So sexy that it hurts

[MuscleHintz]

Literally

I was reading some of my favorite stories again and one theme that I think would be AWESOME to see written about is a character beng so good-looking, so muscled, so sexy, that it actively alters the behavior of people around him. People aren't just jealous, or horny, or impressed. They're turned on to a whole new level. People ejaculate just from him turning his head and looking straight into their eyes. They cry seeing his enormous biceps flex as he does something as open a door or lift up a pencil. They can't control their own hands from reaching out and caressing his muscles as he walks by.

We've read stories about guys like this, but I think it would be really cool to read a story about his life, and how he deals with being the sexiest human alive. He wouldn't just be attractive by the abstract boundaries placed by Hollywood and the media. He would reach into mankind's most primal state and be everything our genetics have been created to find "sexy". The character's incredible handsome face could be both a blessing and a curse. He would be a god among men, but he would also be very lonely in a world where nobody can control themselves even in his presence.

[Rarity]

The idea of a man caring about "being lonely" when he gets worshiped. . . That doesn't sound too likely. lul

But yeah, good premise, I suppose. Maybe it could be a wish gone wrong.

[Lucas88]

HEY, *whim*! (sorry...don't know how to do the stars)

Big guys have feelings, too!

Actually, the "watch what you wish for...you might get it...IN SPADES" premise has been done more in hypnosis stories than musclegrowth/muscle stories, that I've seen. I love the "growth against your will" scenarios but this seems to be taking it to the next level.

To this end, though, most guys into getting muscles and "sexual magnatism" are as much into the control factor as they are the other. This could be a pretty interesting story if someone could write the conflicting emotions of losing control of life being totally objectified would cause. Even the most narcissistic individual needs a break and needs to connect above a physical level SOME TIME.

[MuscleHintz]

So I decided to write a short story based on this idea. It's only a rough draft that I wrote in one sitting, so it needs more polish. Do ya' like it? Think that I should expand upon it more, or publish it as it is? Here ya' go!

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I?m the sexiest man alive. That?s a fact. My face has been published in practically every major magazine worldwide. When the big guys at Hollywood first saw what a cultural phenomenon I had become, they thought I was a fad. I wasn?t. The demand for my body has only increased with each passing day. In every developed country, my name is associated with sex, muscle, and perfection. It?s what I am.

My body and my face are blessings. I did not ask for them, but they are a part of me regardless. Most pop stars can go around in public without attracting the media if they dress up in dull clothes, don?t put on their makeup, wear their hair differently, and slump their shoulders a bit so they can blend in with the crowd. Not me. It doesn?t matter what I wear or how I display myself. Everybody recognizes me. Everybody wants me. Hell, it?s not even a matter of being gay or straight. If my chocolate brown eyes, midnight black hair, and irresistibly seductive smile flash on a tv screen for even a millisecond, boners will sprout. They don?t even have to know who I am. My very physiognomy screams ?sexy?. I make people cum in their pants without even trying.

It?s pretty hard to imagine what it must be like to be this attractive. Allow me to explain it to you. Yesterday I took a went to the gym to work out. I?m a very muscular guy. Three-hundred-and-ninety pounds, in fact. On my 6?8 frame, however, it looks like lean muscle rather than the roided-out look lots of bodybuilders have. Anyway, it was only about two seconds after I walked into the gym that every single noise in the place stopped. Typically you have to give the receptionist your ID, but not me. Pretty much every single person in the country knows who I am, even the ones that know nothing about celebrities or pop culture. I try to avoid looking directly into anybody?s eyes because when I do, they soil themselves just from being overloaded from my beauty. It?s not something they?re designed to handle; being this close to such a gorgeous man simply devastates their senses.

I walk up to the bench press and look down. There?s a really big guy on there who just finished an incredibly tough work-out with 600 pounds on the bar, and he?s tired. When he realizes that I?m standing right next to him, though, he jizzes himself with his spunk and lets go of the bar. Before the bar crashes into his chest, I swiftly grab it with one hand and stop its fall. The weight might have killed them had I not arrested its movement.

The man?s face is flushed red from being caught in such an embarrassing position, but his pole is still one-hundred percent erect and shooting juice, tenting his green gym shorts and causing the dark stain on the fabric to spread even further. I want to comfort him, but I know from experience that even the power of my voice can knock a man out from all the blood draining into his penis. Instead, I merely grunt and flick my head to the side. His boner still standing straight up, the man hurriedly runs to the locker room. I know he?s going to lock himself in one of the stalls and jerk himself into a frenzy, but I don?t harass him. People are just overwhelmed by me. When they?re that close to me for more than a handful of seconds, they need to find a place to masturbate. It?s not something they can control; their brains simply get fried from the erotic aura that emits from my godlike body and handsome face.

I return to my work-out and curl the bar for a few reps, first with my right arm, then my left. When people call me ?perfect?, they?re not just talking about my impossibly sexy face. They?re also talking about my muscles and my strength. The six-hundred pounds that the guy was benching serves as a nice warm-up for my biceps, but not enough to actually give me a challenge. I look over at the two guys next to me and scan the weight on their bar. Two-hundred pounds each. The two guys have huge boners just like the other man, and they?re having visibly difficulty keeping themselves from exploding in their pants. I feel a bit devilish.

Walking around in front of them, I continue pumping up my biceps with the six-hundred pound barbell, alternating hands ever dozen reps. The men?s eyes widen as far as they can go, unable to believe the immense size that my superhuman guns inflate to with each curl.

?Hey, dudes,? I say, my voice so deep and powerful that it almost sounds like a beastly growl, ?These six hundred pounds are a bit light for me. Can ya? give me a hand and put your plates on this barbell??

I know that they cannot disobey. My voice is extremely intoxicating. The booming depth of my voice overwhelms people just like my face, or my body, or my strength. The two smaller guys hurry and transfer the weights from their bar onto mine, increasing the weight of the barbell to a full thousand pounds of iron. The men think that I?m going to bench this weight, but I stomp on their expectations and continue curling the barbell single-handedly, doing three sets of a dozen with each arm, never slowing down. With each pump, my biceps flex a bit larger, a bit huger. I finally drop the barbell, cracking the gym floor and causing the two guys to jump.

?C?mon, you little queers, feel my biceps,? I snarl, ?you?ve been wanting to touch these bad boys ever since you saw them. Go ahead, see what a real man feels like.?

The two guys look at eachother nervously, but they can?t resist. They jump forward and caress my arms, rubbing their soft hands over my much harder, flawless flesh. My skin is in impeccable condition, completely smooth and unblemished, and it only makes my bulging 29-inch monsters even more impressive. I?m a whole foot taller than these guys, so they have to reach up to really feel my biceps, and that only makes them even harder. They don?t know it yet, but my biceps are actually unflexed. I?m only applying a tiny bit of pressure, but they can?t even dent the skin.

But this worship is getting boring. Things are always getting boring. It?s hard to keep me entertained because I?m always breaking records with everything I do. It?s a side effect of being superhuman.

?Sorry, ladies. I gotta? go.? I quickly turn around and stride out of the gym. The men who were groping my biceps fall on the floor and convulse as they cum harder than they ever have in their life. Both of them were straight, athletic young men, but they would have given anything in the world to feel my godly body for even a second.

They?re not unique; everyone is like this. People are nothing more than puppets, willing to do anything to please me, a god among men. Their lust for me is insatiable. Even those with the strongest wills can?t keep themselves from orgasming if they gaze into my beautiful brown eyes for only a few seconds. I am the only man whom everybody worships. I am the one entity that can walk into any building on Earth and make every single person in the vicinity cum with just a smile. I am the alpha male. I am the god.

It gets lonely.

[Lucas88]

Hey, MuscleHintz!

I'm glad you put your ideas into a story. You took the "walking-cocky-god" approach and covered all the reactions he gets very well...but...you really didn't make him seem all that lonely if thats what you were going for. Keep at it!!! It's a really good start.

[Shahrazad2]

It might be interesting to find someone (or someones) who doesn't fall for him immediately. Maybe someone who is blind (they could still get turned on by his voice or scent or touching him, but they wouldn't be able to see him or watch him) or who is maybe on the extreme end of the "weirdly artistic" spectrum (with different concepts of attraction and primal essences of humanity)... or maybe someone who had been actually asexual and then only rises to the normal human level of sexuality around him.

It might also be interesting to see how reactions change when he is in some sort of disfiguring (if impermanent) accident or comes down with some illness that makes him less attractive for its duration.

[ydt81]

Originally Posted by ★whim★

The idea of a man caring about "being lonely" when he gets worshiped. . . That doesn't sound too likely. lul

But yeah, good premise, I suppose. Maybe it could be a wish gone wrong.

Hmmm it actually seems pretty likely to me; I think loneliness is not so much the 'absence of company' so much as it is the absence of friends....

I think the premise has a lot of potential. Irresistible sexual tension is something I think pretty much every (erotic) muscle story should consider. The challenge with writing about this level of insane sex appeal is to make the readers experience a bit of the 'insanity' too.

Like Lucas88 said, I believe your short story is off to a great start. I also agree with him about the sense of loneliness. If you plan to continue, I think it could help to write the story from a third-person perspective. That way, you might have more opportunities to describe his situations without having to worry as much about his thoughts in the middle of certain dominating scenes. If you're going for a more 'cold' personality, third-person is definitely a good road to take, I think.

Good luck! (to you, or anyone who decides to take a crack at it)

[iceman75]

I enjoy the story and the storyline a great deal and hope it continues. The idea that one look can make you come in your pants, that's pretty cool, and I agree, the thought of being that perfect that no one would ever really get to know the real you, that all they would want you for is your body, not your mind, well, that is a good thing to add depth to the character and the story. I'm looking forward to more, and to seeing other authors take this storyline and make a story out of it. Londonboy especially, no offense to other authors, but LB is just my kind of male muscle and strength writer.

[V.R.Goh]

Ignoring the obvious spambot above this post, I remember a story where the main character (a young super-stud named Marcel) had a similar reaction. On his way to a massage parlor, he made a guy cum just by smiling and gave the masseuse the ultimate fuck. Although, I may write a story with this idea in mind.

[MuscleHintz]

Originally Posted by V.R.Goh

Ignoring the obvious spambot above this post, I remember a story where the main character (a young super-stud named Marcel) had a similar reaction. On his way to a massage parlor, he made a guy cum just by smiling and gave the masseuse the ultimate fuck. Although, I may write a story with this idea in mind.

Oh yeah, this one!

http://www.musclegrowth.org/forum/sh...563&highlight=

It's so good... sadly, it appears that the author hasn't posted anything at all since that story. It's tragic, because that was probably one of the most erotic things I've read here.

[iceman75]

Originally Posted by V.R.Goh

Ignoring the obvious spambot above this post, I remember a story where the main character (a young super-stud named Marcel) had a similar reaction. On his way to a massage parlor, he made a guy cum just by smiling and gave the masseuse the ultimate fuck. Although, I may write a story with this idea in mind.

Um, are you calling me a spam bot? That my post wasn't in the least sincere? Because I take offense to that, I meant every word, I would love to see more stories about this subject, and I personally would love to see my favorite muscle boy author Londonboy's take on it. Where in any of that does it look that I'm a spam bot?

[TheMM]

Originally Posted by iceman75

Um, are you calling me a spam bot? That my post wasn't in the least sincere? Because I take offense to that, I meant every word, I would love to see more stories about this subject, and I personally would love to see my favorite muscle boy author Londonboy's take on it. Where in any of that does it look that I'm a spam bot?

Relax there a bit, I know what he's talking about. Earlier, there was an actual spam bot posting the normal junk, but of course it was banned, and all the posts removed. I saw the spam message myself, V.R. Goh wasn't referring to you Iceman.

[bobtimbob]

Enjoyed the short story, as I do all of your stuff MuscleHintz.

The story that comes to mind on this idea is Rowan's "Flow" which was once posted here but I think sadly is not available online at the moment. In it a super strong young guy turns on every one, sometimes unintentionally, even members of his own family.

[MuscleHintz]

Originally Posted by bobtimbob

Enjoyed the short story, as I do all of your stuff MuscleHintz.

The story that comes to mind on this idea is Rowan's "Flow" which was once posted here but I think sadly is not available online at the moment. In it a super strong young guy turns on every one, sometimes unintentionally, even members of his own family.

That's such an awesome compliment. Thanks!

"Flow", huh? I've never read that story but it seems precisely the kind of story I'm looking for. It sucks that it's not online, though.

Maybe you can contact him about it and see if he has it posted somewhere else? That sounds like something I'd enjoy reading.

[Reeza]

I really like this idea, and I like the short bit you wrote, but I think there are two different stories being discussed here.

What you wrote above depicts an arrogant showoff who doesn't mind humiliating the people who can't resist his allure. I never get tired of this type of story, but it has been done before, and hopefully will be done again and again.

What I thought you were originally proposing would be a story about an equally irresistable muscle god who would like to be treated like any ordinary guy sometimes instead of having people creaming in their pants when he is just trying to mind his own business, go to class, do his job, buy groceries, etc. I imagine him wanting to be evaluated and appreciated for something other than his sex appeal while everyone around him is willing to give him grades he doesn't deserve, jobs he's not qualified for, free stuff and anything else they imagine he would want. That would be different.

[portamivia]

Oh yeah, MuscleHintz, totally loved your story. Can we have a part 2 please? I'm sure that muscle god needs to fuck soon. Maybe he does that in public all the times... Oh, so many ideas to play with.

[y063banana71]

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/autho...an/alpha-male/

This is exactly what you're all talking about! It's extremely well written, too. Give it a few chapters to warm up as it's quite exceptional.

[portamivia]

The nifty one is pretty hot. But I like MuscleHintz's one better because of superstrength... Hmmm that really makes it hot for me. Let's have a second chapter, pretty please?

[Faust2001]

Originally Posted by Reeza

I really like this idea, and I like the short bit you wrote, but I think there are two different stories being discussed here.

What you wrote above depicts an arrogant showoff who doesn't mind humiliating the people who can't resist his allure. I never get tired of this type of story, but it has been done before, and hopefully will be done again and again.

What I thought you were originally proposing would be a story about an equally irresistable muscle god who would like to be treated like any ordinary guy sometimes instead of having people creaming in their pants when he is just trying to mind his own business, go to class, do his job, buy groceries, etc. I imagine him wanting to be evaluated and appreciated for something other than his sex appeal while everyone around him is willing to give him grades he doesn't deserve, jobs he's not qualified for, free stuff and anything else they imagine he would want. That would be different.

What a great concept! I thought I'd read a couple of stories like this but can't remember the specifics. It looks like you've got people's creative juices flowing too!

[MuscleHintz]

Oh yeah, I read that Nifty story a few months ago. It was really good! It's definitely in the same category as the fantasy I had, but it feels so incomplete without HUGE MUSCLES.

I understand what you're saying about my story being different from the opening post, Reeza. I probably didn't successfully capture the idea I had in mind since it was nothing more than a quick-write that I wrote in less than a day, but I wanted to just get it down and publish it before it escaped me. Maybe one day I'll return to that plotline and refine it more.

[portamivia]

I feel this is a good time to bump this up. Can we have a longer story, now? Pleeeease...

[MuscleHintz]

I don't really plan on continuing this plotline portamivia, I already have enough unfinished stories as it is! It would be great if anyone else wanted to write this story though, even use my work if they want.

[schwermarko]

Just remember that if you are the ultimate sex object, there will be negative sides to this.

A) people you find repulsive will want (and somehow magically expect) sex!

B) people will want you to fulfill their fantasies, and will somehow always be confused when you don't share them.

C) people will become dependent on you to get off, because your so much sexier than everyone else, and will become demanding and needy.

and

D) the huge throngs of people you don't want sex with, will in all likelyhood keep you from having contact with the one you actually want.

[The Magus]

Originally Posted by schwermarko

Just remember that if you are the ultimate sex object, there will be negative sides to this.

A) people you find repulsive will want (and somehow magically expect) sex!

B) people will want you to fulfill their fantasies, and will somehow always be confused when you don't share them.

C) people will become dependent on you to get off, because your so much sexier than everyone else, and will become demanding and needy.

and

D) the huge throngs of people you don't want sex with, will in all likelyhood keep you from having contact with the one you actually want.

These sound like great obstacles for a more "positive" muscle growth story...especially the last one. Guy makes a wish (or takes a potion or a drug or whatever) to get huge and sexy so that his True Love will notice him, and then has to win through the crowds of adoring fans to live happily ever after.