My brother's friend Nico - Part 2

[kenstaff]

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[carmaniac12345]

i love this story,,....can't wait for part 3

[Aardvark2]

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[Sanitarium87Q]

Will this story ever be continued??

[MslSpain]

...and where the hell is Nico?

[GoldfishBW]

I have been dying to read the rest of this story!

-Brad

[kenstaff]

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[JRB2611]

Don't let that stop you from continuing a great story and one that more than a few of us would really like for you to continue.

[/\/\usclekid]

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOUR ABANDONING THIS STORY!!!! This is a sad event, I was waiting desperately for the following chapters. It was such a great story...

[MAMuscleGuy2B]

I am very sorry to hear that, you cannot let a few people who are jealous of your creativity ruin it for the many who loved and lusted over it. I seriously hope you will reconsider continuing it, or at least leave it with an ending chapter. I think it was hot and sexy, and left me wanting more. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!

Originally Posted by kenstaff

Sorry guys, I know it's stupid but honestly... I got right pissed off with the grammar comment. I've read many stories on this site and most of 'em have down right awful grammar and spelling. I took the time and watched my spelling and grammar as best I could while also trying to endow a sense of 'being there' for the reader.
Seeing critisim made me evaluate all the time it takes to write and post a story, and despite some of you wanting more, negative feedback kind of makes me realize it isn't worth that time.

Glad most of you liked what I submitted. Cheers.

Many of you recognize me as the grammar nazi and yet I saw nothing about the grammar that jumped out at me and needed commenting about. I thought it was well written. I think the comment about grammar was made in jest as a sarcastic poke at some of the other threads in the forum recently.

After reading the grammar comment I went back and scanned the story again and found nothing grammatical to comment about.

Treat this is as "GNSOP award". (Grammar Nazi Stamp Of Approval) Don't stop writing. Yes, it does take a lot of time but an author's grammar like a good engineer's design, is rarely commented on when things work right. But let there be a vibration in the jet engine and everybody on board will know about it.

Don't panic. Remember critics are a dime a dozen and usually just noise. But good critics are valuable resources.

[chocomus]

Please continue!!We want to Know, we need to know... your story is great! That's the only important and not the grammar, WHO CARES ABOUT GRAMMAR?!!!!.Please, please, please,please,PLEASE !!!!!!!!! (my knees are on the ground, what more do you want?)

[ethernet_jock]

I have to agree with the supportive comments. This is one of the few stories on this board that probably leads into and similarly matches a personal fantasy. I really enjoyed reading it!

I didn't find anything wrong with the grammar and it was perfectly easy to understand and follow-along. If someone wants to bitch, I say, let them do better!

[Pagemaster_B]

There's a big difference between negative criticism and constructive criticism. People often don't know the difference. In my experience, constructive criticism gives both the good and the bad, and if someone points out a particular part that doesn't seem to work, they often suggest ideas to help improve. It often makes me think about it, but ultimately I decide to keep as is or change it. More often with writing, constructive criticism is used to help clarify ideas and actions. Negative criticism just pisses me off, because they're often vague, mean-spirited, usually do not offer helpful suggestions, and almost always comes from people who think they know everything about writing, but don't. I know it's discouraging to hear bad things about something you've worked hard to write. One of my best written stories was ripped apart and ridiculed during a fiction writing workshop. That was not a pleasant experience, but it did not stop me from writing.

Don't write for other people, write for yourself.

[Aardvark2]

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[baird]

i think it's pretty clear that everyone is quite sorry, even if they didn't do anything.

doesn't that show you how much people want to read your story?

[Logan2009]

i lovee this story! i wish it was continued!!