The Doctor and David

[CelticMuscle]

(following the permission of Archeon to do something involving Doctor Who, I shall write each chapter as the Doctor sees it, if he would be so kind as to do the same as David sees it filling in any gaps as needed)

Part One

The Doctor cut a very lonely scene in the TARDIS. He had just said goodbye to Amy and Rory who having got Melody back from Madame Korvarian were determined to ensure that she grew up to have a normal life, although as the Doctor pointed out as she would eventually turn into River Song that was not going to be as easy as it sounded, but he respected their decision and pondering turned to the console and smiled as he threw the lever to cause the time machine to demateralise...

...and was instantly thrown to the floor as the TARDIS shook violenty and sparks shot from the console. Grabbing a small mallet the Doctor bashed it shouting "Oi, Behave!" before another jolt threw him into the seat. Staggering to his feet he pulled the brakes on and the TARDIS stopped.

"What was that all about, eh?" he asked of no one in particular and examined the console carefully. Moving from section to section, he became aware of something standing behind him. He turned around and came face to chest with a vast forest of hair causing him to sneeze. He looked up past the massive chest and saw a friendly, if very chisled face looking back.

"And who, pray tell" said the Doctor folding his arms in an annoyed manner, "are you then?"

(Archeon, care to answer the Doctor's question?)

[Ender]

I apologize for being picky but wouldn't this be more appropriate for the "Continuous Muscle Growth Stories" section of the forum??

[JP71]

Why is this so short? Damn, I was looking forward to this when I saw it posted earlier. Let me guess, David is full of huon particles and got pulled into the Tardis, am I right?

[JP71]

Originally Posted by Ender

I apologize for being picky but wouldn't this be more appropriate for the "Continuous Muscle Growth Stories" section of the forum??

I have to agree with Ender on this. It was painfully short, but very well executed. Apart from its brevity I have one other point to make. I really feel that you're writing about the 10th Doctor, bashing away at the TARDIS console with a mallet. The "Oi behave" was very Tennant, and correct me if I'm wrong when I say I can't recall the 11th Doctor saying that (although I'm probably wrong, hee hee.)

Please continue with this.

[CelticMuscle]

Originally Posted by JP71

I have to agree with Ender on this. It was painfully short, but very well executed. Apart from its brevity I have one other point to make. I really feel that you're writing about the 10th Doctor, bashing away at the TARDIS console with a mallet. The "Oi behave" was very Tennant, and correct me if I'm wrong when I say I can't recall the 11th Doctor saying that (although I'm probably wrong, hee hee.)

Please continue with this.

I shall do as soon as Archeon has had a chance to speak with Master of Steel

[ARCHEON]

First off, Ender is correct. This post should probably be placed in the Continuous Muscle Growth Stories section. Secondly, I've contacted ManOfSteel on this. And although I haven't heard back from him (yet), I suspect he'd be okay with a continuing story. Personally, I think it should be open to all. Could get very interesting with all the Doctor Who fans in the Forum!

[ManOfSteel]

Who is Dr. Who?
I'm barely kidding. I think I've just seen one episode in my entire life (same for Smallvlle, believe it or not). But I know the premise. It sounds exciting. This is not the first fan fiction written with David either featured or as the main character. When I write a story, I, of course know what's going to happen. So imagine how it is for me to be like one of you, and to see if someone else can capture David's personality (if that's their intent) and to not know what's going to happen next.
Looking forward to more of the story.