Radiance

[MysteriousMist]

This story is based on a chat that I've had with muscl4life, so a bunch of credit for it goes to him as well. Hopefully, I did a decent job in converting it to a story. I don't know if it counts as my first or something, but regardless, here it is.

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Radiance
By MystreriousMist
Based on a roleplay with Muscl4Life

Galen entered the tavern, watching out for any possible danger. 5’8” and 160 pounds, he had quite a number of wounds from his last expedition. His face was fallen and his mood was depressed as he walked into the tavern, picking a seat. He was still tense and on guard, the huge orcs and mercenaries at the bar looking at him, clear searching for another victim.

Lenard followed him in. 5’9” and 145 pounds, his outfit was a simple set of traveler’s clothes, though the large book and staff strapped to his back made his profession clear. His green hair dangled a little in front of his eyes, and his face was rather calm as he moved in after Galen.

The wizard and the warrior took a table and sit, waiting for their meals. “Damn it…I can't believe we've gone through all that trouble and still didn't get our hands at the treasure… If only I was stronger…I could have taken that chest…” Galen sighed a little as he cursed his own failure.

Lenard quietly put a hand onto Galen's shoulder, giving him a small pat. “Don't worry. We've still got enough to last the week. After that… Well, things will get figured out by then.”

A loud grunting sound draws the attention of the two. “Well if it isn't the little Galen and his pixie helper?” A tall dark haired muscular man speaks as he swings his huge axe.

“Back off, Drogor. I am not in the mood for your jokes.” Galen spat the words out as he watched the muscle-bound 6'4”250 man getting closer.

“So I hear you have this little green haired wizard to help you? Maybe he could try finding a spell to make grow some hair on your chest!” Drogor nearly shouted the words, the whole tavern laughing at them.

Lenard didn't even turn his chair, recognizing the voice and closing his eyes. “It would be more impressive if someone could find a spell that would put a brain in your head.”

Suddenly, Drogor grunted, his expression mad. “What are you fucking saying, you little dweeb?” The burly warrior just lifts the smaller man of his chair, holding him in one arm. Galen jumped out of his chair, shouting. “Get your hands off him, baboon!” He drew his sword, looking around a little more nervously as the Hurok Brothers, immense half-orcs at 6'8” 500 pounds of insanely huge muscles step up to help their boss.

Lenard makes a small motion with his hand behind his back as he looks into his eyes. “Oh? It looks like you might need to clear your head before you get something else in there.” He let his fingers rub together for a moment as he spoke, a slight blue grow wrapping around them.

Drogor growled quietly before suddenly dropping the wizard down and motioning for his henchmen. “What the hell are you doing? Come on, we have to escort the Duchess back into her castle!” The Hurok Brothers tried to tell their boss they had already accomplished such mission, but it was useless, Drogor already kicking their butts to get out off the tavern. Galen looked at the wizard, letting his hand down to help him up. “Are you alright?”

Lenard gave a quiet sigh as he picked himself up, brushing himself a little. “It's nothing. You get used to dealing with people like them when you have to.”

The meal was a quiet affair when it arrived, Galen looking down at his food and eating quietly the entire time. Lenard noticed it, but didn’t say a word as they finished. The friends decided to call it a night and went for their room, but Galen seemed restless as he lay awake in bed. He slowly left it, and walked quietly to Lenard’s door. He swallowed a little before shaking his thoughts, knowing he had to ask. “Erm…Lenard…you still awake?”

“Come in.” Lenard spoke from his position, sitting cross-legged on the floor, his eyes turned to the door as he entered. “Is there something wrong, Galen?

“Well…I was thinking… You wizards have all those weird powers… and I know Drogor was just messing with you…but…can you actually change my body like he said?”

Lenard sighed quietly and pulled himself up. “Yes and no. I could probably do something temporary relatively easily,” He said, waving a finger around in a few circles and tapping his chest lightly. A light swelling filled Galen's chest as his pecs pushed out a little against his clothing, filling his shirt a little more. “But, that wouldn't be what you're looking for, would it?”

Galen felt the strength in his chest swell for a moment, but shook his head. “Erm… no…I mean…” He signed quietly as he stepped into the room, looking at the floor as he walked. “All my life I’ve always did ok… but I’ve never really stood from the others, you know? I wasn't the smallest guy but never the biggest, and I’m not the best swordsman, or the strongest dude…I just wanted to feel like Drogor does, confident that his own muscles and size would get him everything he wanted… Everything…” Galen sighed again as he looked up at Lenard…

The warrior knew his friend had a thing for big, strong men, as he used to live with the massive barbarians of the Deep Forest. In fact, Galen really wanted to be more than friends with Lenard, but since he had neither the muscles neither the mind to impress the brilliant wizard, he just feared the green haired genius eventually would get tired of him.

Lenard gave him a small smile, rubbing his chest softly as it sunk back into his body. “You're really serious about this, aren't you?”

“Of course I’m serious. You have your magic to help you, so you don't know what it feels like…to be totally powerless under the circumstances…you want to do something but your body simply can't… It’s so… frustrating…” Galen sat onto the bed and sighed. “I just wanted to be someone whose presence would never be overlooked.”

Lenard gave a quiet sigh as he joined him on the bed. He knew the feeling far too well. It was why he had begun his studies so earnestly when he found out he had some magical potential. He could make up for some of his shortcomings, but it still wasn't the same. The least he could do for his friend… “I… I do. And… I don't want you to have to suffer from it, too.”

“It doesn’t matter.” Galen’s face sunk into his hands as he just sat there, trying to recover. “You said it is impossible for me to get bigger through magic, not permanently… and I think I'll be even more miserable if I’m all big and strong and wake up the same puny me the following morning.”

Lenard took his hand, giving him a light squeeze. “I said that it would be easy for me to do a temporary thing. It doesn’t mean that it’s the only way.”

“What…do you mean, Lenard?” Galen asked, feeling his face lighting up with joy.

Lenard smiled at him as he held him a little tighter. “There are… things that I can try. It’s still experimental, and it could be difficult, but… But for you, I don’t mind trying to do it the hard way.”

Galen shook a little at the idea. “You mean…?”

“There's always more than one way to do these things. I can give you something small quickly. But for a permanent change, it needs a bit more setup. It's just…” Lenard closed his eyes for a moment. “It also means that I have to put a lot more into the spell. If I fail, the backlash will be a whole lot worse than normal.”

“Wait… wait… You mean you could get hurt? No… Forget it. I don't want it anymore,” Galen said as he stood up, wiping his face. “I don't want you to get hurt because of some silly feelings I have… I'd just gotta toughen up. I am not big and huge… and I never will be…” The warrior said as he looked into the eyes of his friend. “Sorry for bothering you. Just… pretend I never asked.” He just looked sadly as he started to turn and walk away.

Lenard shook his head. He knew there was some risk involved for himself, but he couldn't mention that to Galen. He held on tight to his hand, not letting him leave without listening. “Not me. It's you… You're the target of all of the magic. If I mess up, then you'll probably be the one who suffers because of it.”

“You mean like… I could turn into a mouse or something like that? Grow a second head on my shoulders? I might become a lizard man? Well, any of those is still much better than being this ridiculous average dude… Besides… Lenard, you’re such an amazing wizard. I’ve seen you shrinking dragons to the size of mice, I've seen you dealing with hordes of beasts with your magic…”

Galen suddenly moved closer and kissed the lips of the wizard, passionately, vividly and tenderly, just savoring each moment. He pulled away as it finished, trying to make himself look into Lenard’s eyes. “Sorry for doing that… but you… always watch over me… And I… I just wanted to be capable for watching over you too… I… guess I… no… I know I love you Lenard…”

Lenard blushed deeply, nodding a little bit as he held onto Galen's hand. “I… you… Me too… If… Uh…” He turned away for a moment, bright red as he looked at the floor.

Galen just held his hand as he spoke.”Look… It's ok… I know you prefer huge, muscular guys, since you’ve lived among those barbarians… I know it's not your fault I’m so ridiculously small and frail… You need a big, strong man to protect you… I just really wish I could be that man for you, Lenard.”

Lenard shook his head. “That… that's different.” He shook his head and looked at him. “I… I know that I lust after that kind of man. But… even so, it doesn’t matter who I see. You’re the one that…” He let his free hand pull him closer, keeping his face inches away. “I know that I can need help sometimes. But even if it's risky, I'm glad that you're the one helping.” He gulped quietly, taking Galen's hand and pulling it tight to his chest as he returned the kiss, letting his lips fall against the man. “Now… now, it's my turn to try to help you.”

Galen just gulped quietly, understanding. “Can you make me feel bigger and stronger, Lenard? Can you really?” He asked holding the hands of his companion and praying for the wizard to have the solution for his problems.

Lenard gave a small smile to Galen as they sat together, nodding. He squeezed his hand for a moment before he slowly let go. “Yeah… Guess I'll be busy tonight with preparations…”

Galen grinned and hugged Lenard tight. “Okay… But I think I can wait a couple of hours…” He said as he kissed Lenard once again, holding him around his arms as he pushed him onto his back, smiling as he leaned over Lenard. “Right now… I want you…” They kissed voluptuously and their hands started exploring each other bodies. “I wanna have the body that will turn you crazy, my friend…” the warrior said as he unbuttons his pants and caressed the hard bulge on the wizard's pants.

Lenard smiled as he moved his hand gently along Galen's back, stroking him as he pulled him closer. “Then… I guess we should take care of things first… before it becomes a distraction.” He leaned forward into him, slowly letting their lips meet.

Galen blushed as they squeezed against one another, letting their hands caress, their bodies turning together in the bed. The kissing soon led to more, and as the minutes passed, their sex grew hot and densely emotional. After the first round the two of them were both panting softly, held together tight on the bed. “Wow… I've never felt it like this… You’re so… so… passionate… It was like I could feel you sucking my very soul…” Galen spoke as he caressed Lenard's hair. “I… hope you didn't feel too disappointed… When I get to grow, I know it will be much better…”

Lenard quietly grabbed Galen's hand, holding it tight. “I know it will be. After all, it'll be with you.” He smiled as he put a gentle hand over Galen's eyelids, slowly moving over them, letting them shut closed and letting Galen rest as he slowly got up again.

Galen woke up only to find a note from Lenard telling him to meet at the Lake clearing. The warrior quickly gets there to find a lot of weird symbols, drawings and the big black pot, several scrolls displayed and Lenard is even holding his staff and his other magical apparatuses. “Whoa… Is that all necessary?”

Lenard turned to him, smiling. “I told you, we'd be doing it the hard way. I'd rather not leave things up to chance if I can help it.” He quietly drew something on the ground with the bottom of his staff before speaking again. “This… is a much more intricate spell than I usually do. I’ve put up a few backups and reinforced the circle several times, and even then… It’s not foolproof. But if you’re still sure…”

“I trust you, Lenard. Completely.” Galen dismounted from his horse and slowly started walking towards him. “What do you need from me?”

Lenard slowly pointed at the center of all of the drawings, a small circle in the grass clear. “You can… take off your clothes and… sit there. It'll only be a little while longer before I'm ready.” He blushed a little bit as he spoke, but he tried to keep his expression calm.

“Alright…” Galen took off his clothes and sat where he was told and waited for the wizard to cast the spell that would change his life forever.

Lenard swallowed quietly as he saw Galen move there. He took another glance over the lines he had drawn, trying to make sure that he hadn't made a mistake. He went over the incantation again in his mind, and he dipped a small vial into the pot, quietly taking it to Galen. “Once we start… we won't be able to stop. As long as some part of you is in the circle, the spell will continue.”

“I trust you my love…” Galen said as he braced his body to stay quite at the center of the drawn circle, getting ready to have the muscles he always dreamed of having.

Lenard nodded slowly, dipping his fingers into the vial and slowly tracing a pattern along Galen's back. “If… if things go wrong… Pull out of it. I won't be able to stop it.” He quietly continued the inscription, taking care, each of the flowing lines ending at the very center of one of Galen's muscles, the cool liquid seeping into his skin, leaving a trail of blue over him.

“I can feel it… Lenard… I feel… So good… So amazing!“ Galen moaned softly as he feels his body being changed by the earlier stages of the magic, his back starting to push out, his lats spreading outwards as the lines took a slight glow.

Lenard quietly nodded, his fingers moving over Galen’s shoulders as they began to push outwards. He spread his hands to the front of Galen's body, taking care as he slowly moved onwards, watching his body start to tense. His fingers kept tracing along every muscle, slowly crawling around his arms, his mouth muttering something quietly as a gentle strength started filling Galen’s body.

Galen feels his arms thickening, his chest expanding, his neck thickening, the shoulders widening, his whole soul feeling the power entering him, his mind focused on it as it seeped into him. He moaned softly, his cock pushing upwards as he feels the passion of Lenard feeding his body and giving the muscles he always wanted.

His hands passed over his pecs again, giving his nipples a soft rub as the lines soaked along him, the strength that he felt the last day filling him again, but the sensation lingering, a stronger pump pushing into him as Lenard's fingers moved downwards. “The lines aren't done yet,” He quietly said, a bit excited at what would happen when they completed, trying not to let himself get too distracted.

“Don't stop Lenard… Please, don't stop… Give me more… I want more!” Galen shouted as his muscles pressed against him so tightly that he felt uncomfortable on his own skin. Even with the pressure, he wanted more power, he had to have bigger muscles, he needed to grow, he ached for size and strength, and he needed to make Lenard give him more.

Lenard’s fingers split over his abs, feeling carefully for them, slowly rubbing as each section started to become clearly visible, the lines making them surge forward. His hands passed gently to his legs, running along both of their sides, taking them slowly before letting his fingers move to the bottom of his feet, slowly letting trail upwards along the center of his body. “Just a little more…”

Galen felt like he was bigger than most men, but he wasn't satisfied. He needed more He needed enough to bring Lenard into his side. “Lenard… please… Suck my cock… I need it… Come here and suck me… I want you to feel me growing… Please… Come…”

Lenard swallowed quietly, letting his hands pass over Galen's balls, starting to fondle at them as he bent down, the air around them starting to shift, feeling warmer as it all seemed to blow towards Galen's body. “Not yet… just… a little…” His own erection was painfully clear through his clothes as the lines slowly made their way up Galen's cock, his mouth held so close to it.

“Please, Lenard… Don't hold back… I need it… I want it… Please… Give me the power.. Don't hold back… I trust you… You love me and it won't hurt me… Give me the power I need to be the man you want me to be!”

Lenard's hands fell onto the head of his cock, all of the lines on his body suddenly glowing brightly as the air suddenly became hot and heavy, forcing itself down into Galen, his body suddenly beginning to surge, every muscle pushing outwards so quickly, trying to make room for themselves as his entire body tensed, the heat and the strength flooding into his body. “It's… really started…” His hands fell downwards, grabbing tight onto Galen’s legs as his mouth fell onto his meat, sucking deeply on it, his mouth pushing onto the length.

Like a dying star that explodes into a supernova, the impact of the spell created an aftershock wave that nearly destroyed the surrounding area. Galen was surrounded by a brilliant orb of light that pierced through his body, making him grow faster and faster, his limbs expanding, his size augmenting, his body changed as the magic made its way into the subject's organism, his cock growing bigger and harder even as the wizard kept sucking on it.

Galen continued growing, his muscles shone with the new energy and they grew faster and bigger as the wizard sucked on his cock, the warrior felt the world spinning around him as he became so much more powerful and muscular, he felt his lover's mouth on his cock and he suddenly became happy, he had now what he wanted, he was growing and Lenard was there with him to share his glory.

Lenard clung onto Galen's body as he felt it, his hands gripping tightly against him but slipping as the force of it blasted the landscape away, only the circle remaining etched onto the ground, watching as he saw Galen's body surging upwards, his body surging with his new strength, squeezing so tightly against him, his mouth pushing against his growing cock even as his eyesight faded in the shining light.

“Lenard… Lenard! Are you okay?” The powerful voice tone suddenly brought the wizard back into the world. He opened his beautiful eyes and saw Galen's face… Or, at least, what he thought was Galen’s face. He recognized Galen's features, but they were enhanced, and there was something wrong… Suddenly, the wizard remembered what had happened. “Oh, lights of Venya…you're alive…I'm so relieved...” Galen hugged his lover.

Lenard gasped as he suddenly pulled up, looking up at Galen’s body, trying to get his bearings straight. “Galen… You're okay… whew…” He breathed a sigh of relief as he hugged back.

Galen gently looked at his lover. “Better than that… You did it… You did it, my love!” Galen said as he stood in his perfect naked glory of a 7' tall 470 pounds of ultra hard, massive muscles, ripped and bigger than any other living creatures. Galen's skin tanned into a bronze tan and his hair was now longer, his eyes had turned into a beautiful bluish tone, and suddenly Lenard noticed that they glowed like pixies in the dark.

Lenard smiled and looked up at him, held gently in his arms. The space they were in was gone, all of his tools vanishing into the air. He looked quietly at Galen's chest, his eyes noticing something as he quietly trailed along the center of it, his finger glowing lightly as he touched him. “It looks like… it really was.” He smiled as a light circle appeared in the center of his chest for a moment before fading back into his skin.

Galen flexed his arm and the mountain of muscle grew harder, building and soaring with an unheard rage. Galen forced himself harder, the veins on his arms growing thicker and bulging with more power as he brought his arm closer to Lenard. “Touch it, Lenard… Feel the power you gave me… The power of our lust now lives within me… I can feel… It's so warm and good, this strength… It's so delightful to feel this strong! Touch it!”

Lenard's eyes shined gently as his hand grasped at Galen's arm, squeezing him with all of his strength, unable to come close to budging it. “You're… you're so big now… So strong…”

Galen smiled “And it's all because of you…” The massive man said as he stood naked before his lover, his growing cock still dripping cum, the same blue light now imbued into Galen's emissions. “You’ve given me strength… and you’ve done so much more” Galen said as he gently carried the wizard into the calm waters of the pond. “See for yourself.”

Lenard smiled quietly as he looked at Galen's face, turning slowly to look at the waters of the lake, not knowing what to expect, only knowing that for Galen to bring him, it would have to be perfect.

The wizard had always been a skinny man with a few unusual features that most would think were ugly. However, as he watched the reflection casted upon the crystal waters, Lenard just gasped, a new man looking back at him. The green long hair did not hide the dazzling manly features and gorgeous appearance of the one staring back into his eyes. Lenard stood up and noticed his body had also changed, now standing as a 6'3" 300 pound hunk of a man.

Lenard smiled as he quietly turned back, looking up to Galen. "This... you... it's perfect... Now... We can really be together." He squeezed Galen's body, lifting himself up as he pushed his lips together, locking their mouths as he pulled him tight.

Galen stood behind of his lover and engulfed him with his even bigger muscles "You didn't think I wouldn't share it with you huh? I knew that my cum had some power, I could just feel it... And it worked… It changed you too… Now you look bigger than those tiny barbarians that you used to worship! You deserve it Lenard. For you unselfish love, I gave you a share of the strength I had within me."

Lenard just smiled as he let his hand touch the circle again, it slowly fading away from Galen's chest. "Our strength..." He squeezed tight against Galen, his body feeling so relaxed and natural as they touched together, their lips holding tight against one another as they embraced.

[redkage]

Heh, I knew he'd bring out the author in you. Great job on this story.

[skumbum]

Yeah I enjoyed reading it.

[MysteriousMist]

Thanks. The story might continue further, but I just wanted to see what everybody thought of it so far.

[muscl4life]

Well, I honestly think you deserve the credits for this story, because you had the hard work to pick a rp structure and convert it into a cohesive new story, not to mention that you still needed to fill in the few logical blanks that kept the original role play to shine so switfly as it your "Radiance" does.

I am always proud of motivating new writers to contribute on this forum, new talents, fresh views about muscle growth, all of the "rookies" are indeed very skilled storytellers who just needed to find their audience, and I am always avaiable to read a good muscle growth tale.

Congratulations, dude

Cheers

[tagsnola]

... right at the end there. I wish *I* could find a wizard like Lenard. I'd wish for muscle like that too, but I wouldn't be greedy. I don't need to be 7' tall. I'd even give up a few inches in height to get more muscle.

[redroger11]

Oh my God!! This can't be your first story. You must have written a lot more somewhere else. This has all of the best in it. The size, the emotion, the real men in love. You two have got to play more often, if this is the result. Woof!
OK so the really personal question is..
Are you Galen or Leonard?
And for you and Muscl4Life both, please, please, please...
Keep Writing!

redroger11

P.S. Love your creed man. I think you've found it.

XOXOXOX;
rr11

[muscl4life]

Well I did play Galen, because I wanted Mist to explore the control of my growth, so i just reacted to his inputs

[philat99]

Great chapter. Hope you keep it going.
Mike

[MysteriousMist]

Originally Posted by tagsnola

... right at the end there. I wish *I* could find a wizard like Lenard. I'd wish for muscle like that too, but I wouldn't be greedy. I don't need to be 7' tall. I'd even give up a few inches in height to get more muscle.

Don't we all wish we could find something like that, huh? I left the measurements alone there, but somehow, I don't think they're done yet.

Originally Posted by redroger11

Oh my God!! This can't be your first story. You must have written a lot more somewhere else. This has all of the best in it. The size, the emotion, the real men in love. You two have got to play more often, if this is the result. Woof!
OK so the really personal question is..
Are you Galen or Leonard?
And for you and Muscl4Life both, please, please, please...
Keep Writing!

redroger11

P.S. Love your creed man. I think you've found it.

XOXOXOX;
rr11

As you've heard him say, I played Lenard that time. It's my first time writing a MG story, but I've done a bit of casual writing before, so it's not exactly my first foray into writing altogether. There are a lot of things that are unique to the subject that I tried to do well, though.

And I'm probably closer to finding my voice, but I wouldn't say that I've found it yet. This is certainly a lot more unrestrained than what I've done before, though.

Originally Posted by philat99

Great chapter. Hope you keep it going.
Mike

Thanks for the comments. I've still got more in the works here, so I guess we'll see how things go from here.