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View Poll Results: What did you think of my story?
Freakin Awesome can't wait for the next one! 60 62.50%
Not bad for your first story. 34 35.42%
Needs a few changes. 2 2.08%
End this story line and start a new one cause this ones a dead end!!! 0 0%
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Old December 9th, 2007, 08:20 PM
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Chris Part 1

[COLOR=white]If you have any questions or comments you can email me at [/COLOR][COLOR=white][email protected][/COLOR]


[COLOR=white]This is my first story so please tell me what you think![/COLOR]


[COLOR=white]Chris was an 18-year old behemoth of muscle. When people asked him if he took steroids he would tell them ?Nope I?m 100% natural?. What was natural for Chris wasn?t natural for most people.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]When Chris was a 15-year old teenager in high school he was the all around jock. He played every sport possible. Yet what he wanted most of all was to be the biggest kid in the school, or so he told his friends, but he fantasized quite often about being the biggest muscle monster in the world. Chris would work out constantly trying to build his muscles and he would see progress just not as fast as he wanted. Also no one knew that Chris was gay. He had never told anyone but after a football weightlifting session he would always stare at the other guys in the shower. Then after they would leave he would keep the image of their rippling soaped muscles in his head and jack-off to it and one day while jacking off he wondered what his cum would taste like. So when Chris erupted he aimed for his mouth and his first shot made it in. He liked the taste of it and so he wiped some off of his smooth torso and sucked it off his fingers.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]After Chris finished washing up he headed back to his locker to change into some clean clothes. Now Chris wasn?t very popular and didn?t have many friends, but as he was opening his locker he noticed Eric, his lifting partners enormous package in his jock. He could see the outline of his penis and could tell that it had to at least be 9 inches. He didn?t get much of a glance as Eric pulled up his pants over his delicious bubble butt and walked out without a shirt. Who would want to cover those gorgeous mounds of pec meat anyways? [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]After Eric had left Chris put on a clean jock and began to pull up his pants and realized that they fit a little tighter than usual. So Chris took off his pants and slipped on a pair of sweats and put on a clean polo. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]As Chris left he took one good look at Eric?s sweaty Torso while he was playing basketball with the other seniors in the school gymnasium. Seeing those sweaty pecs was enough to give Chris a full-fledged boner right there in the middle of the gym. But Chris didn?t have to worry about much to hide because compared to Eric?s 9 incher his was only six but still Chris walked out of the gym as fast as he could. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Once in his mustang Chris just sat and rubbed himself for a little bit and he reached his hand up and pinched his nipples, as he released moans of ecstasy. Hornier then Hell Chris decided to drive home and jack off in his room. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Chris only lived a couple of blocks away from the school so he sped into the driveway and went to his room. But Chris didn?t just have any kind of room he had the whole basement of the house to himself. He had put a huge gym together in his basement with an awesome stereo system and a big screen TV. He also had a refrigerator and bathroom with a nice walk in shower. The good thing was that Chris?s brother was away for college, his mom was never home and his dad divorced his mom a while ago so he had all the time in the world to do whatever he wanted. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]There was only one thing that Chris really wanted to do right now and that was relieve his raging hard-on. Once in his room Chris flexed in the mirror and gave himself a bit of a show.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]These were Chris?s stats as of today:[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Biceps ? 16in.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Chest ? 38in.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Waist ? 33in.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Quads ? 28in.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Calves ? 14in.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Weight ? 175lbs[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]As Chris flexed he could swear that he looked bigger. ?Fuck yeah? Chris said as he flexed his biceps into their peaks. Chris slowly peeled his shirt off and then flexed his pecs. ?Holy shit I actually have fucking mounds.? Chris couldn?t believe that the work in the gym had finally paid off. As Chris flexed he noticed the tip of his dick was twinkling with precum at the top of his sweats. Chris took his finger and dabbed the precum on the tip of his dick, ?If my cum tasted that good, I could only imagine what this could taste like.? So Chris slowly put his finger to his lips stuck out his tongue and licked the tip of his finger. ?Oh my fuckin god!! That?s fucking delicious.?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Chris threw off his sweats and slowly began to jerk himself and every time precum would ooze out he would smear it onto his finger and put it in his mouth and savor the sweet taste keeping his eyes closed the entire time. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]When Chris finally opened his eyes after jacking for a while and eating his precum he looked at the clock, ?Oh my god it has already been 30 minutes.? Chris obviously hadn?t gotten all of his precum because his jock and ball-sac were dripping with precum. [/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]Chris was exhausted so he decided to lie down and finish jacking off. As Chris got into his bed he pulled off his jock and laid on top of the covers. But as he laid down he noticed something strange his Dick came up to his belly button. He couldn?t believe his eyes so he grabbed his tape measure on his night stand and put up next to his dick. ?Holy shit 7 fuckin inches!!! I grew 7 inches in thirty minutes and not only that but my nuts are huge they?re like the size of plums.? So Chris thought about how that was possible and it came to him that he had been eating his precum for the last 30 minutes. So he made the connection that his precum had made his dick and balls grow.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=white]That got Chris more excited than anything and it brought him to climax almost instantly. As he came he positioned himself over his cock so he could catch all of his man juice this time. Chris moaned in ecstasy as he came over and over again and nearly choked when he was swallowing. He nearly swallowed a liter of cum before he finished his climax. He then squeezed the last of his jizz out of the tip of his cock, put it on his finger and licked it up. After finishing up he pulled the covers up over him and couldn?t wait for the morning to try out some more precum.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=white]Part 2 Coming Soon[/COLOR]

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Old December 9th, 2007, 11:20 PM
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hot man, excited for the next part
don't hold back on giving us descriptions, though; always remember "show don't tell"
anyway, don't keep us waiting too long ;p
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Old December 10th, 2007, 10:38 AM
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good, hot, very hot. sex induced growth is one of my favs. please, continue it.
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Old December 11th, 2007, 09:21 PM
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Personally, i don't agree with the "show don't tell"rule.


It's great for a novel, but in a short story imo, you've only got so much space, know whuddah mean?
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GREAT start to the story. However, I'd find it MUCH hotter if you told it in the First Person...as if you (the writer) were Chris. The story & details seem much more abstract the way you've written it. But it's a GREAT story line!
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how soon lol
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Keep it up!

Great start! Just keep up the momentum. I'm looking forward to the next part.
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updates soon?

hopefully we'll get to see this hot little story continued soon? A friend just reminded me of it; I saw it'd been almost a month so... *bump!*
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Old March 19th, 2008, 06:00 PM
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Sorry it has been so long but i have been really busy. But i am putting together part two as of today. I finally have some much needed time to work on it. Thanks to everyone who has commented i highly regard your criticism and i am taking into reagrd for the next part. Looking forward to posting part 2.

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The story is in unreadable black text, isn't it?
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Old March 20th, 2008, 06:04 PM
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well thank you for letting me know i had posted it before the site changed its layout and i didn't even think about changing the text.
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Old March 20th, 2008, 08:36 PM
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Whoa, very hot! I love me some muscle growth, but I also appreciate cock growth as well, and this story is starting out very hot. Keep it up!
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