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Old September 13th, 2008, 06:06 PM
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Reality Bend. Chapter 1

Well, I decided to take a break from drawing to produce a story! Here goes nothing!

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Warning. This story contains muscles and scenes which may be considered to be sexual and very very hot. If you not wish to get a hard-on, then you may be on the wrong page.

Reality Bend
Chapter 1

My name was Benjamin. I was 18 years old, 6?3, a real fat ass, and had an IQ that wasn?t worth a damn. I was fired from my job, blew all my money on the lottery, and was facing eviction from my father?s apartment. Yup, that was my life?.or at least, it WAS. Up until three years ago, when my whole life?no, my whole REALITY changed for the better.

It was Mid-June. Earlier that night, my father and I had a heated argument. He said things about being a lazy freeloader. He yelled about not having a job does not mean staying in the apartment for free and blah blah blah. I had enough of his yelling, stormed to my bedroom, and slammed the door. I didn?t come out for the rest of the night.



A few hours later, long after my father went to sleep, I was laying in my bed. There was an infomercial on the TV, but I wasn?t paying much attention. I had a bodybuilding magazine in one hand, and a wad of tissues in the other. I was satisfied for the night. I was getting very tired, and was drifting off to sleep.

Before I completely lost consciousness, I heard a rustling in my bedroom?and the sound of someone breathing

?Gabe?? I mumbled softly, ?God damn it, bro, get out of my room!?

??I am not Gabe.?

My eyes shot open, and I bolted upright. Through the dim light of the TV screen I could see a figure sitting on the edge of my bed. The light suddenly flashed on, and I was blinded for a moment. When my vision cleared, I saw a scruffy looking man at the edge of my bed. He was tall, possibly in his late 20s, early 30s, about 6?2, had a cute face?well, as much as I could tell under the week-old beard. He had on very loose clothing and his black hair was messy and unkempt.

?Who the hell are you?! How did you get into my room?!?

The man was out of breath. ?There is?no time?to explain?details?you have to?do something?for me??

I bolted out of my bed, and started for the door.

?It won?t open? The man said under his breath

I grabbed the knob, turned, and pulled. The door was stuck! It wouldn?t budge!

?DAD! GABE! SOMEBODY! HELP!!!?

?They can?t hear you. I already soundproofed this room.?

I flip around, my back to the door. ?H-How?!?

?Just listen what I have to say. I?ll explain everything. Now, sit on the bed.?

As if some force was guiding me, I slowly made my way to the bed. I sat down at the edge, and stared at him.

?Now, everything I am about to tell you is the absolute truth, and after I tell it to you, you must do as I say.?

I nodded. He took a breath, and continued.

?I am what is called a Reality Bender. I can take reality and form it to my whim. Whether it?s me or the world around, I can change it to anything, and I have been doing so for the past 300 years. However, due to my recent negligence, I am being chased by the FBI, the CIA, and the National Secret Service. The only way to stop them is for me to pass on my powers onto a being of my choice. I have peered into your life, and have decided on you being my successor. Once I pass on my powers, all my recent mistakes will disappear, as it they never happened.?

I just stared at the man in disbelief. ?Ok, it?s time to call the crazy police.? I reached for my cell phone.

The man sighed. ?Look, I can prove it to you...? He stared at me with what seemed like steel blue eyes. ?I?ll change reality right now.?

??Right now? But I won?t notice it, will I??

?I?ll make sure you notice it? he said bluntly.

?And I get to choose??

The man sighed again. ?Very well. Choose.?

I looked around the room. I could make him change the colors of the walls?or make him turn my TV into a big screen! But that seemed too small?I needed to change something bigger?

?How about you change me??

??ok, how??

I peered to the middle of my bed. The bodybuilding magazine was still opened to one of my favorite pages. It featured a blonde bodybuilder, around 6?5 and thick, VERY thick. His muscles were toned to a T, and his poser hid a well sized cock?.well, not really hid, but covered.

?I want to look exactly like this guy!?

The man glanced at the photograph, and then at me. He snapped his fingers, and said ?Done!?

I just stared at the man, and laughed. ?What? No Abra Cadabra, Hocus Po-? I stopped in mid mock. My voice?it was at least half an octave lower. It was definitely deeper?like I was 10, no, 15 years older!

I looked down at my body, and gasped at what I saw. Two huge mounds had risen where my flabby chest should have been. I could no longer see my gut, but I could feel with my fingers. No longer did I have a guy, but a 6 pack, chiseled very deeply in my torso. I ran my fingers through each of those bumps and crevices.

My Shoulders had broadened out. They flowed down into thick biceps, triceps, and forearms, and swelled even bigger as I flexed them. I placed my fists on my hips, and pulled off a frontal lat spread. I could see some of my back muscles surrounding my abs. I turned around and did a lat spread again, turning my head to see how my back muscles flare out. I notice the back of my quads, thick and striated. Down farther, my calves are a perfect diamond shape. Darting my eyes back up, I notice my poser was barely containing my muscular ass, practically bulging outwards.

Speaking of bulging outwards, the poser did nothing to hide my now hard dick. It didn?t grow much from what I had, but still was bigger. I peeled off the poser, and tossed it on the floor. My cock sprang up. I would have guessed it was about 7, maybe 7 and 1/2 inches long, and a hefty 6 inches around. My ball sac hung low, containing two very thick balls.

?Oh Shit?.this is?.unbelievable!?

The man smiled, ?Now do you believe me? Or should I show you more proof?? The man snapped his fingers again.

I felt my cock getting warmer, and I peered in the mirror again. It was growing longer and harder with each passing second. It shot past 9?.12?15 inches! Its thickness expanded to around 10, maybe 11 inches, and my balls were the size of hefty oranges. I looked back at the mirror. I had a bodybuilder?s physique, and a porn star cock!

I turned back towards the man with a big smile on my face. ?Man, I believe you now!?

The man smiled back at me. ?Of course you do. Now, will you grant me my request??

?Yeah! Anything, you name it!?

?I want you?.to have my powers.?

I stared at him, my now chiseled jaw dropping in disbelief. ?What?! But?why would you want to give that kind of power up??

?It?s the only way. I?m a wanted man, but once I pass on my powers, everything I have recently done will be reversed?well, except to the person I pass the powers to, of course. You?ll still remember out encounter. It will be everyone else who will forget.? The man stood up, and walked over to my window. ?I can?t live out the rest of my years living in fear of being captured, and used for unspeakable things.? He looked back at me, with determination in his eyes. ?Will you prevent that from happening? Will you accept my powers??

I stared back at the mirror-wall. With his powers, I can make anything mine?hell, with these powers I can make anybody mine!

I look back at the man. ?I?.accept.?

All right then?first though, if you don?t mind, I?d like to have one last good time with this body of mine.

I shrugged. ?Ok?what did you have in mind??

He just smiled, and turned to face me. He closed his eyes in concentration. Right before my eyes, I saw his shaggy clothing get very tight. I saw his arms through his sleeves get bigger and swell thicker with each passing moment. His chest jutted outward, swelling to the point where the shirt actually started ripping in the chest area?by itself!

He grew taller and wider at an alarming rate. Soon, his clothes literally were shredded by his growing muscles. He soon stood in front of me. I was big, but after that burst of growth, he was MUCH bigger. He looked to be about 6?6, 385 lbs, and his cock?it looked to be around 20 inches, hard and throbbing.

He smirked at me. ?I was thinking I have one last good fuck with this body, and you get to be my fuck-toy!? He pointed to my floor. ?Get down on your knees!?

I found myself obeying his command, I drop to my knees. He guides his 20? monster cock to my lips.

?Suck on it.?

I envelop the swollen head with my lips, continuing down the shaft. I get a good 10 inches on it down before I get a rhythm down. With one of my free hands, I massage his balls, and the other rubs his huge muscles wherever I can reach them. I soon feel precum leaking out, spilling into my throat. I choke a bit as it keeps flowing, but I keep the rhythm going.

?Oh Yeah, You love sucking on my cock, don?t you??

?MMFF? I can?t even speak, his cock enveloping my whole mouth. I continue to suck on it, precum now starting to gush out of the corners of my mouth.

?All Right, enough of that. Bend over on the bed.?

I take my mouth off his cock with a ?Pop!? His cock was still leaking a lot of precum as I bent over on the bed, my own cock pressed between the sheets and my abs. He slapped his huge cock on my muscle ass, spreading plenty of precum over my back, ass, and through my ass crack. He spreads open my ass cheeks, and with his middle finger drenched in precum, started fingering my hole, making it nice and loose. I moaned as he added in his pointer, then his ring finger, loosening up my hole for his massive cock.

?There we are!? He took his fingers out of my hole. ?I like to force my cock in a bit!? He placed his head on my hole, and began shoving it in, inch after inch. I moaned in ecstasy, feeling the power of his huge cock and he slowly starts fucking me. He picked up a good rhythm, occasionally slapping my muscle ass as he kept fucking.

He kept fucking me for what seemed to be hours, going from position to position. Finally, I ended up in a wheelbarrow position at the back of my bed; he kept thrusting in his massive cock faster and faster as I jerked off my own cock.

?I?m gonna cum inside you soon?you ready??

I could only moan in ecstasy as he kept pumping his cock in and out. Each thrust bringing us closer and closer to climaxing. He let out a loud yell as he came inside me. I gasped as I felt his cum filling me up. I felt my own cock convulse, splattering the wall behind me with cum. The second burst hit me in the chine, gushing my neck and down my chest. We both cummed for minutes, until, finally, our cocks calmed down, becoming semi-hard. Mine flopped against my cum-drenched abs. He pulled out of me, and clambered onto my bed. The bed creaked and bent down under the pressure as two big muscled men lay peacefully upon it.

?That was?the best sex I have EVER had in my entire life!?

The man smiled. ?Of course it was, and you?ll be having a lot more after you receive my powers?

I smiled at the thought, but then shook my head. ?So?you?re really going to give me these?powers??

He kept smiling at me. ?Oh yes. I think you?re a perfect candidate. Just promise me you?ll use them wisely, and I shall bestow them upon you.?

I smile. ?I promise.?

With that, he pulled me in, and kissed me on the lips. I felt a warmth course through my body, images flashing before my eyes of men, women, places, times. My head was rushing as he kissed me for the longest time. I finally blacked out.

When I came to, the sun was shining through my window. I yawned. ?Was that all just a dream?? I sat up, and felt something heavy slide off my chest. I look down to see pecs jutting out from my chest. The mirror, still covering the wall, shows a blonde bodybuilder staring back at me, the flaccid cock flopped between my legs, pre-cum still dripping from the slit.

I smile. My life from here on out was going to be much better!

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Well, what do you think? If all goes well, I can continue on with the next chapter!
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Interesting premise, great start!

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Old September 13th, 2008, 07:18 PM
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I think you have a winning first chapter. Let's see what direction you take this! Will he be immediately "wise" in using his new power or have to learn wisdom through many tough experiences (as in real life!!!)?
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Awesome

This was an awesome first chapter. Hope more are in the offing.
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I like this type of story. Good job.
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That was awesome! You should definitely write a next chapter!!
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Fun premise, but omnipotence is tricky to write. An example here - if the guy can change anything, why can't he just change things so he is NOT being pursued (how can he be afraid of ANYTHING)? The explanation isn't important (e.g., not being able to change too many things at once), but the question occurred to me immediately, and would occur to others as well. You need some kind of built-in limitation to the reality bending. Think of it as Kryptonite. You'll want it later.
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i'm not so much worried about his limitations, so please do continue this soon! i can't wait to see what he does next.
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Great premise, looking forward to chapter 2.
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Rawr more please loved it!
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Well I like it so far. Good stuff.
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Great start, you should continue with this story, there's a lot of potential.

Congratulations,

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