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Old September 2nd, 2007, 06:52 AM
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Nick And David Part III

Hope you're enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it, please post any comments you like!

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A week had passed since David had been, well, pratically raped by his big brother Nick and nothing much had happened. David didn't want to see let alone talk to his brother and Nick, arrogant as ever, only ever spoke to him when he wanted something.

"Is my English work done yet Davey Boy!" Nick yelled through his door. David's head dropped and he called back that it was.

Nick strolled in, picked it up off David's little desk and punched him in the arm as a parting shot before walking back out again with a smirk.

David sat there rubbing his arm, close to tears. He didn't want to cry, not again, he'd cried himself to sleep for four nights in a row after his brother had hurt him. It wasn't so much that he physically hurt him, it was how, after all his time looking up to his brother he'd been let down and used by him. Sometimes, when he's daydreaming he imagines he's the big brother and what he'd do to get his revenge. What humilation he could inflict on his brother that would make what happened to him pale in comparison.

"Bye Mom, be back at ten!" Nick yelled, slamming the front door.

David breathed a little sigh of relief. Recently he's felt more comfortable when his brother wasn't in the house.

He got up to go have a shower and stood in front of his full length mirror. Taking his t shirt off he examines the already forming bruise on his right arm. Rubbing it he looks at his body, never having felt so ugly or pathetic in his life. At 4'4 he was short for his age. Not only short but skinny too. His scrawny chest rising and falling with each breath, his tiny waist, barely able to keep his trousers up without a belt. Taking off his trousers he looks at his legs. All bone. Not a trace of muscle on them. Chicken legs his brother called them. His whole body hairless and if it wasn't for the fact that he had male genitalia he could have been mistaken for a pre pubescent girl! One only 7 years old, maybe, if he was lucky. He dropped his briefs and looked at himself completely naked. His dark almost black hair, short cropped, his brown, chocolate eyes, rather large straight nose and thin lips. Then looking down at his penis. He felt so ashamed of it. He hated it! At just under an inch with pea sized balls that were hidden underneath it, he could cover it with maybe a quarter of his small hands.

Tears forming he rushes into the bathroom he shares with his brother and turns it on. Nice and hot, cleaning him, washing away the shame and pity he feels for himself, at least for a short time anyway. Stepping out, with a standard towel twice wrapped around him he stands in front of the mirror again. This time though he feels a little better about himself. He looks better. Nothing's changed but he does feel cleaner, healthier.

Then a thought occurs to him. Looking at the door to his brother's room on the other side of the bathroom a memory comes back to him. Syringes? What was he doing with syringes? A small grin forms, just enough to notice, as he thinks, maybe he can get his brother in trouble for doing drugs! David, being the thinker he is though, knows if he's wrong his parents will be even worse to him and god knows what his brother would do! He has to be sure.

Creeping into his brother's room he heads for the drawer with the small box in. Opening it he sees not just the box but several small vials.

Picking one up he reads the label....

Testosterinal Hemispher - One shot to be taken daily. Not to be taken orally. This formula will enhance male characteristics in animals. Do not use before animal is at least majoritively matured. Untested for human use. Property of McHale Laboratories.

David knew the name, it was that abandoned lab behind his school. So that's where Nick went at lunch! David had noticed his brother was never around during lunch time but just assumed he was with some girl or at the school gym working out. Putting everything back how he found it, David started to formulate a plan. A way to get his revenge and make sure no one would hurt him ever again. And they would never ignore him again either!

Returning to his room, he crawled into bed and dreamed of what it would be like for his plan to work.

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More coming very soon! Let me know if I'm going too fast or slow. Personally I wanna drag it out a little bit, make it last a while!
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Old September 2nd, 2007, 05:18 PM
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I like stories with a slow build up, too. Can't wait for the next one.
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Old September 2nd, 2007, 06:41 PM
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Yeah, great story.
I'm really enjoying it.
Hoping to see David get some major growth soon!
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Very interesting premise!
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I have to agree. tgis is so promising... we can only guess what will happen
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Old September 3rd, 2007, 07:06 AM
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promising indeed!!
and hot--i still like that twist from the last chapter ("I loved you!") and such; can't wait to read more man!
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please keep going. make it last as long as you can.
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Excellent!
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WoW!

Thank you so much for the encouragment! I'm gonna write the next chapter 2moro nite!

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