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The Storage Room Most original title EVER, I know. Anywho, I've been lurking around here for a while and now have decided to show you a muscle story I wrote. R&R please!!! =D ~ Title: The Storage Room Author: Breathless "Dude, score!" Joshua yelled from somewhere in the back of the storage room. "'Dude, score' what?" Roger asked, appearing behind him. "I found a couple of protein bars!" Joshua said raising his hand with a couple of metallic green packages. Roger took one and examined it. "This expired a couple of months ago." He said, pointing at some numbers in the back of it. Joshua looked downhearted. They had been locked in the storage room with no way out ever since they closed at 8 p.m. more than five hours ago. They had yelled for a while before coming to terms with the fact they'd have to spend the night in the middle of nowhere, alone. And then Joshua got hungry. Roger looked at the short, skinny boy and sighed. "Keep on looking, we'll find something," he said. It was just like Roger's luck to be stuck in a closed space with a fifteen-year old boy who was still hyper when hungry. Ferrets weren't as insane as Joshua, and Roger had a hard time keeping up with ferrets. No, Roger wasn't fit. In his 25 years of existence he had never done a lot of exercise. Sure, he planned to, he just never got around to it. His body was almost funny to look at. His arms and legs were skinny, but his midsection was quite large and round. He had been told by a "nice" girl that if he wasn't so out of shape his face might actually be cute, with his brown eyes and short black hair. Sure, he was smart, but that did not impress the ladies. "Rogerball," Joshua yelled from somewhere. "I found something!" Or earned the respect of loud, short, obnoxious fifteen year olds. Joshua had found a sleeping bag and a pillow. On closer inspection they seemed clean. It was hard to tell by the light of their cell phones (of course the lights to the storage room were OUTSIDE, why not?). "We can use this to sleep in!" Joshua said, almost bouncing. "On, more like, there's no way we can both fit in that," Roger said. "Then I sleep in it!" Joshua said. "You have your body hair to keep you warm." "It's summer, Josh," Roger said, as calm as he could. "It's hot." "You are hairy, though." Joshua said, poking Roger's forearm. "I know." Roger said, pulling away. He was hairy all over. Most girls didn't like THAT either. After some looking around they found a place where they could spread the sleeping bag. Roger agreed to let Joshua have the pillow, if only because he swore he heard the boy sniffle. Once they were settled in for the night, Roger heard something crackle. "Josh, give me the protein bar," he said, calmly. "But I'm hungry!" the boy complained. "It'll be bad for you, just give me the damn thing." "No," Joshua said. The crackling noise began again. Roger reached for the boy and after some wrestling he managed to take it away. "Just so you know, I am glaring at you," Joshua said, sulky. "Don't. Care." With that, Roger turned so his back was facing the younger boy. The sooner he went to sleep, the sooner this nightmare would be over. -- Roger woke up to the moon hitting his face through the sunroof above him and his stomach growling. He turned and saw Josh, wearing only his boxers and t-shirt and realized he was hot as well. He took off everything but his briefs and undershirt and then his stomach growled again. He looked around and noticed the two protein bars besides him. He opened them, as silently as he could. He was willing to take the risk of a stomach ache just so he could sleep the rest of the night. He ate them both and heard Joshua move. He looked at the boy, who had only turned around in his sleep. Roger had to admit Josh was cute when he was sleeping. His light copper skin was hairless, and would probably stay like that for life, and his dark chocolate hair was longish and wavy and seemed so delicate. He was lean, which only reminded him how WIRED the boy was when awake. He envied the stamina on the kid. He had only been working with them a couple of months, his uncle owned the place or something, and he always seemed so full of energy. Roger lied back down and, feeling his stomach ok, closed his eyes to sleep. He felt Josh move again and suddenly the younger boy had an arm around his chest. Roger opened his eyes and tried to see if there was a way to get himself out of such an awkward situation. However, as soon as he touched Joshua the boy stirred and woke. "What?" Joshua said, groggy. "You're hugging me," Roger said, flat. Joshua took his arm off Roger's chest, slowly. "I'm hungry," he said, and his stomach growled in agreement. "Can't help you there," Roger said, sitting up. Josh was now kneeling besides him. Joshua looked at him, blushed, then looked away. "What?" Roger said, feeling a little guilty. "Nothing," Joshua said, looking back at him. "Josh, just spit it out." "Can I eat your cum?" Roger's next words didn't come out. He looked at Joshua with a blank stare for a couple of moments. "What?" "Nothing," Josh said, suddenly embarrassed. "Forget I said anything." "Dude, are you serious?" Roger said. "What'd you want me to do? Jerk off in your mouth?" "Forget it," Josh said, angry. "And just so you know I was prepared to give you a blowjob for it." The word "blowjob" got Roger a little hard. He saw Josh looking away and wondered. It had been a while since he had had any. And the only time he had gotten a blowjob it had been several kinds of awkward because the chick was hot but sucked at it and he didn't want to make her angry. "You like eating cum?" Roger said, his voice a little silky now, inviting. Josh turned around, he still seemed angry. "Not my favorite thing to eat," he said. "But it tastes good." "What does it taste like?" Roger asked. He was getting hard. "Depends on the guy," Josh answered, coming closer. "It varies some." "Well," Roger said. "If you're so desperate for food you'd blow me, go ahead." Josh seemed suddenly hurt. "I'm not desperate." "Oh, so you just ask to be cockfed by guys sometimes?" Roger raised an eyebrow. He could see Josh was about to cry. "Just forget it, ok?" "What?" Roger said, almost laughing. "I suppose you want to suck my cock just because you like me." Josh's move was subtle. He just looked down a bit and then looked back up. Roger saw it, however, and understood. "You like me?" Roger asked. Josh looked away. "Now you notice?" "How was I supposed to notice?" Roger asked, defensively. "Why'd you think I'm always so happy when I'm with you?" Josh asked, almost muttered. "I thought it was obvious." Roger had thought the kid was just high on life, but he had tact and realized now was not the time for such a comment. "I'm sorry, Josh," he said. "I'm not used to people liking me. Specially not guys." "But you're so nice," Josh said. "And smart, and you always help me with things I don't understand and you have such pretty eyes." "Well," Roger said, "girls don't notice just that." "And I'm not a girl." Josh looked down. Roger raised an arm and pulled his chin so their eyes met. "Y'know, Josh," he said. "For a blowjob, I'd say I don't mind. But I don't think you want to just blow me and then be done with it." Josh sighed. "No." "But for you, I'd let you give me one, and then we can see what happens." Josh's eyes lit up. Roger felt sort of bad because even though he sort of meant it, he was also sort of horny. He could, he supposed, just take Josh to the movies or something. He was distracted by Josh's hand coming to contact with his dick. "You're fast," Roger said. "I've been wanting to do this for a while," Josh said, smiling. "Why?" Roger asked. "I mean, most other guys in here are better-looking than me." "Easy," Josh answered. "You're way nicer than them, you're hairier, and you're hotter when you curse." "What?" Roger asked. "Like just now, that you were saying cock a lot? You are so hot when you curse, because you actually mean it. The other guys curse all the time. You just do it when you're really angry or happy or just really feeling something." Roger was sort of confused. "You like it when I speak dirty?" Josh nodded and smiled. Roger smiled, then he did what he had done to so many hot chicks in his fantasies. He grabbed Josh by the neck of his shirt and pulled him close. "Then shut the fuck up and suck my cock, bitch." "Yes, sir," Josh said. Roger found out he did not mind Josh replacing the hot chicks in his fantasies. Josh began stroking Roger's dick with his hand. Roger let out a small grunt of approval. Softly and slowly, Josh worked with Roger's dick until it was rock hard. He then pulled his briefs down and looked actually amazed. "Wow," he said. "Stop staring at it and start sucking," Roger said, and Josh did as he was told. He kneeled in front of Roger and went down, first licking the head and then the whole shaft. "Wow," Roger said, forgetting his persona in the pleasure. "You're good." In reply, Joshua took his dick inside his mouth. Roger had imagined someone taking his whole six inches down their throat would feel good, but never this good. He moaned with pleasure. Slowly, Josh went up and down Roger's cock. By the third time, Roger could do nothing but shout "fuck", "yes", and yell randomly. Josh was beyond good, his tongue and throat massaged his dick, making him reach levels of pleasure he had never imagined he could reach. He lied down and placed his hands on the back of Josh's face. He rocked his hips and began fucking the boy's face. "Josh," he gasped. "You're gonna have to suck my cock every fucking day." Josh nodded and quickened his pace. Roger could feel himself on the verge. "FUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!" Roger came, and he came like he had never come before. His orgasm seemed ten times stronger than any other he had had before, and Josh did not let go. He was swallowing his cum like it was the sweetest of nectars. After a few seconds Josh had to let go to gasp for air, and he let himself be sprayed with Roger's seed. A whole breathtaking minute later, Roger's orgasm had finally faded out. He opened his eyes and sat up, seeing Josh cleaning himself off to then eat the cum. Without saying anything he grabbed the boys head and kissed him hard. "That," Roger said, breaking the kiss. "Was awesome." Josh nodded and smiled. He looked down and his eyes widened. Roger, worried, look down too. "What the-?" "Roger, what's happening to you?" He didn't know. He just knew that where there had once been fat now there were some of the most ripped abs he had seen ever. His black fur still covered them, but the six pack was more than obvious. "The protein bars," Roger said, standing up and kicking his briefs off. "You ate them?!" "Yeah!" Roger said, smiling. How could he not smile? He was lean and ripped. He looked down at Josh. "You grew!" Josh said, excited. And Roger realized he was right. He used to be taller than the boy by a couple of inches, now he was easily a foot and a half taller. He felt something else, too, something funny all over him. The feeling maximized in his feet, that grew several inches and became muscular right in front of their amazed eyes. His calves followed, becoming veiny and wider. His thighs grew and forced him to stand with his feet apart. His waistline lost all fat and his soft cock grew to be eight inches long at least. His abs became more defined, and his pecs, shoulders, and back grew so fast they burt the seams of his with tee. The growing of his arms took care of the sleeves and his forearms and hands grew to match the rest of him. Finally, his neck and jaw gained muscle and strength. Josh was paralized, hypnotized by the naked god in front of him. Roger looked down at himself, hardly believing his eyes. His pecs were gargantuan, so were his arms and legs and cock. He hit his abs and felt them rock-hard. He looked at Josh and smiled. "Like what you see?" With that he raised both arms up and hit a double biceps pose. Josh didn't move, he just stared. Roger came closer to the boy, towering at least two feet over him. Josh looked up at him and Roger took the opportunity to kiss his gasping mouth. Leaning down got tiring, so he lifted Josh between one arm and his torso. After a few moments of kissing Josh gasped for air and broke the kiss. He let out some whimpers and Roger seemed confused. It was when he felt the wetness in Josh's boxers against him that he understood. "Made you come," Roger teased. Josh was resting his head on Roger's shoulder. He laughed and nodded. "Those protein bars are really something," he said. "Pretty sure you also had something to do with it," Roger said, putting Josh down. Josh held on to him, his arm around Roger's abs and his chest on his pecs. "That orgasm you gave me, I think that's what triggered the whole thing." "Can we try it again?" Josh asked, stroking Roger's cock. "What? My little bitch-boy hasn't had enough cum for one night?" Roger teased. "You did cum a lot," Josh said. "And it tasted so good." "Well, you can have some more later if you're good," Roger said. "What are the guys going to say when they see me tomorrow?" "They're going to want some of those bars," Josh said. "I'm pretty sure they won't do them any good," Roger said. "Not without your mind-shattering blowjobs." Josh smiled and blushed. Roger leaned down and they kissed again. After a moment Roger picked him up and their kiss became more passionate. "Let's go to my place," Roger said. "But we're locked in," Josh answered. Roger just smiled and put him down. He walked to the door, followed by Joshua and with one swift kick, he knocked it down. "I think I'm going to take a few days off to get used to this new body of mine," Roger said. ~ Thanks for reading! |
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tachikoma28573 (November 12th, 2012) |
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Awesome Story! Would love to see Josh have some odd effects from Roger's experiment I hope you keep writing |
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There ya go! listen to him. Keep writing! Your doing great. |
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I'm gonna give out serious help (for once!) It was good, but the growth description needed some work. To me, it went a little like this: "They had sex, etc etc. He cummed, etc etc. Suddenly, he was grown." That's just me though. __________________ In the MGS FC's I am Psycho Mantis! "Put your controller on the floor...Put it down as flat as you can...That's good. Now I will move your controller by the power of my will alone!" |
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def a great story; hope to see plenty more where that came from ! I do hafta agree with TheMM though, the description of the growth could have done with a little more elaboration; nothing too crazy just give us a better sense of how it feels, how it looks, and so on... anyway, thanks man for a great first story ~Ille __________________ just my thoughts as a writer Things happen. |
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That was a very enjoyable read. Thanks. |
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I had fun. |
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Great. Heh heh, I love blowjob stories probably more than any others. __________________ Blanche: I don't really mind Clayton being homosexual, I just don't like him dating men. Dorothy: You really haven't grasped the concept of this gay thing yet, have you? Blanche: There must be homosexuals who date women. Sophia: Yeah, they're called lesbians. |
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good story! continue it, please! __________________ The Internet is for PORN! -Trekkie- http://chocomus.deviantart.com/ http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/chocomus/ |
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Hey! Thanks for all the reviews. It's my first MG story so I'm hoping to get better with time. This will most definitely go on (thank you for your suggestions on how it could) and I'll be posting more later. And yes, my muscle growth description needs work >> I've been doing research so I can describe like how big he gets without the guy going COMPLETELY out of balance (some may like it, I'm not too fond of it) I dunno, any suggestions? Thanks again! __________________ If you wanted me to pay attention to what you're saying you wouldn't be flexing your arms while you're talking to me. |
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i'm glad to see writers who aren't afraid to keep growth proportionate :P just thought i'd toss that out there ;p ~Chris __________________ just my thoughts as a writer Things happen. |
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Another great story. Quick but hot. Keep Writing MD |
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