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December 29th, 2006, 03:06 AM
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A Strange horror story?
delt delt delt
Last edited by loran; October 11th, 2010 at 06:42 AM. 
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December 29th, 2006, 07:21 AM
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Congratulations on your brave attempt. I know that it is really hard to express our fantasies in another language, and I must say that your story has a very strong vivid imagery. You are very sure about your fantasies and the audience can actually relate to that.
The typos and the minor grammar mistakes that I could gather can't compromise the quality of your attempt. You have a very strong imagination, and you know exactly how to express this, no matter in which language you wrote the story. Although I am personally not into that kind of story, I recognize you had a lot of work to put this long story together and I hope you find the right audience for your stories and fantasies. Congratulations,
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December 29th, 2006, 04:50 PM
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Yeeah!
That was Dark and Dicklicious.
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December 29th, 2006, 08:33 PM
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The part that lost me was when you went into the mentally retarded. That was kind of uncomfortable.
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April 9th, 2008, 01:56 AM
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good very very good story keep going i wait the next story mwuajajajajajajajaja
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