Jack and the Muscle Goddess (Conclusion)

[arpeejay]

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[nnnrg]

It's a good finish. Thanks for concluding it. I think it came out pretty good. Not your best work, and I can see where you were stuck, but I like the twist at the end, and I suspect the jealous wench of a doctor will find herself with much less than the absolute control that the original had. And the fact that I can think about the peripheral characters in the story and find motivations means something.

[iceman75]

Really good ending, I love how the roles reversed, from the start, Kyrie was the one in charge, and then she seemed to become dependent, almost a slave to her desires.

[fillups44]

I loved this series of stories, and I appreciate the difficulty of the corner you painted yourself into. There is some good stuff here, good enough, in fact, that I would love to see some of these tidbits teased out. One was when Kyrie said she could still have Hardman wipex out, by the end of the story I was itching to have her (or someone else) try so I could read about how Hardman would use his newfound power.

Also, I felt some sadness in his loneliness. He wasn't satisfied as Kyrie's love slave so I was hoping his power wouldn't lead to an empty existence. He still feels like a gay man going through the motions of heterosexuality without feeling anything satisfying. That he is trapped by his own power is an inteiguing thought but it doesn't match the upbeat tone of the rest of the piece.

Thanks for creating such a vivid story. I hope this doesn't come off as negative because I enjoyed thinking about this one and am so happy you continued it!

[muscleboytom]

Thanks for completing this saga, well done!

[philat99]

Thanks for completing the story, or maybe there's more to come as a sequel. The mad doctor, after all, still has the secret to the "cocktail." Picture a hostile army of giants!!!

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[tommy dreamer]

Eh. Seems forced, rushed, as if you didn't really care about it.

Here's an idea. If you didn't want to write something about a woman, maybe you shouldn't have agreed to in the first place.

And apparently whining DID finally get you to finish.

Yeah. I waited for a while for this, and in the end, the woman ends up looking like a scared little bitch, which is kind of the opposite of what was originally requested.

Thumbs down.

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[muscl4life]

That's just ridiculous!

RPJ, you have my total support, my friend. This guy took your kind initiative for granted, for some reason he actually believes he is entitled to behave in such ungrateful manner. Writing any story is something very personal, and many times the writer just gives up on concluding a particular project for any personal reason, and that's part of his creative process.

No one should be bullied into writing or dropping a story, that's just ridiculous! This forum is to share common interest on MALE MUSCLE GROWTH! It has been discussed many times that female muscle growth is just acceptable in a supporting manner, and each writer is the sole judge of such feature.

Do us all a favor and just stop bullying fellow members into doing what you should be doing for yourself. Go write the stories you want to read and maybe others will follow you, but don't you ever again attack one writer for not sharing whatever kind of muscle fantasy you like!

RPJ, I am sorry for snapping like that, but it was just impossible to watch that guy offending you.

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[Shade]

Originally Posted by arpeejay

My apologies to the group for my intemperate remarks. I have now edited my IGNORE list, which now has a grand total of two entries (which speaks well of the group, considering I've been a member for nine years!)

Don't forget: IGGY is our friend!

xoxo

Richard

This is wisdom Richard. But your response was not unmerited, and as a writer I am sympathetic.

[nnnrg]

I hadn't even realized there WAS an ignore here.

But then I've never been tempted to ignore anyone. This is a generally good group.

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