Leonard’s school buddy - Part 1

[vergatario01]

This is my first attempt to writhing, so I appreciate all your constructive feedback. English is not my main language so a few mistakes are likely to happens. I'll try to improve for Part 2. British Council don't let me down...



[COLOR=White]Leonard’s school buddy[/COLOR]


[COLOR=White]Part 1[/COLOR]


[COLOR=White]Leonard Hudson was miserable; since middle school his life was a constant series of humiliations at the hands of the two biggest and meanest bullies in the history of Highland High School. For some reason, that he was incapable of identify, Mark Dalton and Jamie Armstrong not only casually abused him as they did with everybody else in the school -teachers included- they seem to look for him deliberately. Not a day went by without them taking his lunch money, and finding new and imaginative ways to make his life a very good pretense of hell.
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[COLOR=White]He prayed every single day for something to happen that make things different, he wanted the bullies out of his life or better yet, that someway they be made suffer as he did. But that was very unlikely; both boys were huge seniors, stars of the school football team, and if his huge size wasn’t enough to intimidate the teachers that may had restrained them, their success in the field gave them Carte Blanché to do as they please. Leonard always wanted to grow strong enough to get even, but his body just didn’t cooperate. He tried to lift weights using his older brother’s home gym, in his mind it required only time and hard work to get bigger and stronger in order to defend himself from the those boys. But after three months of two daily hours of hard training and consuming his entire allowance in supplements, there was no significant change in his weedy frame, so he resigned himself to be a wimp for the rest of his life and bailed out. He comforted himself a little with the idea that some day his brain will make him richer that those jocks that picked on him. But meanwhile that was life: the strong liked to squash the weak.[/COLOR]
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[/COLOR][COLOR=White]Then just three weeks in the new 2009 school year –his last before college thank God- something happened that changed his life forever.
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[/COLOR][COLOR=White]For Leonard, that day was really hard to get up in the morning to attend school. The idea of dealing with his tormentors –that were bigger than ever this year- was too hard and the bruises in his body were getting harder to conceal. His parents were questioning him about his baggy clothing; they weren’t buying the fashion excuse anymore. He knew that it was matter of time before they found about his predicament, but he wanted to stall it all the time he could. His mother will blow a casket about it and will insist in take the matter to the school’s authorities, she will not stop until her demands would be satisfied. That of course will brand him as a mama’s boy and his reputation will be even worst. And his father will probably disown him or something like that for been even a bigger sissy than he thought.[/COLOR]
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[/COLOR][COLOR=White]That morning, after a particularly silent breakfast –his parents were in the middle of one of their regular fights for money- Leonard slowly walked the five blocks that separated his house from school. Each step felt harder than the one before it. All around him were kids laughing and talking of stupid things –comics, sports, music or TV shows- as they moved to their classes. He hated them for been so happy when he only has space in his mind to dread what the day will bring to him. Having arrived purposely late, he was almost alone when -after putting his books in his locker- he felt a huge presence behind him. With a trembling sigh he slowly turned to face his tortures.
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[COLOR=White]But instead of them what he found was the hugest guy he had ever seen in his life. Way bigger than Mark and Jamie by the way. At first he thought that he was a new teacher or a member of the school security, but a look at his casual clothing and face dismissed the idea. His facial features made him very young. Probably 18 or 19 and in any case no much older than Leonard’s own 18 and half, despite that something in his eyes betrayed a maturity beyond his years.
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[COLOR=White]The guy had barely noticeable stubble in the square jaw of a very symmetrical face, his lips were full and thick and had a close-cropped dark hair. Quite handsome had to admit Leonard to himself. ‘The girls will be all over him in no time’ he thought with envy.

Looking all the way down from the guy’s probably 6’ 6” height he started to mentally catalog the dimensions of his body.
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[COLOR=White]The guy’s neck was very thick, easier bigger than Leonard’s scrawny legs. He was used to people’s arms to be bigger than his legs but the neck was something new. The traps and deltoids looked like boulders or cannonballs of muscle glued onto his shoulders, with his shirt at the verge of ripping apart over them. So stretched was the poor piece of clothing, that the printing on the front was distorted beyond recognition over the two thick and massive slabs of rock hard meat that were his chest. And if all his before mentioned muscles weren’t enough to take the green shirt to its breaking point, his colossal lats stretched viciously its sides in a silent scream for space. How the thing was in one piece yet was beyond Leonard’s comprehension.
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[COLOR=White]Then his attention was drawn to the arms –his inner daemons screaming that they will give him ever worst bruises than Mark’s or Jamie’s-, those things were like nothing he had seen before. Every single muscle -even the cords of his forearms- was bulging and sharply defined although his hand hanged relaxed by his sides. His gigantic biceps and triceps stretched the fabric of his sleeves to an “almost burst off the seams” level. If the guy was a fearsome individual, his arms were right out menacing in the outcry of the power they possessed. His huge beefy hands were at least twice the size of Leonard's, easily big enough to take hold of his entire head and seemed to have the adequate amount of strength to squeeze it to a pulp.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]Used to the awe and generally intimidated reaction of people that meet him -specially from the small guys like Leonard- the jock stood stills for a moment looking as the undersized teen absorbed his enormity. Then deciding that he had granted him enough time he spoke.
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[COLOR=White]"Hey dude! Yours?" He said pointing with his head to Leonard’s locker. His voice was deep and husky, like the one that may be expected from a man with a body like his, but that somehow didn’t seem to go with his young facial features. Nevertheless it was a voice that commanded respect.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]Leonard’s always ready brain, quickly came with a sharp comeback to what he considered a dumb question, “Noooo, is not my locker, if my school fridge and this aren’t books but chicken sandwiches. Of course is my locker butt head!” The remark however died in his throat, the certainty that he may be forced to eat his ‘sandwiches’ killing it. Instead a barely audible and shaking “I… I… Ah… Yes, yes it is” came from him lips. He was about to ask why, but dreading the answer he didn't.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"I need it" The statement was said without hesitation in a tone that left no room to even the idea of disobey it. Then looking Leonard flinch at him the guy continued in a more friendly tone. “Look I don’t want to impose but as I enrolled at last minute I had a crappy locker, a lower one at the end of the hall. So maybe we can share yours until I find a better one. What do you think? Deal?” He offered his gigantic paw to the confused little guy. The last thing Leonard would have waited was an explanation and to have voice in the matter. He obviously knew that a negative answer was a bad idea, so he quickly agreed and gave his hand in return, watching it disappear in the other's gigantic peace of meat. Despite that the new guy didn’t put any real strength in the handshake, Leonard felt like his hand was in a powerful vice and his shoulder almost came out of it socket.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"Thanks buddy, my name is Ken by the way" the behemoth introduced himself as he moved next to the little guy in order to transfer his books from his backpack.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"Le… Leonard, my, my name is Leonard… Leonard… Hudson." Even his full name was hard to remember with Ken so close. The first thing that the small boy felt was the heat that radiated from the titanic teenager's body, as if he had some kind of inner energy that poured through his pores. He sported a kind of casual power that entranced Leonard and made him nervous and humble. [/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]When he was finished, Ken turned and faced Leonard, which was so busy watching his moving muscles that toke him some time to realize that the big teen was looking at him back. Been caught staring in what might be misunderstood as a unhealthy interest, he quickly averted his eyes and toke a couple of steps back apologizing.
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[COLOR=White]Ken didn't moved or said anything for a minute or so, but regarded Leonard with a fixed look. His bright green eyes seemed to bore in the boy's very soul. Then crossing his unbelievably thick biceps and triceps over his chest, he pushed his colossal 5" thick pecs higher, and asked in a neutral voice "Are you a fag?"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]Leonard's eyes got wide as a saucer realizing that his attention was indeed misread, and that he didn't knew Ken attitude toward the gay community. He may be a bigot, a very big and dangerously strong bigot. Leonard quickly declared his straightness but the other was not convinced. Looking the fear on the little guy's face, he tried to calm him. "Relax man I'm not a fagot buster or anything," he said smirking "but I'm tired of gay guys hitting on me all the time. So if you are gay is cool with me, but the relationship would had to be different".[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"Don't get me wrong," he continued when was obvious that his words hadn't calmed Leonard "I have nothing against gays, OK? In general they are cool fun people, and I must admit that no girl can suck cock as a well seasoned fagot boy."[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]Startled the small senior asked "But that means that you must have had... intercourse of some kind with... you know... guys?"[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"Sure, look a mouth is a mouth and an ass is an ass, if it is male or female make no difference when I'm horny, or when it is convenient..." And as response to the confused look at his new friend to be he said "You know sometimes I need money, a better grade or a favor from someone and well I have no qualms in using my sexuality to get it. Plus I got horny very often. Nevertheless I prefer women because as you know there is nothing as the velvet sensation of a hot, wet and tight pussy." The embarrassed expression in Leonard's face was enough to tell him that sex wasn't something he had experienced. So he asked Leonard if he was a virgin, and got a positive answer.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]"Don't worry dude if you are straight I'll find you a good piece of tail in no time, and if you are gay I'll fuck to oblivion." Putting a hand over Leonard's bony shoulder, h[/COLOR][COLOR=White]e tried to reassure him with a broad smile[/COLOR][COLOR=White].
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[COLOR=White]"But I told you I'm not!" Leonard protested unable to believe his bad luck. For a moment he thought that he may become friend with this guy and maybe through him avoid his daily beatings, but again his bad star was moving him to a possible worst outcome. What if he failed the test? He didn't want to become Ken's bitch.
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"Sorry man I can't take your word on it. I'll have to test you." And before Leonard had a chance to ask how, he raised his shirt revealing the meaty bricks of his carved abs, It were inhumanly shredded and ripped beyond belief. Ken had the deepest, most defined 8-pack abs that Leonard had ever seen. They looked strong enough to take a heavy weight champion's punch without even flinch. Leonard though that the shirt will continue its raising path over the giant's head, but it dropped instead covering the guy's midsection. Intrigued he looked up to found the same focused stare and jumped back when Ken suddenly flexed, making every muscle in his body ripple with power. He held a crab pose for a few moments and then relaxed. Smiling he said "So far so good..." And watching at Leonard's clueless face he brought his right arm up, slowly flexing it into rock-hard perfection as he said "One last test to go. Come an touch my arm." And as his muscle rose... and rose... and rose, his bicep bulging into a gigantic ball of rippling muscled fibers covered with feeding veins under paper thin skin, Leonard approached with trembling steps.[/COLOR]

[COLOR=White]Moving his little hands closer, Leonard hesitated briefly before obeying the order. The guy's bicep was larger than his hand, so big that the small teen couldn’t even get his palm around the ball of the arm. The skin felt warm but the muscle was hard as steel. He pressed against it a few times, trying to dent it but nothing happened. The task showed to be beyond his limited strength. The big muscle teen moved and held his arm at Leonard's face level for a couple of minutes. Finally he raised up straightening himself with a shining smile. "Congratulation buddy, you passed." He said to a very much alleviated Leonard. That asked how so before he could catch himself.
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[/COLOR][COLOR=White]"Easy man, you watched three of the things about me that drove women and gay guys wild." He answered in obvious good mood, then proceed to name it: "1. My stone hard abs, 2. My flexed muscles, and 3. My bicep in all its splendor. You even touched my arm and..."[/COLOR][COLOR=White] he paused for effect watching his new friend squirm[/COLOR][COLOR=White]"... you never got an erection." He concluded pointing to Leonard's trousers[/COLOR][COLOR=White]. [/COLOR][COLOR=White]"So you are not gay... or you have the tiniest penis in the world". He finished laughing at his joke.[/COLOR][COLOR=White]The small guy blushed and instinctively looked at Ken's crotch. A huge bulge was there insinuating a really big member, but remembering the bridge they had just crossed he quickly moved his eyes to the open locker, suggesting that they should close it and go to class. Ken agreed and moved to allow his friend access to the locker.

[/COLOR][COLOR=White]Before the locker door was closed, Leonard decided that it was a good time to test the waters of Ken's possible protection. "Eh... Ken..." He hesitated not knowing if he can address him so familiarly.

"What?" The guy's relaxed expression was a very good sign.

"How long do you think that will take you to find a new locker?"

"Do you want to get ride of me so fast?" Asked Ken, a fake hurt expression in his face.

"NO! No, no no!" Quickly cut Leonard. "Is not that. Its... just a... just something a bit embarrassing... you know? Is that... well... with our books in the locker there is little space left inside."

"So what? Do you have more stuff to put inside?"

"Well not exactly." Leonard dried up, trying to find the lest embarrassing words to explain his predicament.

"Care to explain?" Asked Ken, a little bit intrigued. After a few seconds of dead silence, with a deep sigh Leonard did it "Is that with so little space I will not fit inside..."

"Fit inside?... Oh... I see, you are been bullied." Ken clenched his fists, causing his forearms, biceps, even his chest to grow. This -to Leonard further astonishment- caused the green shirt to [/COLOR][COLOR=White]split a little on the center of his chest[/COLOR][COLOR=White]. [/COLOR][COLOR=White]"Don't worry buddy as long as you are my friend no one will hurt you." And smiling mischievously he added "And those that dares to will regret it for this and their next three lives. Now lets go to class."

Closing the locker and with Ken shrugging off Leonard's comments about his shirt with a "Happens all the time, get used to it", they headed to Miss Rebeca Cappadonna's English class, which both teen were enrolled to.

"Just for the record" said the young muscle monster as they walked "I have put guys bigger than you in smaller places. You would be surprised how much a human body can compact when enough force is applied on it." The evil smile in his face sent shivers down Leonard spine. "But don't worry buddy," he quickly said sensing it "I'm a better person now."

"Here we are." Announced Leonard a few minutes later when both were at the door of classroom 23.

"You go inside first buddy." Suggested Ken, "I love to make grand first impressions. After all I had a teacher and an entire class to take over..." He estated with a wink.

'This is going to be a interesting year' Thought Leonard when he turned to enter the classroom, ready to see his new friend take over the class, and the entire school he had no doubt.

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What do you think? Please be nice...
Next chapter: Ken take over the class -teacher included- and meets Leonard's bullies.[/COLOR]

[johnd]

This is a great story. I love the interaction between Leonard and Ken and I can't wait for Ken to meet the bullies. Keep up the good work.

[rextorres]

Now, THIS seems like a fun story! I HATE stories where the bullies always win. There are too many of those on this forum, and it's time for the bullies to be put in their place.

I like how Ken offered to be Leonard's "protector". It would be interesting to see what happens, next time Leonard gets bullied, and Ken comes around...

[philat99]

It'll be great to see Ken overcome poor Leonard's bullies. Bring it on!
Mike

[krims44]

Good story. It leaves you anticipating the possible interaction between ken and those bullies. Look foward to reading more.

[umlerian49]

For a non-native-english speaker, you're doing pretty darn good. If you had someone to help you just a little with those few vocabulary and grammar mistakes, you could be as good a writer as any on this forum.

As for the story itself, I want to see more!

[arpeejay]

Ditto all of the above. Good premise, great start, pretty good command of English. Thanks!

xoxo

Richard

[vergatario01]

I want to give thanks for all the positive reviews, I hoped some positive posts but nothing like yours... I'll try to don't let you down.

About the bullies, let me assure you that they will pay dearly by his actions, because let me clear that Ken is not exactly an angel or a hero. He has a very mean streak, and when he is riled to action things tends to get ugly. I'm planning that Ken tell a little of his past to Leonard in Part 3, and it won't be pretty.

And about umlerian49 advice, I like the idea. It may be something like an editor. Do any of you guys known of somebody willing to do that?

I think that part 2 will be ready in about three weeks, things are a little crazy at work.

Take care...

[skumbum]

I didn't notice any mistakes because I was too interested in this great story. I'm definitely looking forward to the continuation.

[skumbum]

I see them now that I am reading a second time. However, your English is really really good. I would be happy to edit if you want, just private message it to me.

[Reeza]

I really like where this is going. Right up my alley! I like Ken's friendly arrogance and his eagerness to show off. You're doing very well, and I will be looking forward to the rest of your work.

[worshipper]

Thanks for the writing. This is going to be a favorite for me. What a hero

[hornetstar]

I'm starving waiting to read Chap 2. Hope it comes soon

[hornetstar]

I'm very sorry to bother your but I'm really waiting to read the sequel. I hope you'll find some time to post it.
THANKS

[Reeza]

I'll second that request. I was just thinking about this story yesterday, but I had forgotten the title.

I hope you're not delaying because you're worried about your command of the English language. The first part was just fine. Would love to see the next part.

[vergatario01]

Hey guys.

First thanks for the feedback, and the kind words. Part 2 is not ready yet, mainly for the huge piles of work that I have at the moment. But also, because I have a muse overdrive, each time I find a little time to write the story grows and grows. New ideas (even characters that bring new spins to the story), descriptions and side notes to better picture the characters, keep popping up. Part 2 is already longer than 1, and I'm not even close to finish it. I had no other choice but to break what I planned to be one part in two. Second installment will be about the class take over and the actions that leads to the encounter with the bullies, but sadly the actual meeting was moved to Part 3.

I'll try to write more often, but right now we are doing the new server room of the company. Things are and will stay crazy until the end of April. We are working over 12 hours at day just to stay on schedule. So, please be patient. I was planing to keep Part 2 until Part 3 was also ready, this in order to deliver all what I promised in Part 1, but I'll release it as soon as is ready.

Take care...