The Wide Prairie Sky Chp. 4

[umlerian49]

Story withdrawn.

[TemptationIV]

Amazing story. I cannot wait for more... but I suppose I have to!

[Reeza]

Excellent again. You're spoiling us.

[Otaru_grower]

Awww, Alex is such a sweetheart! Haha, maybe that cop has a little bit of a crush.

And it suddenly occurs to me that being a police officer might be a perfect job for Alex some day...

[arpeejay]

I agree with Reeza: You're spoiling us -- and I like it! Many thanks!

xoxo

Richard

[Jaypat]

It's definately keeping me interested. Great writing!

[Mass Driver]

Oh my god!!!! I'm still so affected by that, I can't give them the capitals they deserve.
I was laughing and clapping at the same time.
That is the best one I ever read.
That was the best use of all that power and might.
You had him fix the situation and put that asshole in his place without laying a hand on him.
That's real power. Gentle with the human element.
All raw power with the inanimate!!!
That is one of the most powerful bits of writing I ever read.
And I too, am very proud of you.
It's easy to tear things down and pull them apart.
A hand that has so much power.
A hand with a gun or a bomb, and it's easy to destroy things.
But a hand that turns damage back into what they were before.
And without even breaking a sweat.
(Low bass giggiling)
Masterful.
Brilliant.
Surely there are more words of praise in your future.
Please...
Keep Writing.

And I haven't even read one other word of comment yet.

I rarely end these things this way.
Hugs;
MD

[michaelv2]

Thanks so much for writing. It's very cool to see a hero grow into his role, and especially when the hero is a "restorer" not a "destroyer". Keep it up, you're onto something.