The Evolution Forum

Go Back   The Evolution Forum > Male Muscle Growth > Post Your Muscle Growth Stories
Welcome, Anonymous.
You last visited: Yesterday at 11:53 PM

Notices

Post Your Muscle Growth Stories Registered Members Only: Post your own male muscle growth-themed stories here and get feedback from readers. 18+ ONLY! Stories posted here will eventually be added to the Evolution Story Archive.

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
  #1   Add to Lover_Boy's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 8th, 2005, 11:28 PM
A Lover of Muscle
 
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Pennsylvania, NEPA
Posts: 266
Thanks: 20
Thanked 20 Times in 14 Posts
Rep Power: 10
Lover_Boy is on a distinguished road
Send a message via Yahoo to Lover_Boy
"Drawing Inspiration" (Part 2)

Mondays....what a drag. Art sat in studyhall, sketching. As usual, he'd already finished his Advanced Calculus homework. He'd been referred to on mre than one occasion as a "boy genius". However, despite his academic talents, his passion had always been in the world of art and imagination. Hie pecil once again deftly executed his commands. But this time, it was the angel with the body of a god that graced his paper. Art came to reality as a knock came on the classroom door.

Mrs. Fissher rose, and walked to the door opening it. The hairs on the back of Arthur's neck rose with a tingle as he heard a familiar voice murmuring something to the teacher. Mrs. Fissher motioned for the unknown person to enter, and in walked Michael. Apparently, Art wasn't the only one who appreciated the stunning looks of the boy as the quiet conversations stopped immediately. All eyes of the silent room fell on the magnificent specimen of young manhood that stood before them. Michael shifted self consciously from one foot to the other in the awkward silence, seemingly ignorant of the fact that he himself was the cause of it.

Mrs. Fissher broke the silence. "You may sit anywhere you like, Mr. Casanova. Just find an empty seat."

Arthur mused at such a fitting name for such a stud, "Michaelangelo Casanova". Barely perceptible, some of the room's occupants moved gymbags, binders, and backpacks from nearby seats in hopes that he might select the silently proffered accomodation. Art tried to look inconspicuous as Michael's face brightened upon spying him and the vacant desk adjacent to his. Eyes watched with disappointment as he made a near beeline for the space. Plopping into the seat, he beamed at Art as the room returned to semi-normal.

"Hi, Art."

Arthur felt uncomfortable for some reason. "Uhhhh, hi..."

Michael's outfit was simplistically chic and flattering to his form as he shed his black soft leather jacket. A deep red lycra shirt with long sleeves that clung to every masculine curve showcased his chest, shoulders, and arms nicely. In combination, a braided leather belt cinched with a great deal of slack around his narrow waist to hold up a semi-snug pair of black jeans that emphasized his perfectly rounded buttocks. A gold chain graced his thick neck, and a shell bracelet encircled his slender wrist. Attempting conversation rather than stare, Art blurted out, "Fancy meeting you here."

Not missing a beat, Michael replied. "I know. I knew I'd see you again, but I didn't think it'd be so soon."

Art's interest was piqued. "And what made you so sure you'd see me again...?"

Michael just smilled, and winked again, "Call it a 'hunch." He pulled out his schedule card, and held it out to Art, "Can you help me figure this out. I've never seen a schedule done like this." "This" referring to the confusing number-letter system the school used to grid work what classes a student had and when..

Art took the card. "Ahh, yes. It's a grid, like a map. Students here have the same classes every day, but in different order for each day of the week." He pointed as Michael watched with focused attention. "Like here, 'A-3'. It means today, you have Art Class third period. But tomorrow, it's 'B-4', fourth period. Get it?"

"Yeah, I think so."

"And it looks like you have the same Art Class as me every day. Gym Class too."

Michael nodded with a smile. "Cool, something to look forward to every day."Art blushed slightly at the veiled compliment.

"Looks like you're working on a masterpiece right now", he reached for Art's sketchpad, "Can I see....?"

Art clumsily flipped the portrait of Michael closed, stammering a bit too quickly. "No!...." Had he seen? At Michael's slightly hurt look, he quickly added, "It-it's not finished."

"Oh, okay. Well, maybe later when it's done. I'll show ya mine. Here..." Michael unzipped a portfolio and handed it to Arthur. "It's a bit comic book-ish, but....."

Art flipped through the pages slowly with a low appreciative whistle. Yeah, it was definitely comic book in nature. But it was refined, professional grade artwork. So polished was his work that, despite it's nature, it looked almost photographic. "This is.....excellent!"

Now Michael blushed, and Art couldn't help but find him adorable. "Thanks. High praise."

The bell rang, and everyone began exiting the room for their next class. Michael tapped Art on the shoulder, "I don't wanna sound lame, but I don't really know anyone here besides you.", he hesitated, "Mind if I sit with you at lunch?"

Art peered at him, and the hopeful, almost pleading, look on his face. Why would he wanna sit with me? "Sure. I'd be glad to have some company for once." He didn't know why this young hunk wanted his company. But he was glad.

"Great! I'll see you then."

As they parted company, Art stood for a moment watching the tight movement of Michael's ass as he walked down the hall looking at a floor map to find his way. Maybe this wasn't going to be such a bad day after all....
__________________________________________________ ______

[color=red]Okay, people, don't hurt me. There's Part 2. The muscle growth IS coming, I promise. I just need to get some exposition outta the way first. Pleaze, bare with me. Later, kiddz.[/color]
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #2   Add to no name's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 8th, 2005, 11:41 PM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Feb 2003
Posts: 736
Thanks: 76
Thanked 434 Times in 171 Posts
Rep Power: 12
no name is on a distinguished road
Don't Worry

Hey Lover_Boy,

It's perfectly alright to actually bother with a story line and character development before getting into the muscle growth. In other words, keep up the good work.

Have fun writing
no name
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #3   Add to bribear1042's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 9th, 2005, 12:37 AM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Tennessee
Posts: 127
Thanks: 3
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Rep Power: 11
bribear1042 is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to bribear1042 Send a message via Yahoo to bribear1042
Fan of plot

I too am a fan of a good plot. It makes things easier to relate too and things more believable. Plus, it keeps the reader intrigued. When the muscle growth is quick and large, there is no substance to the story. I like to develop a realtionship with the characters as I read. That, in my mind, is what seperates the mediocre stories from the excellent ones. I, personally, cannot wait for part 3. Keep up the good work, it is appreciated!
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #4   Add to Canus's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 9th, 2005, 02:15 AM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Netherlands [Europe]
Posts: 49
Thanks: 12
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Rep Power: 0
Canus is on a distinguished road
Send a message via MSN to Canus
I Like the style of your writhing and the devalpment of the storyline.
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #5   Add to GlamLeatherPunk's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 9th, 2005, 06:26 PM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Dec 2003
Location: Fairview, TN (near Nashville)
Posts: 73
Thanks: 0
Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
Rep Power: 11
GlamLeatherPunk
Send a message via ICQ to GlamLeatherPunk Send a message via AIM to GlamLeatherPunk Send a message via Yahoo to GlamLeatherPunk
Let Art get big muscles, too--PLEASE!

I'm looking forward to the next segment as well. How about having Art be the one (or one of the ones) who grows huge muscles? I've seen so many stories like this recently where everyone EXCEPT the hero or narrator grows into a muscle super-giant? That gets old after a while, and it's often frustrating--even heartbreaking--to see someone like Art being left out in the cold, so to speak. I'm sure that there are at least a few others on this forum who feel like I do. I mean, what's wrong with a fairy-tale type happy ending--at least once in a while?
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #6   Add to luvyalots's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 9th, 2005, 07:00 PM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: New Jersey
Posts: 405
Thanks: 0
Thanked 78 Times in 49 Posts
Rep Power: 11
luvyalots is on a distinguished road
Your descriptive is superb and the story-line is very intriguing and well-developed. I found myself actually sighing a couple of times...and that's a very good sign.
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
  #7   Add to Sanitarium87Q's Reputation   Report Post  
Old April 10th, 2005, 10:02 AM
Registered User
 
Join Date: Aug 2003
Posts: 40
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Rep Power: 0
Sanitarium87Q
Do be sure to continue the story promptly. I can say with confidence that this one will be another story to add to the "Best Stories I've Read" list.
Reply With Quote Multi-Quote This Message Quick reply to this message Thanks
Reply

Quick Reply
Message:
Remove Text Formatting
Bold
Italic
Underline
Wrap [QUOTE] tags around selected text
 
Decrease Size
Increase Size
Switch Editor Mode
Options


Posting Rules
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -7. The time now is 03:06 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.7
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, vBulletin Solutions, Inc.
Addendum by archiver: This page was originally part of musclegrowth.org and exists as part of an overall archive under Fair Use. It was created on April 16 for the purpose of preserving the original site exactly as rendered. Minor changes have been made to facilitate offline use; no content has been altered. All authors retain copyright of their works. The archive or pages within may not be used for commercial purposes.