s a living ghost! He?s so freaked out, he doesn?t know what to do. Cole?s power has reduced his molecular density and mass to almost nothing.

Cole heaves his monstrous pectorals and FWASSH! The huge muscle masses unleash a bright blue energy flash which freezes Marc in stasis. Marc can?t move under his own power, he?s a living ghost, frozen in place.

Cole has a gleam in his eye, this one is too powerless to be useful. Cole opens his mouth halfway and slowly, deliberately draws in a deep breath WOOOOOOOSH! The ghost dude feels horrible pain as he watches his stomach stretch toward Cole?s waiting mouth. He screams, but there is no sound. He struggles, but his body simply passes through everything. He watches his body being pulled into Cole, like smoke being pulled into the back of a fan. He feels his body coming apart. Soon he no longer feels his legs, since Cole?s powerful inhalation has torn his midsection from the rest of his body, pulling it into a thin stream of matter that is drawn quickly into Cole?s mouth. Cole stops inhaling, stands up, and smirks at the ghost dude, who now is separated into three parts: His head and chest, his legs, and his entire midsection (which has been swallowed by Cole).

Cole puckers his lips and makes it quick for the legs, WOOOSP! One sharp, precisely targeted inhalation and his victim?s legs vanish between Cole?s lips like a dust bunny pulled into a vacuum cleaner.

Next Cole opens wide and WOOOO! Creates a weak suction force, just enough power to slowly pull the head, chest, and arms of his victim up into the air about six feet, a foot in front of and level with Cole?s huge mouth.

Cole opens his mouth wide and inhales slowly, not even using his super lungs, AAAAHHH! The ghost dude feels his arms and chest being pulled away from him, he watches in horror as his ghostly body disperses and floats past Cole?s lips and down into his throat. It looks like Cole is inhaling a cloud of multicolored steam. The pain is unbearable as more of his body is drawn into Cole, his head floats closer and closer to the unforgiving Cole. FLIPPSSH! Cole closes his mouth, after finishing off the dude?s neck, only his head remains and Cole?s face is phasing through his mouth and nose right now. Cole stares into the young man pleading eyes, gives him a tight lipped grin, as he places the tip of his index finger against one of his nostrils and presses it shut, and NNIFFIIISHHH! Without warning, inhales deeply through his nose. VIISSPP! Marc?s head is snorted up Cole?s right nostril and he is no more.

Cole enjoys feeding, that was the only thing this power dude was maybe good for, worthless wimp. The ?buzz? lasts a paltry ten seconds, Cole looks at his wristband computer which indicates that his digestion of this magnitude one increased his overall power level by an insignificant amount. That was one of the problems the labs were working on-how to significantly decrease the amount of the victim?s power that is lost during the absorption process. The fact that there are so many methods of absorbing a power dude, only complicates matters. Right now the highest recorded conversion rate by Gideon?s researchers is about 40 percent.

Suddenly, a police squad car pulls up in front of the disaster scene. The cops call in on their radio before they exit the vehicle.

Cole steps through the flames and billowing smoke of the still raging fire over to them, ?I am Agent Cole, I have Federal jurisdiction over this area.?

The cops are a bit taken aback, they have never encountered one of these special fed agents in the field before, but they know these guys are not to be messed with.

They also see that the dude walked right out of the fire unharmed and isn?t wearing shit for protective gear.

Cole despises worthless civilian forces. Before they know what he?s doing, Cole?s huge pecs FWASSSSH! Explode with a wave of blue light that washes over the two cops and their car. The light burst blinds the cops for a moment and causes them to glow with a faint blue hue. Temporarily blind from the flash, the cops step backwards a bit as Cole approaches them, but the force of their steps pushes them up off the ground and they begin to float in the air. As their sight returns, the cops are freaked out to find themselves helplessly floating a few feet off the ground.

Cole speaks, ?I have reduced the pull of gravity upon you to zero. Thus, the slightest force applied to your bodies will result in you floating helplessly into space. Like so.? With that, Cole WRENKKT! Presses his hand through the car?s sheet metal hood, this feat barely requires any effort at all, it?s like pressing his hand through pudding, and reaches in deep, grasping the engine, then OOMPP! He lifts his arm up and raises the car in the air along with it. Then RENNKT! Cole withdrawals his hand and the cop car continues to float on an incline about ten feet off the ground. PLINKK! Cole flicks the floating car with his index finger and OOOSH! It shoots into the sky like a rocket, vanishing in the distance under the power of his super strength and the lack of gravitational pull.

The two cops take this scene in and freak out as they slowly float higher and higher into the air, closer and closer to certain doom. One cop pulls his gun, while the other cries out. Cole puckers his lips a bit and PSSSFFTT! Gives the noisy one a head start on his journey into outer space with a ?little? puff of his super breath. OOOOSH! The gust propels the cop into the sky where he soon vanishes behind the clouds. BLAM! BLAM! The other officer fires away, but the bullets PLING! PLING! Bounce harmlessly off of Cole?s thick pecs and, much to the cop?s horror, each time he pulls the trigger, the recoil propels him further into the air. Cole?s eyes glow with a purple light and he smirks at the officer as XZZZZZ! Inside the officer?s chest cavity super charged sub-atomic particles manifest in a small swirling purple cloud of light. For a couple seconds the officer feels the effects of Cole?s photon vision, it?s like there is a thunderstorm swirling in his chest and lightening shooting through his veins. The officer?s body contorts in pain and BLOOSHH! Blows apart in an explosion of gore, as if a grenade has gone off inside his chest cavity. The resulting cloud of blood, flesh, and entrails floats upwards into the air as it is still under the power of Cole?s gravity altering abilities. Cole smiles at the gore cloud, he enjoys using his photon vision.

WE-OOOH! WE-OOOH! A fire truck appears down the street, sirens blaring, racing toward the scene. Cole SWOOOSH! Races down the deserted city street, stopping 20 feet in front of the two ton fire truck. The driver has no time to stop, Cole stands with both hands on his hips and waits KERASSH! Metal twists and bends as the fire truck slams into Cole?s pecs and compacts against his muscular frame at 60 mph, the powerful impact compresses the entire cab, shortening the trucks overall length by six feet. As the metal buckles and twists, the four firefighters in the front cab are SPLUUSH! Crushed into flesh pancakes.

Cole remains standing in the same position, although the wreckage of the fire truck is smashed against his huge body, the front half of his body in actually embedded in it. THOOOOM! Cole bounces his pecs in unison and WHOOOM! The fire truck is launched back down the street, through the air, at about 150 mph. It travels for three blocks before it KERBASSSHH! Crashes into the stone fa?ade of a building and BA-DOOM! Explodes in a cloud of flame, ending the lives of two other firemen who were still on board.

Three firemen, who were hanging on the back of the truck and were knocked off by the impact with Cole, now lay 15 yards in front of Cole in the street. Cole?s hand reaches out and SHRAKKKT! A huge beam of green energy streaks from his hand and FRAZZKT! Swallows the three men FHOOMP! In an instant, Cole?s power reduces them to vapors and CRUBOOM! Leaves behind a ten feet wide and two feet deep crater in the street.

WE-OOO! WEE-OOO! Suddenly more sirens cut through the night air. An ambulance is racing toward Cole. Cole?s cheeks puff out like boat sails and FAWOOOSH! A stream of his freeze breath streaks towards the vehicle. WOOOSHH! The gust of deadly blue vapor slams into the ambulance, dropping its temperature and the temperature of its passengers to several hundred degrees below zero as it launches it through the air and KERBASSSH! Slams it into the same stone building the fire truck hit, where it BOOOSH! Explodes in a cloud of ice dust.

Cole SWOOOSH! Leaps into the air, puffs out his cheeks, and FAWOOOOSH! Turns his head from one side to the other, blanketing the burning remnants of The Cedar House and the burning stone building with a huge cloud of his ice breath, instantly snuffing out the fires as his breath solidifies and encases the area in ice, before he SWOOOSH! Flies off to begin his next mission.

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Cody and Chaz fly over to the Royal Arms building. According to their mole, on the 78th floor penthouse apartment, their target can be found. The target is Mr. Steven Bloom, the head of a major NY based drug operation. Mr. Bloom?s face has never been recorded and he moves secretly from place to place. Thanks to their informant, Cody and Chaz know where to find him.

The building is a classy place filled with expensive apartments and offices. The entire place is owned by Mr. Bloom, paid for by his drug profits.

The two power studs hover over the top of the building, Mr. Bloom?s huge penthouse is spread across the entire top two floors. WZZZZ! Cody and Chaz scan the dwelling with their vision powers, taking notice of where the people are within the penthouse. Mr. Bloom is quite paranoid or very careful, depending on ones point of view.

Two guards are outside on the roof top deck and pool, smoking and chatting.

SWOOOOSH! Chaz swoops in at super speed like a hawk and nabs one of the men, snatching him by his shoulders. SWOOOOSH! Chaz flies off over the river, high in the sky. The guard is not sure what the hell is going on, before he knows it he?s falling toward the river and SPLOOSH! He dies upon impact with the water?s surface.

Meanwhile, the other guard, gets up after being blown over by the rush of wind, ?Hank? Where?d you go??

He draws his weapon. SWOOOOSH! There is another rush of air and his gun is ripped from his grasp and vanishes.

?What the fuck?? the guard mutters.

SWOOOOSH! Another rush of air and the befuddled guard finds himself wearing nothing but his boxers.

Cody is loving this. Chaz hovers over the building and watches Cody work with glee.

The guard marches toward the sliding glass door, and when he is about to reach for the handle and slide it open. SWOOOOOSH! He finds himself back on the far side of the deck.

Then SWOOOOSH! SWOOOSH! He watches as all of the deck furniture apparently repositions itself in the blink of an eye.

?BWAH! HA! HA!? Phantoms laughter fills the air.

The SWOOOOSH! UMPHH! The 220 pound guard is snatched up by the swelled, muscular arms of Cody and SWOOOOSH! Cody takes off running with the man at super speed. He makes it almost one lap around the roof before FOOOSHH! The guard is burned to ashes by the heat generated by the friction at such incredibly high speeds.

Chaz admires the trail of smoking ash, ?Nicely done, Cody.?

Cody and Chaz turn toward the huge glass wall and sliding door, inside are four men drinking, none of them is Bloom according to their informant.

FWOOOOSH! Chaz and Cody puff out their cheeks and unleash blasts of their super breath simultaneously. The two inch think ornate, carved glass wall KERASSSH! Explodes under the pressure of their super breath into the room. OOOOSH! The men are launched across the room by the extreme wind and THUMMP! Are slammed into the wall just as SHRRIIPP! SHRRIP! WRIIIP! Shards of glass tear through their bodies and nail the bleeding men to the wall.

Blood drips from their wounds, as the four men hang from the wall. One is already dead after catching a large shard of glass in his forehead.

The men moan in pain as a pool of blood grows on the floor below them. Chaz and Cody enter the penthouse. Chaz grabs a nearby fine Italian black leather couch that?s facing him as he enters. He UMMFF! Lifts it with his powerful arms in the air and lines it up. Then OOOOOSSH! He gives it a little forward thrust and lets go. BOOOOSH! The couch sails through the air and KERRACKOOOSH! The back of it slams into the men, bursting them like watermelons at a Gallagher show. Chaz?s strength is so great that the couch knocks out a portion of the wall and ends up halfway between two rooms.

Suddenly, a man darts from behind the bar and runs toward a hallway leading to the rest of the penthouse.

Chaz smiles, he knows his man will take him out and he?s not disappointed. SWOOOSH! KERK! HURIIP! The man stops running, turns toward Cody, his eyes fill with dread as he looks upon Cody who faces him with a smirk on his face, then he looks down at his chest and crumples to the floor. Cody steps up to the body and places the man?s heart back inside the hole he ripped in the man?s chest when he tore his heart out at super speed.

Chaz and Cody enter the hallway which is lined with rooms. One of them contains a man sleeping behind its locked door on a huge king sized bed. KERACKOOSH! Chaz bursts right through the wooden door and it?s blown into splinters. The man awakens, but he?s discombobulated from drinking so much earlier in the evening. As he struggles to become alert, Chaz and Cody each grab one corner of the mattress at the foot of the bed and use their super muscle strength to ?fold? the mattress in half up toward the head of the bed. The man cries out as his legs flip up to meet his face and then Chaz and Cody place one hand on the underside of the mattress and push. KERRACKK! The man is pressed out like a piece of road kill and BOOMFF! SHRING! PRING! The mattress splits in half along the fold.

The two power studs smile at each other and leave the room in search of others.

Chaz and Cody turn a corner and surprise a guard who is walking down the hallway towards them. The guard points his gun at them, and VREEEE! Catches four forceful jets of their vision powers in the chest which OOOSH! Blast him back down the hall WHAMM! Into a wall before VWOOSH! Incinerating him. The only remains of the guard are his blackened silhouette which is burned into the wall and still smoking, the tiny bits of ash and wisps of smoke that float down the hallway, and one of his charred black leather shoes, which was apparently knocked off his foot when he went flying backward into the wall.

Chaz and Cody proceed down the stairs into the first level of the penthouse, to the office. A 6?3? guard stands at the door with a machine gun. He?s unaware that his fellow office guard was just eliminated moments ago on his way to get a beer. Cody and Chaz SWOOOSH! SWOOOOSH! Appear out of nowhere on opposite sides of the surprised guard, compliments of their super speed. The guard has no time to react, seconds are like hours to a power dude using his super speed, as Chaz and Cody?s huge pectorals heave and SHOOOMF! SHOOMF! Green energy blasts from their pecs and burns away their tight white t-shirts as it slams into either side of the guard. ZZZZACKT! The guard screams but no sound escapes as has already been immobilized by their power as it fills him and FOOOMPH! Seconds later he explodes in a cloud of white vapor, which the two power studs WOOO! WOOOO! Inhale together. They love sharing meals with each other, among other things. Of course, they often argue over who is the better ?cook?.

Next, the 12 inch thick door remains, which is composed of six inches of steel in between two three inch layers of solid oak, as well as whatever security measures are in place inside the sound proof room. Of course, with their super hearing and enhanced vision powers, Chaz and Cody are aware of what awaits them inside the office.

Chaz cocks his fist back and THWAAMMM! RENKOOOM! Blows the huge door off its hinges, triggering silent alarms in, among other places, Mr. Bloom?s private suite. THWAMM! The door, after being knocked three feet into the room, topples to the floor. As two big Dobermans leap up at the two power studs. Cody VREEEEE! FFOOOM! Smokes the dog that?s leaping toward him in mid-air with a quick blast of heat vision. Chaz lets the puzzled beast attacking him try to bite into the impervious flesh of his huge forearm a few times before KRACK! He snaps the animal?s neck and THUMP! Kicks it across the floor.

Next, PSSSSSSH! PSSSSSSSH! Two jets pump what would be a colorless and odorless poison gas to basic human senses into the office. Chaz simply WOOOO! Inhales all the gas the jets spew out, until there isn?t anymore, and stores it in his lungs with their near limitless capacity.

Meanwhile, Cody acting on the information supplied by their mole, is going to work. First, Cody pulls out a laptop from one of the desk drawers, flips it on, and connects it to the network. Meanwhile, Chaz works on the 6 cubic foot metal safe. RENNNKT! He digs his fingers into the sides of the safe and KACOOOM! Yanks it out of the wall and into the room. Instead of using the combination, CHOOOM! Chaz powers his fist into the lock, which shatters the steel, and WRENKT! Forces the door open. That is when his super hearing picks up the electronic beeping sound.

A failsafe device has been activated, SWOOOSH! With super speed Chaz checks out everything in the safe and finds a device about the size of a golf ball hidden inside a hollowed out copy of The Bible. WZZZZZ! His x-ray vision confirms it?s a bomb and it?s going to blow now! Chaz shoves the device into his mouth and swallows hard. KABOOOOOOOOMM! Chaz is OOOOOSH! Launched across the room and KERASSH! Through the office wall. His muscles swell up as his body works to contain the power of the blast. Chaz slumps over, nearly depleted by his mostly successful effort to absorb and contain the power of the potentially devastating explosion.

WZZZZZ! Cody scans Chaz and sees that he is ok and he quickly removes the two scanning devices he requires from the safe and connects them to the computer. Cody then inserts the disk and activates the program that will gain him full access to Mr. Bloom's computer systems. RATA! TAT! RATA! TAT! Cody looks up and sees Bloom firing a machine gun right at him and all of the computer equipment. Cody reacts with the speed of a power dude and WOOOOOOSH! Draws in a deep, deep breath, creating a powerful suction force that plucks each bullet out of the air and draws it safely into Cody?s mouth. RATA! TAT! TAT! Cody can?t risk letting the bullets strike him and bounce off his super dense muscular body, because he needs Mr. Bloom alive. WOOOOSH! And he also can?t risk the computer being damaged. After about one minute of shooting, CLICK! CLICK! Mr. Bloom runs out of bullets and Cody opens his mouth wide and PLING! PLING! CHING! Lets the 78 bullets shower down upon the desk as Bloom watches in stunned surprise.

SWOOOSH! Cody races up to Bloom, UMPH! Grabs him, and THWUD! Throws him inside the safe. Cody closes the safe door and POOKK! Drills a hole in the side of the safe with his finger, so that his captive can breath.

Meanwhile, Chaz returns to the office, just in time to WZZZZ! Notice that Bloom has retrieved a large knife from inside the safe and is preparing to slash the palms of his hands. Chaz races up to the hole in the safe wall, presses his lips over it, and WOOOOOSH! Draws all of the air in the safe into his lungs. Bloom gets dizzy from lack of oxygen and passes out.

Cody works on the computer, it could be as long as an hour before the program cracks the network security protocols.

?Hey, he?s got his bitch up there. I want her,? Chaz remarks as he seductively flexes his huge upper arms and tightened his pecs. Cody could never resist Chaz?s pecs and hot biceps and Chaz knew it.

Chaz?s constant craving for any type of flesh was a major disappointment to Cody. However, the two power dudes had worked out an arrangement that suited them. Cody knew that Chaz didn?t have any emotional attachment to these people he used for pleasure. He and Chaz had a special bond.

?Fine,? Cody replied. ?Give me some juice and go have your way with her. I?ll see you after you feed. I?ll take care of business here.?

Cody wanted a dose of Chaz?s ?supremesterone? which is the power dudes version of testosterone. Their bodies synthesize it from the white vapor remains of humans. An extra dose meant a temporary increase in muscle size and power when it was utilized by the receiver. The donor usually needed to feed on humans soon after donating to replenish himself. Of course, consuming a massive quantity of humans at one time, would usually result in permanent positive increases in a power dude?s power level or muscle size.

Chaz knows the drill, if he wants to play, he has to bribe his man. Chaz places the tip of his index finger on his right nipple and rubs it as he pumps his pectorals. His right nipple opens HSSSH! With a little hiss as white vapors billow from the opening. Supremesterone turns to a gas upon contact with the air, one of its several unique properties.

Cody can?t wait to feast on Chaz?s juice. He puckers his lips, focuses on Chaz?s open nipple and WHOOO! Inhales deeply. FSSSH! A stream of white vapor flows from Chaz?s pec and glides across the room into Cody?s mouth. Cody?s loves the feeling of the supremesterone being drawn past his lips and down his throat. Chaz feels a little weak as his ?fuel? is drawn out of him. He falters and feels like he?s going to faint, he presses his hand over his nipple and closes it, cutting off Cody?s supply.

?That?s enough dude, I?ll be back later tonight, after I help with the warehouse,? Chaz announces as he takes off, leaving Cody swimming in a sea of pleasure.

Chaz makes his way to Bloom?s bedroom suite to fuck the whore he spied earlier with his x-ray vision. The door is locked, so Chaz THWAMM! Rams his flat palm into it and BOOOM! Blows it off its hinges and into the spacious bedroom.

?Is at you, Bunny,? asks the coked up, naked whore who is sprawled across the bed.

?Yeah, baby,? answers Chaz with a delighted smirk.

Back in the office, Cody pauses to enjoy the feeling of the extra ?juice? flowing through his body. Then he gets to work. The code is cracked, and the scanning devices require Mr. Bloom?s right palm print and a retina scan to give Cody access.

The Sphinx organization would be pleased with Chaz?s and Cody?s efforts. They had worked with the Sphinx organization for almost two years. The Sphinx Organization is an organized crime syndicate that seeks out those with super powers and uses them in its operations. The Sphinx organization is expanding by destroying other crime organizations and stealing their assets, while taking over their territory.

As his program runs, Cody stands before the full-length mirror in the office and slowly strips off all of his clothing, except for his boxer briefs. Cody flexes his biceps and closes his eyes and lets the ?juice? pump into them. His eyes roll back as he feels them swell and expand. Next he pumps his pecs and feels the rush as the supremesterone rushes into each muscle fiber, causing it to expand. Finally, he flares his lats out like the head of a cobra and enjoys the sensation of the juice going to work, feeding each muscle fiber, causing it to grow. Finally, Cody tenses all of his muscles and lets the supremesterone flow throughout his body. He collapses to the ground as waves of pleasure overwhelm him. He?s out of breath, when he opens his eyes and stands before the mirror, admiring his muscles which have temporarily doubled in size.

BEEP! BEEP! The program is ready, he needs Mr. Bloom?s parts. Cody WRENNKT! Digs his fingers of both of his hands into the door and REIIIRIPPP! Tears the door of the safe right off, Mr. Bloom is awakened by the groan of the metal. Cody KRNNCH! Clasps his hand over Mr. Bloom?s shoulder and carries him out of the safe. Mr. Bloom is stunned by the sight of this huger muscle man. Cody is all business.

Cody KRACCKT! Snaps off Mr. Bloom?s right forearm at the elbow and slaps his right hand over the scanner. Next he attempts to get a scan of Mr. Bloom?s retina, but Bloom?s eyes dart around wildly resulting in an incomplete reading.

?Stare straight ahead,? Cody commands, but Bloom doesn?t comply. Cody loses his patience, places his free hand under Bloom?s chin and CRACCKK! Pushes Bloom?s chin up and back, snapping his neck like pencil. ?That?s it, sit nice and still,? Cody mutters to the dead man as he gets a good scan and the transfer of assets begins.

In less than an hour, the assets of another criminal organization would be stolen by the Sphinx organization

With the major work completed, it was time for Cody to have his fun. Already Chaz was fucking some whore in the master bedroom of the penthouse.

Cody turns to the safe and removes six kilos of coke and about $400,000 in cash. Cody grabs two kilos of coke, one in each hand and BOOSH! Crushes them open over a table in the office. Then Cody closes his mouth, leans over the table and inhales through his nose HOOOOSH! The white powder shoots up his nose like a vacuum cleaner sucks up flour. In moments Cody is enjoying an incredible high, being super human, drugs didn?t really kill him.

Meanwhile, Chaz reaches climax with Bloom?s whore. She doesn?t even see it coming until FRACKOOOM! A bright wave of yellow energy shoots from Chaz?s body, filling the room and incinerating her and everything else in it. Chaz is left laying on the floor in a pile of ashes and a pool of his own jiz, breathing hard.

Chaz picks himself off the floor after a few moments and washes himself in the shower. He is spent from the sex and feeding Cody some of his juice. He needs to feed before he checks on the warehouse.

Luckily, Chaz has a building of apartments filled with people to hunt in. Chaz exits the penthouse and hits the elevators. He?s wearing some shorts and a short sleeve button down shirt, which he leaves unbuttoned, exposing his huge pecs.

Chaz just rides in the elevator, waiting for it to stop, which it soon does. A built, twenty something dude with headphones on and running gear enters, glances at Chaz briefly and then turns to face the doors. Chaz reaches over and presses the emergency stop button, as the guy turns to give Chaz a questioning look, Chaz opens his shirt, heaves his mammoth pecs, and SHOOMMPH! Twin beams of green light slam into the dude and FOOOMPH! Turn him into a nourishing white vapor cloud. WOOOOO! Chaz wastes no time inhaling it.

Chaz takes the elevator down to the fifth floor. Where he gets off and stays at the elevator bank. He watches the lights above the six elevators, indicating which floors they are stopping on and in which direction they are traveling. Conveniently, for Chaz, each elevator has a separate panel of buttons to press to summon it.

Chaz sees that elevator three is on its way up from the lobby. He WZZZZ! Scans it with his enhanced vision and notices it?s packed with ten folks returning from an evening on the town. Chaz pushes the ?up? button for elevator three, stands in front of it and opens his shirt, HUMM! HUMMM! His pecs swell and hum with power, bursting out from his chest and glowing green. BING! The elevator doors open and the people stop chattering and stare at the man with the huge, green pecs for an instant before SHOOMMPH! Twin beams of green energy slam into the first row of four people. ?AEEEIIII!? Chaos erupts in the elevator car, as Chaz?s pec energies stream into it. FOOOMPH! One victim is reduced to vapor. FOOOMPH! A second victim quickly follows. Chaz hoped that his pec beams would be more powerful and easily handle these ten people, but apparently giving up some of his supremesterone to Cody has weakened him more than he thought. FIZCK! His pec beams fizzle out with three people still untouched by his power and five people charged up and almost ready to blow. One of the three pokes the elevator?s alarm buzzer as they rush to the front of the car and attempt to escape.

Chaz puffs out his cheeks and FWOOOSH! Unleashes a sharp gust of super breath, which OOSH! Sends the whole group flying THWUUD! Into the rear wall of the elevator car. BINGG! The elevator doors begin to close as WHIIRRR! Chaz?s super hearing picks up a faint metallic whirling sound. He looks up and notices a security camera mounted in the corner rotating to face the elevator bank instead of the hallway. VREEET! Twin beams of heat vision streak from Chaz?s eyes and FRABOOM! Destroy the camera. But, CLINGG! The elevator doors close. Chaz CHOOOM! Pounds his fist through the doors and catches the elevator car, stopping it halfway between floors. He forces it back down to the fifth floor and WRENNKT! Forces the damaged doors open.

Chaz is pissed that this has gone so wrong and some of his vapor has escaped up into the elevator shaft, he steps into the car, stands over his victims, pumps his pecs, and FRASHOOMPH! FRASHHOMMPH! FRASHOOPH! Manages to finish each one of them with an individual burst of green energy from his humongous pecs. WOOOO! Chaz inhales the vapors and feels the meal charge him up, but he needs more. Fuck that greedy Cody.

BING! BING! The damaged elevator beeps and shakes about as it attempts to continue on its journey. Chaz CHOOOM! Smashes his fist into its control panel and the car goes dark and silent.

Chaz steps out of the car and is confronted by a security guard coming down the hall.

?What?s going on down---? the guard doesn?t even get the question out before Chaz puckers his lips and FWOOOSH! A blast of his super breath OOOOOSH! Launches the guard 150 feet back down the hallway and THWUDD! Into a wall.

Chaz FRAASHOMPPH! Finishes the guard with a pec blast and WHOOO! Inhales the resulting vapor cloud.

Chaz races around outside the building, peering into the big windows of each apartment searching for potential victims.

He finds one. He glides up to a huge bedroom window where a muscular man is asleep in the bed, the only source of light in the huge bedroom is the moonlight that streams through the window. Chaz huge body blocks out the moonlight and casts a huge shadow as he floats in the air outside the room.

VRZZZZ! Chaz?s eyes glow a soft red and his heat vision silently melts a large, circular hole in the glass. As he floats into the room, Chaz hears the muscle stud breathing deeply in his sleep and catches the distinctive smell of sweaty sex lingering in the air. The air rushing in through the hole in the glass, chills the room and blows the sheets off the sleeping muscle jock. Chaz next to the bed as ?Wha?? the muscle man suddenly awakens and sits upright in bed.

Chaz SCHWAP! Slaps his hand on the dude?s chest and easily overpowers the muscle dude?s efforts to resist him as he pushes him back into prone position. Chaz feels the stud?s muscles straining against his powerful hand. The dude swings his fist toward Chaz, WOOSH! Chaz positions his body and his pecs to ?catch it? by using his advanced muscular control to slide the two muscle masses to the sides of his chest, opening up the deep valley between his pecs KRICCK! The blow lands between Chaz pecs and the dude feels his bones crack on impact as WHUMMP! Chaz?s pecs rush back into position and clamp down on the fist and forearm of the dude.

Chaz feels the hand clawing at his huge slabs of beef. Then he contracts his pecs, KERACKT! The sickening sound of the cracking of bone echoes within the room as Chaz feels the bones in the man?s hands crumble as his pecs tighten around them, crushing the bones in the hand and forearm to splinters. The man ?AAHHRG!? makes moaning sounds as he tries to pull free, but Chaz?s pecs are too powerful.

FZZZZZACKK! Chaz?s pecs glow green and HUMMM! HUMMMM! The dude cries out as green rings of energy flow out from Chaz?s pecs and down the dude?s arm, across the dude?s chest and over his ripped human body. FHOOMP! The dude explodes into a cloud of white vapor which WHOOO! Chaz quickly inhales, before the wind disperses it. This man was delicious, the muscular ones always have more to offer.

Next, Chaz approaches the bathroom door, inside, as Chaz previously noticed, is another huge man taking a shower and singing. The large bathroom is illuminated only by a collection of candles on the bathroom countertop. Chaz closes his mouth about half way, tips his head toward the burning candles, and OOOOOO! Inhales, sucking their air supply away and WOUSF! Instantly extinguishing them.

The bathroom goes completely dark. The man stops singing as Chaz pulls back the shower curtain and enters the large shower. It?s so big that it has three shower heads.

?HA! HA! Back for more, Rick. I thought you were too wiped out,? the showering dude chuckles as he reaches out for the shadowy figure of his lover.

Chaz feels the man?s hands embrace his huge body, feeling up the chiseled, swollen muscles. Suddenly, the man?s hands slow and start moving more tentatively across his body, Chaz, knowing he?s about to be made, leans in for a kiss, the man?s lips part. At the moment their lips touch, the muscular human realizes something is wrong, and PPFFFFSSTTT! Chaz confirms this for him by puffing a taste of his freeze breath into his ?lover?s? mouth and down his throat.

?ACKKK!? is all the man manages as he slumps into Chaz?s chest, overcome by the chill. His body slows, he looks up into Chaz?s face with pleading eyes in the darkness. He tries to speak, but only strange moaning sounds are produced. The man trembles and crumples to the shower floor and slides himself toward the shower curtain.

Chaz grabs one of the shower heads, aims its stream of water directly at his slow moving target, and then VZZZZZZ! Shoots his heat vision at the pipe leading from the wall into the shower head, heating the water to almost the boiling point. ?AAAOOOORRR!? The muscle stud cries as boiling hot water cascades over his body. He tries to move faster, but WHUMPP! Chaz?s foot slams down on his back, pressing him against the floor and holding him there as his skin burns, erupting in blisters. Mercifully, Chaz?s heat vision melts the metal pipe after about 40 seconds and the flow of water stops.

WRUMB! Chaz snatches the blistered man by both of his shoulders and stands him upright, propping his back against the shower wall. Chaz rolls and pumps his pecs as his power builds within them, causing them to glow green and illuminate the shower. The wounded human muscle stud gasps, despite the intense pain he is feeling, when he catches his first glimpse of the powerful body of his assailant. His mind has little time to grasp the situation, as WHUMPP! Chaz shoves his flat palm into the dude?s nice developed right pec and KARRASH! Blasts him through the shower?s tile, embedding him in the wall. Shards of tile cut into his backside and blood streams down the shower drain from the numerous cuts in his flesh.

Chaz stares coolly into the man?s eyes, he watches the spark of life begin to fade from this strong, muscular human. Of course, the fact that he is only human is his fatal flaw. Chaz taunts the man by making his pecs dance inches from his victim?s blood smeared face. THUMP! THUMP! They bounce on his chest, glowing green with his power. Suddenly, the two beach balls of muscle stop moving, swell up and SHOOOMF! Unleash the unstoppable green rays that ZZZZACCCKKT! Power into the terrified dude?s head, tear through the rest of his body and FOOMPH! Smoke him faster than a dead, dried out leaf in a bonfire.

Chaz puckers his lips and WOOOO! Draws in the nourishing white vapor cloud. Delicious!

Chaz washes the blood off himself, towels his powerful body off, and searches for some new clothes. He puts on some gym shorts, tennis shoes, and a short sleeve button down shirt, which he leaves unbuttoned, exposing his smooth, powerful pecs.

Chaz has an idea and makes his way down to the security office on the second floor of the building. Chaz notices a few security guards around as he scans the building. Yes, this building prides itself on being safe for its residents and tenants. Chaz can?t risk getting caught on one of the cameras, well he could, but then things could get complicated.

Chaz opens the door and a female guard beyond a thick Plexiglas partition greets him. Chaz sees two men in an office behind her about 30 feet away staring at a bank of security camera monitors. Their backs are to him, but if they turn around, they could see him. Chaz has to do this carefully. He leans into the circular vent in the Plexiglas that the woman speaks through and OOOOOOO! Inhales deeply sucking air into his mouth. The woman looks at him quizzically as she feels the suction force of Chaz?s powerful lungs drawing air into himself. She doesn?t immediately realize the danger, until she feels dizzy just before she passes out and THUMP! Slumps over on the counter.

Chaz WRENKT! Destroys the locking mechanism on the door, by pushing his index finger through it and enters the security office. The guys watching the monitors hear the door open and turn as SWOOSH! Chaz races into the room with the monitors. The dudes have no time to react, Chaz stands before them, opens his shirt and SHOOOMF! His beautiful, smooth pecs unleash a blaze of green light. ZZHRACCKT! The green energy pours into the two men as they spasm and gurgle until FHOOOMPH! The power of Chaz?s pecs reduces them to vapor, which WOOOO! Chaz inhales.

Chaz approaches the passed out female. Not much nourishment in this one, her body doesn?t have much muscle. He fondles her before SHRACCKK! Finishing her with a face full of pec power. FHOOMPH! The vapor cloud rises into the air and he SNIFSH! Snorts it up his nose.

He searches the office and super speed SWOOOSH! Becoming familiar with its controls and what not. As he goes through a pile of paperwork, he notices there is a retirement party scheduled for tonight for 65 guests in one of the building?s large convention rooms. Chaz flicks a few switches and shuts down the air conditioning and ventilation systems in that room as he brings it up on the bank of monitors. It?s packed full of folks, all seated, and listening to a man speaking on the stage at the front of the room. Chaz VREEET! Destroys the bank of monitors with his heat vision and rips out all the phone lines in the office before he heads to this room on the fourth floor.

Chaz approaches the closed, locked door to the room and is about to bust it open, when he is confronted by a handsome stud in a tuxedo.

?Can I help you?? he asks Chaz.

?Yes, I am here for the party,? Chaz responds.

The handsome dude gestures toward a table that contained the place cards for all the guests and it?s empty. Plus, the fact that Chaz is dressed in gym shorts, doesn?t help is case that he is a guest at a posh retirement party.

?I?m afraid all the guests have arrived,? the dude in the tux responds. ?Please leave before I am forced to call security.?

Chaz?s arm darts forward SWOOSH! And he grasps the stud by the throat ?URRRK!? the stud emits a gurgle before Chaz hand closes tightly around his neck and KRACKK! Crushes it. The dude goes limp and Chaz removes his clothing before FHROMMPH! Vaporizing him and WOOOO! Ingesting the vapor cloud.

Chaz, dressed in his new tux, RENKT! Pops open the door and enters the room. He closes the door and seals it shut by VREEET! Welding the door and the frame together with heat vision.

Chaz enters the room and heads straight to the kitchen doors, inside the catering staff is preparing to serve dinner. Chaz forms his lips into an oval shape as the puzzled members of the catering staff look him up and down and FAWOOOOSH! Unleashes a continuous stream of his freeze breath. The billowing cloud of frosty blue vapor drops the temperature of the kitchen by a couple hundred degrees, freezing the whole staff in place in seconds, as it turns their skin a frosty gray color while it freezes them to death.

Chaz, dressed in a tux just like the waiters, grabs a large serving tray and heads out into the dining room. There are seven tables of ten people all facing the front of the room and listening to the speaker. Chaz stands in the back of the room and FSSSSSTT! Puffs out a fine stream of green vapor, it settles over the room like a thin green fog working it?s way from the back to the front, with the dim lighting in the room, folks don?t detect it until it?s too late and they are under its mind numbing spell. FSSSSSSST! Chaz keeps puffing it out, he has to make certain every person?s mind is numbed and confused. He knows the time is right when the speaker stops talking and leans on the podium for balance. The people are so relaxed and calm, it?s like a high for them. Chaz isn?t sure how long it will last though, he has never used this power on such a large group and he?s not sure if his green vapor cloud was concentrated enough to hold them for long.

Chaz tests things out at one of the tables, he approaches and SHZZZZZ! Green beams from his eyes slam into the chest of one of the guests. FRAZZZ! The man gurgles as the other folks at the table stare blankly at him until FOOMPHH! The guy explodes in a cloud of vapor that SNIIFFF! Chaz snorts up his nose.

?Does anyone here need anything before we start serving dinner,? Chaz asks.

The guests mumble to themselves and their expressions remain blank and very relaxed. Even the man?s wife doesn?t react.

It?s time!

Chaz SHRRIIIP! Tears off the tux and floats into the air, hovering over the guests. His huge body is totally exposed and glowing as he tenses every muscle fiber and draws his power forth. He targets a table, his mammoth pecs heave, and FWRAASH! FRWASH! FRWASSH! Three pulses of green energy slam into the table and FROOMMPH! Vanquish the ten guests in a large cloud of white vapor. Chaz WOOOO! Inhales it quickly through his mouth and feels the nourishment course through his body.

The people at the second table stare up at the flying man, some laugh, some smile FWRASSH! FWRAASH! FRASSH! All die after three pulses of green energy consume their bodies and turn them into cloud of vapor. Chaz WOOO! Inhales again and feels his body converting the vapors to supremesterone. He feels his energy level rising.

Chaz floats higher over the guests and this time targets three tables FWRASSSH! FWRASSSH! FWRASSSH! Three broad pulses of energy blast into the three tables. KRAZZCK! The people are glowing green and moaning as they are charged up with Chaz?s power, but not enough energy to finish them. Chaz focuses and feels the supremesterone coursing into each and every muscle fiber in his pecs, making the two slabs of hot beef swell and expand, then SHOOMMPH! Instead of a pulse, a powerful wave of green energy shoots from Chaz?s pecs and swallows the three tables and their occupants FHOOOMPH! And continues on to KAFOOOSH! Blast through the floor and FHOOMPH! Smoke four members of the custodial staff who were playing cards in their office below.

Chaz WOOOOO! Opens his mouth wide and sucks in the energies from the 34 people. The supremesterone churns within him. The rush is incredible. He doesn?t know how much more he can take. KKRCCAZZK! KRRAZZZK! His flesh is covered with tendrils of green lightening which arc from one muscle to another. His entire massive body pulses and glows with green energy.

Chaz floats over to the remaining two tables and tenses his pecs. Some of the people have come out of their trance like state and scream. Chaz?s pecs heave and FRAZZZACKTT! FRAZZACKT! A tendril of green lightening, one from each of his nipples, slams into the center of each table. VVVZZZZZ! VZZZZZZZ! The table and people are illuminated with a green glow as Chaz?s power courses through them until KOOOOOMPHHHFFT! They explode with a thunderclap into clouds of white vapor. Chaz WOOOO! Inhales the white vapor and reels from the high of ingesting all of these people. It overwhelms him and he lands THWUDD! Hard on the floor. SHOOMMMPPPHHH! His body involuntarily releases a pulse of green energy that KAFOOOOSH! Blasts through the whole area, smoking the kitchen staff and the speaker.

Chaz SNIIFFFT! Inhales all of the resulting vapor and WOOOSH! KERASSSH! Flies off through the wall of the building to complete his mission. Chaz flies around the earth a few times slowly to allow his body an hour or so to digest his meal and bring his powers under control. Once that is complete, he flies off to complete his mission.

There was a report of cops staking out a Sphinx warehouse in the city. Chaz?s mission is to check on it and see what the cops are doing.

He flies over the city toward the warehouse, which is under surveillance. It?s at this warehouse complex where the Sphinx organization has been hoarding all of the loot it has stolen from the other crime gangs they have defeated and absorbed.

After a month and a half, the police are catching on.

Chaz spots the cops in their unmarked van about a block East of the warehouse. Inside the warehouse a lot of activity is going on as items are being sorted and processed. The cops are watching intently with binoculars.

Then from his position ? mile in the sky, Chaz spots a cop sneaking about the warehouse grounds, in street clothes of course.

Chaz VIIMP! Lands 20 yards from the cop and VREEET! Targets his radio with a beam of heat vision. FRAOOSH! The radio explodes, cutting the cop off from the surveillance van.

The cop is caught by surprise by the hot muscle stud.

?If you are looking for trouble, pig, you found it,? Chaz sneers as he flexes his huge biceps and grins.

BLAM! BLAM! The cop draws his weapon and shoots twice. Chaz FLIING! BAWING! Smirks as the bullets bounce harmlessly off his massive, muscular torso.

BLAMM! A bullet slams into the center of Chaz?s forehead and RINKT! Is reduced to a flat disk of metal that slides to the ground

The cop, who is about 27 or so and pretty built himself is stunned by the fact that the bullets have no affect on Chaz, but he?s not ready to give up. He rushes at Chaz with his baton, ready to strike, when SPOKK! Chaz, moving at super speed, drives his fist into the cop?s midsection. Chaz?s fist pierces the cop?s skin and tears through his abs. The cop drops his baton and the fight goes out of him, his body goes into shock. Chaz opens his fist and he grabs onto whatever body tissues he can inside the cop and then THHRWIPP! Chaz yanks the cop?s intestines out of the gaping hole in his stomach. The cop tumbles to the ground, and lays face up. His expression is one of horror and pain. Chaz THUUOUP! Drops the body organs on the ground and grins at the dying cop.

Chaz flexes his 20 inch right bicep and FROOSH! A beam of green energy streaks from the boulder of muscle and slams into the cop?s chest. The cop moans softly as Chaz?s energies fill him, causing the cop to glow a brighter and brighter green. After 25 seconds, FOOOSH! The cop explodes in a cloud of white vapor, which WOOOO! Chaz inhales.

Chaz WOOOSH! Flies over to the surveillance van and lands behind it. CRUCH! Chaz digs his hands into the back double doors of the van and RENKKOOM! Rips them right off their hinges.

A cop sits in a chair monitoring the controls in the back of the fan. VREEET! Chaz?s eyes explode with heat and VIIZRIPT! Chaz?s heat vision slices the cop in half at the waist. THUWMP! The two halves fall to the floor. The dead cop?s face is frozen in a blank stare.

The cop in the front jumps out of the van and comes around to the back with his gun drawn. Chaz SWOOOSH! Snatches him by the neck with one hand and hoists him a foot off the ground as he CRNCKT! Crushes the cop?s gun and hand with his other hand.

?AEEIIII-? the cop cries until THWAMM! Chaz slams the cop against the side of the van so hard it knocks him out and puts a huge dent in the van.

Chaz prepares to finish the cop. SHWAATHOOOOM! A huge beam of green energy shoots from the sky, engulfing the van, Chaz, and the cop. FHOOMP! The cop and van are vaporized instantaneously. Chaz struggles against the power which burns away his shorts and hurts so bad. CH-BOOOM! The street explodes out from under Chaz and he tumbles into the damaged sewers below the street.

?ARRGGHH!? Chaz cries before collapsing in a stream of sewer water, face up.

The beam stops, Chaz?s body crackles with green energy and it hurts. A massive figure floats down from the sky and hovers over Chaz. Chaz looks up and sees a huge, black haired man with piercing blue eyes, his gigantic pecs are glowing green and wisps of smoke billow from them. His body is a temple of supreme power.

The massive, tan figure speaks, ?I hope you liked that sample of my hot beef. You?re going to be a tasty meal. BWAH! HA! HAH!?

The huge muscle god?s pecs rise up on his chest and SHWAAAATHOOOOM! Unleash a second wave of unstoppable power that rushes toward Chaz??..
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Great Story, LegionXP

This story was well worth the wait, man, it may be your best story yet. Chaz and Cody are both incredibly powerful, but I bet we haven't even seen what they could do yet, the only thing I am against is the senseless slaughter of innocent people, but then again thats what makes this story as good as it is. I can't see it being the same without the slaughtering, I wish there was a way to see more strength feats without all the killing. But it was great Legion, keep it up. iceman75
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It's been said once before, but this section was worth the wait! Talk about something for everyone's taste, this section seems to have that and more. Chaz and Cody -- I can only imagine what these two muscled up frat boys look like! Great writing, bud. Looking forward to section seven.
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GReat work

The only thing which is missing is sending to be publsihed! I loved every and each word, great action and high-detailed scenes! This is really a classic!
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Can't wait to learn more about Gideon and the government, and these other collections of superdudes. Hopefully, so real big battles are coming up soon.
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Hey buddy, awesome new installment. Can't wait to see what Hammer is planning next. Your descriptions are awesome and the ideas you come up with to torment and humiliate the powerdudes are awesome. Keep up the great work and you can bet i'll keep reading.
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Great stuff! I'll say it too: Well worth the wait!
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Another excellent installment! Chaz and Cody (and Cole) are all pretty hot, and I loved it when Chas ripped off his tux too...
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Fantastic story. Especially liked all the pec stuff -- the descriptions and using them as weapons. But who is this new muscle god that's just disabled Chaz? Are we going to see muscle vs muscle, and pec vs pec between him and the guys?

Can't wait for the next installment. Keep it up!
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Not a new character

The character that fought Chaz at the end isn't a new character, but one we haven't seen for a while, I won't reveal to you who it is, but one of the other responders already said the name. I talked to Legion yesterday, so I already know who it is, can you guess it?
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Wow . . . another fantastic chapter in it . . . . . and a damm long one too! Keep it going but maybe don't take so long to post next time! (( only joking, you've explained to me why already ))

Speak to you soon!
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Wow... that was a lot of fun from start to finish! Really got my imagination going, especially with Cody and Chaz wreaking havoc everywhere they went.

Here's a bunch of new images I made for this chapter, and I hope to have a couple more done soon.
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Another great chapter in the ongoing saga.

The destruction by those two super-teens seemed to go on forever, but I think they might have come up against someone too much for them to handle.

Loved the section with Agent Cole or "Cube" can't wait to see him start enforcing the law.. the HARD way!

Keep up the hard work.
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Having had a little time to process all this, I have to say the story just keeps getting better. As for what happens with Chaz, Cody and You-Know-Whom, I think it'll be kind of fun to be in suspense for a while!

After all, part of the fun of reading serialised stories is trying to guess what happens next!
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Brilliantly evil, I love it!
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Hey Legion!

Just finished reading part 6, and I must say you have managed to out do youself once again! With every chapter you take the plot line to a whole other level!

I think you need to change the title from Wild Boys to Wild Muscle Monsters! The description of events are fucking hot!

I'm was hoping that you would bring back Hammer! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee bring him back in the next chapter! Also if he can make a slight detour north to wreck some havock on my home town of Toronto that would be hot!

Maybe a future battle between Mr.Perfection and Hammer can take place over Niagara Falls? Imagine the possibilities with the rushing water and the bridges?

I really enjoyed the new characters Chez and Cody! Also what happens with Rex and Frank?

Also, I'm really curious about this Gideon character you have been dropping hints about. When is he going to make an appearance? How much longer until World War III breaks out?

Anywho, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to reading chapter 7!

Keep it pumping!

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Thanks Everyone

Part Seven is coming along and it looks to be another long one.

Rex and Frank have not been forgotten, trust me.

Again, this next chapter will really advance the plot, as well as include lots of action.

I hope to have it ready near the end of this month.

I also have at least one new illustration that a special artist did for me. Someone whose work I bet you have all seen before..........

Thanks for all the feedback and chatting, it's good stuff.

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Although this story is unquestionably well-written, I am becoming increasingly uneasy concerning the level of violence depicted in the plot. Almost every chapter in this story depicts multiple instances, not only of fighting and sheer physical violence, but of unadulterated murder, and, increasingly, of what seems to me to be senseless, unjustifiable mass slaughter. It reminds me of those infamous words of Lord Acton: "Power corrupts, and absolute power corrupts absolutely."

While I am well aware that many of the stories in this archive contain violence in some form, the scale on which it is depicted in this story is exceptional, and I feel compelled to voice my concern. While I realize that this is an adult forum, in the case of this story thread, I can't help wondering, to quote Captain Kirk from one the original Star Trek episodes, "Where do we go from up?" I don't want to sound like a censor, but I'm beginning to wonder if this story line hasn't already gone too far in terms of the violence involved. I therefore respectfully ask the author to at least consider toning down the violence to some extent. Otherwise, I for one will simply have to stop reading it, and perhaps even consider leaving this forum altogether. I have enjoyed reading many of the stories here, and I would hate to have to consider taking such a drastic step, but if stories this violent continue to crop up here, I may have no choice. Scoff if you choose, but I believe that the old computer proverb, "Garbage in, garbage out," applies just as much to the human mind and character as it does to a computer program, and I have no desire to take that kind of risk. Food for thought, folks!
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While I certainly can understand and respect disliking violent acts, the violence in this series is as realistic as Wile E. Coyote falling off a cliff.

Remember too, that the characters in this story see themselves (and, in that world, are) as above humans. To them, killing humans would be like humans killing animals. And compare the "feeding" sequences here with those in any vampire movie. No muss. No fuss. Flex the pecs, vaporise and inhale!

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I see an opportunity in the violence of this series that may unfortunately make it heavier than the author might want the story to be. It'd be intriguing to see what kinds of consequences powers like these have on the human psyche, y'know, really digging into these characters to see what made them the pumped up, merciless muscle machines they are today. Or not. I'm not the one making this and I could definitely see how it could skew the story in a direction that would be less entertaining. Just pointing out that violence can take on a deeper meaning in a story like this.
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My first glance at this story when it began told me it was gratuitous violence I've read all the subsequent chapters (sort of) but simply verified that "yup, I was right". Humanity is (perhaps deservedly) degraded, but there is nothing better in the story to replace it. No redeeming social value, just pure arrogance.

No I didn't have to read it nor do I have to comment on it but I did and I am. Way too long, another endless series of Bob, Joe, Billy, Alan, Greg, Jimmy, Tony, ... confrontations. I'd be more impressed if they were in alphabetical order. At least it would show some structure.

Nope, not my cup of tea. But hey, whatever floats your boat...
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Not everyones taste can be cattered for, some may argue there is too much violence, others could see it as tame. But at the end of the day you have to appriciate the amount of time and effort put into writting one of these stories, nevermind six whole chapters of it.

Legionxp welcomes constructive critiscim from when I've been speaking to him, so post suggestions in this thread. Not just, you don't like this bit, but what you may do instead . . . .any ideas, no matter how far out would be welcome I'm sure.

Final note, we are presented with images of violence, death, rape day in and day out on the tv, newspapers etc. This is only a story, it is not real and if you were that concerned about it . . . don't read it.
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The important word to remember here is fantasy. Whatever your opinions regarding the depiction of violence may be, no one is actually being hurt, and I'm sure neither the author nor the readers are harbouring any meglamaniac psycopathic tendencies. From the comments I have seen so far many people, myself included, have been enjoying this series. I don't enjoy all the stories that are posted on here and I wouldn't expect anyone else to either, we all have different tastes and the variety in the posting reflects that. If you think you might be offended by the violence, don't read the story. We're surrounded by violent imagery in the media every day. This is an adult board that deals with adult themes. Hopefully we can focus on the stuff on here we do like, ignore the stuff we don't, everyones happy and we all enjoy it.
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Even beyond fantasy, for me the appeal of this story is its comic book-like quality. While there is a recent trend in comic books for character development, that was hardly always the case. It was smash, boom, bang for a very long time with the moral message that good (for some value of "good") beat evil (for some value of "evil").

The moral message of this story (so far) is that absolute power corrupts. The good guys who eschew power fall victim to the bad guys who seek out that power for themselves. Granted that there are a ton of characters, and the writer has chosen to focus on the use of that power for (personal) gain, but I'm not sure that is necessarily a bad choice for the genre this author has chosen to write in.

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If you end up trying to make everyone happy, no one is made happy. At least LegionXP found a niche and people enjoy it.
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just finished a preview of part 7...it just keeps getting better...
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Part 7 Up

For those of you who subscribe to this thread, Part 7 is coming up in 5 minutes.

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It's about 12 pages.
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