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Old October 18th, 2013, 06:59 AM
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Flour

Long-time lurker here (on my old account)! \o I really hope you'll enjoy this story. I'm not the best writer and this is my first time writing anything ever so I would really appreciate all the help I could get! If you have any criticisms or comments, negative or positive, just post them below and I'll take them into consideration.
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MC's brothers:
Tony (Brent Corrigan): http://i.imgur.com/jrW7nnF.jpg
Shane (Sean Cody's Brandon): http://i.imgur.com/X0E81ez.jpg
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CHAPTER 1 v.3

1:06pm
?Alec, hey, it?s already Saturday and Tony and I wanna go hiking on Titan Hill again.? someone says shaking me, trying to wake me up. ?We?re still looking for the treasure that?s rumoured to be at the hill, hidden in a sack.?

I look up at the guy shaking me violently, giving me a rude awakening and I see Shane with a pouting mouth and annoyed face, wearing a white shirt and olive cargo shorts. ?Wh-what? What time is it?? I ask sleepily, rubbing off my eyes and slowly climbing off my queen-sized bed.

?It?s 1pm, bro.? he says, squeezing his lips, pulling me up from the bed with his small but thick hands.

I get on my feet and I look down at my little brother sheepishly smiling. ?Yeah, sure, get dressed, load the water tanks and we?ll leave when we?re all ready.? I tell him as I pat his messy head and make my way over to my dresser.

?We already loaded everything up and Tony and I are already dressed. We?re just waiting for you.? he says, sounding annoyed.

?Alright, tell Tony to start the car, I?ll be there in a second.? I tell him, as I put my white shirt and cargo shorts on.

?Alrighty!? he exclaims excitedly, grinning and showing off his teeth, as he jogs out of the room.

5:47pm
I walk along the hill?s bumpy cliff side, watching the afternoon sun beyond the horizon for a while. After a while, I see something like a large, dirty sack near the cliff?s edge covered in dirt and pebbles. I approach the large sack and it looks like it?s filled with something. I take my pocket knife and tear it open and what I find inside is a lot of some white powdery stuff, almost like flour. I become curious so I decide to see what it tastes like so I touch it with my index finger and taste it and to my pleasant surprise, it really does taste like flour.

I take my empty 700mL water jug and fill it up to the brim with the flour since my desserts could use a little something special for once since I?ve been using make-shift flour since the government accidentally destroyed all the flour; now flour these days is more expensive than gold.

After I take enough, I carefully climb back down the cliff side on my way back to our van so we could go home since it?s already pretty late.

On the way back though, I feel a bit dizzy, like my shirt is tighter. I guess it must?ve shrunk in the wash.

6:11pm
I get back down to the roadway and I see someone standing outside our van. I?m not sure whether it?s Shane, my 16 year old brother or Tony, my 21 year old brother since they?re both around the same height. The height difference may become a bit more evident in the next few months since Shane?s been getting taller really fast recently,

?Alec! Where?ve you been? Shane and I have been waiting here for you for nearly 30 fucking minutes! We?ve already finished our hike ages ago! Shane?s already fallen asleep in the van waiting for you.? Tony yells at me angrily, looking up at me with that sexy angry face he makes. I always found Tony handsome even if he was short and skinny. Our family is Spanish so we naturally had the sexy tanned skin and short brown hairstyles but Tony always had that cute model face, almost like Brent Corrigan and Shane looked like that Brandon kid from Sean Cody with messy brown hair that fell to the sides.

I smile at him as I rub the back of my head in guilt. ?Sorry, I?ve just been hiking around; I even found some flour see??, I excitedly show him my jug full of flour.

Tony taps on my shoulder, quickly getting my attention. ?Say Alec, you look a bit bigger. Have you finally decided to do some lifting?? Tony jokes, poking at my right upper arm. I look down at myself, and I do look and feel slightly taller compared to a while ago. My loose white shirt that rode up to my zipper just this morning now looks like it?s only covering me until the top of my shorts. Did I get taller? My arms also look a bit thicker. How could that happen?

?I?ve always wanted to be a bit bigger too, but I guess it won?t be happening any time soon.? he says disappointedly, flexing his non-existent right bicep and poking at it.

Tony sighs and drops his arm and gets in the driver?s seat and honks out to me. ?Dude, get in, we?re going home.? he says angrily, slamming the front seat door.

?I got it, Tony.? I reply, getting in the backseat with Shane.

6:49pm
We reach home and the evening moon is already high in the sky, so I carry Shane to his shared room with the help of Tony and lay him in his bunk bed at the bottom. I go back downstairs and unload the stuff from the van and Tony and I begin bringing them in the house.

?Bro, when?s dinner gonna be ready?? Tony asks me, bringing in the last of the bikes and water tanks.

?I?ll get on it; we?ll be having fried chicken and muffins today. Just watch some TV first or something while you wait.? I reply, taking off my water jug from my utility belt and I pour some flour in a bowl while I take out one of the frying pans I use for cooking. I?ll be using the flour from the mountains for muffins today, maybe around 300mL worth of it so that?s like 300g for 30 muffins.

?Whatever.? he answers disapprovingly as he walks upstairs. ?I?m gonna go change clothes and watch some porn. Call me when it?s ready.?

?Got it, just bring Shane with you.?

7:19pm
About half an hour passes, and I finish cooking the fried chicken and 30 muffins. I set them on the table for dinner and I walk over to the stairs to call Tony and Shane down.

?Tony! Wake Shane up and get down here, it?s time for dinner!? I yell up the stairs. After a few minutes, I see Tony, walking downstairs with only his boxers and a large, plain yellow shirt on and Shane follows sleepily afterwards, yawning, still in the sweaty white shirt and shorts he was wearing a while ago highlighting the muscle he?s developed over the years. I sit down at my seat at the end of the table and Tony and Shane sit in front of me, to my left and to my right.

Shane yawns, ?Oh yes, are those muffins? I fucking love muffins, thanks bro!? he says happily, taking the whole plate of muffins with a large grin on his face. ?Imma take ?em all!?

Tony just looks at Shane in disgust. ?You?ll become a fat pig if you eat all those at once, you know.? Tony jokes, eyeing Shane gobble down all the muffins, with a messy grin on his face, while eating his fried chicken.

?We?re taking weight lifting in PE next week so I?ll just have to work all that fat into muscle! I?m gonna grow so big, you won?t even notice the fat!? Shane jokes, flexing his arms in a double-bicep pose. ?I?m already more muscular than either of you guys and it won?t be long till I grow taller than you both too!? he exclaims happily.

Tony bangs the table and points at Shane with an angry face. ?Dude, you better not grow bigger than me! It?s bad enough I?m the smallest guy in my college and I DON?T want to be even smaller than my bro who?s 5 fucking years younger than I am!? he yells angrily.

Shane puts his hands on Tony?s hand and lowers it back down, giving Tony a cute grin, showing off his pearl-white teeth. ?Bro, it?s okay! I?m gonna be bigger than you whether you like it or not but I?m not gonna be like those guys at school who bully us for being small; I ain?t gonna hurt you.? he says.

Tony pulls his hand back and glares angrily at Shane while he continues eating.
The dinner continues with an awkward silence.

8:09pm
We all finish eating at the same time and Shane and Tony drag their chairs back to stand up. Tony gets up alright but Shane has a little problem squeezing out.

?That?s strange, it?s not always this tight.? he says, sounding worried, dragging his chair back further. He stands up and I notice that Shane?s shirt looks a bit tighter and his arms and chest look a bit thicker and rounder in the light. I compare him to Tony and he also looks a bit taller than Tony. I guess he?s growing pretty fast now. Hopefully he won?t grow taller than me? actually, on second thought, I think I?d like a bigger little brother. I never liked the dominance.

Tony doesn?t look at Shane as he climbs up the stairs, keeping the angry face on. Shane eventually follows Tony after dropping his and Tony?s plates in the sink.

I clean the table and put the leftover muffins in the fridge. Shane ate 15 of them by himself already so I store the last 10 in the fridge since I ate 5.

8:11pm
After washing the dishes, I go up the stairs and I get on my computer in my room to check on my pictures of big, morphed men on my desktop who?re bigger than anyone around them. I especially like the morphed ones of my brothers that someone did for me for free because he just found them especially hot. If only they were this big in real life.

I sleep at 12 in the morning without changing clothes after I finish jacking off.

8:21am
I wake up, very tired from yesterday?s hike and for some reason, I feel heavier. I sit up on the bed and I look down at myself and I somehow seem to have slight bumps on my chest and stomach area showing on my white shirt for the first time. I flex my left arm and it looks like they?ve grown rounder and thicker compared to yesterday. I feel my biceps and they?re hard as rocks!

The thought of my bicep gets me hard and I look down to see my growing cock and my mouth hangs open in shock. It?s grown a bit more too! I decide to stroke it a bit, then and there, holding on to my cock and slowly stroking it. But the thought of what could have happened to my brothers gets to me and I stop and get up and make my way out of my room.

I walk out of the room to check on the others and I hear someone taking a shower in the bathroom. I look inside and I see a skinny figure around my brothers? height in the shower through the glass.

?Hey, Tony is that you?? I ask worriedly, knocking on the glass door.

?Yeah, it?s me.? he replies. ?Go cook breakfast now or something. I?m starving.?

I guess he?s still alright. ?Alright.? I reply, continuing down the hallway, passing by the boys? bedroom. I peek inside, and I notice a large mountain of pillows, covered in a blanket, on the bottom bunk where Shane normally sleeps. Tony must?ve put all his pillows on top of Shane a while ago as a joke.

I walk over to the mound and I pull off the covers, and what I see sends me falling to the ground behind me in fear. The widest and thickest back I have ever seen in my life is in my view right in front of me! There?s a fucking giant man on the bed! Who the fuck is this?! It couldn?t possibly be Shane could it? I scan the bed and there are remains of a sweaty white shirt and cargo shorts on the bed. Fuck. I turn the body around to see the face and I see Shane?s strong face but the body is of a much, much larger bodybuilder!

I grab his gigantic and very hard arm and try to shake him, back and forth, to wake him up. ?Shane, Shane is that you? Wake up, damn it.?

?Nnggghh?? he groggily mumbles, turning and lying on his back, showing his gigantic torso, giant dick and thick legs. Even his voice isn?t Shane?s; it?s too deep to be his
?Wha-what time is it?? he asks. God, I?m getting so turned on right now.

?It?s 8:30 in the morning, Shane.? I answer, licking my lips lustfully.

?Okay.? he says, turning to face me. He slowly, gets up from the bed, causing it to creak in stress, and I see his large, juicy, protruding pecs and large, dime-sized nipples and his 8-pack, washboard abs, completely hairless facing me. When he tries to sit up, his head hits the ceiling of his bunk creating a large dent in the wood.

?Ack, what the fuck?? he says, rubbing the back of his head in discomfort and I see his massive arm. It?s as big as my head! He slides his huge, muscular legs, the size of my waist, off the bed and he tries standing up but he bumps his head again, causing the wooden frame to snap, and he rubs his head again in discomfort. ?Shit?? he says, sounding annoyed, as he gets his footing and begins standing up, and I watch his head from the ground as it rises higher and higher! He stands up to his full height and he looks like a giant from my perspective on the ground.

I slowly stand up, grabbing onto his hard dick as support and the big man moans in pleasure. I stand to my own puny full height and my eyes see straight to his gigantic, boulder pecs and large, hard nipples staring at me, just begging me to lick them. I step back and I take in at what?s happened to my little brother because he looks absolutely gigantic from every perspective and absolutely sexy too.

He begins stroking himself, feeling his giant muscles slowly. ?Bro, what?s happened to me?? he asks, looking down at me worriedly, flexing every muscle he knows how to. I look down to where his hands shift and I see them grasp an incredible, throbbing dick that looks as almost as long and thick as my forearm!

?I don?t know, Shane. Why don?t you put some clothes on or whatever fits, and I?ll bring you to a doctor if you want.? I tell him, walking up to him to feel his mountainous arms in my hands while he flexes them.

?No, I feel amazing, bro. But how have I grown so big? What?s happened to me?? he asks worriedly but with a seductive smile on his face, picking me up by the sides and raising me up to his beautiful man face.

My own hard-on peeks out of my shorts and comes into contact with his thick abs and he smiles lustfully. ?I don?t know Shane, but I don?t think I can handle not having you much longer.? I say, grasping his large, full pecs in my puny hands.

Shane grins even bigger and bounces his pecs. ?I dunno what?s goin? on, tiny bro, cook me something to eat first then, maybe, I?ll let you worship me.? he says seductively. ?I used to be the one staring at your chest, but I guess it?s the other way around now, huh?? he says, putting me back down and again grasping onto his gigantic dick, fully erect. ?God, I don?t fucking know what happened to me, but now I don?t even care!? he yells, raising his arms in the air. ?Now, I wanna grow even bigger! I can?t wait to see what everyone at school would think of me now! Now I?M gonna be the one looking down at everyone!? he yells with a giant grin on his hot face. Goddamn, I just realized he?s grown even bigger than the morphs of him on my computer!

?Holy shit.? someone says from behind me.

Shane drops his massive arms which hang over his sides at a degree and looks at the person behind me with an even bigger lustful grin on his face. ?Oh, hey Tony.? Shane says. ?Wanna worship me too??

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Old October 20th, 2013, 04:40 AM
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CHAPTER 2 v.2

8:33am
“Holy shit, what the fuck happened to you, Shane?!” Tony asks with a disturbed and angry look on his face. He slowly walks up to Shane, staring in fear at Shane’s grinning face with his eye level only at Shane’s thick abs since he’s only 4’7”. He may be shorter than the average height of anyone his age but it’s a good thing he isn’t malformed, he’s just proportionally shorter than everyone.

“Didn’t you notice him growing in the middle of the night?” I ask curiously.

Tony just shakes his head. “No, I just thought the bunk’s creaking was from age!”

Shane just smiles mischievously, slowly walking towards Tony, causing the ground to tremble slightly with every step. “Damn, bro…”, Shane says, looking down from what looks like a two foot height difference with Tony. “Bro, you’re so fucking tiny!” Shane laughs. “You’re like a cute little toy!” he mocks and laughs some more, causing his already massive pecs to expand bigger with every inhale.

Even with all the insulting, Tony stands his ground, glaring silently at the massive giant.

Shane bends down and picks Tony up by the sides, causing his biceps to flex and peak higher.

“Fuck! Shane, let go of me!” Tony yells in anger as he pounds on Shane’s thick arms as hard as his tiny fists can but to no effect. “Put me down!”

Shane confidently strides over to me and he stops right in front of me, shoving his massive chest into my face causing me to fall to the ground. I look up and Shane’s massive legs and gigantic dick block my view. I continue looking up and my neck begins to strain but I eventually manage to get past Shane’s torso and get a look at his grinning face. “Hey tiny bro, I’m gonna use your bedroom alright? I’m gonna have some fun with my little toy.” he says, tossing Tony like a wet shirt over his broad shoulder.

“Oomph!” Tony exclaims in pain. “Fuck! Shane! Put me down!”

I attempt to get back on my feet by grabbing onto Shane’s solid tree-trunk legs as support. “Alright Shane, I’ll just cook a big breakfast for you guys so be down when I call on you guys.”
Shane grabs my arm and pulls me up with no effort. “Thanks, tiny bro.” Shane says, completely ignoring Tony’s pounding on his thick, muscular back. “C’mon, bro, I’m gonna have so much fun with you!” Shane quickly walks over to the door and ducks and turns sideways just to get through.

9:21am
I finish cooking breakfast for my little brothers and I. I cooked several pancakes with the leftover 400g of flour and a bunch of eggs. “Tony! Shane! Breakfast’s ready!” I yell up the stairs.

After a few seconds, I hear the door to my bedroom slam open and the house rumbles as Shane runs downstairs first, occupying the entire staircase with his massive frame, having to turn sideways slightly just to get downstairs.

“I hope you cooked extra for me.”, he says, striking a double-bicep pose and licking his left bicep slowly to tease me. “You’ve gotta feed these muscles! Yeah!” Shane yells.

“I cooked lots, don’t worry.” I reply, leading my giant brother into the dining room, where the table is completely covered with plates of pancakes and eggs. I guess I better visit the mountain again later and bring that sack of flour home.

Shane walks past me and shoves me out of the way making me hit the wall. “Fuck yeah, you’re the best bro ever you know that?” he says happily, sitting down on two chairs, showing off his wide, brick v-wall of a back and quickly downing all the pancakes and eggs in an instant.

I get off the wall and I begin massaging Shane’s heavily-muscled shoulders and deltoids. “So where’s Tony?” I ask.

Shane doesn’t answer me and pulls my arms over his shoulders down to his nipples. “Rub ‘em.” he orders with a mouth full.

As he commands, I begin squeezing his pecs with my tiny hands as he continues swallowing pancake after pancake. I look over his shoulder and I see his dick, hard as rock and swollen like a log, riding up his thick, bulging abs.

Shane begins to bounce his pecs vigorously. “Stroke my pecs harder, slave!” he yells, grabbing my forearms and rubbing my hands all around his pecs. “Oh yeah! Keep doin’ that, bro. Your big, big brother loves being worshipped!”

Shane eventually lets go of my arms and continues eating. “Alright, that’s enough bro, I need to keep eating to feed my big muscles; go check on Tony or something. He’s acting all sad and shit.”

“He’s still in my room?” I ask, making my way up the stairs.

“Actually I think it’s MY room now, bro.” he exclaims.

“Alright.”

9:31am
I slowly enter Shane’s new room, hoping not to interrupt whatever Tony may be doing.

“Tony? Tony, you here?” I ask softly, peeking my head into my giant brother’s new bedroom.

It looks like Shane just had Tony suck on his dick or something, because there’s cum all over the place! I look at the queen bed and I see Tony, laying in a weak, fetal position, covered in cum.

I walk over to Tony and wipe some of the cum off his back. “Tony? Why don’t you come down for breakfast?” I ask him, wiping some more cum off his frail body. “Shane might eat it all before either of us get a bite.”

“Why?” he asks me angrily, “…why is Shane bigger than me now… I don’t like it.”

I turn him over so he rests on his back. His dick looks really small compared to Shane’s right now. “Tony, c’mon it’s fine.” I comfort him. “Let’s go, I’m sure he won’t grow any bigger.”

Tony looks at me with a look of disappointment. “But I wanna get bigger too, y’know? It’s so unfair.” he says. “I’m always the small one.”

“Dude, be a man and go downstairs and eat something before Shane eats everything.” I tell him, dragging him off the bed like some weak, soggy ragdoll covered in warm cum. “I’m sure you’ll be big someday too.”

“Alright, but I think you better cook up some more breakfast. I’m sure Shane’s eaten all of it by now.” he says, giggling almost.

“Sure, Tony.” I tell him, patting his head and resting my hand over his shoulder as we walk out of the room and down the stairs.

9:39am
As we walk downstairs, we see Shane’s massive body lying on the couch with his arms and legs stretched over the couch’s sides as he watches TV. “Bro, is that you? Did you bring Tony with you?” he bellows with his deep, masculine voice.

“Uh, Shane, I’ll just order some pizza, alright?” I ask, slowly making my way down the stairs hoping not to anger Shane.

“As long as I get fed!” Shane says.

“Alright then.” I say, dialling the pizza number on the phone as fast as I can. “What about you, Tony? Want some leftover muffins from last night?” I ask.

Tony walks over to the fridge and begins digging around. “I’m fine with anything as long as I get something to eat.” he says, bringing out 5 of the muffins from the fridge and making his way back upstairs. “I’m gonna go eat these upstairs, alright?”

“Go ahead.” I reply.

9:42am
I walk over to Shane on the couch after ordering the pizza, “Shane, could I rest on you while you watch TV?” I ask him, begging on the ground.

“Go ahead, tiny bro.” he invitingly says, adjusting himself, causing the couch to shake violently and creak even more.

I slowly crawl over his massive chest and start licking on his large, juicy pecs. “Shane, do you like being big?” I ask him, resting my head on his left pec, licking his large, hard nipple.

Shane pats my back with his strong left hand and smiles calmly. “You fuckin’ serious bro? Of course, I do! I wanna grow even bigger!” he says with a large grin on his face, stroking my back with his hand while bringing his right arm up and flexing it repeatedly. Does it look bigger than a while ago? “God, I can feel it myself growing every minute!”

“I hope you grow even bigger!” I tell him, licking his nipples like a dog while my hands explore his bulging body. I stroke his gigantic hill valley abs, then I bring my tiny hands down to his throbbing member and I close my eyes and begin stroking it as it gets even bigger.

He inhales deeply. “Ooh… that feels good, tiny bro.” he says.

“I’m sure it does, Shane.” I reply.

Shane’s grinning quickly turns into shock as he shoves me off of his body and onto the ground and gets up from the couch. “Fuck, I think I’m growing again!” he yells excitedly, standing up to his full height, slowly inching closer to the 7ft ceiling as he slowly grows upwards and outwards.

Shane turns the TV off and looks at me, “Bro. I’m growing again! Yes!” he yells, as his head hits the 7ft ceiling and just keeps hunching lower and lower as he grows bigger and bigger. “Shit, I’m huge!”, he laughs, stretching his growing arms to the sides and spreading his growing legs. “And it looks like I’m still gettin’ bigger! And bigger!”

I look up at Shane’s growing body and he looks humongous from the ground!

Shane bends down and picks me up with his giant growing arms and drops me on the ground so I can stand. I try to look up at his face and it’s much further away than it was a while ago! Looking ahead of me, I only see his thick abs! I’m as small as Tony was! And his abs continue rising higher and higher! If he continues growing like this my eyes are only going to reach until his dick!

“Holy shit, I’m growing so fast! God, I’m loving this! Bigger!” he yells, flexing his gigantic arms and kissing his massive biceps as he continues growing taller and more muscular.

His shoulders are already scraping the ceiling so he gets down on his knees so he won’t break anything. He actually has to get down on his knees just to get around now and I see his arms and chest growing wider, rounder and more muscular right in front of me!

“Fuck, this feels amazing, tiny bro!” he yells with a grin, picking me up and squeezing me in between his sweaty growing armpit. He slowly crawls up the stairs causing the house to shake violently, needing to turn sideways just to squeeze his way up the stairs with some of the wooden steps actually breaking off. “Fuck! I’m breaking the house!” he laughs, grinning and chuckling, struggling to make his way up the stairs.

Shane gets to the 2nd floor and Shane struggles to fit in the small 7ft hallway with his hulking body. “Shit, look at how big I am, bro!” Shane yells. Shane continues rubbing against the walls and ceiling as he strides slowly to my bedroom when we see Tony excitedly running out of the bathroom, still naked but he looks a bit taller.

“Hey, bro! Look! I gre—oh, holy shit!” he shouts, falling on his back, staring at his gigantic brother taking up the entire hallway.

Shane strides over to Tony’s extremely small body and smiles at him, looming over him, poking at his small stomach. Shane just laughs. “Fuck dude, you’re so fucking tiny! You’re like the size of my dick or something!” he yells at Tony, laughing.

Tony just stares at Shane in fear. “Bro! How the fuck are you getting so big?! Just look at you! You’re huge!”

Shane just laughs, crushing me in between his arm and his massive lat. “Who the fuck cares how I’m growing! Go get the measuring tape in the bathroom or something, I wanna see how big I am!”

Tony quickly gets up from the ground and runs to the bathroom while Shane continues squeezing to his bedroom.

10:12am
We get to the bedroom and Shane tries squeezing through the 6’8” door, breaking it in the process. “Everything is so small now!”

He squeezes through the hole and gets inside. He pulls me out and drops me on the ground like a doll as he stands up to his full height. I look up and I can barely see past his chest! It’s a good thing the master bedroom is 10 feet tall but it doesn’t look like much compared to Shane.

Shane just laughs and punches the ceiling above him causing it to shake and crumble. “I can’t believe I actually thought this room was huge before! Now look, I’m almost as big as this place!”

We hear quick footsteps outside in the hallway and I Tony running back inside, sweating like a pig. I compare his size to Shane’s and his eyes only reach until the giant’s massive dick now and I barely reach until his pelvis!

“Uh, here, Shane. The tape measure.” he pathetically says as he hands the 5m tape measure I bought on eBay to Shane.

Shane takes the tape measure from Tony’s tiny hands and picks him up like a toy and places him on his erect dick like a rag. “Thanks, Tony.” he says handing me the tape measure. “Hey kid, measure me.” he orders as he picks me up with his massive arms and raises me up to his eye level almost squeezing me since his hands take up my skinny waist completely. I raise one end of the measure above his head and I let the measure fall to the ground.

Tony walks over to the measure and his eyes grow wide. “Holy shit!”

I look at the tape measure and my eyes grow just as wide! “You’re 9’1”, Shane! You’re huge!”

“You know I am! And I’m just gonna get even BIGGER!” he yells, pushing the ceiling above him showing off his massive biceps.

He’s already more than double the size of Tony and a lot more muscular! He lowers me to his chest level and I struggle getting the tape around but I get the measure.

Oh my god. “Your chest is 96 inches around, Shane!” I tell him.

“Fuck, I’m so big, I am LOVING this!” he yells happily. “Measure my arms next!”

“Your arms are 47 inches!”

“Now my waist, dick, and legs!” he says, grinning, as he lowers me down to his gigantic cock.

After struggling to measure everything I finally get Shane’s measurements.

“Your waist is 38 inches around, your quads are 37 inches around and the best of them all, your giant dick is 18 inches long and 13 inches around, hard!” I tell him, as I grasp onto his giant dick and begin licking its glorious majesty and Tony continues to masturbate vigorously on the ground, enjoying every moment.

“Fuck, I am a GOD! Worship me, tiny people!” he yells as he jumps onto his bed, breaking the legs sending it crashing to the ground. “I’m so fucking huge!” he yells, spreading his giant arms and legs to his sides off the mattress.

Tony and I jump on him and Tony begins licking his dick while I stroke his humongous, gigantic arms.

“I feel so big and strong!” he bellows. “Hey, Tony, suck it harder!” he orders, putting his giant hand on Tony’s head and shoves his face into his giant dick. “Mmm, that feels so GOOD!” Tony yells in ecstasy. “I’m gonna cum!” he continues, blasting Tony away with the geyser of cum that just explodes out of his giant dick. “Drink it, Tony! Drink it!” he yells, laughing as he pumps out more spurts.

“Yes, sir!” Tony yells as he begins licking his dick some more, with the cum just exploding out as he sucks.

“Fuuck! I wanna get even bigger!” he yells, interrupted by the doorbell we hear downstairs.

It must be the pizza boy. Tony gets up from Shane’s thigh and sluggishly crawls out of the room. “Uh, I’ll get it.” Tony says, as he limps out the room, covered in cum.

Tony breathes a sigh of exhaustion. “A new worshipper!” Shane yells, laughing maniacally.

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Holy Shit! How did I miss this story?! Very well written and very hot! I hope you continue this as I'd love to read what happens next! I hope our Main Character goes back for the entire sack before the rain comes. LOL
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CHAPTER 3 v.2

10:33am
?Shit, I think I?m done growing.? Shane says, pushing my small body off of his own gigantic body. He turns to face me with a look of calm ecstacy on his handsome face. ?I?m hungry now. Feed me.?

I do nothing as his gigantic chest heaves up and down as he breathes. ?What do you want to eat?? I ask feebly, feeling his massive bicep in my tiny hands.

?I want meat!? he yells like a child, flexing his bicep in my hands.

?Got it, Shane.? I reply, letting go of his arm and walking over to my closet where my clothes are. I look around for what could fit me and I see my favourite beige cargo shorts and an olive green shirt. Why does it look so short now? Sigh.

?Bro, I don?t want you movin? to my old room with Tony just because I take up nearly half of the room, alright? I want you coming in here whenever you want so you get to be with this giant god of a brother.? Shane says. ?I?m gonna call my friend over, Jean, I can?t wait till he sees me being massive and worships me. When you get back, there better be meat here.? he orders, crawling over to my tiny PC. ?Shit, my fingers are too big, this is gonna take a while.?

?Alright, I?m gonna go now Shane, try not to break the house too much.?

10:38am
I quickly make my way down the crooked stairs noticing that some of the steps have broken off. I get halfway down the stairs but there?s this huge fucking gap that I can?t walk over or jump over without getting injured. I better call a repairman later.

I can?t get anywhere like this. Should I jump? Would I even make it? I contemplate my surroundings trying to think of some way to get down. I look to my left, nothing. To my right, nothing. Up?

?Alec! Hey!? says a deep familiar voice at the bottom of the stairway. Who is that?

I look back down to see who called me and I see Tony, much taller and more muscular than he was a while ago, grinning back at me with open arms.

?Just jump, I?ll catch you!? he calls out excitedly.

Do I dare? ?Are you sure you can catch me?? I ask worriedly.

He retracts his left arm and flexes it and a softball sized bicep pops up, ?I?m probably too fucking weak right?? he asks sarcastically.

?I hope I can trust you.?

?Just jump!?

Shit! I jump off of the steps and I land in his arms, pushing him back against the wall slightly. ?Oh thank god!? I exclaim in thanksgiving.

He puts me back down on the ground and I look up at him. ?See? I?m strong enough to catch you now!? Wait, since when did I look up at Tony? ?Now I?m taller than you too!? he yells excitedly. ?This is great!?

?Yeah, I noticed and I think it?s great.? I tell him nonchalantly, feeling his bulging biceps in my hands.
?Why do you sound so unenthusiastic? Am I not big enough for you? Is that it?? he asks angrily, showing off his sexy, mad face again.

I shake my head in disapproval. ?It?s not that, I?m just tired from everything that?s happened today.? I tell him. ?So where?s the pizza??

He points towards the kitchen area. ?It?s in the kitchen; the pizza guy was pretty shocked that I opened the door naked too.? he answers laughing, rubbing the back of his head showing off his large biceps. ?So bro, what?d you come down for? Why are you all dressed up and shit? Are you going somewhere?? he asks me, not taking a break between each question.

?I?m just gonna get some more flour. We?re out of it again.? I answer. ?Could you come with me? I need someone to help me bring down the flour.?

?Alright, gimme the keys, bro. I going back upstairs to put some clothes on so you better be ready when I come down.? he says, climbing up the stairs. I could never do that. ?And bring some food too, I?m starving!?

?I?ll wait for you here, Tony.?

10:45am
Tony comes running down the stairs, jumping over the gap with ease, wearing the plain yellow shirt he wore last night, now barely covering his bulging rock-hard abs and biceps, riding up to his shoulders. His pecs pushing the fabric to its limits showing off his rock-hard nipples. I look down and all he?s wearing are some very tight boxers that cling tightly to his thighs and show off the outline of his beautiful dick as it slightly peeks out of his left thigh.

Is he seriously going out of the house wearing? this? ?Is that all you?ll be wearing?? I ask him, handing him the keys as we walk towards the front door with leftover muffins in hand.

He tosses his right arm over my shoulder and grins at me. ?Problem, bro? It?s not like I have anything else to wear anymore.? he says, laughing, as we get into the car. ?This is all that fits me. But I guess since I?m not big enough for you yet, I?ll have to outgrow these rags too.? he says, ripping the sleeves off his shirt, highlighting his muscular arms even more.

?I think you?re plenty big already, Tony.?

?Sure you do.? he replies sarcastically.

11:16am
We reach Titan Hill and Tony parks in the same spot as yesterday. ?Here?? he asks with questionable shock. ?Why do you get your flour here?? Tony asks me puzzlingly as I climb out of the passenger?s seat.

?Not sure, I just found some up top. Now come on, I need you to help me bring it down.?

?Is it really that heavy?? he asks, smirking, climbing out of the driver?s seat. ?So heavy that you need me, your big bro, to carry it for you?? he jokes.

?Yeah, I need help. I?m too weak. It?s not like I want a growth spurt like you guys.? I reply jokingly as well.

?Do you want one?? he asks curiously. ?Do you want to be big like this?? he continues, pointing at his flexed bicep.

I shake my head. ?Nah, I?d rather be the small one.? I reply. Seriously. ?Really.?

11:23am
We finally make our way to the top of the hillside?s cliff where the sack is and luckily the rain hasn?t gotten to it yet. I point at the cloth sack. ?Tony, there. Pick it up so we can go.? I order.

Tony walks over to me and his eyes grow wide with shock. ?Holy shit? the treasure.? he whispers audibly to himself.

?What?? I ask curiously. The treasure? What treasure?

Tony?s face retracts back to normal. ?It?s nothing.? he says, sounding distant. ?It?s none of your business.?

I?m worried about Tony. ?Alright, just pick it up and we?ll head to the mall.?

Tony picks up the massive sack, nearly as large as I, and tosses it over his shoulder. ?Alright, I?m ready.? he says enthusiastically.

11:49am
We get back to the van and Tony loads the sack in the backseat. I get into the passenger seat quickly and quietly. ?We?ve still got to go to the mall, you guys need new clothes and we need more food.?

Tony quickly closes the backseat door and climbs into the driver?s seat, adjusting himself slightly. He looks very excited. ?K!? he replies happily, taking a muffin in his hand and biting into it like a shark. What?s gotten him in such a good mood?

12:31pm
On the way to the mall, Tony has me sucking on his fat, juicy, cock the entire time. I could actually feel it growing slowly in my mouth. When we arrive at the mall, his tight shirt barely covers his abs, showing off some nipple and his arms have grown larger and rounder than they were a while ago. I can even see around 3 veins crawling up his large arms. He?s even having problems putting his large cock back in his boxers which now appear to look like briefs due to Tony?s humongous thighs pushing them up his legs

Tony tries adjusting himself to leave but he has a problem squeezing out of the van, bouncing it up and down. ?I think I grew again, bro.? he says, eyeing himself again with pleasure on the roadway.

?Nothing wrong with that, right?? I ask him happily.

He raises his arms in the air and stretches them. ?Yeah, bigger and bigger!? he yells excitedly.

I step out of the van as well and I walk over to the other side where Tony is. When I?m a mere few inches away from him, he does a lat spread and his shirt tears at the back halfway down and my eyes only reach until his mouth now.

?Now I know how Shane feels when he?s bigger than his older brother!? he says, bouncing his pecs like a pro, nearly tearing the shirt and smiling with his signature grin. ?Let?s get inside before my clothes tear apart in public.?

?C?mon, let?s get inside before people report you for public nudity.? I joke. ?You look like you?re wearing a bra with those rags on.?

Tony just smiles and grabs onto his dick, clearly visible through his tiny boxers. ?It ain?t nudity till dick is showing, bro.? he says, wiggling it around in his boxers.

I giggle. ?Pretty sure it?s already showing.? I tell him, rubbing his giant dick with a smile on my face.

?And it?s just gonna keep getting? bigger, bro!? he says as his dick hardens in my hands.

?Alright, let?s get inside before anyone sees us and reports us for public sex.? I tell him.

?Gotcha!?

12:37pm
We walk around the mall looking around for a Big and Tall together, noticing everyone?s envious eyes on Tony. I hold onto Tony?s large muscular arm with both my hands, barely able to hold around it, as we walk through the mall while he eats his last muffin.

Tony flexes his arm in my hands. ?People are staring at me, bro. I think I like it.? he whispers with an arrogant grin on his face.

I stroke his bulging abs slowly. ?Who wouldn?t want to stare? You?re so fucking sexy!? I tell him as I resume stroking his thick arms. ?Tony, I think you?re growing again.? I whisper to him, feeling his slowly, inflating arms in my hands.

?I can feel it too, bro.? he whispers to me, growing slowly in my hands. ?I?m going to go hide in a washroom. I?m going to tear through these clothes if I grow any bigger.? he says to me, now leaning down even more to kiss my forehead before fast walking away and making slight tearing noises in his clothes as he did. And he did it looking like an idiot.

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CHAPTER 4 v.2

12:42pm
I can’t believe this! “Don’t you have anything bigger? I’ve already bought all your biggest clothes already!”

The lady at the Big and Tall cashier panics and asks around her co-workers if they have anything larger. “Well uh, sir, there is this one order that we got for someone apparently nearly 9 feet tall and quote, unquote, ‘wide as a bus’, but they never picked it up because we got a letter stating that the customer had outgrown the ordered clothes’ sizes. If you want them, they’re free for you; we’ve received more than enough payment from the down payment.”

“I’ll take it!” I yell straight at her face. I give her my credit card and all that shit and I ask someone from the shop to move the boxes around the mall in the cart with me while I search for my brother.

The first few washrooms I enter don’t have Tony in their stalls so we continue walking around the mall and the man carrying our stuff just looks at me with a confused face.

I eventually reach the washroom next to the supermarket where I’d left Tony earlier. “This might be it.” I tell the man as I grab a yellow long-sleeved shirt and some olive cargo shorts and quietly make my way into the washroom.

I slowly enter the washroom hoping not to get anyone’s attention too much. “Tony, are you in here?” I silently yell out… but to no reply. He has to be here, this is where I left him a while ago.

I slowly walk over to the cubicles to look for any signs of Tony. When I reach the one at the end, I hear some loud noises like rubbing skin against the walls. I stick my ear on the door and I hear a man’s loud moaning inside. That’s Tony’s voice.

I try taking my ear off of the door without attracting too much attention but it suddenly swings open and I fall down on the ground, showing me a large pair of muscular feet spread apart on the ground. I slowly look up and I see these massive tree-trunk legs and an erect dick, hovering over the toilet being held onto by these two strong hands connected to these melon arms and being stroked slowly. Jesus, this couldn’t possibly be Tony, he’s too big!

I continue to stare in awe at the man’s torso and my eyes nearly pop out of their sockets from the shock of the bulging chest on the man. His shoulders and arms are already pushing against the walls!

“Ungh… I’ve been waiting for you, bro!” he yells, stroking even harder.

I look up at the giant man’s face and it resembles a much more masculine Tony. Just a lot more muscular than I remember. “What took you so long?” he complains, letting go of his engorged member, dripping in cum and dropping his arms to the sides.

I just can’t take in how huge Tony’s dick is! My eyes are drawn all over his massive body taking up the entire cubicle.

“You know I love you right?” he asks, sounding exhausted from his little feat.

I crawl over to him and I try wrapping my arms around his waist like a hug as he slowly attempts to stand from the toilet as I revel in his godly form. “Am I even worthy of being loved by someone like you anymore?” I ask.

“So do you want me even bigger?” he asks with a grin on his face.

I open my mouth to reply but I hear the bathroom door slowly creak open behind me. “Hello? Sir, are you still in here?” a man asks. “Your boxes are getting in the way of the customers.” he continues. It must be the box-moving guy.

“Oh sorry, thanks for getting those boxes here, just leave them there, we’ll handle the rest.” I reply.

“We? Well, alright, thanks.” he nervously replies back as we hear his footsteps leave the room and the door shuts close.

“So bro,” Tony asks. “You’ve got my clothes?”

I let go of Tony’s waist and I slowly get back on my feet and I realize I barely reach his nipples now. “Oh but Tony… could you maybe… um, flex your arm for me first?” I ask, unable to hold in my sexual urges. “I just want to feel it!” I continue, staring at Tony’s nipples in front of my eyes.

Tony flexes his arm in front of my face. “Here, bro.” he says.

I wrap my tiny hands around the peak of his bicep as he repeatedly flexes it in my hands.

“You like this big muscle, bro?” he asks arrogantly. I bring my face in and I begin licking its peak. “Yeah, suck that shit. And it’s just gonna get even bigger, bro.”

I’m in sexual bliss when suddenly the sound of a woman screaming outside the washroom and the sound of falling boxes interrupts me. I let go of my grip on Tony’s bicep and I hand him the clothes I’d dropped on the ground earlier.

“Shit, we need to go before anyone else makes an accident outside.” I tell Tony.

He takes the clothes in his hands. “Thanks, bro.” he says as he struggles to put the long-sleeved shirt on over his chest and shoulders. “Shit, I’m so big now, these don’t fit too well.”

But those clothes are 6XL.

He eventually manages to slide into the shirt and it looks like the shirt could rip at any second with those melons he’s hiding in its sleeves.

“Fuck, these are too tight. Look, my nipples pop right through the shirt! Go ahead, feel them.” he says as he grasps my right hand and rests it on his left pec.

I rub his hard nipple through his shirt and he inhales deeply causing his inflating chest to nearly tear through the shirt.

“Fuck bro. You really enjoy touching me, don’t you?”

“Ye—“ I don’t finish my sentence before another woman screams outside the washroom. Jeez, does anyone outside even notice the mountain of boxes standing in front of them? “We better go, hurry up and put your clothes on, we’ve gotta go.”

“Gotcha.”

2:58pm
We eventually get home to our old house in the suburbs and as I step out of the van, I watch as Jean, a built gym bunny and a good friend of Shane’s, limps slowly out of the front door covered in sweat with a shocked grin on his face. It’s too bad he pales in comparison to either of my brothers.

He grabs onto my shoulders and looks me straight in the eyes like a maniac. “What the fuck happened to Shane?! He’s huge!” he yells at me 2 inches away from my face. “He was playing with me like a fucking toy until only an hour ago when he fell asleep!”

“I didn’t do anything to Shane, I swear!” I reply in fear. “Wait, how’d you even get in the house?”

“Oh,” Jean lets go of my shoulders and fixes his posture. “Shane gave me a copy of your house key last week,” he replies, smiling innocently. ”But don’t worry, I won’t do anything bad.”

I get irritated so I decide to shoo him away. “Just go home already, I need to feed him.”

Jean bends over to give me a quick hug and continues limping away quickly out of sight when Tony finally gets out of the van. “Was that Jean just now?” he asks.

“Yeah, now could you bring down the clothes and flour?”

“Sure, I’ll be right there, I just need some time to get out of this van. It’s just too small!”

3:07pm
“Shane, are you awake?” I ask, quietly walking into the bedroom with a tray full of food. I step inside and I see his gigantic body spread around the flattened bed.

Suddenly, Shane’s body begins to turn and face me and I see his sleepy eyes staring into mine. “Where’ve you been?” he asks, wiping his eyes. “I’ve been waiting for you.”

“I was out buying some food and your clothes for school with Tony.” I tell him, dropping his tray of food on the ground in front of him.

He gets up from the bed to sit on the ground and looks down at me over his massive chest. “Is this it?” he complains. “And where’s Jean?”

“I got you eight pre-cooked 16-oz. porterhouse steaks I bought at the supermarket. Isn’t this enough food for tonight?” I ask worriedly. “And Jean left a while ago while you were asleep.”

He flexes his giant arms in a double bi. “And you think eight tiny steaks are going to be enough to feed these giant babies?” he asks, kissing his biceps.

“Would a full-body bath from me be enough?” I smirk, feeling his quads.

He chuckles and gently pats me on the head. “Maybe, tiny bro. Just maybe.”

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Oh wow! Welcome back and thanks for the latest chapter. It is so hot I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope youngest brother Shane doesnt let this go to his head more than before. Also our Main Character needs to grow too. He can't be the only one not eating! Bring on the family of sexy giants!
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CHAPTER 4.5 v.3

3:13pm
I quickly walk down the creaking, wooden stairs of our old house with Shane?s dirty dishes in hand, walking over the wooden board being used as a ramp to close the gap. I step into the kitchen and I see Tony wearing the long-sleeved shirt and too-tight boxers, with a stern and irritated face, standing against the wall with his hand over his head and eyeing it without moving his head like he were measuring himself.

I walk over to the sink and drop the tray of dishes in. ?Here are the dishes, Tony.?

Tony pouts and crosses his arms across his chest. ?Hey Alec, could you measure me?? he asks. ?I wanna know how big I am now.?

?Oh yeah sure, I?ve got the tape right here in my pocket.? I tell him as I bring out the tape. I was waiting for this moment!

?Oh cool. Could you measure my height first?? he asks.

?Sure.? With tape in hand, I reach as high as I can over his head but he?s too tall for me to measure properly. ?Hey Tony, do you know where the stool is? You?re too tall.?

Suddenly, he bends down and lifts me up by my sides, showing off his monstrous biceps. ?Is this better? You?re light as a feather.? he says. ?I?m more stool than a stool is ever gonna be, bro.?

?This is fine, Tony.? I tell him, letting the tape drop to the ground. ?Alright, you?re 80 inches tall, so that?s like 6?8?.?

?Jeez, I never realized I was so tall!? he exclaims, putting me down. ?I can?t believe I only used to be 4?7?. Damn, I grew like 2 feet!?

?Now flex your right arm for me.?

?Oh yeah, here.? he says with raised eyebrows and an arrogant grin, flexing his arm low enough for me to reach. ?Your biceps are 27 inches. Now just relax so I can measure your chest.?

He relaxes his arm and I have some trouble getting the tape around his massive chest. ?Your chest is already around 62 inches.?

His eyes grow wide. ?Are my arms and chest really that large?? he asks smugly as he adjusts his dick?s outline through his boxers.

?Anything else you want me to measure?? I ask him, smirking lustfully.

Tony flashes me a smile. ?Yeah, the big guy?s been dying to know how big he?s gotten.?

I bend down until my eyes reach his crotch area. ?Alright, drop your boxers.? I tell him.

He struggles a bit but he eventually manages to drop his boxers showing me that horse dick he?s been playing with so much. ?Now, are you gonna suck it or measure it?? he asks, playfully shaking his dick in front of my face.

?I?m managing to hold back because I need to measure you right.?

He quickly lets go of his flaccid dick and pats me on the head with his strong hand. ?Good boy.?

I wrap the tape around his thighs. ?Your quads are 34 inches,? and his waist. ?And your waist is 29 inches around.?

?What about the big guy?? he pouts angrily.

?Saving the best for last!? I exclaim, taking his massive cock in hand.

?13 inches long and 9 inches around flaccid, Tony.?

Tony grins the biggest grin I?ve ever seen. ?Oh yeah, so big and juicy!? he yells happily, stroking it again as it rises. ?I want it bigger! And bigger!?

?I?d like it if you stayed as you are now, as my big brother who can walk around town with me.? I tell him as I get up from the ground and kiss his nipple playfully.

?But I want to be bigger.? he says, sounding sad. ?Bigger than everyone else!?

?Well, I?m gonna go give Shane a bath, have you packed away the flour??

Tony raises his head and answers me with a simple ?Yeah.? and drops his head again with his arms folded across his chest.

?Thanks, Tony.? I reply as I go back upstairs, leaving Tony in the kitchen with a look of thought. What could he be thinking about?

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CHAPTER 5 v.2

3:21pm
?Shane be careful, you wouldn?t want to break any more of the house than you already have just getting to the bathroom, right?? I tell Shane, carefully leading him through the small 7ft hallway of the house.

?Sorry, tiny bro, you can?t contain all this muscle in such a small house!? he yells. ?What about moving to a bigger one?? he asks, concerned for the house, continuing to squeeze through the hallway.

?I?ll think about it. Moving may be a good idea since you and Tony seem to be growing at abnormal paces.?

?What? Tony?s been growing? He?s not bigger than me, right?? he asks worriedly, emanating an aura of anger. ?God, it?d suck so much if I were the small brother again.?

I glance back at Shane?s furrowed face with a blank one. ?I still don?t know how you and Tony grew so you seem pretty unpredictable.? I tell him, opening the door to the bathroom and walking inside.

Shane follows and tries squeezing through the door, ?Ack, too tight!?, but breaks the doorframe and the wall around it, leaving a large hole in the wall where the door used to be, covering the area with rubble. ?Shit, sorry bro.? he says, slowly standing up and hitting his head on the ceiling. ?Shit.?

?Hey, don?t stand up in the bathroom, Shane. You?re 2 feet taller than the ceiling!?

He gives me a look of awkward embarrassment, rubbing the back of his head. ?Sorry, forgot I?m the world?s biggest and most muscular 16 year old!? he exclaims, getting on all fours to get into the shower.

?Alright Shane, get in the shower and I?ll be with you once I get my clothes off.? I tell him as I begin taking my shorts off.

He climbs into the shower and rests on the ground, taking the entire space. He adjusts himself and smirks as he watches me strip my boxers off. ?Your dick?s so small compared to mine, bro!? he laughs, grinning childishly and pointing at my own 3 incher.

I giggle a bit, trying not to look insulted and show off a blank smile. ?Yeah, yeah, yeah.? I sneer. I walk over to the shower and I turn it on. Shane moans in ecstasy as the hot water runs out the showerhead and onto his massive body. I rub his wet, cobblestone abs with water.

?Don?t you just love being dominated by your little brother?? he asks arrogantly.

I slowly climb onto his wet body and I lie on his massive chest. I begin playing with his round nipples in my fingers. ?Hey Shane. Do you want to grow some more?? I ask playfully.

Shane arches his eyebrows and smiles at me, chuckling and patting me on the back. ?How many times are you going to ask? If I knew how I got this big I?d continue doing it over and over again! I?d be enormous!? he exclaims excitedly, showing off his teeth with a grin.

I slowly climb up his chest and I rub his massive arms raised above his head next. Both my hands can?t even wrap around his left arm.

?Here tiny bro, I?ll even flex my arms for you.? he says playfully sticking his tongue out, flexing his left arm in my hands. ?I can feel your little prick getting hard on my abs, bro.?

I notice his arms are now literally bigger than my head? much bigger. If I thought they were big this morning, they must be monstrous now, bigger than most men?s? legs even.

?You like ?em big, doncha, tiny bro?? he asks mischievously, flexing even harder causing his biceps to peak even higher. ?Now wash my dick, it?s getting big and hard and it needs you to play with it.?

I slide off of his chest and I shift down to his big dick, clearly twice as large as Tony?s own monster, and begin stroking it.

?Mmph, it?s too bad you?re too small for my dick, tiny bro.? he says. ?I would?ve enjoyed fucking you up with it. Aww yeah, just keep stroking it. Harder!? he commands.

?Oh shit, I?m gonna cum!?

The cum explodes out of his cock for a few seconds and all over our bodies. He wipes the cum off of his mouth and jiggles his balls with his free hand. ?Goddamn, that was amazing! I love these big balls!?

Out of lust, I climb back up to his chest and begin licking his nipples again. ?I guess you?ll be getting a lick-cleaning!? I tell him.

?Fuck yes!?

I continue licking his mountainous pecs all over and it just feels so good?but something doesn?t feel right.

He brings his arms back down to his sides and looks at me furrowing his eyebrows. ?Bro. I don?t feel too good.? he moans, sounding exhausted and breathing heavily.

?What do you mean?? I ask worriedly. Am I closer to the ground than before?

?I think? I?m getting smaller.? he groans painfully.

I stare at his eyes as they come closer to an equal level. His pecs aren?t as full anymore either. He really is shrinking?and he seems to be shrinking faster every second.

Shane coughs a bit. ?Bro, could you get off of me, it hurts.? he groans in discomfort.

I get up off of his shrinking chest and stand up again. I look down at Shane?s body, still on the ground, now smaller than Tony?s and still getting smaller.

He struggles to get up off of the wet ground and stands up to his full height. We lock eyes and he?s still taller but he continues getting shorter and less muscular until we?re eye-level again. He continues shrinking and losing muscle until he stops back at his old, puny size.

?What the fuck!? he yells, looking back up at me in anger. ?Why am I back to normal again?! I don?t like being the small one; I want to be big again! Fuck, now I?m small and weak again. What the fuck did you do to me, Alec?!? he continues.

Suddenly, we hear the ground outside rumbling and the remaining debris from the doorway crumbles. ?Ack!? a deep, familiar voice yells. We turn to see who yelled and we see Tony?s massive form, rubbing his head after hitting the doorway's remains with his head and bending down a bit to get in the bathroom. ?What?s with all the shouting?? he asks.

Shane?s eyes go wide after he hears his loud voice and falls back down on the wet shower looking horrified. ?Holy shit! Is that you, Tony?? he asks fearfully.

Tony stands up to his full height?a few inches from the ceiling?and gives us a most-muscular pose. ?Yeah, I?ve grown quite a bit today.? Tony growls. He drops the pose and walks over to Shane, looking very menacing due to his size. ?What about you, Shane? Why are you back to being tiny?? he asks, picking Shane up by the armpits and bringing him to his feet.

Shane struggles to keep standing. ?How the fuck should I know? I don?t like being smaller than you!? He steps back a few steps and bends his head just to see Tony?s face over his thick pecs, being heavily constricted by the now wet, long-sleeved shirt. he yells, trying to punch Tony?s rock-hard abs with his weak fist?and begins rubbing it in pain. ?God, why are you so big now?!? he yells in anger and a bit of jealousy, eyeing him from head to toe.

Tony bends down to Shane?s level and strikes a left bicep pose in front of Shane?s face?bigger than his head. Tony flexes it repeatedly and gives a sly grin. ?Are you jealous, tiny bro?? he asks, giving a sly grin.

Shane pushes Tony?s arm out of the way with all his strength and storms out of the bathroom, soaking wet. ?Go fuck yourself, asshole!? he yells before stomping out of the room.

Tony drops the pose and looks back down at me from his full height. ?So you like the view from down there?? he asks me with a lustful grin on his face.

?What the fuck just happened?? I ask with concern.

?Shane shrunk.?

?Yeah, I know, I was bathing him before he shrunk.? I reply.

Tony doesn?t say a word before he smiles and bends down again and brings my head closer to his, sticking my ear into his mouth as if to whisper something. ?I know how Shane and I grew.? he whispers as he turns his body and turns the shower off.

?How??

You really don?t know?? He furrows his eyebrows.

I shake my head in negation.

He pouts in disappointment. ?I thought you?d know.?

?Am I missing something here??

?Yeah, bro. It?s the flour.?

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CHAPTER 6 v.2

4:56pm
“The flour? How does flour make anyone grow?” I ask curiously.

Tony stands back up, rubbing his nipples due to tight shirt discomfort. “I dunno bro. Why don’t we go back to the mountains and check around?” he asks, offering me a hand.

I grab his hand and he lifts me up from the wet ground a bit too powerfully as my face gets crushed against his pecs. “Oomf.”

Tony lets go of my hand. “Bro, I know you want to fuck me but not right now. Get your face out of my pecs.” he says, pushing me off of him.

“Sorry, you’re just too big and strong.” I joke.

He smirks. “Well hey, it ain’t my fault you gave me so much flour!” he retorts. “Now come on, put your clothes on, I’ll be in the van. We’re going to the mountains.” Tony says before leaving the room, almost shaking the ground as he walked.

“What about Shane? He’s probably crying in his room by himself right now. What if he finds the flour while we’re gone?” I ask.

“Don’t worry, I hid it somewhere where only I can find it.” he replies, grinning at me slyly.

5:11pm
In the van, we’re driving on the mountain trail to the top of the mountain. Tony takes up the entire front row so I sit at the back.

“So what makes you think the flour makes people grow?” I ask Tony.

Tony doesn’t answer before readjusting himself in the driver’s seat due to the tight space leaving him no room to move. “The growing only started when you made those muffins and pancakes and obviously those need flour which we’ve never had before.” he says. “God, it’s so hard to drive being this big.”

“Wait, stop the car.”

“Ugh, why?” Tony asks, sounding annoyed.

“We can just walk up the mountain, It’s just a half-kilometer walk anyway.”

Tony just looks at me bug-eyed as if he’d just been shown a divine revelation. Tony slams the car door open with his fist sending it flying. Tony immediately pushes himself out of the small van and stretches his arms to his sides as soon as he steps out.

“I can breathe!” he yells raising his arms into the air. “At last!”

I step out of the van and I hold onto his large paw. “Let’s go.”

“Alright.” he says, tightening his grip around my hand.

5:15pm
“So why haven’t you shrunk back yet?” I ask curiously, stepping over the large rocks on the mountain path.

“Dunno. Do you want me to be small again too?” he asks, looking down at me with a doleful frown.

“Why would I?” I smirk.

“Yeah, I guess you wouldn’t want that.”

5:42pm
I trudge over the dead branches and leaves to the cliffside where I’d first found the sack. I look around my surroundings for any other sacks.

“Tony, go look around for any more sacks.”

Tony gently pats me on the shoulder—causing me to stumble a little—and walks ahead.

I resume my searching when I hear several leaves and twigs shuffle ahead of me. I face the noise and I see Tony quickly falling into a large hole beneath his feet.
“Whoa!” Tony yells.

I rush over to the large hole and jump down the hole following Tony. Tony eventually falls out of my sight and the hole gets deeper and darker—due to my slight resistance I fall slower. “Tony! Are you still there?!” I yell, hoping for an answer.

No answer.

“Tony!” I yell louder.

Still no answer.

I get worried so I take a deep breath and expel it all at once. “Tony—!“

“—fuck!” I yell. I've hit the ground...?

I suddenly feel the ground beneath my shift around violently. “Fucking shit, get off of me!” Tony yells beneath me. I landed on him. No wonder it was so bumpy.

Tony shoves me off of his chest and he shifts around the hole, crushing me against the dirt wall.
“Tony! What the f—uck—what the fuck are you doing?!” I yell, trying to get him to stop.

“It’s so tight in here! My dick needs air!” he yells angrily, taking a wide seat on the ground and pulling his gigantic tool out of his tight shorts. “Oh Jesus, this fresh air feels good!”

In the midst of Tony’s stroking, I hear the sound of metal beneath us separating. “Tony, put it back in your shorts.” I warn.

“Okay,” Tony reluctantly puts his dick back in his tight shorts. “But why?” he asks.

“I hear—“

The ground beneath us breaks open and we fall into a large, bright room, quickly landing on a metal floor.

I look down and my hands are groping Tony’s bulging pecs. “What the fuck, Alec! Stop fucking falling on me!” he complains angrily, shoving me off again.

Tony quickly gets on his feet and rips off his shirt and cargo shorts, “Ugh!” he yells, now showing off his bulging pecs and boulder arms, and his log-thighs.

“Oh, yes!” he continues, leaving only his extremely tight briefs leaving nothing to the imagination. “I’m free! God, I love showing off this body. I’m just so fucking hot!” he yells, feeling himself. I crawl over to his body to watch the show up-close.

“And now for the grand finale…” he says, grabbing onto his briefs.

I wait impatiently for him to rip his briefs but it never happens. I look up at what could be keeping him and he was staring dumbfounded at something behind me.

I turn around and I see a tall, thickly-muscled man with a thick jaw, short brown hair with slight gray-ness, a slight 5 o’clock shadow, wearing nothing but a small open lab coat. And he’s aiming what looks like a cannon at us.

“Who the fuck are you people and what are you doing in my lab?!” the man yells angrily, eyeing us both curiously.

Lab Coat Man (MORPH by STONEPILER)
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Your doing a great job.

Love the growth, but am sorry they're finding out about shrinkage, too. Speaking logically, it's ether the water or the jacking off - both of which is needed to happen sooner or later. That means that the growth by nature is only temporary, unless they figure out a way to "fix" the growth, so that they can maintain what they get, and preferably add to it over time.

As for Alec, I just don't get him at all. He actually LIKES being small? Even when eventually the other two giants will only wind up growing so big, they can only service each other, while little Alec can only just sit and watch from a safe distance (and keep paying out for bigger playgrounds for the two Gods)?

Must be the MACRO in me, I guess. I'll never understand the Micro mentality. Ah, well. To each his own...

It'll be interesting how this can sort itself out.


By the way, if I may make one small suggestion on your story.. You should post additions to your story as NEW POSTS, labeled Part 2, Part 3, etc. When it is posted back here on the tail of your original post, most readers, having clicked on it already, mark this post as READ, and do not return to it. So don't be discouraged if you get almost no response to your new chapter.

To correct this, repost the latest part in a new post, then DELETE the posting here. As the Original Poster, I believe you are allowed the ability to EDIT and DELETE previous posts. If you cannot DELETE the old post altogether, then EDIT it by deleting all the text, and typing in its place a quick note to check out the next part as a new posting.

By the way, that goes for the new additional posting you did while I was writing this.

Good Luck, and Thanks Again for the story.

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About the compliment:
Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it. Really I do.

About the shrinkage:
I just didn't know where to bring the story by keeping Shane 9 feet tall the entire time so I decided to bring him down to his normal size and the story just blossomed continuously in my head. Also it's neither the jacking off nor the water that makes him shrink.

About the Alec:
Yes, he enjoys being dominated. It's the passive, giant younger brother-loving, slave within me.

About the new posts/threads:
I shall take up the suggestion. I just didn't do it before because I didn't want to clutter up the PYMGS subforum too much. I'll post Chapter 7 in a new thread when I have it ready \o
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Criticisms and replies would be much appreciated!

. . .

Shane tries squeezing into the door but breaks the doorframe, leaving a large hole in the wall where the door used to be, covering the area with rubble.

. . .

Suddenly, the door slams open, hitting the wall. ?Ack!? a deep, familiar voice yells. We turn to see who yelled and opened the door and we see Tony?s massive form, rubbing his head after hitting the doorway's remains with his head and bending down to get in the bathroom due to his size.

. . .

Shane pushes Tony?s arm out of the way with all his strength and storms out of the bathroom, soaking wet. ?Go fuck yourself, asshole!? he yells before slamming the door and leaving to who-knows-where.
I'm enjoying the interaction between the brothers, the size differences, the cocky attitudes, etc.

You requested some criticism: You wrote that Shane destroyed the bathroom door trying to get in, leaving just a hole where the door used to be. But later, Tony bangs the door open, then shrunken Shane slams the door on the way out. These inconsistencies can be distracting.

Overall, I want to encourage you to keep writing. I appreciate the time and effort that goes into a story.
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Thanks! I don't proofread my story too much so I don't notice too many inconsistencies. Thanks for pointing that out, I actually noticed a bunch more and I'll fix them all when I get on my PC later this afternoon. I actually edited the original doc but forgot to update this one too.
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For some reason, I remember seeing this series from more than last October. Did you put it up in an earlier draft before?
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For some reason, I remember seeing this series from more than last October. Did you put it up in an earlier draft before?
I posted the first two chapters of this story, found above, several weeks ago and only had to continue writing it recently. I'm not sure if it was October or not though.
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Update

I've decided to edit the first few chapters because now that I read them, they feel really really badly written. I'll be editing them in my spare time before I release chapter 8 (chapter 8 is a bit boring because of all the boring info I'm going to be bombarding so I'll make it longer). You'll know if a chapter has been edited if it has v[version number] next to the title and if its story elements have changed.

And since I'm editing the previous chapters, I'd be glad if anyone pointed out any more inconsistencies and improper English mistakes that I may have missed. I'm not the best at this proofreading and writing thing. Sorry.

Checklist:
[X] Chapter 1
[X] Chapter 2
[X] Chapter 3
[X] Chapter 4
[X] Chapter 4.5
[X] Chapter 5
[X] Chapter 6
[X] Chapter 7

Also, in my spare time, I've been reading some more stories here on these glorious forums and I noticed that some elements of my story are in line with some other stories as well.

I just want everyone to know that I DO NOT copy other people's stories or writing styles! Everything similar is PURELY COINCIDENTAL. I would never copy someone else's work. Everything I write is written up by me and thought up by me and no one else. I may get inspiration from other stories, but I don't copy. Also, my writing style is my own. I enjoy writing with timestamps.

Also I have already thought up what happens next for the next few chapters and the ending and all I need is the time to write them up. Hopefully people would still want to read my story by then.

Thanks for reading!

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I just want everyone to know that I DO NOT copy other people's stories or writing styles! Everything similar is PURELY COINCIDENTAL. I would never copy someone else's work.
My friend Scarletic,

It has never entered my mind that you were copying other people's work. Your story is about live-in friends (or relatives) experiencing muscle growth. Of course there are going to be similarities between your story and others. It's kinda' like writing about the Gran Prix, and heavily mentioning cars. It will obviously have some common denominators with other similarly-crafted stories.

As for coincidences in the writing elements, it happens all the time. No real way to avoid it. I hope nobody has accused you of this. I certainly haven't seen any one here posting responses to your chapters imply anything of the sort.

Please continue with your story as you feel it should go, not as you worry about how others feel it should go.
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