Rivals

[Xyggurat]

I boffed this post because I'm reposting it as part of the release of the concluding chapter.

-X-

[mlbjock]

Definitely

[MuscleChgo]

Absolutely!! Yes, please!

[Kymuscleboy]

Please continue! That was so freaking hot!

[theseventhwave]

[COLOR="Red"]Oh gOD! That was freakin AWESOME!

SO HAWT!

Xyggurat - that growth scene was brutally hot. Whew - the hairs on my neck are standing up (and that's not all...).

"To be concluded?" - oh please continue! And feel free to let this one go more than just one more chapter![/COLOR]

[Rowan]

Rivals are *good.* You're cruel to end it where you did. Please continue.

[jsmith2300]

X,

It's great to see you again. I - like many many here - love your stuff so much, and you've graced MGS yet again with another uber HOT story of total domination and muscle growth. Whenever you pop up, we always get something hot. 'Rivals' is no exception. Did I mention it was hot? Very very very HOT!?

I must say, though, ending it where you did.... CRUEL. Simply cruel! Please please write a second part. It's far too good of a setup to end it there. I can't wait to see how big Dean's become. MMM. Gets me hard just thinking about it.

You've managed to give us an amazingly hot story without sacrificing any of the detail I've come to enjoy from your works. I thank you, good sir. And passionately BEG for more.

I'll do anything.

--JSmith

[sexiscriptor]

that was, simply put, orgasmic :P

please sir, i want sum'more...
~Chris

EDIT: everything about this has made my night. You, writing (again!!); story, hotnessing; me, cumming. Thanks muchly, m'dear :P

[skumbum]

Originally Posted by Xyggurat

To be concluded?

To be continued...

[overusedclassic]

Wow - Hot ending.

[rtulde]

Please continue, maybe it will finally make me finish my story, THE Rivals. No hard feelings, your title fits and my story has a totally different premiss. Good luck and keep up the good work!

[WrestleGuyNY]

Exactly what gets me rock hard, I'd love to read alot more!

[sexiscriptor]

I'm still really looking forward to the conclusion to this story...

whenever you can finish it off, man; whenever you can
~Chris

[Xyggurat]

The conclusion will come this weekend.

<3

-X-

[theseventhwave]

Originally Posted by Xyggurat

The conclusion will come this weekend.

[COLOR="Red"]Ah-HEM!

I've been dutifully checking in every day - hoping and longing for another morsel of delicious writing.

Xyggurat - you know how to play to my fantasies - so the wait is excruciating![/COLOR]

[sexiscriptor]

Originally Posted by theseventhwave

[COLOR="Red"]Ah-HEM!

I've been dutifully checking in every day - hoping and longing for another morsel of delicious writing.

Xyggurat - you know how to play to my fantasies - so the wait is excruciating![/COLOR]

well he told me he'd do it this weekend. so we'll just have to see.
if he doesn't, i shall pester him eeeeevery day >:P
~Palmer

[lloyd]

Oh yeah - definitely continue! Very, very hot so far...

Just sort of discoveing your stuff, and loving it all. Thanks, man... LLOYD

[Xyggurat]

I'm a terrible, horrible person for not finishing this story, but I've got a track record of being slow to conclude. I'm glad you liked it!

-X-

[theseventhwave]

[COLOR="Red"]I had actually forgotten about this story. It is so hot! I love it.

But yes, you are a "a terrible, horrible person for not finishing this story."

I would love to see this story continued...and while we're on the topic of continuing stories...there is "Shift" and "Uneven Desires" and "the Symbiote Wars" (you thought I had forgotten about that one, but no, it haunts my dreams).[/COLOR]

[Xyggurat]

One of the reasons I can't do what Rowan does--that is, make a little cash off of erotic writing--is that I tend to write erotica in fits and spurts. I just can't force the words to come.

And before I say any other sentences that sound like bad double entendres from Torchwood, I should stop myself. :P

-X-

[theseventhwave]

[COLOR="Red"]Thanks for the reply Xyggurat! ;-)

I most certainly appreciate your "fits and spurts" - but you can't fault a boy for hoping that his favourite author's creative juices have been building up over the past while and are ready for another spurt. (heeheehee - I couldn't resist - cheesy humour makes the world go round) [/COLOR]

[skumbum]

Originally Posted by skumbum

To be continued...

I hope so.

[sexiscriptor]

Originally Posted by Xyggurat

And before I say any other sentences that sound like bad double entendres from Torchwood, I should stop myself. :P

you DARE blaspheme Torchwood?! I KILLA YOU FOR EET!! >:P
honestly though, if you do continue this story you know how happy you'll make me
And i mean you've got the PERFECT inspiration afterall..... ;p
~Chris

[ilm123]

wow so sexy. this is the only story i wanna see the ending to

[theseventhwave]

[COLOR="Red"]OK Xyggurat! We have you surrounded!

Put your hands on your keyboard where we can clearly see them and begin typing!

This story is way toooo HOT to let slip away.

(check your inbox too)[/COLOR]

[Xyggurat]

Type. Type type. Type. Type type type type. Nope, no story yet.

You know whose story has awesome potential? Speaker's. Muscle Milk looks awesome.

-X-