Ralph and Lester Part I

[rmudge17]

So this is my third story system. Based loosely on a dream I had last night. I hope it pleases. Suggestions and comments are most appreciated.


Ralph and Lester
Meet George


Present:

Ralph is jealous of Lester

Two Months Ago:

Ralph and Lester had a plan. This semester they were going to get buff. They had talked about starting to go the gym more regularly the previous fall, but plans always seemed to find a way to fall through. This semester they were serious. They had done their research. They had organized the most efficient workout routine they could put together. They had made sure they had the time every day to commit two hours to the gym. This semester they were going to get big, and there was no alternative.

Today was the first day of that plan. Ralph sat at the tables outside the weight room waiting for Lester as was their usual arrangement. Lester and Ralph’s internal clocks were about five minutes off from one another much to Ralph’s continuing displeasure. The upside of Ralph’s daily down time was that it afforded him time to watch the other gym goers enter and exit. It was always fun to notice the differences. They always walked faster as they entered. They always talked more. Exiting there was a kind of somberness to their walk. Most of them were drenched in their own sweat and visible exhausted. But it was not the sweat and the strut that interested Ralph most; it was the look on their faces that drew his attention. You could tell there were proud of what they had just done. They know they’ve improved themselves today. They know as they sleep to night they will get ever so slightly bigger. As those nights built on one another these men would become bigger and bigger until one could notice their transformation. It was the knowledge of this and its evidence on the faces of those who left the gym that turned Ralph on as he quietly maneuvered his legs to most optimally hide his erection.

Lester and Ralph had made it to the gym a handful of times last semester, and in that time Ralph had come to identify some of the regulars. As he sat waiting for Lester on the first day of their new plan, he noticed a few of them would be working out at the same time as him and Lester. Over the two month break, it looked like a few of them had put on a number of pounds, but nothing spectacular, that was until George walked through Ralph’s field of vision.

Two Years and Eight Months Ago:

Ralph was meeting the guys on his hall for the first time. Amongst them was a rail of a boy named George. He had the build of a middle schooler and a voice to match. As Ralph reached out to shake George’s hand and nearly crushed it.

One Month Ago:

George lies on a bench in the locker room drooling. His torso runs the length of the bench and his forearms are the size of Ralph’s legs. Ralph and Lester stand by amazed at what has just occurred. The sound of running feet and a door slamming fills the gym.

Two Months Ago:

George walks out of the gym as Ralph sits at a table near by. He is no rail any longer. His face remains exactly the same, but every other aspect of Geroge’s body has changed since freshman year. His shirt darkened by massive amounts of sweat is stretched tight across his now massive pecs. His shoulders pull the shirt in a completely different set of directions and the individual muscles of his back can be seen straining against the fabric. As he walks closer to Ralph’s table, it becomes apparent that he is taller two. Where once Ralph had dwarfed the little freshmen, the junior now towers over Ralph. George turns to his nameless gym partner and remarks in a booming low voice “So tomorrow same time.” No amount of maneuvering can now hide Ralph’s engorged member as it yearns for George’s newfound body. George rounds a corner leading out of the gym and Ralph stands to watch the lumbering jock walk out the door. His ass has developed nicely two, thinks Ralph, as he notices a electrical cord hanging out the back of George’s gym shorts.

“Hey man what’s up.” Lester invades Ralph’s thoughts with his greeting.

“I think I just saw what are goal should be.”

“Great let's get too it.” Lester really was a great gym partner.

Present:

Ralph is jealous of Lester’s new body.

[GTlifter]

Ok a alot of jumping around but can't wait for the next few chapters to see where the story goes. It seem very interesting. Honestly can't wait.

[msclbldr]

it has potential, but I suggest you drop the post modern, non linear narrative.

[umlerian49]

Excellent start. The jumping around in time asks a lot of the reader, so I hope it's setting up something exciting.