The Coach's Formula Part 20

[Shade]

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Part Twenty: The Giant Awakes

That same Sunday, around the same time…

David awoke to the spray of water still hitting in his face. Awoke is probably too generous a term. David more or less came to lying in the spot where he had fallen the afternoon before.

He remembered the intense pain he had experienced.

But rather than the after effects he had been expecting, his muscles felt good. Like they did after a really intense workout. David got up slowly getting his sea legs, and then he turned the shower off. He was unsure of what had happened to him. Unsure of what time it was. Unsure of everything really.

Was he having some side effect to the formula?

After a moment’s consideration he doubted it. Surely they would have affected the Coach and everyone else who had taken them as well. Or maybe not?

Maybe David had a genetic abnormality or some other condition that would make his body react differently? He’d always been abnormally small after all.

Never mind thought David as he stood there stretching. He flexed his muscles involuntarily as he did so.

He looked casually down at his arm. It was huge. Not just like it had been. Even bigger than it had been. That couldn’t be it. But look at that gun. Look at the way it peaked as he flexed it. David wasn’t sure, because he wasn’t in the habit of measuring himself, but he thought it was way bigger than it had been yesterday. And those forearms. Look at those. There were boa constrictors that weren’t that big. He was corded and enormous, with no body fat. David couldn’t even see his dick when he looked down, as the shelf of his pecs was so thick and massive it obscured his view.

And these muscles were starving for a light workout.

David wrapped a towel around his waist and walked out to the locker room naked as the day he was born. He felt proud of this body, armored as it was with muscle. He didn’t care who saw him looking like this. It would blow their minds.

He noticed that the gym was a mess. Worse than the way he’d left it. Plates were strewn everywhere. David saw the squat rack still loaded with the weights from Ryan’s last workout yesterday. It was loaded to 1500 pounds, several hundred more pounds than the world record. David thought it would make a good warm-up.

That’s when a moan caught David’s attention.

To his great surprise, Mandy Cox lay half naked on the floor near a weight bench. He dropped his towel in his haste to reach her. Being a young teenaged man himself, David couldn’t help but notice that her pussy was openly exposed as she lay there. He bent down to examine it, from a clearly concerned point of view mind you, but found himself getting half hard as he looked at her. He didn’t mean to, but he was a virile young male and he couldn’t help himself.

As he hardened to the point he could see the end of his cock beyond his humongous chest, Mandy’s hand snaked out like a striking cobra and grabbed him. He was only half hard, but he could have dented steel with that monster, and Mandy’s hand could barely grab his girth let alone wrap around it.

“I need you inside me again,” she moaned.

Again David wondered? But not too hard.

Her eyes were open, but David thought they weren’t focused on him.

Whatever David may have thought about the situation, Mandy’s hand and body were providing the reaction that made him a man, and David found himself responding appropriately. Mandy was invigorated by David’s muscle and she groped for him where she could reach, and he leant in to kiss her passionately.

“Oh, baby,” she moaned, “Don’t make me wait.”

Her cunt was dripping juices, but David was aware of the large pile of cum crustily coating the outside of it already. A large amount of someone’s juice had pooled around her sexy bottom where it had leaked out of her crack. David thought it looked like she’d been gang fucked by the amount. But he didn’t want to think too much. She was hot. She was waiting. Despite being so thoroughly fucked, her pussy was still so small and pink and tender to David. He didn’t have that much experience with women, but he felt the dragon roar up within him. He knew what he should do. Like his brother before him he caught sight of himself in the mirror and he imagined that he was a god. She would be his sacrificial virgin. Her pussy would be his offering. David was an alpha male and alpha males know what to do.

David crawled up the bed between her legs, kissing her belly briefly on the way up. Her top had slid up over the swell of her breasts during her writhing. He briefly sucked on her naked nipples before quickly kissing up her neck to her mouth. He kissed her lips, sucking the top one into his mouth briefly before releasing it. He kissed her again, sending his tongue into her mouth.

Suddenly, the big man broke the kiss. Looking down at her, he held himself up on his arms above her. The small woman felt so helpless. This big man was all muscle! She watched him reach down in between them and grab his gigantic cock. He quickly brought it down the entrance of her vagina, pressing it against her lips and rubbing up and down a little. She gasped, looking up at him pleadingly

Before he knew what he was doing, David found himself sliding inside her. More to the point the massive head of his dick wedged in her pussy. He felt like he was popping her cherry she felt so tight to him. Although there was not way he could slide inside on the first stroke, no matter how wet she is or how much lubricant he used. She was just too tight. And he was just too big. He pulled back, each time forcing his way further inside her. Her cum bathing his dick, coating it with the lubricant that was required to ease his ship into port. Contributing to that was the clear precum that David could now feel leaking out of him preparing the way. When he reached the furthest he could go in those tight confines, she moaned long and loud and hard beneath him, wrapping her arms and legs around his massive girth.

“Oh, Ryan…” she called out to David, “Oh fuck me, fuck me, fuck me with that big fucking tool.”

David heard her call his brother’s name beneath him. It registered in his mind, but it wasn’t enough to make him stop, he was lost in the lust of fucking and rutting.

Mandy felt him work her over.

A second huge cock, the thickest cock she had ever felt, pumped her fragile body for the second time in less than twenty-four hours. She’s never experienced anything like this last day. That cock was so long that it seemed to take forever to get inside her each time David thrust. She could feel every inch of him gliding along the inner walls of her vagina, and she was in heaven. She moaned into his mouth, kissing him even more sloppily. The big man pulled his cock most of the way out of her and slid it back in even quicker this time.

“Ryan, Ryan, Ryan…” she mumbled, awash with passion.

She groaned into his mouth, bolts of electricity shooting up her body. He began thrusting in and out of her small body at an easy pace. Her pussy was so sensitive that she was aware of the entire organ running along the inside of her vagina.

David held himself up on his arms high above her, looking down at her gorgeous face as he rammed all that impressive manhood into her depths. Her small tits were bouncing up and down, and her eyes were closed as she took his cock over and over. Her feet were flailing high above his thrusting ass, moaning as she embraced the feelings within her.

Mandy opened her eyes and looked down her naked body, still groaning. His cock was so big, and he was using such long thrusts, that she could see more than half his dick each time he pulled out of her. His ripped abdominals were on full display as he flexed his stomach, driving his pole into her. Mandy spread her legs wide, her feet rose as high as she could get them. She was rocketing towards an orgasm, and the vision of his muscles bulging as he drilled such a giant cock into her was enough to push her to the edge.

She moaned wincing as an orgasm rushed over her. She cried out, heart pounding. Her legs straightened out behind him, squeezing him in between them, as if her little legs could possibly dent his powerful intercostals muscles. She was conscious of the inner walls of her vagina pulsating around his pistoning cock.

She moaned again. David wouldn’t stop poking the back of her cunt with his steel rod! Mandy was writhing underneath him, her hands clawing at him. Trying to tear the skin covering those titanium muscles. She couldn’t take it! His long, thick dick was gliding in and out of her needy vagina over and over and over. Her orgasm wouldn’t end!

Her thrashing about was causing him to lose it. This woman was just so fucking sexy! This experience was so fucking sexy. His dick seemed to grow even longer and thicker insider.

Mandy felt him grow even bigger, but there was far too much pleasure to even think about pain. She was gasping for breath, recovering from her orgasm finally. She looked up at him.

“Cum inside me Ryan,” she moaned looking into David’s eyes, “I’m burning for your cum.”

He thrust into her hungry pussy a few more times before a series of thick white wads of cum shot out of the end of his dick like a machine gun, filling her cunt with his cum, which already contained as much of Ryan’s juice. But if Ryan could have filled a bucket with his ejaculation, David could have filled three, and soon her cunt was so full that his hot spunk was forced out around David’s dick with each powerful thrust.

Her pussy was so full that David had to pull out, but even then his dick still squirted uncontrollably as he continued to have an orgasm. He was spraying her and he coated her body in cum like he was dowsing a fire.

“Ryan,” she cried, “My God that was better than before. I’m so full.”

Then as David pulled away from her, he saw a shudder run through her. Suddenly she was seizing. He body started shaking uncontrollably.

David knew he had to do something, he just wasn’t sure what.

She needed a doctor. His ardor was extinguished quickly. He ran to his locker in the locker room to find some clothes. He pulled on a shirt that was waiting there for him, but he couldn’t even get it over his shoulders. He forced it over his pecs and heard it rip down the back, unable to contain his massive back.

“Fuck,” he roared, his anger fueling his muscles even more.

There was only one man with clothes that would fit, and that was the Coach.

He went to his office. One thrust of his mighty arm and the Coach’s locked door went flying inwards. The Coach had also locked the metal file cabinet, but with not effort at all David had pulled the flimsy metal door from its hinges taking the locking mechanism with it. There were a couple boxes of cans for the football players, but David ignored those. He didn’t need them. He grabbed a super XXXXL t-shirt and shorts that the Coach kept there.

He pulled the shirt over his head and it barely covered the breadth of his chest, shoulders and back. The shorts barely fit any better. But they would do. However, when David went back to the gym to pick up Mandy to take her to the hospital tears began to emerge around his shoulders as he walked. The Lycra fabric couldn’t contain him. The front of the shirt gave way and his powerful chest was exposed to view. When he bent his arms, his biceps and traps spilt the seam of the sleeves. In haste David pulled the ragged fabric from his body and revealed his mighty torso.

“Fuck it,” he said, deciding to go shirtless.

Mandy was totally covered in cum. David ripped away all her clothing until she was naked. Her seizure had stopped but she was totally out of it. She was mumbling incoherently.

David wrapped her small body in a towel and picked her up like she weighed nothing. He knew he would need to go to the hospital by himself. There was no time to wait for an ambulance. David’s large powerful legs were faster than any ambulance anyway.

He set off at a sprint for the tiny hospital that services the town, fervently hoping he would be in time to help Mandy.

[ts1976]

Hey Shade,

I just read your story in its entirety, and I have to say it rocks! I can't imagine why I hadn't read it before now...

Looking forward to more soon...

[lackoflife]

Bump!

Will we ever see an end to this story?? Too good to stop here!

[abbraxis]

I didn't even know there WAS a part 20.

I hope he finishes it!

[Shade]

I agree it needs finishing. I originally knew how it was going to end, but I allowed myself to lose the main thread of the story. In the meantime I have moved overseas and find that I have a very demanding job. I do plan to look at it soon as see if I can get it back on track.

[skumbum]

We'll we waiting to read it when you are ready

[caneda]

...just bemoaning the lack of a conclusion to this fantastic story.

[xboy]

so this story non have a end?

[caneda]

Someone pulled this story up from the depths of the forum, and I happily re-(re-)read it. I know it's been several years, but out of all the stories here that get dropped unfinished, this is the one I most wish we had an ending to. Even if we never get one, thanks for what you did write.

[Omiganda]

Someone's gotta want to take up the torch and finish it. Unless the guy who wrote it still wants to

[Shade]

I am alive and well thank you very much. My life is busy with work and my own training and I had taken a long break from this story. (Six years apparently.) Also, I was just a little sick of it. Unlike some writers I do not have the discipline to force myself to crank out page after page if I'm not really feeling the love.

That doesn't mean I've abandoned it. Nor do I necessarily object if someone wants to write and publish their own alternate version or continuation of the story in their own literary universe. (Although I'd appreciate a heads up first if you do want to do so.) That said I will come back to this and my other stories in my own good time, so I reserve to myself any canonical continuation, sequels, et cetera.

P.S. I do know in my mind what the next few chapters of this story will be - as well as Alpha Male and the Fraternity Muscle story arcs. It's just getting them down on paper.

[nnnrg]

Good to see you're still around. Hope the training has been productive.

[xboy]

never be a end?