TRISTAN - Preview

[rextorres]

Here's a PREVIEW of the 40-chapter, 270-page muscle story "TRISTAN".

Hope you guys like it!

TRISTAN'S TUG-OF-WAR

Tristan ran over to where the large puddle of water was located,
which was near the end of the beach. There was a long, thick rope
that was lying on the ground, since that was a perfect location to
hold a tug-of-war contest. Tristan grabbed one end of the rope and
held on to it, placing his right leg in front of him and his left
leg behind him.

"You see this, Alex?" Tristan said to his friend, who was looking
on. "I'm not going to move from this spot? I will stay standing
here, no matter how many guys are going to pull on the other end of
the rope!"

Kurt and Lee grabbed the other end of the rope, and they immediately
started pulling! But Tristan leaned back a little and just stared at
the two, big muscular men, while continually looking at them with a
grin on his face.

"Come on, Kurt! Let's finish him off?" Lee said to his partner, as
the two men started pulling even harder since they noticed that
Tristan had not lost an inch of rope yet.

"Hey guys, come give us a hand!" Lee shouted at the other men, who
were just arriving at the gym.

Within moments, four more muscle men had joined Kurt and Lee, as
there were now six bodybuilders who were pulling the rope, while
Tristan was still holding ground while standing alone on the other
side of the mud pool.

The six men let out a loud series of grunts and shouts, as Lee
spurred them on to pull even harder.

"Heave Ho!!" Lee shouted, as the six men grinded their teeth, as
they all together increased the power, straining every muscle on the
shoulders, legs, and backs in order to topple the lone, pre-teen boy.

"Oh, come on! You guys call yourself bodybuilders?" Tristan said in
a sarcastic tone of voice, while he laughed at the six men. "I'm all
alone! Pull harder!"

Lee looked over in disbelief, when he noticed that the
overconfident, cocky kid was still standing on the opposite side of
the mud pool, acting like it was costing him no effort at all to
hold the six muscle men at bay.

"Hey guys! Come help beat this kid!!" Lee shouted, as a bunch of
muscle men were walking onto the beach as they had just gotten off
the tour bus.

Seven other men ran over to join Kurt and Lee. They all lined up and
grabbed a piece of the thick, long rope. Their biceps flexed hard as
the muscle men grabbed hold of the rope, tightening their grip to
the max. Then they flexed every muscle in their bodies, hoping to
pull the arrogant little kid towards the mud, forcing him to fall in
the pool.

But Tristan was not about to give up, even while he was facing
thirteen muscle men on the other side of the mud pool.

"Alright you guys? Altogether now?" Lee shouted out loud. "Heave Ho!"

Tristan flexed his biceps, as he tightened his grip. There was no
way the rope was going to slide or slip out of his hands.

"Oh you guys are weak!" Tristan shouted, taunting the muscle
men. "I'm getting my free gym membership out of this when I win!"

"HEAVE HO!!" Lee shouted once again, as all thirteen muscle men
grunted and screamed at the same time. They all leaned back even
further, as they strained every muscle in their arms and legs in
order to pull the arrogant little muscle kid into the mud pool which
was in the sand before them.

"You guys! EVERYBODY!! COME HELP ME OUT!!" Lee shouted, as more
bodybuilders were arriving at the gym. They all looked up and
pointed at the kid, who was winning a tug-of-war contest with
thirteen grown-up muscle men!

"LOOK AT THAT KID! HE'S ALL ALONE!!" some of the men shouted back in
disbelief.

"Come on! He's just a kid! You guys haven't beaten him YET???"
another said.

"HEAVE HO!!" Lee shouted, as 15 other men came walking on to the
sand from the tour bus. Some of them dropped their bags and towels
on the sand as they ran towards the scene of the tug-of-war contest.

Not only were other bodybuilders looking on, but almost half the
people who were sitting at the snack bat had gotten up and walked
over in order to witness the amazing scene. Tristan was seriously
outnumbered as he was now facing twenty-eight opponents who were
determined to bring him down. But Tristan grinded his teeth, as his
huge muscles in his arms, torso, chest and legs were coming to life
even more! Not only was he still giving his opponents a stiff
challenge, but he was giving his muscles a tremendous workout as
well. Alex noticed that Tristan's muscles in fact appeared to be
getting bigger as he was increasing the power.

"Alright, you guys. We're gonna BRING HIM DOWN!" Lee shouted at his
men.

"HEAVE HO!!" he shouted.

"HEAVE HO!!" the twenty-eight men replied, followed by shouts of
extreme muscular strain.

"Give me a break!" Tristan said, laughing at the army of men. "You
guys are a bunch of WIMPS! I'm ONLY A KID!! Don't tell me you guys
are about to lose a tug-of-war to some little KID like me?????"

"HEAVE HO!!" the men shouted once more, like an army battalion that
was doing some sort of physical exercise in unison.

"Why can't they get this kid to fall?" one of the onlookers wondered
out loud.

"Because he's Tristan?" Alex replied. "He's the strongest kid in the
world!"

"Alright, you guys!" Tristan shouted back at the group of men. "Now
it's MY TURN!!"

"AAAARRRRGGHHHHH" Lee shouted, as he started to get tired.

"Here goes?" Tristan said so all could hear.

Kurt and Lee looked at the boy in horror, as they suddenly knew what
was going to happen to them?

"HEAVE HO!!!" Tristan shouted, as he slowly started pulling a foot
of rope towards him.

"AARGGGG" Lee shouted, as his foot inched closer to the edge of the
mud pool.

"HEAVE HO!!!" Tristan shouted once again, reeling in another foot of
rope, using both his arms. His biceps were bulging with strength, as
he was slowly pulling on the rope, forcing all twenty-eight men to
step forward.

Lee slipped on the mud under his feet, and fell into the mud,
quickly letting go of the rope.

"YOU'RE NEXT, MISTER KURT!!" Tristan shouted with a huge grin on his
face.

Kurt just gasped as he saw the determination in the muscular boy's
eyes to win the tug-of-war at all costs.

"HEAVE HO!!" Tristan shouted out loud, as he reeled in another foot
of rope.

"OH NO!!!" Kurt shouted, as he felt his legs being pulled into the
mud. Lee had just crawled out of the pool, when Kurt was the next to
fall in.

After Kurt managed to crawl out, with his body completely covered
with muddy, wet sand, Tristan decided that he had done enough and it
was time to end the contest. He had accomplished what he had set out
to do; to show his superior strength and that it was time to claim
his prize. He wanted his free membership to the gym and this was how
he was going to earn it!

"ALRIGHT YOU GUYS? GET READY TO EAT SOME MUD!!!" Tristan shouted at
them, showing an evil grin on his face.

"HEAVE HO!!!" Tristan shouted one more time, as he flexed his
muscles to the utmost while he gave a powerful tug on the rope,
pulling it towards him with amazing force, making all twenty-six
remaining bodybuilders slip and fall into the pool of mud!

They all slipped and fell in the mud, almost piling on top of each
other in a loud series of shouts, moans and groans! They were
defeated, helpless, and now completely covered in wet sand, as
Tristan stood there, raising his hand in triumph, while still
holding on to his end of the rope. He cheered as he held the rope up
high, shouting in victory!

"I WON!! I WON!! I BEAT ALL OF YOU!! I CAN WORK OUT IN YOUR GYM!
YAYYYY!!!" he cheered out loud, as the crowd of almost a hundred
people stood there in deep silence. Every single person there had
their jaw dropped wide open in amazement!

"TRISTAN!! YOU DID IT!!" Alex shouted. Both Alex and Jason ran
towards him and embraced him as they cheered and shouted!!

Suddenly Tristan grabbed hold of both of his friends, and ran
towards the puddle of mud, just as most of the bodybuilders were
still busy crawling out of it.

"YIPPEEEEEE!!!!" the muscle boy shouted, as he jumped into the large
mud pool, holding his friends in his arms. All three of them were
now covered with mud, as they got up from the puddle. They grabbed
mud with their hands, and both Alex and Jason threw mud at Tristan.
The other bodybuilders joined in, and they were all bombarding
Tristan with balls of mud, as the muscle boy just stood there and
laughed.

"GO AHEAD? MAKE MY DAY! I GOT MY FREE GYM MEMBERSHIP!!!" he cheered,
as his muscular body was now completely covered with mud.

"HASTA LA VISTA, BABY!!!" Tristan cheered, as he jumped out of the
mud and started running towards the ocean.

"LAST ONE IN THE WATER IS A ROTTEN EGG!!!" he shouted. The muscle
boy ran up to waves before making the plunge into the ocean, while
he was being followed by almost thirty muscle men, who were
completely covered with mud as well.

Several of the bodybuilders grabbed Tristan by the arms and the
legs, lifting his body high over their heads while they were
standing up to their torsos in the water.

Then they all shouted together, as though this was their opportunity
to get back at the little kid who so easily defeated all twenty-
eight of them at a contest of tug-of-war on the beach that afternoon.

"HEAVE HO!!!" they all shouted, as they hurled Tristan's body
further into the water. Tristan decided to allow them to toss him in
the water, since he got what he wanted. There was no reason to fight
anymore, and he just laughed out loud when several men grabbed him
by the arms and by his legs as they attempted to lift him up over
their heads.

It was an unforgettable site, as the entire membership of the gym
found themselves swimming in the water, with their newest and
youngest club member in their midst.

Tristan loved it, and he knew he was going to remember this day for
a long, long time. Finally, he was finally able to work out whenever
he wanted, with a membership of the gym which he had earned all by
himself.

[Ender]

in a kid then Tristan is your boy... I have read several chapters in addition to the preview. Tristan is a "My big little brother story" that didn't stop growing...

It's a fun ride with kid muscle power to the extreme...

Ender....

[msman]

Where can I fined the rest of the story?

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by msman

Where can I fined the rest of the story?

First off, it's really not good to revive threads this old.

Second, here: http://www.superfantasystories.com/tristan.htm

[chocomus]

Nice story.
Just for you to know, tug-of-war is one of the most difficults sports i've ever practiced. It's not just pulling. You need to put effort in some places of your body, stay in a specified pose so that not strain to much certain muscles and try not to fall(if you try and you're the first of the row you'll know what i'm saying) or get your hands bruised (well, thats unavoidable, wearing gloves is forbidden). We were newbies in the sport and didn't know where we were getting into...untill we saw that our rivals were the firefighting team. They were all enormous!!!! I competed once and (appart from being sore a week) because of the strain i broke one of my molars. I was so tired after it that I didn't realized of it untill i was eating lunch hours later.

[rextorres]

Originally Posted by msman

Where can I fined the rest of the story?

Go to my site at www.superfantasystories.com

[tagsnola]

... is a good one. Tris struggles to come to terms with being so powerful as he alternates between youthful exuberance over his muscle power and alienation because he is so different. There is tension between Tris and his older brother Richard whom Tris has always looked up to but who does not deign to give Tris the time of day. But Tris is not alone. He has his dad, a fireman hero and his muscle friends at the gym, especialy Kurt, and his neighborhood friend, Alex. Each of Tris' friends in their own special way, help Tristan to come to terms with who he is and what to do with what he has. Tris is a fun read wtih something for everyone.
- TagsNOLA