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 June 29th, 2007, 12:35 PM | |||
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| The World of Iravia: Prologue The Dense Forests It was night when he awoke with a start. His heart was pounding and he found he was sweating. It was another dream he thought. Garet was a small kid in his familys tribe. He was always the last to go out on the hunt, the last one everyone picked. Garet was unbelievably smart though he wold learn and memorize things on first when they taught him his survival skills. As his life progressed he was never big and bulky like the other tribe members. He never made any new friends. Nobody liked him because he was so puny and small. So on the last night he would ever see his familyy again he thought to himself I shall not be a nuisance to his family and he ran into the forest.     |
| June 29th, 2007, 12:36 PM | |||
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| Srry guys Srry guys that its short but its the prologue it gave some insight into his life before he awoke. |
| June 29th, 2007, 09:53 PM | |||
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| I really don't understand the need for prologues, let alone posting one this short by itself. :\ |
| June 29th, 2007, 10:32 PM | |||
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| In my opinion, a single unified document would have sufficed for you. Not only would it be easier for the readers, but to keep things organized as well. And besides, I think this story could be great if it was just one big chapter instead of small segments, don't you? __________________ Ancient Proverb: Whatever doesn't kill you today will only make you sore the next morning. redkage |
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