Story I am working on......

[droz]

Sorry to some of you guys, I'm not gay or bi so my story is hetero.

I'd appreciate a critique with some feedback, positive or neagtive.

But if you're pissed that it's a hetero sorry. Please don't change it to be gay either and repost here. I like it the way it is so far.

Thanks
Droz

[iceman75]

I have said it before, I am not much into gay sex stories, although guys with strength and muscles turn me on a lot. I don't consider myself gay though, you have done a great service to all of us non-gay sex liking story fans by creating this story, it was pretty damn good, and although I prefer my fantasy women to be stronger than the man she is in a relationship with, you pulled the story off pretty good. Hope to see a lot more from you.

[droz]

Originally posted by iceman75
I have said it before, I am not much into gay sex stories, although guys with strength and muscles turn me on a lot. I don't consider myself gay though, you have done a great service to all of us non-gay sex liking story fans by creating this story, it was pretty damn good, and although I prefer my fantasy women to be stronger than the man she is in a relationship with, you pulled the story off pretty good. Hope to see a lot more from you.

It's great to hear some positive feedback! Especially from someone who's into hetero muscle growth also.

I hope I hear from more people

[Huge_Fan]

Thanks for sharing the beginning of the story with us. I like how you've started it.

I guess I'd love to read more about him doing stuff with his incredible, either posing/showing off, or feats of impossible strength. Perhpas a one-sided battle against Superman who tries to bring him to justice for his crimes.

Anyway keep up the great story.

[muscleboytom]

Great beginning to what I hope will be an awesome hetero muscle growth story!

I liked the fact that the woman in the story is a bodybuilder too! Would be awesome to see her grow as a result of her encounter with Muscle Man! Although her stats are really impressive as they are, would be a great turn-on for me to see her grow even bigger.

Keep up the great work!

By the way, mostly gay here, but have to admit my muscle fantasies swing both ways, and lately have really gotteninto female muscle growth/female bodybuilders.

Tom

[arpeejay]

I think it would help if:

(a) You reformatted it in MS Word or some other WP software with a grammar / spellchecker.

(b) You cut-n-pasted the story into the posting box, rather than submitting it as an attachment. If necessary, you could break it up into sections.

As it is I have to open it as a non-formatted text file, with the text scrolling off the screen on the right, etc. etc. Which makes it extremely hard to read. I almost always skip such stories, even when there aren't other issues. In the case of this story it would help if you cleaned up the grammar; pick a tense (present tense, past tense, either will do, just not both in the same sentenced please) and stick with it.

I don't have a problem with hetero content although I'm not hetero and I'm not really interested in descriptions of het sex. On the other hand, muscle is muscle and I don't much care if Young Tony Mills is playing with guys or girls.

Also, LONG, LONG, LONG ago, before I ever found any muscle fiction (and I've been reading / writing it for 10 years now) I came across a number of Amazon stories (I guess that's what you'd call 'em), about huge, massively muscular women who dominated the men in their lives. Those were pretty danged cool, too! :-)

Perhaps more feedback than you really wanted but I *do* appreciate it when people make an effort, and you're certainly doing so.

Best regards...

rpj

[rextorres]

I second that, rpj! But hey, I want to encourage all of you! Keep up the muscle growth stories, they're great! Thank you for writing them! I know, it takes a lot of work. I'm going to write a story about a french muscle boy who becomes a hero. Keep on writing!