geek hunt and bash

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All 6 of the science club members went dashing over to the two rolling slide doors of the chemistry lab classroom. It was the football teams annual Geek Hunt, and this nervous bunch of bookworms just realized that they had picked the wrong day to hold their club meeting after school.



"Quick shut the doors and lock it, before they come up here and pound the shit out of us!" One 150 pound Poindexter shrieked.

The chemistry lab was the only class room that actual had these old wooden sliding doors and several of the skittish young students grabbed hold of each, two boys on each side, and began to roll them shut as quickly as possible. They all were completely freaked, they couldn't believe that they had forgotten about this insanely sadistic jock ritual and now they were trapped up on the second floor of the Havenport science hall after hours with no faculty to enforce any civil behavior let alone protect them. Another, weak, mealy student saw several shadows moving up the hallway so he stuck his head quickly out the doorway to see if the coast was clear,

"THEY'RE HERE!!" He squealed and then darted back in and also took hold of the right side door, frantically joining in on pushing the heavy wooden doors shut.

All at once several bellowing shouts and carnal roars came echoing harshly down the hall towards the lab. The panicked Science club members tried to quickly slam the doors in those precious few seconds, and they almost managed to nearly do it too, except a large bounding figure aggressively slammed down upon the doors as they nearly closed. The heavy doors had almost closed completely, but at the last second, they both violently halted with only a few inches left to go. The hysterical boys pushing on the doors, buckled from the jolting stop and fell forward against the powerful obstructing force. Two ENORMOUS, beefy hands had successfully caught hold of both doors and were shoved tightly in-between the last 4 inch space remaining. The rattled boys yelped and shrieked even more as they saw the threatening hands wedged mightily through the doors small openning. They redoubled their efforts in frantic desperation to shut the doors completely so they could lock them. They leaned in from both sides straining with exursion. They all desperately laid all their diminutive weight and muscle against the power of those two thick meaty hands.

The doors held!

They weren't going to budge even one centimeter more. The two fat calloused hands that stuck through the opening powerfully dug into the planes of the two hard wood doors. the beefy fat knuckles turned white and the ends of each fat sausage-sized finger swelled beat red. the doors began to shake and the groans and gasps of the 6 nerdy boys were nearly being drowned out by the rapacious shouts of jocular aggression wailing wildly from on the other side of those heavy oak doors. The whole doorframe began to shake violently under the mighty vice like grip of those two big hands, then slowly they began to slide them back. The science geeks moaned with anxiety as their footing began to slide and faulter. Incredibly, their entire combined strength was being steadily pushed back by the unbelievable strength applied in opposition to them. The physically meager young men were no match. Whomever it was, was a powerful man and he wouldn't be denied! The mysterious behemoth ruggedly pulled the doors slowly apart, threatening the puny nerds with a brutally physical encounter. The doors continued to slide back on their rails and those two powerful hammy hands began to gain more and more leverage. Steadily the opening widened, soon two thick brawny arms slowly appeared in the openning, then a large looming COLLOSOL figure began to emerge. The dark hulking behemoth figure was shaking and pulsing with incredible size and strength. There was a flash of a huge expansive jersey and the 6 young men knew for sure, it was indeed one of the football jocks monsterously muscling back the doors and into the lab. The doors slowly pulled apart and an enormous gut began to jut through with the numbers 96 stretched massively across the huge gut and chest. It was horrifically awesome, there stood a BEHEMOTH of a Man! Hulking fat and ruggedly huge with muscle and brawn! This GOLIATH monster football player began to mightily emerge through the doorway!

He was utterly HUGE!! Enormously stout and fat, he was an industrial sized fireplug linebacker by the name of big "Hoss" Crouch. Big Hoss was a thick bulldozing animal, the heaviest linebacker the American college devision had ever seen. He was a massive terrifying bull of a man. At age 20 he was a monster super heavyweight athlete weighing an unbelievable 430 hulking pounds His body was squat, powerful and incredibly wide. He was just so thickly put together. Very big boned and beefy, all his physical features were bulked up huge and powerful. Like a super heavyweight power lifter, he was incredibly thick and literally rolling with brawn. Incredibly he only stood 5'10 but he was built like a rhinoceros with large powerful arms and legs. His legs were like huge oak tree trunks that pumped with alarming powerful muscle. They were so thick that he actually had a strongly effected bowed gate when he walked. His stout hulking frame always sauntered magnifiscently wide and powerful, with enormous strong heaving strides. The big fat linebacker didn't just walk, HE STOMPED!

The science geeks were shoved persistently back on their heels with embarrassing ease by this huge goliath man monster. They strained, and pushed pathetically with all their might, but they were not going to be an effective force against this big rugged jock whose mighty barrel chest and doublekeg-sized beer gut were now swelling powerfully large and unstoppable up through the doorway. The huge intruding jock was now a rumbling muscle-bound tectonic force, ruggedly pulling the doors apart ripping with raw brute power like a locomotive, engine. Big Irish Hoss normally had fair skin but now his entire head was glowing a deep red, His strong manly face was blazing with rugged carnal power. The freakishly over-developed Mastoid muscles in his neck swelled massively bunching up against even larger more powerful, gargantuan traps! He had the neck of an OX! His face hardened with creases and folds that rolled up from his neck wider than his jaw and skull. Some of the puny science geeks looked up and their eyes bugged with fear as Big Hoss Crouch ferociously forced through the doorwayas huge as a bull rhynocerous. They were terrified to see this giant no-necked brute hulking up before them like a beast. His hulking hammy arms spread out wider as he continued to rip the doors apart. His colossal heaving chest and round humongous fat belly slowly rose upward as his rib cage expanded outward. He arched his monstrous back for leverage pulling into the total power of his stout mighty girth. His heavy mountainous chest and gut continued to grow large and extremely taunt against his football jersey. His Red, white and black "96" numbers were pulled incredibly huge across his mountainous brawny chest and hard hulking belly .
Big strong Hoss stood mightily like a mountain in the doorway, holding back 6 pencil neck Poindexters. He stared keenly straight ahead with an unnervingly uneffected expression of authority and freakish manly power. He was completely engorged with his own physical power and colossal command. Then he looked down upon the 6 weak fearful fools who tried pathetically to hold back the man who would eminantly own the 900 pound world bench press record. He cocked his massive muscled head back with a disdainful snort at the week puny runts. He relaxed his arms slightly letting up the pressure on the doors for just a moment. The doors slide forward again a few inches along with the 6 leaning egghead dweebs. The motion allowed the big man to pull his big muscle-bound arms inward gathering more leverage and then with the shock of ferocious guttural thunder, big mighty Hoss mightily rammed the doors back hard on the scrawny nerds as well as the old heavy rails that the doors ran along. The concussion was devastating. The heaving force shoved the science punks back carreening onto their asses and the doors explosively rammed the rollers into the end of the metal runners. Both doors slammed and split against the rails. wood splintered and bolts ripped right out of the rails and the doors. The metal runners buckled and tore out of the wall. Both heavy doors tore away from the walls and slid violently off to the side. They crashed into shelves placed further along the wall and then broke apart crumbling down to the floor. They were caught barely still attatched to the twisted mangled rails and hung forwards completely wrecked.

The terrified punks screamed with pain and fear, Big Hoss roared as he stood powerful and triumphant within the doorway. He flexed his brawny big fat 28" arms with cruel pride as well as jut his mighty 72" around mammoth powerman's gut out the puny dweebs fearfully gawkedat the hulking monsterous paunch bouncing triumphantly over their heads, .. Cowering underneath, the 6 skinny young men could not believe their eyes. The Football jocks behind the thick bulldozin' linebacker cheered and slapped the big brute on the shoulders. Big Hoss grinned and grunted with pride turning his thick fat head back towards his teammates for their cheers and admiration.
"YEAH BOYS! LOOKS LIKE I FOUND THE FUCK'IN PENCIL NECK HIDEOUT!" He robustly bellowed back to his buddies. "YOU SURE DID BIG MAN! YEAH YER THE MAN HOSS!! YER THE MAN!!!" Several of the jocks shouted back at their big hero as they clammered to lay their hands on his massive bulging shoulder and arms.

As Hoss laughed and guffawed with his team mates, two of the nerds looked up at the cruel slobbering brute and his thug jock mob and grew angry. Tyler and vincent were tired of being humiliated and tortured by big jock assholes like Hoss and his gang. The two boys clenched their fists and their faces turned red. The big hulking fat ox was too pre-occupied, boorishly carrying on with shameless bravado, to notice the two young men jump to their feet and come barreling right at him. The two enraged boys screamed with anger as they bore down as if they themselves were football players. They both aimed right for the hulking brutes fat massive belly jutting out huge before him.
"HEY HOSS, WATCH OUT THERE!" One of the other jocks yelled and pointed over Hose's shoulder at the the two charging nerds.

Hoss barely turned his head back around in time to see both small geeks come running across the room and slam themselves right into the heavy big man's round swollen boulder sized belly.

"WOOOAAAHH!! THERE!" instinctively barked big Hoss, but it was too late.

The two boys heads and right shoulders smacked hard and caved into the giant mass of heavy man's brute gut. There bodies mashed into the hard round wall of meat with all they had but unfortunately they violently crumpled up like accordians. The big fat jock took a small step backwards from the impact but really wasn't seriously effected by the hit at all. His hulking gut shook as he easily stood his ground and he rolled his huge arms slightly backward to catch his balance. He hardly needed to as the rest of the jocks were leaning back in on his massive back and shoulders. The two small boys bounced back from the concussion hurt but were still raging with anger. They began to spastically throw punches into the huge solid girth of the fat swarthy linebacker. Their thin scrawny arms flailed wildly with pitiful round houses and uppercuts. Their weak puny fists smacked into the fat meaty belly with all their might making it's huge jutting mass shake and bounce with firm solid resistance. The fat brawny linebacker's enormous gut was immense and extremely solid. The puny geek's fists did nothing to injure the fat rugged football jock. They slammed their puny fists, each blow landing with a deep dull resonant "thunk" into the enormously round heavy monster gut, which hung massively over the nylon stretch football shorts.
Hoss was a bit surprised by the nerd's attack. The two idiots' charging shoulder slam hardly effected the beefy hulking jock. He merely thought the two skinny geek's body blocks were merely unexpected, and slightly annoying. I mean, what a stupid stunt for two 150 pound slide rule dorks to try and pull on a 430 pound hulking offensive lineman. The huge brute frowned slightly as he looked down at the the two puny runts pitifully wailing away at his solid gargantuan power gut. As he lowered his big meaty head forward, peering over his huge burly chest at the two foolish twerps punching uselessly at his bloated hulking gut. Big stout Hoss pressed his fat dimpled chin heavily into his mountainous hairy chest . Thick rolls of blond tangled fur spread out around the swarthy linebacker's strong muscle fat jaw.
His neck and grizzled jowls flattened outward, his fat 27" neck threatenned to swallow up the fat jock's entire head. Big Hoss was so rugged and handsome with thick ruddy fat dimpled cheeks and a strong bulbous red nose. His sharp green eyes were set deep with heavy lids and were ruggedly capped off by a strong muscular brow with ehick straw blond eyebrows. His forehead rose up into a heavily receded hairline. Hoss kept his head shaved except for the marine style crewcut that he kept right at his widows peak. He white walled the sides of his thick notted skull. His shaven pate revealed a powerfully thick muscle bound skull, which made the big brawny brute look even more ferocious and powerful.

The skinny bookworms were so lost in rage and exacerbation they couldn't see how ridiculous they looked throwing themselves with all their might against the hulking powerful linebacker's humongous immovable gut. The jocks began to laugh outrageously at their pathetic fitful antic. Big cocky Hoss had balled his strong hammy fists ruggedly back on his hips comically, pushing them mightily into his strong muscular back. He grunted with amusement with his buddies then leaned heavily back on his meaty thick haunches. With pride, he mightily jutt his solid manly gut out, it swelled obscenely fat even more massive and immovable towards the pitifully flusterred geeks. He stood solidly, his enormous bulk weighed heavily down on his stout muscle-bound thighs. They swelled thick like tree trunks, and mightily held his stance as solid as a mountain against the two furious boys. He stood solid like a giant block of granite, completely at ease. He shoved his big hulking jock gut out for the two puny geeks to try and make the slightest impact without a care!
:GO AHEAD, RUNTS!!! DO YER WORST!!!! HAR-HAR-HARR!!!!" Bellowed the big man arrigantly.

The two boys were hysterical and beginning to cry with frustration. Big grizzly Hoss just smirked and rudely pressed his thick heavy lip in apathy and distaste. He hated weakness. He casually stared down at them with contempt. He was so strong and indomitable, they were nothing to him. His fat sweaty face held such a cold disdainful expression, so superior and arrogant. Hoss was the MAN! These puny runts weren't shit next to him. The big football jock was a swarthy, far more stronger, brute of a man. A hulking fat man monster in comparison to these two little weaklings. Hoss felt as big and as strong as a mighty Clydesdale. His gut pushed out as huge and imposing as a demolition wrecking ball, a thick muscular paunch packed mightily with enormous bloated muscle stretching round and as hard as a big iron kettle. These puny pencil neck geeks need to show a big man the proper respect!

The big rugged linebacker shrugged his hairy shoulders as he grew more bored with these two fumbling weaklings. Big Hoss then decided that this sad display had gone on long enough. He swung his big meaty arms around, reached forward, and savagely grabbed hold of the the two sobbing nitwits still flailing their noodle arm fists into the fat jock's hard hulking belly. The big bull linebacker brutishly grabbed hold of the two scrawny boys. His two powerful fists tightly grabbed hold of both their jackets and shirts viscously. With swift monstrous power, the stout goliath bruiser hoisted the two poor nerds up into the air. With horrific strength, the big linebacker's arms swelled now 30" huge nearly blocking the view for all his admiring buddies behind him. Each hulking arm bulged with rock hard muscles and veins. Mightily he lifted both young men right off the ground like they weighed nothing at all! Helplessly seized by the scruff of their necks, the two shocked student's bucked desperately as they were unwillingly raised higher off the ground. The weight of their bodies pulled tight and constricting in the huge fists. Awkwardly trapped in their on clothes, they hung from their shirts and jackets like sides of beef in a meat locker .

Big mighty Hoss growled with power as he lifted both 150 lb nerds high in the air in each brawny arm. His huge hairy peeks bounced heavily as he leaned back. Several jocks behind the humongous 430 pound muscle bear began grabbing hold of Hoss's colossal hairy shoulders and colossal biceps and triceps, lustfully feeling the iron hard power and enormous girth of the two ham sized limbs. They squeezed and massaged and pressed their faces up against the hard mountainous muscles, licking and worshiping their burly hulking hero. The two pathetic geeks yelped as their feet kicked and dangled, desperately seeking a foundation. Big Hoss stood strong and immovable like a mountain as he held the two boys powerfully before him.

"ALIGHT RUNTS!!! THAT'S ENOUGH!!!!" Hoss roared in their faces and then with monstrous brute power, the humongous linebacker ruggedly slammed their two puny heads together. The gangly jug eared nerd's knocked skulls hard. Their heads smacked together with a dull bonny crack, like two coconuts,

"THWOCK!!"

The husky fat football bruiser then leaned his barrell-thick torso back, shrugging off four of his buddies. His fat hammy arms bulged with biceps as big as bowling balls as he continued to hold the two young men aloft in mid air. His chest and lats spread impossibly wide over 4 feet! Hoss then grit his teeth and grunted robustly as his immense chest nd shoulders swelled with powerful hulking muscle. His enraged face looked insane as he sneered savagely at his two victims. Both tyler and Vincent couldn't see anything but stars as the huge jock growled and spat in their face with cruel monstrous brutality,
"YOU TWO AIN'T SHIIIIT!!!!!!" He thundered ruggedly.
With that the brawny linebacker coiled his mighty arms back and then, like some insane brawny ogre, he mightily launched their bodies back into the middle of the classroom.. The two battered punks flew fifteen feet back like rag dolls careening into desks and chairs as they horrifically fell back to the floor.
The jocks were blown away at how burly a man their huge super heavyweight lineman was. They gasped and cheered at his immense power. They continued to slap the hulking linebacker on his burly red shoulders, in awe and desire.

"GO BIG HOSSMAN!!!! SNAP THEM GEEKS IN TWO!!!! YEAH BIG MAN!!! BREAK EM' IN HALF!!!! They snarled savagely. All of them were driven rabidly violent with blood-lust for their humongous brute hero's monstrous brawny strength.
Big Hoss grunted with pride and turned to his jock buddies, He blasted out two gargantuan biceps shots. several jocks were so awestruck they fell to their knees before their giant goliath and wrapped their arms around his huge keg size thighs, tears streaming down their worshipping faces as they stared adoringly up at their hulking muscle-bound dominator. Big Hoss scratched his thick rugged jowl grinning with pride as he let his boys worship him He grabbed hold of two jocks by their heads and lovingly pulled them into his gargantuan hot sweaty gut. He squashed their faces into the huge fleshy belly and ruggedly hugged them against the massive 72" mound of solid furry power lifting gut.

"I TELL YOU WHAT!!! YOU BOYS GET IN HERE AND CLEAR AWAY THESE DESKS SO'S WE CAN HAVE ROOM TO WORK. I THINK I'M GUNNA LET THESE RUNTS TRY AND TAKE THE BIG HOSS ON!! ALL SIX OF EM' AGAINST YER'S TRULY, THE BIGGEST MAN-OX OFFENSIVE LINEMAN THIS STATE HAS EVER SEEN!!! HOW'S AT' SOUND?" Big Hoss arrogantly proposed slapping his mighty paunch with authority.

Then the big man got an even more insideous notion.. ....

Two big jocks grabbed hold of one of the little nerds named Kenny. They dragged him over to the small rectangular desk as big Hoss commanded. Kenny was screaming and crying, "NOOO!! PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!! PLEASE NOOOO!!!!" A couple of the other nerds tried to pull the big football jocks off of Kenny but the two big guys just pushed them away with ease.
" LAY IM' DOWN ACROSS THE DESK!" Bellowed the big hulking Hoss as he pulled on his heavy ballsac.
The two jocks obeyed their mighty commander and pulled The frail skinny kid up and then slammed him face down onto the desk.
"HOLDS HIS ARMS!!" again the fat linebacker barked again.
They pulled Kenny's arms out so he couldn't move. His upper body and head lay pinned down to the desk. He cried in terror as his arms were stretched painfully out in opposite directions.
Big Hoss turned to one of the jocks. "Get me MY HAT!" He commanded. The jock eagerly jumped to attention and produced from a dark blue duffle bag a large felt Marine Drill Sergeant hat. The big commanding behemoth took hold of the handsome brown hat. He proudly held it before him and sternly smiled as he drew two fat calloused fingers around the brim admiringly. Big Hoss then swiped his huge fat hand back over his bristled sweaty pate, then pulled the strong commanding hat up on his huge muscle-bound skull. The hat was slightly small on the enormous bull-man's head which made him look even more of dominating brute. Hoss pulled the strap down infront of his face and barely squeezed the band right underneath his huge grizzled chin. The strap cut into his thick brawny jowl. pushing his hulking heroic cleft chin further out ruggedly proud. Big Hoss now looked absolutely ferocious,a monster authoritarian. His profile was even more powerful a real heroic TANK-OF-A-MAN!!
"TIME FOR SARGE TO CRACK SOME SKULLS" He roared as he spread his legs and folded his gargantuan fat arms across his mountainous hulking chest. The jocks cheered wildly, " Go Big Sarge! Crush them puny grunts big TANKMAN!"
The site was horrific. Big hulking Hoss stood about twenty feet away in front of the desk. His face half concealed under the the tall proud drill hat. the jocks stood in a semi-circle around him and the puny nerd splayed across the desk. Big Hoss stood powerfully, his feet spread apart, the massive fat brute looked HUGE! His shoulders thrown back, his gargantuan powerful belly heaved forward arching massively outward. He was now donning a tight wifebeater t-shirt , The ribbed tank stretched so thin across the gargantuan round paunch you could see the tautly stretched navel depression and bloated hard rolling mounds of his abdominal wall. His huge 30" arms heavily hung outward. The huge fat arms suspended against the wide solid girth of the hulking fat man's powerful hairy lats. The remaining nerds cowering behind the big behemoth bull jock were in shock as they stared at the huge powerful back of the giant linebacker. The massive traps and shoulders rolled and swelled with huge powerful muscle. The big man's thick powerful spine was sunken deeply between the two mountainous slabs of muscle that mightily pulled out wide and strong to the huge hulk's sides. His monstrous back spread incredibly broad. It stretched again over 4 feet across! The huge rolling brawn was covered with a blond furry carpet that glowed in the light.
When the jocks had finished preparing the scrawny little geek on the desk, Big Hoss stretched his gargantuan arms out flexing his enormous triceps, shoulders and traps with brawny exageration. The big fat jock thickly growled and mightily slapped the sides of his humongus hard gut. He jammed his thumbs into his waistband and heartily hoisted his gargantuan belly up. His fat hulking forearms also pushed his mighty paunch outward, and the burly fat ogre slowly began to saunter forward towards the helpless nerd pinned down on the desk. The big bull-man strode slowly like a fat goliath cowboy strolling cocksure and proud out on some dude ranch. Kenny felt the ground quaking, "THOOM....THOOM.....THOOM!!"" HE moved his head forward and caught the site of the hulking brute lumbering hugely toward him.
"OH GOD NOOOOO! PLEASE NO, KEEP HIM AWAY FROM ME!! PLEASE DON'T LET HIM HURT ME!!!" He screamed pitifully.
Big Hoss grinned and let out an evil baritone chuckle., as the site of his monstrous size always drove his victims insane with fear. The giant monster gut heaved and bounced as it slowly loomed bigger and bigger. Kenny screamed and thrashed in vain, as the big man drew closer. "HEH HEH HEH HEH HEH!!" The big man continued to chuckle cruelly. His giant gut steadily rose up larger and larger till a great arching shadow steadily rolled up over the boy, eclipsing Kenny's head and the front half of the desk. Hoss towered over the boy. 430 pounds of monster brawn wrecking machine stood right above the skinny little geeks tiny head! The huge man's belly looked like a planet! It was so enormous compared to the little punk nerds puny head. twenty of Kenny's heads could fit inside that gargantuan brute gut!
Big Hoss pulled his thumbs out of his waist band and began to slide his big beefy calloused hands round the ample carriage of his monster fat gut, He massaged and hefted the giant manly bulk with arrogant admiration, feeling it's weight, it's great size and it's colossal POWER! From under the dark Marine drill hat a strong cruel grin spread across the big man's grizzled fat face. Kenny was hysterical now screaming for mercy, The nerds were frozen with horror, even the jocks quieted down a bit as the huge man held his monstrous gut over the scrawny young man's head suspending the horror for all to witness. Everyone, was transfixed as it grew apparent what the cruel, hulking,, ogre-of-a-man intended to do.
The jocks slowly began to goad their champion on, "DO IT!!! DO IT, BIG MAN!! DO IT!!"
Big Hoss smiled and looked at his worshipping brood, he paused drawing the suspense out further as the jocks chant began to hasten. Big Hoss now powerfully had hold of his fat massive belly in his hands, He shifted back and forth anchoring his footing. He squeezed the hulking flesh feeling how hard and heavy it was. Weighing it for it's monsterous task! His belly alone must weigh over 250 lb. itself! The big man leaned back, in preparation he jerked his head, sharply to one side, cracking the vertebrae deep within his thick bull neck.
The massive brute drew in a huge amount of air, and lifted the humongous 72" round behemoth belly up into the air, as high as he could, high over Kenny's head. Kenny screamed louder than before, "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!"
Big Hoss roared with power and then let the gargantuan gut come crashing down like the side of a mountain! Kenny's head and entire back disappeared underneath the avalanche of big fat brute jock belly. The mighty Kong sized gut crashed down on the boy and the desk with a thunderous slam! Their was a quick muffled crack as the massive monster belly instantly crushed the puny young man. The jocks instinctively let go of Kenny's arms. Both Kenny's arms jerked forward violently from the impact. The big man grabbed hold of the desk then paused to enjoy the small flattened body pressed into the underside of his mountainous belly. The hulking linebacker leaned forward and bellowed mightily like a bull walrus in heat. More of his gargantuan weight rolled down onto his victim. The big man closed his eyes in sheer ecstasy as he felt several more ribs and vertebrae crack and buckle. The enormous round belly flattened out and completely enveloped poor Kenny's upper body. Only his hands stuck out shaking uncontrollable, and his ass came squeezing out from under the enormous flattening mass of flesh. The big fat gorilla grabbed hold of the underside of the desk and heaved it and kenny up off the ground Kenny's legs kicked and spasm as they lifted up into the air. The awesome power of the hulking fat jock was horrific. He pulled mightily on the desk squashing it and Kenny harder into the underside of his gargantuan power lifter gut.
Hoss grunted like a bull, and yanked the pathetic boys body again harder against his massive girth. Their was another series of sickening pops and crunches more distinctive and chilling then the first. Each time more crunching and snapping came out from under the big man's belly as the fat brute savagely crushed the small body further and further against his huge solid paunch. Finally the desk buckled under the enormous strength of the giant brawny linebacker's arms. the powerful jock began to fold the desk up with Kenny's squashed 160 pound body inside it like a taco. Everyone gasped even the jocks. It was monstrous y brutal!
Hoss grunted savagely feeling his power. he pulled the mangled desk and nerd out from under his belly, Heaved the twisted wreckage up to his thick powerful chest. He looked between the folded desk and saw the top of kenny's head packed between the two halve of the desk tightly like a cube but still not crushed. The behemoth monster then hoisted the desk up and caught it between his hands. He pulled the front ot the desk down into his chest and the began to squeeze. His huge muscle-bound arms and shoulders bulged monstrously and his pecs bulged upwards. The sweating huge linebacker angrily clenched his teeth with power and monstrous determination, then suddenly, "CRO-AAWWKK!!!" The desk caved in and the goliath jocks mighty hands savagely crushed the boys puny skull! the big monster football jock snuffed the little man as disdainfully as folding up a newspaper! -And with a mighty roar the big man heaved the broken desk and crushed boy's carcass against the wall. Kenny and the broken desk slammed into the wall like a freight train. The desk completely shattered and the crushed young man's body bounced off and crashed into another row of desks by the side of the room.

The huge brute linebacker stood back and proudly threw up a double bicep pose, "SOMEONE GIVE ME A FUCKIN CEE-GARR!!!"

He bellowed ruggedly as he bounced his huge gleaming arms mightily out in a monsterous display of mutant huge muscle and raging testosterone! Three of the jocks ran up to him eagerly holding out several fat Jamachian Churchills.
He grabbed one, snapped it in half and plugged it robustly into his grinning maw. The same three quickly held up big silver lighters with hot big flames glowing for their mighty hero. The big man bent over and piped away on the big cigar stump within the flames of all three lighters. The three jocks stared at their huge bull champion adoringly in awe and lust. They rubbed his sweaty massive gut admiringly. One jock dropped to his knees and knuzzled the huge weighted pouch that jut sternly out from the huge big gutted mosterjock's deep swarthy crotch. The thick boning pole mightily arched forward, stretchiing the ribbed jock obscenely thin and taught. The bullish fatman's meat was a supreme emulation of the heroic monsterstud's power and feroscious hyper-masculinity. The projected mounding pouch hulked like the prow of a battleship fat and proud from under the mighty swaying goliath-man's collosus gut. The swarthy brute chuckled ruggedly as his hulking genetals far below were weighing heavily for envious worship. The hot forceful power of his swelling meaty cock surged with stabbing jolts of adreneline that shot back up into the mammoth 430 pound linebacker's powerful body. He greedily sucked up the power, dominating fear, and manly adoration he savagely generated in the room. Revelling in brutish vanity, he ruggedly sqeezed and massaged his huge boarish gut and the meaty avalanche of mounded hairy pecs with rugged aggression and bullish lust. He grunted with pride and manly gusto as he thickly tugged on his stogie and admired the enormous ursine girth and brawn he commanded over all the men in the room!. He reached down and tousled the hair of the young jock as he mashed his face into the great enveloping girth of his big manly pouch.

"THERE'LL BE PLENTY OF TIME FOR THAT SON, LATER ON, YOU CAN BET ON IT!"

He pulled the jock up by his shirt and then quickly wrapped his big grizzly arms around all three jocks before him, lifting them right off the floor in a big burly Bear Hug!
He bounced them playfully. Heartily he again deeply chuckled as he held his boys mightily aloft, squeezing all three powerfully, he easily buried them into his massive burly chest with proud, adoring ownership. They gasped and sobbed with slavish lust as they completely suplicated their will and masculinity to their champion hero.

"WHO'S THE MAN, BOYS!?" He grunted knowingly.

All three shouted in unison, "YOU ARE BIG SARGE!!! YER THE MAN, BIG SARGE!! YOU ARE!!!"

"DAMN RIGHT!!!" He roared and then dropped the jocks dismissively to the floor, " KNOW GET ME ANOTHER PENCIL-NECK OUT HERE PRONTO, BOYS!!
He motioned them away with a huge commanding arm. He sauntered back around patting his huge potbelly and puffed some more, proudly on his cigar. Big Hoss now was their commanding Sarge with his drill hat and thick stogie clenched tightly in his powerful grizzled jaw. He continued to roll his shoulders and swing huge brawling uppercuts in the air, aggressive and strong. Ready and Robust! he savored the demand and will for more brutality at his own huge brawny hands!

The jocks swiftly fell upon the cowering bunch of nerds. They barked and pulled at the geeks like rabid dogs as the pitiful frail boys wailed and screamed in fear for their doom. The jocks finally grabbed hold of one named Dillon and dragged him away from the rest. The held him by his arms brutally as they carried him over to the side of the room where they had held the other scrawny boy down on the desk. Dillon was panic struck as he stared across the room at the mighty linebacker, snorting and puffing furiously on the cigar.
"NO! PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU DON'T HURT ME!! PLEASE LET US GO!!!" Dillon begged for his life. The jocks just laughed and mocked him, punching him in the head, "FAT CHANCE, GEEK!" ONE JOCK SNEERED.

Big Hoss spat on the floor, he smacked a huge mighty paw against his chest and grunted agreeingly with the jock.
"I WANT YOU BOYS TO THROW HIM AT ME!" He commanded. The jocks looked at their big burly Sarge not quite understanding. The big linebacker grimaced, "....THROW HIM AT ME! GRAB HIM BY HIS LEGS AND ARMS AND TOSS HIM AT ME!!"
BIG Hoss made an underhanded swinging gesture with his hands, and the jocks grinned and quickly knodded, " OHHH!... THROW HIM TO YA!!"
The jocks all knodded gleefully. The cruelly grabbed hold of Dillon, one one each arm and one on each leg. they swept him up and let his body hang between them. They began swinging Dillon back and forth by his armed and legs. Dillon was face down and yelped in fear as he swung forward then back. The jocks got Dillon swinging fast in a good rhythm as the big hulking Sarge spread his huge legs apart and bent down with his massive mighty arm resting and ready across his knee.
He looked up and barked" READY!"
The jocks knodded and then counted off with each swing forward, "ONE......TWO.....THREE!!!!!"

The let Dillon fly free on the last swing. Dillon flew out high arcing right out twenty feet. His arms flailed as he tried to right himself but it was no use. he began to scream as he came down towards the big 430 pound monster football jock hunched over. The huge brute Sarge came up powerfully. He swung his mighty 32" arm upward like a club. The hulking Hoss connected the back of his huge mighty fist with the mid section of poor Dillon. Hoss roared with rage as his mighty arm knocked the 150 pound nerd like a telephone pole slamming into a small dog. The big man knocked Dill's body clear over the jock's heads. He flew like a missile across the room and slammed 15 feet high up against the back wall. The wall shook from the concussion and framed pictures and shelves exploded with their content and fell to the floor. Dillon slammed face first into the wall with a sickening crunch. He slid to the grounding a crumpled heap just like his friend earlier.

The jocks cheered insanely with bloodlust as they laughed ran over, and kicked the broken body of Dillon.

The big Sarge just folded his might arms across his hairy monster chest. His huge power lifter gut pouched out from underneath his huge 22 inch monster forearms. "GET ME TWO MORE! " He commanded puffing away on his stogie from underneath the broad rim of the Marine drill hat.

The jocks then pulled two more nerds over, Wade, and Gerald.

"BRING THEM TO ME! The big man huskily grunted.

The jocks roughly stood the two geeks before the giant power lifter linebacker. Big Hoss wasted no time, he scooped the two nerds up, each nerd's arms and torso was squashed brutally within the huge Ogre's mighty 30" monster arms. He coiled his prey powerfully up against each heaving brute hairy pec. "YEEAAAHHH!
He greedily bellowed blowing smoke into the puny nerds faces. He puffed up mightily shaking the two wailing boys like dolls. The monstrous muscle bound jock began to chuckle as his huge fat hulking arms began to squeeze! The geeks gasped in pain as their bodies were constricted. Their faces pulled in agony and their shoulders were mashed up into the sides of their heads.
"YEAH BIG SARGE! BREAK-EM IN HALF! YEAH SNAP-EM IN TWO BIG MAN!! The jocks shouted and spat rabidly.
The big man just grinned cruelly even more. Chuckling and snorting his teeth clenched down on the stogie. He reared back hoisting the boys higher. His merciless brawny arms sank into the puny nerds bodies. Bones began to pop, ribs cracked and the two pitiful geeks threw their heads back in pain. Their drawn out faces contorted, they couldn't stand the hulking man's brutal power. They hissed in agony with their last breath then the big man jerked them violently within his powerful grasp. The backs both snapped and their chests caved in with a harsh crushing crunch. their eyes bulged nearly out of their sockets then they rolled up into their beat red faces.
The triumphant hulking brute raised their broken bodies up high in his fists. He roared victoriously and shook his victims limp lifeless bodies to his adoring crowd! ?GET ME MORE!!!" He shouted insanely!
The jocks threw the other two nerds smack into the big behemoths hard mountainous gut. He instantly clamped two massive headlocks on the two nerds puny heads. He pulled one punks mashed face up into his big brutish pec. The massive slab of hairy muscle punched the nerd brutishly in his face, squashing his nose against his thick Knobby tit.
"WATCH WHAT I DO TO YER PUNY RUNT BUDDY!" He tenderly taunted the terrified bookworm.
Big Hoss dropped the other nerd for just a second then pulled his massive arm underneath the kids head and again seized hold of the nerd head in his huge mountainous arm. He then lifted the poor boy clean off the floor his face mashed against a monstrous bicep. the nerd cried in pain as he left the floor. his face was clenched tightly between the huge linebackers giant 30" bicep and his huge 22" forearm.
"CRACK THAT SKULL LIKE A WALNUT, BIG SARGE! YEAH CRUSH HIM BIG MAN!" Again the big man's brood of sadistic buddies egged and cheered him on.
The big monster brute looked down again at the little jock in the overhand headlock mashed against his burly pec. " Yeah, that's right! I'm gonna crush yer buddies puny head like a lemon! What do ya think of THAT!" He coo-ed mockingly at the petrified little runt nerd.
"Please No!" said the trapped little geek up at his monstrous captor.
The big man never took his eyes off the crying frightened little whelp mashed up against his brawny hulking body.
He just began to squeeze, His Hand holding the top of the other nerds head and his hulking bowling ball sized bicep bulging like a mountain up into the contorted face of the wretched weak runt. The little man screamed in agony just like the rest as his puny body was mercilessly punished by the fat hulking jock's ravenous sadistic power. The huge man's fat monstrous fingers dug into the nerds skull and slowly crushed the head down against the huge mighty bicep swelling up monstrously hard as iron and pumping with enormous strength. The nerds jaw crumpled between the bicep and the forearm. the hulking brute Hoss grunted with pleasure, his eyes widened with lust and power as he felt the the cranial plates in the pathetic nerds skull crack and begin to split apart! He excitedly squeezed the other nerd hard up against his chest as the pressure increased. The nerd began to sob as he saw his friends face bulge red, his eyes begged out with horror and fleeting consciousness. He soon couldn't recognize the hideous popping face as it's skull mashed steadily down and his eyes bulged grotesquely from their sockets! Then with a sickening crunch, the skull caved in and he bulging eyes popped out of their sockets. One bounced right into the last nerds face in mocking irony.
The last small nerd closed his eyes in despair as he heard the wild cheering and laughing echoing all around him. He knew he was doomed and resigned himself to what ever hideous torture and brutal mangling his hulking sadistic captor was going to inflict upon him. Anyone want to continue?

[Kyrosan]

I must say that I did not enjoy the killing of the nerds. While I will not argue against your freedom to write what you wish, I have to say that I'm disappointed that your writing talent is being used this way.

[vlad]

man the huge guy really turned me on...that'd the kind of build that really gets me going, and I loved all the description of him (adjectives are fun!).... but christ man, gory, sadistic death! turn off...way off. the feeling of way turned on to instantly turned off. I also felt kind of weird, because I am a 150 lb. dork... hehe. next time, same hugeness, less sadistic, gory death.

[superhugegod]

i am sorry for making this so scary, but some fans wanted a little scare, but i can do a remake of the story if you want that and i proffessional admit that i was wrong just email me if you want a remake.

[Kyrosan]

I just wanted to apologize. I reread my post tonight and realized that I came across a lot harder than I had really intended. My intention had really been to offer a little advice to maybe tone down the gore a bit. Guess that's what I get for staying up too late, heh.

[Mad Dog]

You don't need to do a remake, and I know some people really get off on the muscle snuff stories, but next time maybe you could label it as such on the header.

[Eeg]

It's funny. When I read the header of your post, I expected a transformation story. A reference to "science geeks" being hounded by jocks often means the story will turn on the geeks hulking out through some means and turning the tables on the thugs. Alas -- for me -- it wasn't that kind of story. I was left wondering why our victims were "science geeks" in the first place. Their station is my was already in the social gutter, and here they just get ground into the dirt.

I'm not questioning your right to post (though I side with those who don't like the snuff aspect at the end), but I have to admit I was disappointed.

[buffdoc]

Eeg, i thought the title suggested the same thing. I always enjoy geek to stud transformation stories so I gave this a read. I also did not care for the snuff scenes but everything likes something different.

What's next, beheadings? Sorry, but the newspaper headlines have dibs on that angle.

[Leo]

I was annoyed and dismayed at this story.

The idea of brutalizing those who are vulnerable is a negative concept.

Transformation fastasy, on the other hand, presents itself as a positive; something constructive.

The destructive nature of mindless violence seems to defeat the fantasy of transformation. Transformation, or the improving of oneself, creates good feelings about oneself through positive thought, perceptions and, yes, fantasy. On the other hand, the type of violence from this story may create feelings of superiority, but it is a negative "vibe". And it seems to be the antithesis of the true spirit of physical transformation.

Maybe I am wrong. It certainly takes all kinds. But it is not why I read this site.

Leo

[sexiscriptor]

First I will mention that, from the outset, I had trouble getting "on" with this story. I don't really dig the "Big Hoss's" sort of physical build, the bulging gut and such forth, at all.
However, even I can play a good sport and just enjoy a transformation or some such thing, you know irony and so forth.
Then I, reading the ridiculous prose (sorry, man, it's a little over the top), found myself getting even more turned off as I realized that the story's actual direction was not what I had hoped.
I, too, expected at least a single transformation, of any kind really, but soon saw that the story was too dramatically bent on the defeat of the nerds by this ogre to let them rise up in transformative glory. However, I read on in hopes that maybe one of these odiously wimpy nerds would survive and grow, or for the story to experience any sort of twist.
Alas, all my continued reading was rewarded with the disinteresting demise of all of the nerds, each death gorey and demented.
As a disclaimer of sorts, I'll say that I'm not totally against violence. Especially being a macrophile myself, I have to grin and bear the foot stompers and city smashers, so I can safely say I roll with the punches, literally at least, as well as anyone else. In fact, I find violence can be used as a tool, if utilized as a means of expressing a message or as a symbolic vehicle.
However, this story concluded with the senselessly, overdramatically gruesome deaths of all the nerds, is just violent without reason. If there is to be violence in a story, I'd like to see it with a point, some poignancy or meaning. These nerds never had a chance with Hoss, so this story never had a chance with me.
Sorry, man, maybe the next one will be better?

[RyBearATL]

When I realized where this was going, I started skimming, not reading.

Kinda tired of snuff material. Not a turn on. Actually, quite the opposite. Especially when it's pretty much the focus of the story.

-R

[sexiscriptor]

You know, I was thinking, and chatting with some people on MGS, and suddenly realized how rude I've been. Not just to you, Mr. Superhugegod, sir, but other writers as well.
Being in the process of writing a story myself for this board, I see it's not easy at all for any of us to write what has been written and what fills the archives so completely with hot man-muscle-sex goodness.
Also, speaking of my own lack of story-posting, the least I owed to you, Mr. Superhugegod, in my "review" of your latest effort was a concession statement. Certainly, more would not have been out of the question, but honestly, you did try quite hard, and I'm sure that I can at least appreciate that element of the story, that it meant that much to you, even if I have trouble finding much of the rest of it at all erotic.
As a fellow writer, I should acknowledge and respect every writer here at MGS for at least their effort. Because of this realization, I promise I'll try to be less bitchy and picky when it comes to my critical reviews. Oh, and I promise I'll post some sort of a story soon so that everyone can get a fair chance to harangue me just as much as I've to just about everyone else.

[ethernet_jock]

well... I'm going to take a risk here and express my opinion on this story. Hopefully I don't lose anyone's respect over this but, if I do... well.... too bad.

I liked that story. I too, expected a muscle growth transformation story having to do with geeks in the science lab. I did not at all expect what I got.... but I liked what I got. I have a very deep-set *thing* for violence in the light of human power and strength. In the greatest sense of violence achieved without any weapons or special skills at all, just pure violent domination by strength... it's a big *thing* for me. And obviously it is for "superhugegod" as well. I thought it was a refreshing change from the standard growth story and something aimed a little more at my type of personality than perhaps the gay muscle worship genre.

Things I didn't like, IMHO:
* Fatness being excellent. I had a LOT of trouble with the concept of a big fat gut being a good thing. Just my opinion. I would get off even better on hard ripped muscle jocks weighing more like 300lbs and having more like 24" biceps of pure muscle instead of 30" biceps of fat muscle.
* Other muscle jocks jumping in pure gay submission and admiration including crying. Masculine worshiping = great, crying in admiration = lame.... IMHO
* In agreeing with "sexiscriptor" slightly - there should be a good reason for the snuff aspect. I've always loved the idea of a huge muscle god avenging the wrongful rape or physical torture of someone weak who didn't deserve it. Sort of a snuff of robin hood, if you will. That, however, would be a completely different story and not your story.

Things I LOVED:
* Gratuitious ridiculous violence with heavy description. Call me sick, I don't care what you think of me, I liked it. These are the same reasons why I love (and am fairly good at) things like Brazilian JuJitsu and freestyle fighting.
* Taunting of victims, super-arrogant personality/attitude - Something about the humiliation aspect just adds to the value 3x for me.... go figure.

Things that might've been fun to include:
* A sexual domination scene?

----

So yeah, that's who I am. A dedicated father, a loving husband, and a freak who likes violence. Sorry if that weirds you out.

Just my $0.02.

Thanks "superhugegod" for a great effort! Particularly seeing that english is not your first language?? I can definitely say that you worked your ass off on that one.

[Mad Dog]

"So yeah, that's who I am. A dedicated father, a loving husband, and a freak who likes violence. Sorry if that weirds you out."

Hey, have you LOOKED around you? :b We all have our things.

[ethernet_jock]

thank you for recognizing that... that was sort of my point.

Originally Posted by Mad Dog

"Hey, have you LOOKED around you? :b We all have our things.

Not me. I don't have any weirdness. I'm perfectly normal. Hell, I don't even have an accent. The world could follow me around with TV cameras and be bored to death with the normalness of my life. ... Uh, excuse me a moment... my dealer is on the phone, and the repo man is taking my tank, the police helicopter overhead is making too much noise and the angry mob has just about reached my mine field. The SWAT team in the attic is stealing my erotica and toys and the tear gas grenade that just came through the window has set off my box of fireworks. I'm afraid it's a bit too close to the arsenal and just might ex....

[LiftNGetHuge]

I for one, think this story is one of the hottest I've read on this site. Gets me boned up thinking about crushing geek skull with my overgrown guns. I'd never do it ('cause I'm not a murderer or a psychopath) but it's def a hot thought...

[wolfotehmoon]

Originally Posted by LiftNGetHuge

I for one, think this story is one of the hottest I've read on this site. Gets me boned up thinking about crushing geek skull with my overgrown guns. I'd never do it ('cause I'm not a murderer or a psychopath) but it's def a hot thought...

Old thread is old. Also, as a self-proclaimed geek, I feel the need to express my wish that you'd, in a quick in orderly fashion, go to hell.

[Excelsior]

Originally Posted by LiftNGetHuge

I for one, think this story is one of the hottest I've read on this site. Gets me boned up thinking about crushing geek skull with my overgrown guns. I'd never do it ('cause I'm not a murderer or a psychopath) but it's def a hot thought...

Is it me, or is there a new habit of dreging up old threads forums becoming more apparent lately?

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by Excelsior

Is it me, or is there a new habit of dreging up old threads forums becoming more apparent lately?

I kind of agree. If the last post was 1 year ago or less, it's no big deal, but anymore, then you're just gettin into old threads that should just stay dead.

[howardbeatman]

This is an example of how sadism can be accepted. Fantasies of beating people - don't try to weasel out by saying "it's fiction"! - are the dreams of those who see every other person besides themselves as not being really human.

[ToolShedCub]

you get an A+ for imagination, build of the uber stud and description. didn't care for the snuff stuff tho. u should redo it so that he just mangles people and not kills them.

[iceman75]

Not a fan of the useless violence, I mean what did the nerds even do to get treated like that, other than being smarter than the big jock, this is a situation where I would have loved to see the nerds run to Shawn of Chip Masterson's Nerdmuscle and have him give the big jock a little taste of his own medicine. While straight out violence never really accomplishes anything, those who deal in unregulated violence deserve to get their just comeuppance. I am sorry, but I don't find this story to be very arousing, unless of course it sets up a story where the jock gets his ass handed to him by a super strong, though short, ripped, though not hugely muscled nerd.

[philat99]

I, too, do not care for sadism. You've got talent, but I'd like to see what you would come up with in some other muscle growth avenues.
Mike

[musqlure]

Not into snuff but liked it up to that part. Was actually hoping the jocks would grow even bigger.

[tagsnola]

... sure! Especially of one of the geek victims happens to be son of the local Mafia don. It might take several attempts to bring these creeps down. But, in the end, I think they would find a way to get the job done. That or some other scenario of vindication for the victims. I always like to read about gratuitous violence, but *only* when followed by vindication of the victims. The narrative was very well done. Very descriptive, which incites powerful emotions, in my case a lust of a particular kind... A lust for revenge.

[Otaru_grower]

.......

uh....

[lvtaikai]

I like this story.
Huge muscle with fat is best.
If anyone know stories like this, please let me know.:p

[Otaru_grower]

I hate stories like this but I won't tell you not to post.

I, personally, would appreciate a warning that this is the direction you are going into. I like stories with muscle or sex in practically any form except this. Hell I would read hetero porn before reading snuff.

Anyhoo. Next time leave a clear warning and I and others would be grateful.

[Otaru_grower]

I just realized how old this thread was...never mind.

[Mad Dog]

And that the content is in the title!

[AuraTwilight]

And that you posted in this thread on this very page over three years ago...

[MuscleHintz]

This thread was dead. I don't mean to revive it with new posts. But as it has already been brought to the very top of the list anyways...

People should feel free to write about what they want here. We all have our own "weird" fetishes. No one should feel afraid to write about a particular subgenre of muscle growth as long as they enjoy writing about it. However, when writing about controversial topics, such as underage sex, incest, or snuff stories, please make a warning either in the title or at the beginning of your story. Not only is this plain courtesy to people with other interests than you, it also keeps you from being bombarded by negative comments and makes sure only the people who prefer your fetishes read it.

Remember, people will always have a different opinion from you. Unless you're a celebrity on this site like arpeejay or Londonboy, it's best to play it safe and give warnings in the title of your story.

[myoder]

everything about the jock was great - but the violence is for a very specific audience I think. It might be good to post a warning when there's that much violence or death involved.

[hungreed]

Originally Posted by lvtaikai

I like this story.
Huge muscle with fat is best.
If anyone know stories like this, please let me know.

I did not know about this story, so I am grateful that you brought it to my attention.

You will discover other interesting stories of this nature at the following sites.

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/chipst...guid=405244265

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Muscle...guid=405244265

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Superm...guid=405244265

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SuperStrengthFantasies/

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/wrestl...guid=405244265

http://www.pridesites.com/omelissokomos/index.html

http://www.voreplay.com/index.php?action=forum

[HumanThingy]

Snuff violence has it's place. I personally greatly enjoyed the story!

[funboy]

Ah - so many of you do have boundaries. Interesting. When my boundaries were crossed and I commented I was attacked, but now that your boundaries are crossed it's ok. Significant double standards exist on this forum. Either it is free reign, or it is not. Simply stop reading the story and move on - that's what I was told - and I decided to follow that advice and am quite content and accepting in this regard. Feel free to take your own advice - in fact - I really must insist.

Superhugegod - write the story as you desire and however the forces of imagination move you. I have learned that this is the freedom of this forum. Hopefully the rest of you will also learn this lesson. If you seek to help the author with writing style and structure - by all means help out. If you don't like the content - simply move on. It takes a brave soul to bare his/her deep (and sometimes darkest) desires for all to see - don't shit on them for that is what will end the contributions to this site.