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 September 12th, 2011, 12:54 AM | |||
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| The Doctor and David (repost) (as per Archeon's suggestion, duly moved) Part One The Doctor cut a very lonely scene in the TARDIS. He had just said goodbye to Amy and Rory who having got Melody back from Madame Korvarian were determined to ensure that she grew up to have a normal life, although as the Doctor pointed out as she would eventually turn into River Song that was not going to be as easy as it sounded, but he respected their decision and pondering turned to the console and smiled as he threw the lever to cause the time machine to demateralise... ...and was instantly thrown to the floor as the TARDIS shook violenty and sparks shot from the console. Grabbing a small mallet the Doctor bashed it shouting "Oi, Behave!" before another jolt threw him into the seat. Staggering to his feet he pulled the brakes on and the TARDIS stopped. "What was that all about, eh?" he asked of no one in particular and examined the console carefully. Moving from section to section, he became aware of something standing behind him. He turned around and came face to chest with a vast forest of hair causing him to sneeze. He looked up past the massive chest and saw a friendly, if very chisled face looking back. "And who, pray tell" said the Doctor folding his arms in an annoyed manner, "are you then?" __________________ The stronger they are, the more muscled they are     |
| January 7th, 2012, 09:22 AM | |||
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 I do not fully understand this. Can you make a definitions thing in the first section. I mean it seems like an interesting concept but you need to fix the order and style. Because I read it and I have no real clue of what your writing about. The way you wrote this is more of a middle section of a story not a beginning. If you defined some of the things that I am assuming are creatures that would be most helpful. As well as make a more detailed intro. Remember you are giving us this world to work with. Sorry If I seemed a bit rude its just what came to mind.  |
| January 7th, 2012, 07:27 PM | |||
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| It's Doctor Who based. It's a British show that has quite the following here in America too. I've seen enough to recognize it. It's basically about a man, (alien) called Doctor Who, and a girl who changes out a lot saving the world. It's not bad but not my favorite either. |
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