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Old March 17th, 2007, 12:30 AM
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My Story 2

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Old March 17th, 2007, 04:37 AM
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Hey! It's a good continuation!
It's hot, funny and a little crazy (but who cares? )
I want more for sure
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Old March 17th, 2007, 09:33 AM
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Generally well done but not really my thing...

Well. this doesn't seem to be "my kind of story," and I doubt I will be following it further. But is pretty well written, although there were a few points that to me didn't "track well." I get the flash backs and the PTSD like distortions of reality but I guess I was looking for a "reality track" and not just the main character's somewhat impaired point of view.

After the first part I wasn't sure if I should take the story as actual fact and it was intended as a cry for help... The characters appear to have severe emotional problems and aren't dealing with them well. They need help but even if it were a available I doubt they would accept it... Actually I sort of quesrtion if your main character actually is gay... Sort of the "flip side" of the homophobic guy that claims to be straight but is in denial of his true gay leanings... Under the severe stress the character appear to be under people will twist themselves into pretzels inside to survive.

The story is very dark and disturbing, and (at least for me) in a twisted way going to be very erotic. It seems possible (likely?) that it could turn toward "snuf" at some point. Right now I don't see where muscle growth is going to come into play although the Bear on Bear muscle worship angle is obvious...

There are people here that will likely it... so go for it...

Ender

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