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[jockstud]

...I get in my seat 3 chairs behind Tims seat. The teacher starts doing attendance RYAN NILSON tims up nex. TIM MATHET....the hotty says HERE. That cant be him i just saw him as scrawny as a string bean. I weant to my locker and there was a note. it said If ITs muscles you want wait by the Large Tree in Oak park. After school i rushed there and waited for an hour. It was getting dark and i was just going to leave. Just then the Navigator pulls up. The window goes down.....It's the quarterback of the football team Carter. Get in he says in his deep manly voise. I get in the passenger seat and no faster than i shut the door he speeds off. Befor i know it we are on the same dirt road i saw him with tim. This is the deal ok.. What ever two men have sex in this car grow big muscles. If they keep doing it then they keep growing. Who ever is taking it up the ass gets the growth. This first time is free but then its $100 every additional time. Strip down he says and winks. I take off my abercrombie T-shirt and he takes off his jersy huge pecks and a perfect 8 pack. I take my jenes off and he takes his off. I take off my boxerbriefs. All he's left with is his jock strap and he takes that off to he's completely shaven from his neck down and he reveals a TROUSER SNAKE!! HE says you ready lets get in the back he gets in first and i see his perfect ass. He didnt notice me put my backpack unzipped under the bench seat in the back where it was all gona happen. I layed down first. He kisses me pationatly and frenches me as he's laying on top of me. I slipped my hands under the seat and into my back pack. I grab 2 sets of hand cuffs. I quickly grab his hands and cuff him to the bars on the seats. He starts yelling so i gaged him with his jock strap. I then cuffed hus feet to hooks in the back for cargo with his legs spread, lying face up on the floor. I m gona ask you some questions and if you dont answer i will shoot you. (i really didnt have one but he didn't know that) If you wear a condom will it work. Yes he mumbles. "Good" i said with a sly wink. "Aww all this camotion has gotten you limp", i said looking at his huge limp cock lying on his abs. "ive got just the thing", i reach into the backpack under the seat and pull out a pill bottle and a small box. "A lil viagra's never hurt anyone" i say with a smile as i take the jock strap out of his mouth. "if you dont swallow this im gonnuh kill you" i say with a stern glare. Carter knows to obey and quickly swallows. "And just to make sure you get a nice sturdy hard-on ive brought this" there in the little box is a butt-plug.

[moldme1981]

this story has a lot of potential... you should talk with some of the other popular story-writers and see if they can give you some pointers! i think with a little editing you could have a masterpiece here!

a story condensed into one paragraph is one very short, almost rushed story. looking past all the speeling errors and Strange Capitalizations, i was getting excited there!