Story Seed: Dream Body

[V.R.Goh]

Here's an idea that will hopefully develop into a story.

A young man wakes up in a grassy meadow on the side of a hill. At the base of the hill is a small town on the shore of a lake. This town is completely populated by tall, heavily-muscled men who, while appearing in their twenties, are immortals. They invite the protagonist to stay in their utopian town. His guide eventually becomes his lover and, the longer he stays in the town, the bigger he becomes until he is roughly as big as the locals.

[Rarity]

This is a good idea. But then again I love all love stories.

[Bal]

I rather like the sound of this..it has great potential and could go in all sorts of directions creatively from the characters point of view..

[ydt81]

This one's a keeper. I have a real taste for stories that take the character (and reader) off to another world. It's not the easiest thing to construct an entirely new world/culture from scratch. Testos Four by Derek Flex was a bice example, though jt takes place on another planet. How specific would you want to go? Would you get into the lives of characters or would it be more about enjoying the general environment of such a place? Or would it mainly zero in on he main two characters ?...

[V.R.Goh]

When I envisioned this, I saw it centering on the main character, his interactions with his guide and the other massively muscled immortals, and the sensations of his body changing to match the physique of those around him. I could imagine him feeling untold amounts of pleasure from the growth itself as well as a strange sensation which would come from immortality and eternal youth.