Get in the Game, 2.0

[Speaker]

[COLOR=#000000]OK! Don?t get used to me writing stories this often, but here goes. I felt a bit of inspiration and I guess I almost had to write this one. Hope you enjoy this installment of my Get in the Game stories. Just as a note, since I posted my last Get in the Game story so long ago, don?t expect this one to tie in with the other ones. This is a sort of independent story in that universe.[/COLOR]



[COLOR=#000000]Dan waited excitedly for the delivery. He?d heard about the newest game from EA, the one which actually built muscle, but he?d never believed it at the time it was available. He?d never believed it, until he saw people transform overnight from skinny nerds to burly uber-jocks. By the time he believed it could work, and the time he went out to try to buy it, it was already on recall. Stores were banned from selling it and EA had lost millions of dollars to lawsuits by parents who didn?t want children who didn?t care about grades or being smart. Most parents didn?t want kids who were hugely muscular and cared only about their bodies and sports. And most parents didn?t want kids who were gay.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]That was no problem for Dan. He wasn?t gay but he was bi and he had enough trouble finding girls to look at him, let alone go out with him. He had the same trouble with guys, and if the game fixed the problem for at least one of these, he would have no problem with it.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]That still left the game difficult to find. No new copies were being made and you couldn?t find it in stores. EBay on the other hand?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Since the game?s effects were permanent, many kids who had already experienced it were putting their games on EBay so that other kids could experience it. Of course, some rich, righteous people were going on EBay and buying the game so that they could destroy it and it would no longer be able to affect people. The numbers of the game were decreasing rapidly, which had led to even more developments.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Bootleggers who saw the demand for the game made their own versions of the game and sold them on EBay for high prices. Most of these were fake, just a way for these people to get money, but some did work, sometimes even better than the original ever did. He?d heard good things about one in particular from a guy who was nicknamed JackedHax300. It was supposed to be better, more in-depth, and more realistic than the original was. It also was one of the cheaper versions, although still kind of expensive at $100. That was only $50 more than the game had originally cost anyways, which wasn?t bad given the demand that it was in. Dan had decided it was worth it, if it was indeed of higher quality.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Unfortunately the delivery time was roughly 2 weeks and he had opted to not pay the rush transport fee, as he was already straining his budget buying the game in the first place.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]So here Dan was, forced to endure two weeks as a scrawny nerd who had trouble doing more than 5 push-ups. Forced to endure the taunting of guys who had already played the game, or were naturally muscular. Forced to endure two weeks of anticipation for the day the game arrived.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]And dearly hoping that it would work, while deep inside him, a part of him was afraid that it would.[/COLOR]




[COLOR=#000000]Dan got home from another dreary day at school where nothing had happened out of the ordinary. Another day of drooling at jocks and pretending you never so much as looked at them to avoid retaliation. Sure, he?d gotten shoved into a locker a few times but he took it all in stride. It was high school, these things happened.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He was excited however to find a note on the kitchen counter when he got home:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan,[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]I?m out shopping and Dad?s going to be home late. Cook yourself dinner if you?re hungry. You got a package; it?s on your desk.[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Mom.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Thrilled, Dan sprinted up to his room to find a large cardboard box sitting on his desk. With glee he immediately began opening it, pulling out the game disc, which appeared to be the only non-official piece of hardware. It was a blank CD which apparently had the game burned on to it, with several additions. There also were several straps which he had heard attached to a person?s arms and legs as they played the game. The visor he had heard about was there too, and it looked just as retarded as people had told him about.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Putting on the straps and visor eagerly, he inserted the disc. After a brief load, the game came up: Bodycreator 101. This was unusual, as the original game had been called Bodybuilding 101. Shrugging, Dan continued.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He was asked his name, age, race, gender, and unusually, sexual orientation and penis length. He was slightly disturbed by this, but he took it all in stride. His information screen looked somewhat like:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Name: Daniel Mason[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Age: 17[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Race: Caucasian (white)[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Gender: Male[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Sexual orientation: Bisexual[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Penis length: 5?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]A ?Thank You? screen appeared, and Dan grew deeply impressed at whoever recreated this game. He?d never played the original, but from what people had told him about it (when they weren?t beating on him for being a nerd) it had not included several of these options. To recreate the game so well while adding things onto it without causing damage was certainly an act of legend for one man to do.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]After a brief load, another screen popped up asking more questions to input. Frowning slightly he continued to acknowledge the game?s demands.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Body type: Non-athletic[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Height: 5?7?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Hair color: Brown[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Eye color: Brown[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Weight: 115[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan didn?t know what the game was up to. He?d heard that the game oddly knew what a person looked like almost exactly from their name, age and weight, so he wondered why the game needed these additional inputs.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Finally the game popped another ?Thank You? at him and he smiled as the virtual gym appeared. He moved his character over to a mirror and smiled when his reflection gazed back at him. This version needed additional input but its results were the same.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]A listing appeared in front of him:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]What body type do you desire?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]BODYBUILDER[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]WRESTLER
SWIMMER
FOOTBALL PLAYER
etc.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]This was all as expected as well and Dan had decided long ago that he knew what he wanted. He was only able to select three; apparently it would merge the body types he selected together into what he truly wanted. His selections were fairly simple:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Primary Choice: Bodybuilder[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Secondary Choice 1: Model[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Secondary Choice 2: Wrestler[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]The game popped up another annoyingly cheerful ?Thank You? sign, which was quickly followed by a ?Please Wait? sign.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]After a brief wait he appeared in the virtual gym once again. An arrow pointed towards the squat rack which he guessed the game wanted him to do. He felt butterflies in his stomach as he walked towards the rack, knowing what it would do to him; knowing that from this moment on, he would no longer be Dan the nerd, but Dan the MAN![/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]It was surprisingly easy to do. All he had to do was pretend he was holding the squat bar and bend his legs obediently. His visor showed him squatting a few hundred pounds, but Dan of course felt nothing. It was all virtual. Yet, at the same time, it was real. He finished a set and was led onwards. Nothing appeared to be out of the ordinary. He was led by the little arrows to his next exercises, from leg extensions, to curls. From lat pulldowns, to the bench press. The exercise he was most waiting for however were crunches, because he knew he would feel himself getting stronger. He sat on the floor and began doing crunches. It seemed really hard, until it became easy. This is when he felt himself really getting anxious. This was proof that it was really happening to him![/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]However, another anomaly occurred next. He had heard that the game thanked him for playing and then shut off. It did not do so. Instead, it displayed a RESULTS chart.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]RESULTS:[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Name: Daniel Mason[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Age: 22[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Race: Caucasian (white)[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Gender: Male[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Sexual Orientation: Homosexual[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Penis length: 9?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Body Type: Extreme Athletic[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Height: 5?11?[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Hair Color: Brown[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Eye Color: Brown[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Weight: 230[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan felt jittery as he saw his results. He?d gone from a 17 year old skinny nerd to a 22 year old 230lb man! He stared at the virtual picture of himself in the mirror, which showed (accurately, considering today?s graphics) a huge stud on the mirror. Thick pecs shoved outwards from his V-shaped torso. His abs were an 8-pack of steel. Due probably to the fact that he had selected Model as a potential growth type, he had no body hair. He probably shaved it. His thick legs looked like they could squat half a ton without any difficulty, and his calves were ripped and incredibly beautiful. His cock was indescribable. 9 inches of glory, and pretty thick too. His face had matured. Once again, due likely to picking model, his face had become incredibly sexy, with brilliantly white teeth, a melt-your-heart smile, a square jaw which had a rugged beauty to it. He had an incredible tan, his brown hair was cut short, and brown eyes sparkled out of the mirror. He was a beautiful, sexy muscleman. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]An unusual thing, though, was that everything up on the list had a drop-down menu. Out of curiosity he clicked on hair color. A drop-down menu appeared with a list:

Hair Color:
Brown[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Black[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Blond[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Red[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Mix: (Insert Colors here)[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Other: (Insert Color here)[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan, bemused, picked blond. He felt a brief tickle in the back of his skull. Looking back at the mirror he gasped as he watched his hair turn yellow. A query popped up.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Style: ?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He typed in ?long and curly.? Immediately he watched his hair grow longer and longer, until it touched his neck, curling as it did so. The blond hair and deep tan gave the impression of a surfer on steroids? and who had been on steroids for a very, very long time. Another query popped up.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Body hair: ?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan started growing gleeful again. This version of the game was far more advanced than the original. He could fully customize his appearance with this, unlike previous versions which simply applied a pre-created template to a person?s natural genetics, which is why previous users were stuck with whatever hair color, or eye color, or amount of body hair they were born with. Not this version.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He typed in ?none? for now, as he did intend to be a bodybuilder and model. It was probably better that he would never need to shave his hair than to try to do it for competitions or photo shoots. The best part was that he could change it later if he changed his mind. The game gave him complete control over his body.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He almost immediately considered sending his parents? credit card to whoever created this version of the game. Whoever had created it certainly was incredibly talented and deserved something for giving people complete control over their own bodies. He almost immediately decided against it. If he rewarded the guy, it would be with his own money, not money stolen from his parents.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan grinned and muttered to himself, ?Lets see what I like.? His smile broadened as he heard his new, deep, tough voice for the first time.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He pressed the Race button. This time, no drop-down menu appeared. Instead, a listing appeared with:

Race primary:[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Race secondary 1 (opt.):[/COLOR]
[COLOR=#000000]Race secondary 2 (opt.):[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Well, Dan thought, he?d always had a thing for Italian stallions. He quickly typed into the game a single option:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Race primary: Italian[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He left the other options blank. He also adjusted his hair color to black and his eye color to green while he was doing so. He looked over to the reflection and smiled at the stud which stared back at him. Short black hair crowned a face with olive colored skin and bright green eyes. This was even sexier than before![/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]This is definitely a keeper. Dan thought to himself.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Going back to the other options he dragged the options for weight from 230 to 280lbs. As he did though, a warning popped up:[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Warning! Exceeding weight of 255 while maintaining current height will result in removal of the Model base from your current body template due to inconsistencies. Proceed?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan frowned. Apparently, if he increased his weight too much without increasing his height, he?d become too big to retain Model status, and he didn?t know what losing that would do to his beautiful Italian looks. He decided not to risk it and left it at 255, watching his body swell on the screen, as his arms grew from 19? to 20? Any bigger and he would be more bodybuilder than model. He figured he?d try that out later.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He tried cock size next. When he successfully transformed his cock from 9? to 30? he deduced that there were no limitations on the size of that even while being a bodybuilder and wrestler. There certainly was no limit on cock size for a gay male model! He decided not to be too obscene and left it at 12?. Then, seeing nothing left to change, exited the game. Before he could do so, however, another query popped up.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Make alterations permanent? Yes No[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan selected No, in case he wanted to change his appearance again later.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Make changes to environment? Yes No[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan selected Yes, although he really didn?t know what it was asking for.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Make changes to self to match environment and previous selections?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan selected yes again. No more queries popped up and he reached up to take off the visor. Before he could do so, a brief flash of heat froze his body and prevented him from doing so. After a moment, he could move again and removed the visor from his body. Looking down, he saw what he?d seen in the game but better. It was real this time. The huge pecs, the gigantic 20? pythons that were apparently arms, the thick and meaty cock which hung from his shaven crotch limply. It was so huge he could actually feel its weight pulling on him a little, although his body was more than powerful enough to resist it indefinitely. His thighs were pillars of power, supporting his thick, meaty body above. One of his hands, rough and calloused, began massaging his pecs, rubbing them. Feeling their power. He grunted as he suddenly punched himself in his stomach. He didn?t feel a thing. He wasn?t even flexing his abs and they were nigh-indestructible. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He looked up and blinked. He wasn?t in his room anymore. It looked like an apartment, although a pretty nice one. He had a bedroom, where his computer was as well, a kitchen, a room with a TV, and what appeared to be a full home gym set. Posters of famous bodybuilders adorned the walls, several of them autographed, along with several posters of wrestlers in college. A magazine article was clipped out and taped to the wall, which Dan noted, featured himself as college wrestler of the year. That had been a year ago though, and Dan expected to win the honor again this year.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He blinked again. How did he know that? There was no date on the article. And yet he somehow knew that it had been last year?s article, when he was a junior. It had been his crowning moment, getting his wrestling magazine and seeing a picture of himself wearing only a singlet staring back at himself cockily, muscles tensed and ready to go. He had only gotten better since then and expected to win again this year. He was, after all, undefeated since halfway through his sophomore year at Ohio State.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Wait what? How do I know all this? Dan thought briefly to himself before delving once again into his new memories. His memory of getting a wrestling scholarship to Ohio State, which he never would have gotten into with his grades alone. And it had been a full ride too! He remembered his first time on the webcam, flexing for an audience on the internet. He remembered his first bodybuilding contest when he was only 17, winning Mr. Teen Virginia, and being on stage with Jay Cutler who had guest posed for the competition. He remembered making a lot of money at gay bars and with his webcam (which had a steady following by now), loving the attention, and occasionally, taking home someone to fuck.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Oh yes he remembered now: He was Dan Mason: Muscle fucker. Of course he didn?t go by that name online. To the losers who paid $15 a month to watch him flex his muscles and jerk off, he was Sean Steel (an incredibly generic name to keep people guessing). People who really cared could find out his identity pretty easily, but most people were content to jerk off to him and then leave him alone.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He was a senior at Ohio State, but he was only at the school to wrestle. He only went to class whenever there was a test and even then only half the time. He never studied, he never cared, because he had the body to do whatever the fuck he wanted to anyways. He could make an easy enough living flexing in front of some camera, which in fact, he was doing.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Oddly enough, he still remembered having the game, but he never remembered using it. It really didn?t make sense that he remembered buying a game to build muscle, but never having used it, but to him it did. He never really cared to think about it.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He grinned to himself, before pulling on a pair of posing trunks and walking into his gym and turning on the webcam.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Hey fuckers.? He greeted them, sitting down at one of the bench presses. ?Hope ya like tonight?s guns show. It?s arms today bitches.? He flexed his massive arms, the 20? peaks rising gloriously.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan continued with his nightly show for about 15 minutes, before shutting down the webcam.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He smiled to himself briefly before someone knocked at his door.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Who the fuck would it be at midnight? He thought to himself while he swaggered to the door, not bothering to change out of his posing trunks. He didn?t care that the bulge he was displaying would probably kill anyone over 80 who saw it from a heart attack. He didn?t give a fuck if people saw it. He loved it when people stared at him for being huge, muscular and hung like the Italian stallion he was.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]He opened the door only to gape (an expression not often seen on his face). The man in the doorway was huge, at least 50lbs heavier and 3? taller than Dan was. Dan was a huge male model/bodybuilder. This guy was nothing but bodybuilder. He was huge, and ripped, with a distended 8-pack which showed the guy was obviously on ?roids. Most unusually though, Dan had no idea who he was. Dan was pretty familiar with the professional bodybuilders around today but this guy rang no bells in Dan?s head.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Mind if I come in?? The man asked Dan. His voice was deep and gravelly, like Dan?s but taken to an extreme where it almost hurt to listen to it.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Uh sure?? Dan muttered.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Thanks Dan.? The man said, smiling[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?How the fuck do you know my name?? Dan asked[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You?re pretty famous around here. The Italian stallion, as you call yourself. Your prowess at sex is almost legendary at gay bars around here.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You noticed?? Dan replied dryly, gesturing at his meaty bulge.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah, well? check out mine.? The man pulled down his pants, where he too was wearing a pair of posing trunks which were so huge they looked like they had to be specially ordered to contain the bulge the man possessed without bursting.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Fuck! How long is that thing?!? [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?15 inches! And thicker than most men?s wrists.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Jesus Christ! Who the fuck are you!??[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You wouldn?t know my name, but I?m sometimes known as JackedHax300. I recreated the game and sent it to you. And it appears that you didn?t use its full potential like I did.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You made that? But I never used it!?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You don?t remember using it, but you did. That?s how you got your size in the first place you know??[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Shit.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Yeah.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan stared at the huge man, the legendary hacker, and suddenly realized the appropriateness of the guy?s alias. Jacked Hacker 300lbs. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?What do you want with me?? Dan asked[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Well you?re the first person to use my creation after myself. I wanted to see how you liked it and how it worked. It seems to have worked like I planned it to.? The man replied[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?But I saw a whole bunch of people saying your product was the best! That?s why I got it in the first place, though I?m pretty sure I never used it.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Yes you did, and I put those recommendations up myself. I?ve got a lot of screennames. I hoped people would believe it, but you?re the first one who did. I have to say, I was rather disappointed that you didn?t use rush delivery. I really wanted to see how it worked fast.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Oh? sorry I guess??[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?It?s no problem now.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?So? what do we do now?? Dan asked[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?What the fuck do you think we do now??[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?I?m guessing you want to be on top??[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Hell yeah.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?You know, this?ll be my first time on the bottom. I?m usually so much bigger than the people I fuck.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Actually this will be your first time having sex ever, although you think that you?ve done it hundreds of times before.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]?Whatever dude.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan bent over and presented his bubble-butt to the man, who?s name Dan still didn?t know. He felt a massive cockhead rubbing against his ass, lubing him up with an incredible amount of precum. Then, suddenly, the dick rammed up his ass. Dan gritted his teeth and moaned with a mixture of pain and incredible pleasure. Then, slowly, the huge cock began to withdraw before it shoved in again, harder. Dan cried out this time, softly as the pleasure grew more. Before long, the man?s thick meat was pounding away at Dan?s huge ass. Dan was in ecstasy. He doubted that it would feel so incredible if the guy fucking him didn?t have a FUCKING 15 INCH TOOL, but he definitely decided he needed to be more open to letting people fuck him if it felt this good. It didn?t take long before the man roared with pleasure and what felt like a tidal wave of hot cum flooded Dan?s insides. Dan roared too as his own dick started spewing his man-juices across the floor. Dan was shooting cum for at least 3 minutes; the man fucking him lasted at least two more than that. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan felt the slimy meat slide out of his ass and straightened up. He felt the man?s cum start to flow back out his ass. It felt like he?d shot a gallon into Dan.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]The man grinned, ?Now that we know each other? what say we have a bit more fun with my game.?[/COLOR]

[COLOR=#000000]Dan grinned too. He knew what his first action was going to be. He?d decided that this man needed his own turn getting fucked by a 15? cock![/COLOR]




[COLOR=#000000]OK! The usual: Love it, hate it, TELL ME! Despite what I've been told about sex scenes being non-essential, they're damn hot to read and write. Hope you like![/COLOR]

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by Speaker

[COLOR=#000000]OK! The usual: Love it, hate it, TELL ME! Despite what I've been told about sex scenes being non-essential, they're damn hot to read and write. Hope you like![/COLOR]

It's not that they're non-essential at all. I was simply saying that if it's not there, I'm fine with it, I love a sex scene as much as the next member here.

[Speaker]

Sry MM I didnt mean to imply that...

I understood what ya meant when you told me that sex scenes enhance the story but don't MAKE the story. It's a good lesson, and one i needed to learn.

Thanks MM, you're one of the guys i look to most for writing tips

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by Speaker

Sry MM I didnt mean to imply that...

I understood what ya meant when you told me that sex scenes enhance the story but don't MAKE the story. It's a good lesson, and one i needed to learn.

Thanks MM, you're one of the guys i look to most for writing tips

That's fine.

Yep, enhance. But that don't mean there haven't been any stories here where sex is the story (aka, fuck growth ).

Look to me? That's so, darn, SWEET of you! *blushes such a deep shade of red my face stays that way*

[chocomus]

Mmmm.... Where did you say I can find that game?
I love it! I'd like to have a game like that. even a virtual game like that would be enough, just to feel what's like to have a huge body.

The story was hot.

[arpeejay]

More please, and soon! It was great!

xoxo

Richard

[niemand63]

Awesome story! Hope to see more soon!

[growinmuscl]

Great story, keep up the good work. I look forward to continuation.... where do I get my copy of the game?

[viamanmax]

This is quality.

[bossfo]

hint hint... more

[fillups44]

This is a really fun idea. I know you said not to expect any sequels but with the game still functioning and the two guys trying out variations on each other there could be a really fun sexy sequel---especially if Jacked Hacker has some ulterior motives for why he created the game and how it might function on the main character.

Either way this was totally fun and well done.

Thanks for the hard work!!

[tagsnola]

We are in the Matrix!

[rextorres]

Pretty cool story, Speaker!

Too bad you couldn't provide any screensshots of the game...

The story reminds me a little of the "Chronivac" series on CYOC. I once started developing the screens for it but it is a lot of work and the possibilities are endless! I'm a programmer and it is possible to design windows for a program like this...

Well, hopefully we'll see more from you in the near future!

[Speaker]

Originally Posted by fillups44

This is a really fun idea. I know you said not to expect any sequels but with the game still functioning and the two guys trying out variations on each other there could be a really fun sexy sequel---especially if Jacked Hacker has some ulterior motives for why he created the game and how it might function on the main character.

Either way this was totally fun and well done.

Thanks for the hard work!!

I never said not to expect any sequels (hint hint), just that it might be a while before i write anything 'cause im getting busy again now that it's past christmas break and i'm back at college. Don't worry... i'm not done with this one yet

When i said that this was a sort of independant story in this universe i meant that it wouldn't tie in with things before it, not necessarily that there wouldn't be things to tie in with THIS!

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by tagsnola

We are in the Matrix!

You're right! Speaker must be trying to "free our minds". We have to let it all go...fear, doubt...

[collegebud]

great story!

i'd love to get a copy of the game. especially if it means a visit from the game's creator.